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A Mistake and Good Deed?

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Man accidentally takes a woman's purse and when he attempts to give it back she curses him by having him slowly turn into a woman, over the course of a week. The worst part is the whole world starts changing to fit his new body. Like he's always been a woman.

Chapter 1: The Café and the Curse

The morning light cut through the grimy window of David’s apartment in sharp, dusty angles. He moved through it on autopilot, the routine as familiar as his own breath: grind beans, pour water, shrug into the jacket hung precisely on the hook by the door. His life was a series of well-drawn lines, comfortable and predictable. He liked it that way.

The café was his sanctuary between home and the sterile modern chaos of his firm. Tucked away on a side street, it smelled of damp paper, dark roast, and the faint, sweet decay of the overwatered ferns on the sill. The floorboards groaned underfoot. He took his usual seat in the corner booth, the velvet worn smooth against his forearms, and opened his tablet to the day’s blueprints. The world outside the window was a muted blur.

He didn’t notice her at first. Not really.

It was the shift in the air, a subtle temperature change. A whisper of jasmine and clean linen cutting through the coffee grounds. He glanced up.

She was two tables over, a sketchbook open, a single espresso cup cool and full before her. She wasn’t drawing the room. She was, he realized with a jolt, drawing him. Her eyes would flick up, hold his for a half-second—a gaze of unsettling, direct calm—then return to her page. Her pencil moved with swift, certain strokes. He felt oddly seen, and it was unnerving. He looked back at his screen, the lines of a corporate lobby suddenly meaningless.

When his phone buzzed with a client’s frantic call, he was almost grateful for the distraction. He talked logistics, his voice too loud in the quiet space, his free hand gathering his things—tablet into his leather satchel, phone tucked against his ear. He stood, nodding at the barista, and snagged his scarf from the back of the chair. In one fluid, harried motion, he also hooked the long strap of the bag sitting on the empty chair beside him, slinging it over his shoulder alongside his own.

He was halfway down the block, the client still yammering about zoning permits, before he felt the difference. The weight was wrong. The bag against his ribs was softer, its contents subtly shifting. He looked down.

It wasn’t his bag.

His satchel was black, worn calfskin. This was a deep, vibrant olive green, embroidered with tiny, twisting silver threads that formed patterns that hurt his eyes to follow. A faint scent of jasmine rose from it.

“Shit.”

He cut the client off mid-sentence, muttered an excuse, and turned on his heel. A cold, slick feeling pooled in his stomach. He wasn’t a man who made mistakes like this. He retraced his steps, the unfamiliar bag a burning brand against his side.

The café bell jingled his re-entry. The booth where he’d sat was empty, cleared. His heart hammered once, hard. Then he looked to the table where she had been.

She was still there.

She was waiting. Her sketchbook was closed. Her hands were folded around the untouched espresso cup, her thumbs slowly tracing its rim. She watched him approach, her expression unreadable. Not angry. Not relieved. Expectant.

“I’m so sorry,” he blurted out, already sliding the bag from his shoulder. The words felt clumsy. “I was on a call, I wasn’t paying attention. I took your bag by mistake.”

He held it out to her, a peace offering.

She didn’t take it immediately. Her eyes, a grey so dark it was nearly black, travelled from his face to the bag and back again. A small, enigmatic smile touched her lips. It didn’t reach her eyes.

“Were you?” she asked. Her voice was low, melodic.

“Was I what?”

“Not paying attention.”

The question hung in the air, absurd. “Yes. Obviously. Here.”

Finally, she accepted it, her fingers brushing his. Her touch was cool. She placed the bag gently on the table beside her, as if it contained something fragile, or something dangerous. She looked up at him, that same piercing focus pinning him in place.

“My name is Isabella,” she said. It wasn’t an introduction. It was a statement of fact.

“David. Again, I’m really sorry for the mix-up.” He needed to leave. The atmosphere was too thick, too still. He felt his own routines, his own certainty, beginning to crack at the edges.

Isabella nodded slowly, as if confirming something to herself. She picked up her cold espresso, looked into its tiny, dark pool, and spoke softly, almost to the liquid itself.

“You’ll regret this taking my stuff,” she murmured.

He almost laughed. It was a melodramatic line, the kind you heard in bad movies. But his breath caught. The air in the café seemed to grow still, the hum of the refrigerator dropping away.

“I said I was sorry. It was an accident.” His own voice sounded defensive to his ears.

She finally took a sip, her eyes closing briefly. When they opened, they held a knowledge that made his skin prickle. “I know what you said, David. But I also know what you did.” She set the cup down with a quiet, definitive click. “You’ll regret it more than you know.”

She stood then, smoothing her long, simple dress. She slipped the green bag onto her shoulder, the embroidered threads glinting. She gave him one last, lingering look—a look that felt less like an evaluation and more like a diagnosis—and walked past him, out the door and into the grey morning.

He stood there, rooted to the groaning floorboards, the scent of jasmine and old books clinging to him. In his haste to return her bag, he had completely forgotten to get his own back. His satchel, his blueprints, his keys, his whole orderly life, was gone with her.

And her words, quiet and certain, coiled in the air where she’d been sitting.

You’ll regret this more than you know.




You’ll regret this more than you know.

The words lingered, a bad taste in the quiet she left behind. David stood there, feeling stupid. The barista was wiping down the espresso machine, the rag making a slow, squeaking circle.

“Wow. What a crazy lady,” he mumbled to himself. The sound of his own voice in the empty space was pathetic. It was just a bag. An accident. She’d made it sound like a declaration of war.

He watched through the window as she turned the corner, that green bag a flash of unusual color against the grey street. He forced himself to count to thirty, slow breaths, not wanting to spill out onto the sidewalk right behind her. The last thing he needed was her thinking he was some obsessed creep on top of being a thief.

When he was sure she was gone, he walked back to her table. His black leather satchel was leaning against the chair leg, right where he’d left it in his frantic exchange. He snatched it up, checking the contents quickly. Tablet, keys, wallet. All there. Normal. His anchor.

He shouldered it, the familiar weight a relief. Everything was fine. He was fine. Just a weird morning blip.

The café bell jingled again as he pushed the door open to leave.

As he touched the door handle, he got a static shock.

It wasn’t the usual tiny, dry zap. It was a sharp, painful snap that shot from the brass handle up his arm, making his teeth ache. He jerked his hand back, swearing under his breath. He stared at his fingertips. For a second, he could have sworn he saw a faint, bluish spark curl around his knuckles before dissolving into the air.

Weird.

Shaking his hand out, he stepped onto the street. The city sounds rushed back in—traffic, distant sirens, the patter of drizzle starting. But it all felt muted, like he was hearing it through glass. A profound, unsettling chill sank into his bones, a deep cold that his jacket couldn’t touch. It was the strange, hollow cold of a vast, empty space.

He started walking towards his office, trying to shrug it off. The drizzle became rain. He flipped his collar up.

By the time he reached the first crosswalk, a shiver wracked his frame. Not just a shiver—a full, uncontrollable tremor. His muscles ached as if he’d just run a marathon. He felt drained, heavy. At his side, his left hand twitched, the fingers curling inward against his will. He looked down at them, flexing them open. They were stiff.

A cab splashed through a puddle, soaking his trousers from the knee down. He usually would have jumped back, cursed. He just stared at the dark wet fabric, the cold seep of it, feeling oddly detached.

He made it to the sleek glass front of his firm. In the reflection, he looked pale. His usually sharp jawline seemed… softer. He ran a hand over his cheek. The stubble felt less coarse.

Pushing through the revolving doors, he was hit by the blast of climate-controlled air. It felt alien. His assistant, Marco, looked up from the front desk.

“Morning, Dav— whoa. You look like hell. Late night?”

David tried to summon his usual confident grin. It felt like a colossal effort. “Just a weird morning. Got static shocked into next week.”

“Tell me about it,” Marco said, gesturing to his own monitor. “Everything’s glitching today.”

David moved towards his office, his gait off. His left shoe, perfectly broken-in, felt loose. He stumbled slightly, catching himself on the doorframe. His grip felt weaker.

Sitting at his desk was a relief. He dropped his bag, tried to focus on the blueprints on his screen. The lines, once so clear and logical, now seemed to swim. His concentration was shattered. All he could feel was the deep, marrow-level cold and a growing, formless anxiety. Her voice looped in his head.

You’ll regret this.

A soft plink on his keyboard made him look down.

A single, coarse grey hair, much longer than his own, lay across the space bar. He picked it up, frowning. It was his color, but… not his. He rubbed his thumb and forefinger together. The skin felt different. Smoother.

His phone buzzed. It was his client, the one from the café. David cleared his throat to answer, pulling his professionalism around him like a cape.

“David here.”

The voice that came out was not his own.

It was higher. Thinner. Lacking the grounded, baritone resonance he’d had for as long as he could remember. It was the voice of a stranger.

There was a long pause on the other end of the line. “Is… this David Miller?”

“Yes, it’s me,” David said, and the panic shot through him like lightning because that wasn’t his voice. It cracked on the word ‘me.’

“Right. Sounded different. Listen, about the permit revisions…” The client droned on, but David wasn’t listening. He was staring, horrified, at the back of his hand resting on the desk.

The prominent veins he was used to seeing, the scattering of fine hairs, the faint scar from a childhood scrape… they were all fading. The skin was becoming paler, softer. The knuckles seemed less pronounced.

'Wierd. Its probably just my stress.' He thought to himself as the client continues to drone on.

He thought to himself as the client continued to drone on. A spike of pure, animal fear tightened his throat. He closed his eyes, forced a slow breath, and leaned into the professionalism that was his second skin.

“—and the planning committee is being utterly unreasonable about the setback variances,” the client, Mr. Arnold, was saying, his tone frayed.

“Arnold, listen,” David interjected, and he focused everything on controlling the sound. He pitched it lower, leaning into a more conversational, confiding tone. It still wasn’t quite right, but it was better. Grounded. “I’ve dealt with Cartwright on that committee for three years. He uses the setback rule as a personal bargaining chip. He doesn’t actually care about the ten feet.”

“He doesn’t?” Arnold’s voice shifted from frantic to interested.

“No. He cares about the landscaping plan for the municipal park next door. He’s the parks chairman’s brother-in-law. It’s a whole thing.” David spun the truth—he had seen Cartwright at a parks meeting once—with the smooth, assured confidence that closed deals. “Approve his petunia budget, and your variance slides right through. I can draft the landscaping addendum today. We make it look like his idea. He gets his flowers, you get your building.”

There was a stunned silence on the line. Then a low chuckle. “Miller, you ruthless son of a gun. That’s… politically ugly. I love it.”

“It’s not ugly, it’s efficient. Saves six weeks of hearings.” David’s mind was racing, running on a strange, cold-fueled clarity. He outlined the next steps, dates, a revised fee structure to cover the “extra consultancy.” His words were precise, the logic impregnable. The strange, thin quality of his voice became an advantage—it sounded focused, lean, stripped of unnecessary warmth.

Twenty minutes later, he hung up. He stared at the phone, then at his computer. He opened his email, his fingers feeling oddly light on the keys. A new message from Arnold was already there, with the subject line: “Contract Authorization - Miller & Associates.”

The attached document was for three hundred thousand dollars.

A solid win. A massive one. He should have felt a surge of triumph, the old reliable heat of success. All he felt was that persistent, inner chill and a profound, weary relief. He drafted the landscaping addendum, sent it, and the morning bled into afternoon.

The rest of the day passed in a numb haze of normalcy. The weird shock at the door, the voice thing, the single grey hair… he compartmentalized it. Stress. A freak static charge playing tricks on his nerves. Maybe he was coming down with something. That explained the cold deep in his bones, the unusual fatigue.

He got up to get a coffee from the kitchen. Walking back to his office, he caught his reflection in the dark glass of a presentation screen. He looked tired, but himself. His hand, when he checked it again, looked like his hand. The eerie softness he’d glimpsed was gone. Probably just a trick of the fluorescent lights earlier.

As he sat back down, he shifted in his chair. His trousers, still damp at the knee from the puddle, felt different across the seat. A little tighter. More… supported. He dismissed it. Cheap wool, shrinking from the moisture. That was all.

No other changes were visible to David for the rest of the day, but his butt did perk up a bit. It was so subtle, that David paid no attention to it. He was a man who noticed load-bearing beams and structural stress points, not the contour of his own backside in office slacks.

By five o’clock, the contract was signed, the addendum was with the city, and the deep cold had receded to a faint, lingering whisper beneath his skin. He packed his bag, nodded to Marco, and stepped out into the evening.

The rain had stopped. The city was sharp and washed clean, smelling of wet concrete and gasoline. The walk home felt ordinary. The encounter with the woman, Isabella, from the café was just a faded memory now. An awkward moment with a dramatic, eccentric person. He’d gotten her bag, she’d gotten his, they’d exchanged some weird words. He’d landed a major contract. The math of the day was overwhelmingly in his favor.

He made a simple dinner, watched part of a game, and went to bed early, chasing the strange fatigue. As he drifted off, the last conscious thought was a vague promise to himself to switch to decaf after noon.

But David's life will soon change in the next week.


Sleep offered no refuge. It was a black, airless dive into a place where his own body was no longer his own. Dreams twisted into visceral sensations: the grinding ache of bones too tight in their sockets, a relentless, internal pressure like roots growing in reverse, pulling him inward. He felt compressed, folded. Once, he snapped awake in the dark, convinced a weight was sitting on his chest. He gasped, clawed at his own sternum.Nothing there. Just the panicked thunder of his own heart. He lay there, drenched in a cold sweat that smelled faintly of salt and something floral—jasmine?—before slipping back into the unsettling dark.

While David slept, some minor changes inside his body shifted. His lower two ribs were retracting and being absorbed into his body, his spinal column also shrank, being absorbed into his body, shrinking him by one inch. Not too noticeable but definitely happened. His shoulders rounded and softened a bit too. All unnoticed by David.

Morning arrived as a grey insult. His alarm felt like a drill. Every muscle protested as he pushed himself upright, a low groan escaping him. The room tilted for a dizzy second before righting itself. He felt hungover, but without the prior night’s fun.

Getting dressed was the first concrete puzzle. He reached for his usual chinos, the ones with the precise 34-inch waist. The button wouldn’t close. Not even close. He sucked in, tugged, felt the fabric strain. An absurd impossibility. He hadn’t changed his routine. He glared at himself in the full-length mirror on the back of his door.

He looked… off. Slumped. His posture was terrible. "Stand up straight, you idiot," he muttered to his reflection. He forced his shoulders back, squared them. The movement felt unnatural, like stretching a stiff rubber band. The crisp oxford shirt he put on was also wrong. The shoulders bunched, extra fabric pooling under his arms. The collar gaped. He looked like he was wearing his older brother’s hand-me-downs.

"Did the cleaner shrink everything?" he said aloud, the sound of his voice in the empty apartment doing nothing to dispel the creeping unease. It was thinner today. Husky. He cleared his throat, tried to find the bass note. It was faint, buried.

He had to dig to the back of his closet for a pair of older, looser jeans and a soft grey sweater. They fit, but they felt like surrender.

The world outside had shifted its dimensions, too. His morning walk to the café felt longer, the ground subtly farther away. He caught his reflection in a store window and stopped. He looked smaller. Softer. Was the mirror warped? He leaned closer, touching the glass. His jawline, usually so definite, seemed less angular. The skin of his neck looked smoother. He pulled back, a hot flush of denial rising in his chest. It was the light. The window. A trick.

He pushed into the café, craving the normalcy of its worn velvet and bitter scent.

Marco was already at their usual table, two cups steaming before him. He looked up as David approached. His eyebrows did a quick, subtle dance.

“Rough night?” Marco asked, sliding a cup toward him.

“You have no idea. I think my dry cleaner is trying to kill me. Everything shrank.”

Marco’s eyes did a quick, head-to-toe scan. “Huh. You look different.”

“Different how?” David’s voice was sharp, a brittle edge to it.

Marco shrugged, wisely backing off. “I dunno. Tired. You getting a haircut or something?”

David ran a hand through his hair. It felt the same. Thick, maybe a bit softer. “No.”

“So, listen,” Marco said, sipping his coffee. “You remember that sculptor client from last year? The one with the weird kinetic lobby installation?”

“Vaguely.” David’s focus was on getting the coffee cup to his lips without his hand trembling. It was harder than it should have been.

“She’s having a thing tonight.A gallery show. Left a VIP pass at the front desk for you. Said you’d mentioned wanting to see her new stuff.” Marco pushed a thick, cream-colored card across the table. It was embossed with a swirling, abstract design. The location was in the museum district.

David stared at it. He had no memory of this conversation. “I don’t think I…”

“Dude, you’ve been in a fog for days. Maybe you mentioned it when you were distracted. Anyway, it’s there. Free wine, fancy people. Might do you good.” Marco grinned. “Might meet someone who doesn’t care about your dry cleaner.”

The idea was appalling. The thought of making small talk in a room full of people made his skin crawl. But a deeper, more stubborn instinct pushed back. This was exactly what he should do. A social event. A professional networking opportunity. A defiant act of normalcy. He pocketed the card.

“Maybe,” he said, the word tasting like ash.

The workday was a battle against a rising tide of wrongness. Numbers on a screen blurred. His back ached dully, a new and persistent complaint. He found himself shifting in his chair constantly, unable to get comfortable. His concentration was shot.

In the late afternoon, he had to visit a construction site. Stepping onto the raw concrete slab, the wind hit him, cooler and sharper than he’d expected. He hunched against it, pulling his sweater tighter—his sweater, not his coat. He’d forgotten his coat. The site foreman, a burly man named Gus who David had worked with for years, clapped him on the shoulder.“Miller! Good to see you. We got a question on the spec for the conduit routing.”

The grip on his shoulder was firm, familiar. But this time, it sent a jarring pain through David’s collarbone. He flinched.

“You alright?” Gus asked, peering at him.His eyes narrowed. “You look… you feeling okay? You seem a little peaky.”

“I’m fine,” David said, forcing a smile that felt tight on his face. “Just a bug. Show me the conduit.”

He followed Gus, but his mind was stuck on the word. Peaky. It wasn’t a word you used for a man. It was for a Victorian child recovering from the flu. The wind cut through his sweater, and he wrapped his arms around himself, trying to contain his own heat. His movements felt inefficient, like he was fighting his own body to walk in a straight line.

He drove home in silence, the car feeling too large, the pedals a fraction too far away. In his apartment, he stood before the mirror again, stripping down to his boxers. He turned, scrutinizing his profile. Was his waist narrower? His hips… smoother? He poked at his stomach. It was still flat, but the muscle tone felt different, less defined, as if covered by a new, thin layer of… something.

His eyes went to the cream-colored invitation on his counter. The swirling design seemed to pulse slightly. An invitation he didn’t remember seeking. The pass included a free guest as well. The dress was formal, so his suit would suffice.

Weirdly, as he got out of his car at his apartment, the suit no longer felt off. But fit his body perfectly again. Maybe it was all in his head. He didn't notice, but the cloth shrank to fit his shrunken frame, and tapered inward at the waist a bit more. His slacks stopped feeling tight at his hips and waist, and felt more relaxed. Throughout the day, his inside body was still rearranging. He lost another inch in height, and his lower two ribs were completely gone. Also his hip bone was oddly wider. Not enough to notice still but definitely happened.

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