Story - focus on emotions of embarrassment by the main character - don’t focus on describing rooms and smells and surroundings
Main character: David (Dave) - late teens college student - has fetish: wants to be spanked in public - spanks himself when alone - looks: 6’0” - attractive - not muscular
Supporting character: Emily - early 20s - attractive not slutty - recent college grad - Dave’s roommate
Plot: main character is caught by roommate spanking himself
- Dave is self spanking in apartment he shares with Emily
- Emily is shocked and highly amused
- Emily offers to spank Dave
Main plot thread: Emily and Dave adopt domestic discipline relationship - Emily becomes Dave’s “guardian” - spanks him regularly in the apartment for all infractions
- infractions: not finishing homework, bad grades, not cleaning up, etc.
Second act: Dave admits he wants to be spanked in public
- Emily organizes a party at the apartment with her friends (these are people Dave might have met, but ate not his friends)
- Dave is made to serve Emily’s friends at the party as a naked waiter
- Emily spanks Dave in front of her friends at party
- Emily lets her friends spank and dominate Dave
That was the first thought that flashed through my mind as I turned around to see Emily standing in the doorway, her eyes wide, her lips parted in a mix of shock and something else—something that looked dangerously close to amusement.
My hand was still raised, hovering in mid-air, my other palm pressed against the edge of my desk for balance. The belt lay coiled on the floor beside me, the leather still warm from where it had just connected with my bare ass.