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Star Wars Sequel AU. Rey is a broke post graduate, trying to get by. The world is full of creatures that aren’t just in stories, they are real. Vampires exist, and they are in control of so much. There’s an underground agency that matches consenting donors with vampires willing to pay a premium for live feedings. One time won’t be so bad, not for the money it gains. But when Rey is matched, one bite isn’t enough. Kylo Ren wants a permanent feeder, and gives her an offer too good to refuse. What happens when he ends up wanting more than just her blood? All characters are over the age of eighteen.

Chapter 3: The Second Bite

The eight thousand dollars bought quiet, but not peace. For three days, Rey moved through her life like a ghost. She paid the rent, squared the utility bill, bought groceries that weren’t the cheapest canned option. The physical relief was profound. The mental static, however, had simply changed frequency.

She caught herself staring at the smooth skin of her inner wrist, now marked only by two faint, pink pinpricks that looked like forgotten insect bites. She’d press her thumb there and feel a echo, a phantom pull that made her stomach clench. She slept deeply, dreamlessly, but woke with a thirst no water could quench.

The text came on the fourth evening, as she was attempting to focus on a digitized thesis about Byzantine trade routes. A number she didn’t recognize, a message of stark simplicity: Tomorrow. 10 PM. Car will collect at corner of Ash and 9th.

No questions. No options. Her fingers hovered over the screen. She could block the number. She had the money. The transaction was complete.

Six sessions, his voice echoed in her memory, flat and final.

She typed a single character: K.

The black sedan was identical to the first, a silent behemoth at the curb. This time, the drive felt shorter. Her body knew the route, the ascent, the silent opening of the elevator doors into the opulent foyer. The towering, silent butler was there, his nod exactly the same. "He is expecting you."

She was led not to the study, but through another doorway into a long gallery. One wall was glass, offering a vertiginous view of the city’s diamond grid. The opposite wall held portraits in heavy frames, faces from different centuries staring out with eyes that seemed to follow her. At the far end, Kylo stood before a low fire burning in a hearth of black marble. He was turned toward the flames, a silhouette of sharp angles and implied strength.

"You're early," he said, without turning. His voice was a low vibration in the spacious room.

"I'm on time," she corrected, her own voice sounding too bright, too human.

"That's what I said." He finally turned. He wore dark trousers and a simple black sweater that made his pallor seem more pronounced, his dark hair falling loosely across his forehead. His eyes found her immediately, tracking her from the doorway to the center of the room. "The car was efficient."

"It was fine."

"Fine," he repeated, a ghost of something on his lips. Not a smile. An acknowledgment. He gestured to a low velvet sofa near the fire. "Sit."

She did, perching on the edge. The fire's warmth was a living thing against her skin. He didn't sit. He paced slowly, a predator circling its territory. The silence stretched, filled only by the crackle of sap in the fire.

"I reviewed your file," he said abruptly. "Post-graduate studies in historical anthropology. Debts accrued from tuition and living expenses. No listed family. A series of… physical jobs. Dock work, warehouse, moving company."

A hot spike of violation shot through her. "That's my private life."

"Nothing is private when you sell your blood," he stated, stopping his pacing to look at her. The firelight danced in his eyes. "It is my responsibility to know the source. Would you prefer I didn't care?"

"I'd prefer you didn't sound like you're reading a grocery list."

That got a reaction. His head tilted slightly. "You think this is transactional."

"Eight thousand dollars says it is."

He moved then, so fast it was a blur of shadow. One moment he was across the rug, the next he was kneeling before her again, just like in the study. His presence was overwhelming, coolness radiating from him that battled the fire's heat. He took her left hand, his fingers turning it over to expose the wrist. His thumb stroked over the faint marks, a gesture that felt oddly intimate.

"The transaction is the money," he said, his gaze locked on her skin. "This," he murmured, his thumb pressing lightly on her pulse point, "is something else entirely."

Her heart was hammering. He could feel it. He could probably hear it echoing in the quiet room.

"You said to relax," she whispered, unable to look away from his bowed head.

"I lied." His voice was rough. "I don't want you relaxed. I want you aware. Every second."

He didn't ask. He bent, and his mouth was on her wrist. The twin points of pressure were sharper this time, a bright, clear sting that made her gasp. Then the pull began, that deep, mesmerizing suction that drew the world down a dark tunnel. The firelight became a swirling amber vortex. The sounds of the city vanished, replaced by the roar of her own blood in her ears and his low, gratified hum against her skin.

It was different. Deeper. Longer. He wasn't just taking; he was savoring. His other hand came up to cradle her elbow, steadying her as a wave of dizziness crested and broke, leaving behind a floating, blissful detachment. A small sound escaped her—a sigh, a surrender.

He reacted to it. His fingers tightened. The pull intensified for a single, breathtaking moment, a drag that felt like it might touch her soul. Then, with a ragged, harsh breath of his own, he tore himself away.

He stayed kneeling, head bowed, his breathing unsteady. When he looked up, his eyes were pure black, the hunger in them so raw it was like a physical blow. A thin trail of blood marked the corner of his mouth. He looked feral, unmoored.

"You taste like sunlight," he said, the words torn from him. "How is that possible?"

Before she could form a thought, he reached up with his thumb and wiped the blood from his lip. He held his thumb for a beat, then, his eyes holding hers with a terrifying intensity, he brought it to his own mouth and cleaned it. The act was so primal, so shockingly personal, that Rey felt a jolt of heat that had nothing to do with the fire.

He stood, turning his back to her, regaining his composure. When he faced her again, the mask was back, but it was fractured. "The car will wait for you downstairs. You should eat something sweet. Juice. It helps."

She couldn't move. The pleasant weakness was there, but beneath it was a new, humming energy. She looked at her wrist. The marks were brighter, beads of crimson welling. Without thinking, she lifted her wrist to her own mouth, licking the twin droplets away. The taste was metallic, warm, uniquely her own.

He went utterly still. A tremor went through him.

"You shouldn't do that," he said, his voice dangerously soft.

"Why?"

"Because," he said, taking a single step toward her, then stopping himself with visible effort, "it makes it harder to let you leave."

He turned and walked to the glass wall, staring out at the night. A clear dismissal. She forced herself to stand, her legs unsteady. As she walked back down the long gallery, past the watching portraits, she felt his gaze on her back like a brand.

In the elevator, she leaned against the wall. Her phone buzzed. Another notification. Deposit Received. $8,000.00.

This time, she didn't look at it. She stared at her reflection, at the flush on her cheeks, at the dark awareness in her own eyes. She thought of his thumb wiping his mouth, of his whispered confession.

You taste like sunlight.

The car was indeed waiting. As it slid into the traffic, she didn't give the driver her address. "Is there a 24-hour market near here?" she asked.

"Yes, miss."

"Stop there, please."

She needed juice. Something sweet. He’d told her to. But as the city lights blurred past the window, she knew that wasn't why she was going. She was going because for the first time in a long, lonely life, someone had found something in her they craved. And the terrifying, exhilarating truth was that she was starting to crave the craving.

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