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Cupid's Revenge: A Valentine's Day Betrayal

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Today is Valentine's day and both of Jane and Dawn's boyfriend chose to their Pokemon cards tournament instead of being with their girlfriends. Jane and Dawn are also nerdy like their boyfriends but they cant believe that their boyfriends would chose the nerdy stuff over celebrating Valentines together. Frustrated, Jane and Dawn decided to seduce a delivery person to get back at their boyfriends. Hesitant at first, this act maybe out of character of them, but their anger towards the boys fuel their desire

Chapter 1: The Delivery Boy’s Surprise Valentine

The fairy lights strung above Jane’s bookcase hummed, a low electrical whisper beneath the bass from the neighbor’s apartment. Their amber glow caught the edges of torn Pokémon cards scattered across the coffee table—a Vaporeon ripped clean in two, a Charizard with a corner bent back. The air was thick with the scent of synthetic jasmine from a spritz of cheap perfume and the greasy, cold smell of forgotten lo mein.

Jane stabbed a plastic fork into a container of congealed fried rice. “He said, and I quote, ‘Babe, the regional qualifiers are on the fourteenth. It’s a once-in-a-season meta.’ A meta, Dawn. He chose a meta over me.”

She was a splash of violent color against the dull grey sofa, her choppy pink hair catching the light like neon coral. Her tiny frame was coiled tight.

Across from her, Dawn pushed her oversized glasses up her nose. She looked swallowed by an enormous knitted cardigan. “Matt just sent a selfie from the comic shop. He’s wearing the ‘Dungeon Master’s Do Me’ t-shirt I bought him as a joke.” Her voice was quiet, steady, but her fingers were shredding a napkin into a perfect, tiny pile of confetti. “He’s supposed to be studying for his bar exam.”

“They’re in a tournament. A Valentine’s Day Pokémon and… whatever Matt’s doing… tournament.” Jane spat the word. “We are leftovers. We are the cold, soggy egg rolls of Valentine’s Day.”

Dawn took a long, uncharacteristic gulp of rosé straight from the bottle. “I feel like a library book,” she said, the alcohol lending a faint bravado to her words. “One he checked out because the cover looked interesting, but he never actually got around to reading.”

Jane’s bright green eyes, usually sparkling with some manic idea, had gone flat and hard. She swept the torn cards onto the floor with a violent swipe of her arm. The motion was sudden, sharp. “I’m so tired of being an option. A side quest.”

“What does that make us?” Dawn asked, watching a Pikachu flutter to the carpet.

A slow, dangerous smile spread across Jane’s face. It didn’t reach her eyes. “It makes us the final bosses.”

The doorbell rang.

They both froze. The buzzer was an alien sound, a jolt to their sealed, bitter universe.

“Did you order more wine?” Dawn whispered.

“Food,” Jane groaned, slumping back. “I ordered more misery food an hour ago. Forgot.”

She hauled herself up, padding to the door on bare feet. She yanked it open.

Darren stood there holding the steamed bag, his confident smirk faltering for a second as his dark eyes took in the sight of two big-titted women in thin nightgowns silhouetted against the warm, messy apartment light. His gaze dropped to the food in his hands, then back up, a slow, appreciative smile spreading across his face.

"Forty-two eighty," he said, his voice a lazy drawl as he leaned against the doorframe, his eyes lingering a beat too long on the thin strap of her nightgown. The implied smirk in his tone, the casual ownership of the space he took up, it was the final spark in the tinderbox of her night. Dawn watched from the sofa

“Big night planned?” Darren asked, his eyes flicking over her threadbare gown. “Forty-two eighty,” Jane snapped, the number sounding like an indictment as she gestured vaguely toward her purse on the floor. “Our boyfriends are at a Pokémon tournament, so, you know, the party of the year.” He smirked, not moving from the doorway, his gaze drifting past her to where Dawn sat rigid on the sofa. “That’s a shame,” he said, his voice dropping to a conspiratorial rumble. “Maybe I could help you two celebrate.”

He stepped inside without being asked, letting the door swing shut behind him, and his large, calloused hand came to rest heavily on the smooth skin of Jane’s shoulder. The touch was hot and possessive, and a small, involuntary moan escaped her lips, a sound of shock that he mistook for encouragement. Jane’s eyes, wide and glittering, flew to Dawn, who gave a single, almost imperceptible nod from the shadows of the sofa—a silent, furious pact sealed in the space of a heartbeat. “See?” Darren murmured, his grin spreading like oil as he looked between them. “Everyone wins.”

His fingers tightened on her shoulder, then slid down to grip the soft curve of her waist. He guided her backwards into the room, his other hand finding her opposite hip, steering her like she was his to maneuver. The cheap satin of her nightgown whispered under his rough palms.

They moved in a clumsy, forced procession toward the sofa, where Dawn watched, unmoving, her wine-bottle gripped like a weapon.

“Make some room, gorgeous,” Darren said, his voice a low chuckle as he gently, firmly pushed Jane down onto the cushions. He dropped beside her, the old springs groaning under his weight, and threw one muscular arm along the back of the sofa behind both of them. His territory, claimed. “See? Way better than some cartoon monsters, right?”

He smelled like cold air, fried food, and assertive cologne. “You two looked so lonely over here.” His gaze traveled slowly from Jane’s face to Dawn’s, a lazy, appraising sweep. “All dressed up with nowhere to go. A total waste.”

Dawn stiffened, her knuckles white on the bottle’s neck. “We had plans,” she said, her voice thin.

“And now you have an upgrade,” Darren said, flashing a grin. He leaned back, spreading his legs, completely at ease in the center of their wrecked evening. He plucked the wine bottle from Dawn’s hand, took a long swig, and handed it back, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. “Relax. I know what you want. You don’t have to play shy with me.”

His thumb began tracing slow, absent circles on Jane’s hipbone through the thin fabric. The arrogance of the gesture, the assumed intimacy, sent a jolt of pure, clarifying rage through her veins. It burned away the wine-fog, sharper and cleaner than any anger she’d felt all night.

Dawn met her eyes over the broad line of his shoulder. There was no fear in Dawn’s look now, only a cold, focused resolve. The plan was no longer a drunken fantasy. It was here, breathing and arrogant, sitting between them.

It was here, breathing and arrogant, sitting between them. Darren’s eyes, dark and dismissive, scanned the cluttered room. They landed on a small, cheap frame on the side table beside Dawn. He leaned over, his arm brushing against Jane, and plucked it up.

It was a picture from a trivia night, the four of them crammed in a booth. Matt and Jane’s boyfriend, two grinning white guys in graphic tees, held up pathetic scorecards.

Darren snorted, holding the frame between his thick fingers. “These the champions?” He shook his head, a low chuckle in his throat. “These the little masters who left you two all alone?” He tapped the glass with a blunt fingernail. “Look at these pasty dweebs. I bet they cry when they cum.”

He tossed the picture onto the cushion beside Dawn like garbage. “Forget them.” His hand, which had been on Jane’s hip, slid upward, his thumb brushing the underside of her breast through the satin. His other hand reached for Dawn’s chin, turning her face toward him. “You ever been with a real man?”

Jane caught Dawn’s eye. Dawn gave another tiny, sharp nod. The plan was now.

Darren stood up, his shadow swallowing the coffee table. “Both of you, on your knees. Now.” His voice left no room for debate, just a flat command.

A hot jolt of shame shot through Jane, but she slid off the sofa, the rough carpet biting her knees. Dawn followed, her movements stiff, her eyes locked on the floor.

He undid his belt with a sharp, metallic rasp, the sound grotesquely loud in the silent room. The zpper’s whine was worse. He pushed his jeans and briefs down just past his hips.

Jane’s breath hitched. Dawn made a small, choked sound.

It was thick, veined, and hung heavy and semi-hard against his dark thigh, an obscene promise of utter dominance. He palmed himself, giving it a slow, possessive stroke, his eyes never leaving their horrified faces.

“Look at it,” he said, his tone conversational, even amused. “Really look. Then I want you to tell me… is your little dungeon master even half this?”

Dawn whimpered, a tear tracing a clean line through the mascara smudges under her glasses. Jane felt her own face burn, a cocktail of rage and a terrifying, unwanted arousal tightening her stomach.

“Well?” Darren prompted, his voice dropping to a threatening purr. “Jane. Your nerd-boy Pokémon trainer. Compare.”

Jane’s throat worked. “No,” she whispered, the word scraping out. “He’s… he’s nothing like that.”

Darren’s smile was a victor’s smile. He turned his gaze to Dawn. “Librarian. Your future lawyer. You think his little gavel measures up to this?”

Dawn shook her head, a frantic, miserable movement. “No,” she breathed. “God, no.”

Darren’s laugh was a soft, condescending puff of air. “Exactly.” He took a step closer, the heat of him radiating onto their bowed heads. Jane’s gaze was locked on the twisted cable of the floor lamp, its metal cord snaking toward the wall. Her shame was crystallizing, hardening into something diamond-sharp and usable.

Dawn’s shallow breathing hitched beside her.

“Now, since you understand the situation,” Darren said, his voice smooth with triumph, “open your—”

A phone buzzed on the carpet, screen lighting up with a cascade of Pokémon battle notifications. Matt. Her boyfriend. The distraction was a micro-second, but it was everything.

Jane’s eyes snapped up, meeting Dawn’s. In that fractured moment, Dawn’s tear-filled eyes weren’t pleading. They were asking. A silent, furious question passed between them over the torn cardstock littering the floor. Are we really this?

Jane’s answer was in the slight tilt of her chin, a movement Darren couldn’t see. No. They were not.

“Open your mouth,” Darren repeated, his patience thinning, his hand moving to guide himself toward her face.

Instead, Jane’s fingers, trembling slightly, closed around the cold, heavy base of the empty wine bottle beside her knee. The glass was slick in her palm. Dawn saw it. Her own hand crept out, her fingers brushing over the torn, stiff corner of the Charizard card on the carpet between them.

Darren’s shadow loomed larger. “I won’t ask again.”

Jane’s grip tightened. She looked up, not at him, but past him, her green eyes wide and falsely glassy. “You’re right,” she whispered, her voice a broken, convincing thing. “They’re nothing.”

“They’re nothing.” The words were ash in her mouth, but they worked. Darren’s triumphant smirk deepened, his gaze greedy. “Good girl.”

Jane leaned forward, her pink hair brushing his thigh, and Dawn followed, a reluctant shadow. The air tasted of salt and cheap cologne. Jane’s tongue, flat and tentative, touched the veined underside of his cock, and she heard his sharp intake of breath. Dawn’s mouth, hesitant at first, found the swollen head, her lips parting with a soft, wet sound.

Jane’s hand slipped between her own legs, under the satin, her fingers finding her clit with a rough, circular pressure that was more punishment than pleasure. A sharp gasp escaped her, which Darren mistook for enthusiasm. Dawn mirrored the movement, her other hand trembling as she palmed herself through her underwear, her eyes squeezed shut.

Together, their tongues worked him, a slow, synchronized torture. Jane licked a long stripe from root to tip, the taste of him bitter and alien. Dawn took him deeper, gagging slightly before forcing herself to continue. The room filled with the raw, wet sounds of their feigned worship, each slick noise feeding Darren’s smug grunts above them.

His hands knotted in Jane’s pink hair, guiding her mouth onto him with a rough, insistent pressure. She choked, her eyes watering as he fucked into the tight seal of her lips. “Yeah, just like that,” he groaned, his head tilting back. “Take all of it, you desperate slut.”

Dawn watched, her own movements becoming more frantic, a performance of abandon. She swirled her tongue around the base, her fingers digging into his thighs as if she were enthralled, while her other hand crept back across the carpet. Her fingers closed around the neck of the empty champagne bottle they’d discarded earlier.

“Switch,” Darren commanded, pulling Jane’s head back by her hair. A string of saliva connected her lips to his glistening cock. He shoved her aside toward the sofa. “You, four-eyes. Your turn deep-throating.”

Dawn moved in, her glasses smudged and askew. As she took him into her mouth, she made a show of gagging, the sound wet and obscene. Darren’s laugh was a short, cruel bark. “Fucking nerds,” he sighed, his hips pumping lazily. “You love this, don’t you? Being put in your place.”

Jane, from behind him on the sofa, caught Dawn’s eye. She gave a slow, deliberate blink. Her hand slid under the cushion, searching. Dawn hollowed her cheeks, sucking hard, her fist tightening around the cold glass in her hand. Darren’s breathing grew ragged, his arrogance giving way to raw, grunting need. “Gonna paint those pretty faces,” he panted. “Gonna mark what’s mine.”

Jane’s fingers closed around the torn edge of the Vaporeon card. It felt flimsy, useless. Then her knuckles brushed against something cold and solid—the forgotten metal trophy from last year’s design conference. Its base was heavy, satisfying in her palm.

Its base was heavy, satisfying in her palm. But the weight was meaningless now, a forgotten thought dropped into the void of her need.

The sharp, metallic anger that had fueled her shattered as Darren’s thick head pressed against Dawn’s lips, and all Jane could see was the sheer, massive size of him. Matt, his pathetic, whining climaxes, the dumb tournaments—it all evaporated like smoke, leaving only this pounding, single-minded hunger.

“Forget the trophy,” Jane breathed, her voice a raw scrape, and she let it clatter back behind the cushion.

Dawn understood. Her own resentments, the image of Matt’s smug face, dissolved under the immediate, salty taste of his pre-cum on her tongue. This was real. This was everything.

“You want it?” Darren grunted, his voice thick with condescending power. He pulled himself from Dawn’s mouth with a wet pop and slapped his heavy, thick length against Jane’s cheek. The heat of it, the intimidating girth, made her whimper with pure want. “Then beg for it.”

“Please,” Jane moaned, the word tasting better than revenge ever could. She turned her head, capturing the swollen tip between her lips, her small mouth straining. “Please, give it to me.”

Dawn crawled forward, her glasses fogged, and wrapped her hand around the base he wasn’t fucking into Jane’s throat. Her slender fingers couldn’t even meet. She stared, mesmerized by the visible pulse under the dark skin, by the sheer ownership it demanded of them. “It’s so big,” she whispered, awed, licking a vein. “God, I need it.”

Darren laughed, a low, victorious sound. “Damn right you do.” He fisted Dawn’s brown hair, yanking her head back. “Open wide, bookworm. Show me how grateful you are.”

Darren’s grasp in her hair tightened, forcing her mouth onto him until her throat convulsed around the thick intrusion. When he finally released her, Dawn gasped for air, strings of saliva webbing her chin. “Now, get on the floor,” he commanded, stepping back and stroking himself slowly, his eyes glinting with predatory pleasure. “Both of you. On your hands and knees. Now.”

Jane scrambled to obey, her knees hitting the rough carpet, the position making her feel exposed and owned. Dawn moved shakily beside her, parallel on the worn rug.

“Wait,” Dawn breathed, her voice tremulous. She crawled toward her discarded purse, fumbling with the zipper. “I… I have a box of condoms. Just let me—”

“No.” Darren’s voice was flat, absolute. He took a step closer, his shadow falling over them. “It’s raw or it’s nothing. Your choice.”

The words hung in the perfumed air. Jane’s heart hammered against her ribs. She’d never let Kevin go raw, not once. Dawn’s panicked eyes met hers; she knew Mark would never even ask. This was a line, thick and red.

Darren smirked, seeing the conflict twist their faces. “I’m not wrapping this up for anybody,” he said, giving his cock a slow, deliberate stroke. “You want it or not? Decide.”

The silence stretched, throbbing with the bass from next door. Jane felt a hot, shameful drip of arousal between her thighs. Dawn’s breathing was shallow, ragged. They looked at each other, and in that shared glance was the ruin of their old boundaries, the crushing weight of a need they’d just discovered. Jane gave a tiny, desperate nod.

“Raw,” Dawn whispered, the word a surrender.

“Say it louder,” Darren demanded.

“We want it raw,” Jane choked out, the admission both terrifying and thrilling.

“Good.” His hands settled on Jane’s hips, his thumbs digging into the soft flesh. “Now don’t move.”

Darren’s grip on Jane’s hips tightened, his fingers biting into her skin. She could feel the heat of him pressing against her, a blunt, insistent pressure that made her breath catch. Dawn whimpered beside her, the sound choked and raw. “Look at you two,” Darren muttered, his voice a low growl of contempt. “Pathetic.” Jane’s face burned against the carpet, the fibers scratching her cheek. She heard the wet sound of him spitting into his palm. Then, a cold, slick drizzle between her thighs as he lubed himself with it. “Please,” Dawn whispered, but it was unclear if she was begging for him to stop or to continue. Darren ignored her, aligning himself with Jane’s entrance.

The stretch was immediate, brutal, a searing fullness that tore a sharp cry from Jane’s throat. He didn’t stop, pushing deeper with a single, relentless thrust until he was fully seated. “Fuck,” he grunted, his body shuddering against hers. “Tight little cunt.” Jane gasped, her fingers clawing at the carpet, the pain mixing with a shocking, dizzying pleasure. He pulled back slowly, then drove into her again, setting a punishing rhythm. Each movement rubbed her clit against the rough weave, sending jolts of electricity up her spine. “Your turn,” he said to Dawn, pulling out of Jane with a wet pop. He shoved Jane aside, her body collapsing onto the floor, and grabbed Dawn by the hair. “Open up,” he commanded, positioning himself behind her. Dawn sobbed, but arched her back, offering herself to him.

He entered her with none of the slow preparation he’d given Jane. It was a single, vicious thrust that slammed her small body forward, her glasses skittering across the floor. Dawn screamed, a raw sound of pure shock and violation, her fingers scrambling against the carpet for purchase that wasn’t there. “Shut up and take it,” Darren grunted, his hips already pistoning, each drive forcing a choked gasp from her lips.

Jane watched, transfixed, from where she lay on her side. Her own body throbbed, wet and used, a stark contrast to the violent rhythm pounding Dawn into the floor. Darren’s hand wrapped around Dawn’s throat, not to choke, but to hold her still, his thumb pressing into the soft hollow beneath her jaw. “You wanted a real man,” he breathed into her ear, his voice ragged with effort. “This is what it feels like.”

Dawn’s sobs turned into jagged, rhythmic moans, her body betraying her with a traitorous heat that pooled low in her belly. He was too big, splitting her apart, a friction so intense it blurred the line between agony and a pleasure so dark it felt like falling. Her eyes, wide and unseeing, found Jane’s.

There was no solidarity in that look anymore, only a mirrored, shameful hunger. Darren’s pace became erratic, his slaps of skin against skin filling the room. “Gonna fill this tight little ass next,” he promised, his words slurred with impending release. “Mark my fucking words.”

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