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Dawn of the Harem Planet

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All characters are over the age of 18. The people in this story live on a very warm tropical planet with radiation delaying puberty for people till age 18. This makes male births much rarer than females, giving rise to harem based relationships. The first signs of puberty are increased interest and feeling about the opposite (or same) sex, and erections develop. Culturally, parents do not discuss puberty and sex, leaving people very ignorant about sexual urges and body development. They believe this results in more babies born to populate the planet. Mark is a shy submissive guy, 19 years old, a blond college freshman, and the only male on the swim team with many women. He has always liked Jessica and Jean, and wanted to be more than casual friends. He is a voyeur, and has always been curious about girls bodies, even before puberty. His 6 inch flaccid cock recently has eight inch erections, making it awkward in tight speedo swim suits. No one on the team knows Mark is starting puberty, as his blond pubic hair is hard to notice. Jessica and Jean are 18, beautiful blond freshmen, also on the swim team. They have known and liked Mark since grade school, and are good friends of his, but consider him a nerdy guy and a good swimmer. Jessica and Jean are outgoing woman, just starting puberty, with breasts starting to fill out. Faint blond pubic hair is starting to grow. Their emotions and feelings are changing, with more attention paid to men’s bodies. Jean really likes Jessica and Mark and she wants a relationship with Jessica and maybe Mark too, but is too shy to initiate anything. Due to the heat, they wear short dresses and miniskirts, no underwear and loose revealing tops always. At the beach and parks, they prefer to be nude. For Mark, since puberty, this arouses and frustrates Mark continuously. Jessica’s twin sister is Chloe, age 19. She is visiting Jessica and knows Mark and Jean well. Chloe is further along in puberty, understanding a little more about how their feelings will develop, though still mostly ignorant about sex. The first scene has Mark, at the first swim practice since reaching puberty, still in his speedo, sitting with Jessica’s sister Chloe. Mark is watching Jessica and Jean. Chloe is asking Mark about the three of them and their relationship. She notices Mark’s constant attention on Jessica and Jean. She thinks he is interested in the two women. Chloe hopes she will help Jessica by asking him to help organize the dorm.

Chapter 6: The Ambush in the Locker Room

The steam in the women’s locker room seemed to congeal around him, thick and suffocating. Every detail was hyper-sharp: a droplet of water sliding down Maya’s collarbone, the frayed edge of a locker room towel tossed over a bench, the fluorescent light reflecting off Lisa’s braces as her smirk widened. Mark’s own heartbeat was a bass drum in his ears, drowning out the distant hum of the pool filter.

Maya took a slow, predatory step forward, the tile cool under her bare feet. “You look lost,” she said, her voice sweet as poison.

He couldn’t speak. His grip on the thin towel tightened, his knuckles bleaching white.

“I said,” Maya repeated, closing the distance with unnerving calm, “check the lost and found.” Her hand shot out, not fast, but deliberate. Her fingers hooked into the terrycloth knot at his hip. He flinched, a full-body recoil, but there was nowhere to go. The lockers were at his back.

She pulled.

The towel unravelled and fell in a damp heap at his feet.

A collective, sharp inhale sucked the steam from the room. Then a silence, dense and ringing, broken only by the drip of a distant showerhead.

He was completely, utterly exposed. The chill air of the ventilation system kissed his skin, raising gooseflesh. The reaction he’d fought so hard to quell in the pool, softened only by the icy shower, began a treacherous, involuntary reawakening under the weight of a dozen staring eyes. He crossed his hands low, a pathetic, futile shield.

“Whoa,” Lisa breathed, not looking away.

Chloe uncrossed her arms, her analytical gaze sweeping down and then back up to his face. “Huh. So that’s the variable causing all the calibration issues.”

“Looks like the equipment’s fully operational,” Maya purred. She didn’t touch him again, just circled slowly, her appraisal clinical and devastating. “And you were so shy in your speedo. This is a much clearer data set.”

A hot rush of humiliation burned from his chest up to his hairline. He fixed his eyes on the ceiling, on a water stain shaped like a continent, anywhere but on them. The urge to bolt was a live wire in his muscles, but paralysis held him fast. This was the consequence. This was the price of the night before, extracted publicly and in cruel, exacting detail.

“Alright,” Chloe said, clapping her hands together once. The sound made him jump. “Game time. You want your clothes?” She nodded to the duffel bag. “We’ll help you find them.”

“Chloe,” a voice said from the doorway. Jessica.

She and Jean stood there, frozen in the entrance. They must have come back. Jessica’s face was pale, her scientific detachment utterly vaporized, replaced by a storm of something raw—anger, protectiveness, horror. Jean’s hand was clamped over her mouth, her eyes wide and glistening.

Maya glanced at them, unfazed. “Perfect. The research team is all here. We’re just conducting a peer review.” She turned back to Mark. “The game is simple. We have your things.” She gestured to the bag. Lisa upended it. His shorts, t-shirt, boxers, flip-flops spilled onto the bench in a pathetic heap. “Each item requires… an inspection. To ensure it’s really yours. You pass inspection, you get the piece back.”

“You can’t do this,” Jean said, her voice trembling.

“We’re not doing anything,” Chloe corrected mildly. “He walked in here voluntarily. He can walk out anytime. Naked. Or he can play the game and leave dressed.” She looked at Mark. “Your choice, statistic.”

He knew then, with a sinking clarity, that there was no winning. Leaving naked was impossible. The hallway, the campus—it was unthinkable. This humiliation had walls. It had an end point.

He gave a tiny, almost imperceptible nod.

Jessica made a strangled sound.

“Great,” Maya said. She picked up his boxers, a plain grey cotton pair. She held them pinched between her thumb and forefinger. “First inspection. Provenance. Confirm these are yours.”

Mark’s voice was dust. “Yes.”

“Description. Convince me.”

He swallowed. “They’re… grey. Hanes. Size medium.”

“Vague.” Maya tossed the boxers to Lisa. “Lisa, verify.”

Lisa caught them, giggling. She made a show of examining the waistband, then fluttered them lightly. “Tag says medium. Could be anyone’s.” She looked at Mark, her head tilted. “Maybe we need a fit test.”

The room tightened. A fit test.

Lisa stepped forward. Before he could process it, she was close, too close. She didn’t touch him with her hands. Instead, she held the waistband of the boxers open near his hips, as if measuring. The fabric brushed his skin. He jerked back, hitting the locker with a metallic bang.

“Seems like a possible match,” Lisa declared, her cheeks flushed with glee. She tossed the boxers onto the bench. “Okay, he can have those. Next.”

Chloe picked up his shorts. “These are distinctive. Blue plaid. Let’s check the pockets for identification.” She slid her hand into the front pocket, her movements slow and deliberate. She pulled out a faded movie ticket stub. “Aha. Proof of life.” She dropped the shorts. “Too easy. He gets them.”

It was a feint. He knew it. The minor items were being cleared away.

Maya now held his t-shirt, his favorite, soft from a hundred washes. She didn’t speak. She just looked at him, then at Jessica and Jean, who were rooted in place, a tense, silent tableau by the door. Jean was crying silently, tears cutting clean tracks through the pool-chlorine sheen on her cheeks. Jessica’s hands were clenched into fists at her sides.

“This inspection,” Maya said softly, “is for contamination.” She walked up to him, the shirt in her hand. “Lift your arms.”

“What?”

“You heard me. We need to check for residual chemical transfer from the pool. Standard procedure.” Her eyes were hard. “Arms up.”

He slowly, painfully, uncrossed his arms from his front. He raised them, placing his palms flat against the cold locker behind him. The posture made him feel infinitely more vulnerable, stretched and open. A choked sob escaped Jean.

Maya didn’t use the shirt to touch him. Instead, she leaned in, her face close to his chest. She sniffed, audibly. “Chlorine levels are acceptable.” Her gaze tracked down. The treacherous, physical reaction he’d been fighting was becoming unmistakably evident again, fueled by terror, shame, and the unbearable proximity. Her eyes lingered there for a long second. “But there appears to be some… atypical physiological activity. Possible side effect of unknown variables.” She dropped the t-shirt on the bench, her mission accomplished. “Inconclusive. He can have it.”

Only the flip-flops remained.

Chloe picked one up. She didn’t look at the sandal. She looked at him. “Final inspection. This one’s mine.” She walked over until she stood directly in front of him, closer than Lisa had been. The playful cruelty was gone from her face, replaced by a cool, intense curiosity. “The previous inspections were for property. This one is for the subject.”

The room was utterly still. Even Maya watched, her smirk softened into something more like focus.

“You’ve been the source of considerable data disruption,” Chloe stated, her voice low. “You and your… research team.” She glanced at Jessica. “You’ve introduced uncontrolled variables into a stable environment. You don’t get to just take your things and walk out, leaving us to recalibrate around your mess.”

“What do you want?” The question tore from his throat, ragged.

“Confirmation,” she said simply. Her free hand came up. He stiffened, expecting a touch, a violation. But she didn’t touch him. She pointed a finger, gesturing downward. “You walked in here with a problem. A visible one. I want to see it resolve. I want to see the system return to baseline. On its own. No external input. That’s the inspection.”

He understood. She wanted to watch him go soft. She wanted to stand there and witness his body’s betrayal fade under the weight of pure, sterilizing humiliation. It was the most vicious request of all.

He squeezed his eyes shut. He tried to think of nothing, of cold equations, of the blurry bottom of the pool. But the pressure of the silence, the knowing stares, the heat of his own shame, was a feedback loop he couldn’t escape. It felt like it took an eternity, every second stretched and raw under the fluorescent lights. His own biology felt like a separate, hated entity.

Finally, a shift. A slow, merciful retreat. The intense, embarrassed arousal, starved of anything but negative stimulus, began to wane.

When he opened his eyes, Chloe was still watching, her head cocked. She gave a small, professional nod, as if a gauge had settled back to zero. “Acceptable.” She dropped the flip-flop on the pile with the others. “Inspection complete. You can get dressed.”

The spell broke. The team began to move, turning away, murmuring, some heading to the dryers, others gathering their bags, the spectacle over. The casualness of their dismissal was its own final insult.

Mark didn’t waste a second. He scrambled for his clothes, his hands shaking so badly he could barely pull on his boxers. He yanked the t-shirt over his head, fumbled with his shorts. He didn’t look at anyone.

Jessica and Jean were suddenly beside him. Jean silently handed him his flip-flops, her fingers brushing his, ice-cold. Jessica snatched up his duffel bag, her jaw set in a hard line.

“Let’s go,” Jessica hissed, the words taut with a fury she hadn’t yet unleashed.

They formed a phalanx around him, Jessica leading, Jean at his side, and marched him out of the locker room. The hallway was still empty. The heavy door swung shut behind them, muting the resuming chatter inside.

They didn’t stop until they were outside, the bright, indifferent sun blasting down on the quiet quad. Jessica kept walking, her strides long and furious, away from the dorms, toward the deserted botanical gardens behind the science building.

Once they were deep inside a canopy of whispering bamboo, hidden from view, she finally stopped. She turned on him, her composure shattering.

“Why didn’t you leave?” she demanded, her voice cracking. “Why did you just stand there? You should have walked out!”

“I couldn’t,” he managed, the words thick. “The hallway…”

“So you let them do that?” Jean cried, the tears flowing freely now. “You just… you nodded!”

“What was the alternative?” he shot back, a surge of defensive anger breaking through his shame. “Streak across campus? They had my clothes! There wasn’t a good choice! It was just… the less bad one!”

“The less bad one involved a fit test!” Jessica yelled, throwing her hands up. “It involved Chloe conducting a… a visual baseline assessment! That’s not a variable, Mark! That’s an assault!”

“They were always going to win!” he shouted, the sound raw in the quiet garden. “The second I walked in there, I lost! Don’t you get it? This is the price! This is what happens! We changed the environment, and the environment pushed back! It crushed me!”

The truth of it hung between them, ugly and deflating. Jessica’s fury seemed to drain away, leaving something hollow and scared. Jean wrapped her arms around herself, shivering in the heat.

Jessica looked at him, really looked, seeing the tremor in his hands, the sheen of humiliation still on his skin. Her scientific detachment was ashes. “We left you,” she whispered. “We saw what was happening at practice and we… we panicked. We retreated to gather data. That was a catastrophic error. We left the subject exposed to hostile conditions.”

“Stop calling me the subject!” he groaned, covering his face with his hands.

“You’re not,” Jean said softly, stepping closer. She pried one hand away from his face, her touch gentle. “You’re Mark. And we left you.”

The anger dissipated, leaving a vacuum filled with a deep, shared exhaustion. The adrenaline was gone, and the events of the last hour settled onto them like a physical weight.

Jessica leaned back against a bamboo stalk, closing her eyes. “Maya and Chloe. They won’t stop. This proved it’s entertaining. The data they collected today… it’s social currency. They’ll spend it.”

“So what do we do?” Jean asked, her voice small.

Mark finally slipped his feet into his flip-flops, the mundane act feeling bizarre. “We do what Chloe said. We recalibrate. We go to weights at four. We act like nothing happened.”

“That’s impossible,” Jessica said.

“It’s the only option,” he replied, the certainty surprising him. “If we hide, if we react, we feed the variable. We make it more interesting. We have to… absorb it. Make it boring.”

Jessica opened her eyes. She studied him—the resolved set of his shoulders, the grim acceptance on his face. He wasn’t the flustered boy from the pier or the naked statue in the locker room. He was something else, forged in a very specific fire.

“Absorb it,” she repeated. She pushed off the bamboo. “Okay. We absorb it.” She looked from Mark to Jean. “But not separately. We don’t retreat again. From now on, we’re a unified front. A closed system. No matter what.”

Jean took Mark’s hand. After a beat, Jessica took his other. They stood there in the dappled light, a circuit of three again, but this time the connection was fortified by something darker than discovery: by shared vulnerability, by a common enemy, by the visceral understanding of what the outside world could do.

“A closed system,” Jean echoed, squeezing his hand.

“Yeah,” Mark breathed. He could still feel the ghost of every stare on his skin. But here, in the hidden grove, with their hands linked, the feeling began to recede, replaced by a fragile, stubborn solidarity. The inspection was over. The game, he knew, was far from done. But they would walk into the weight room at four o’clock together.

They would have to.

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