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Gears of Submission

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Write me a story between a guy and a girl. She's a final year university student, but she doesn't have many friends, outside of her twin sister and her friend group. She's short, brunette and likes to dress casual, outside of chokers, concealing a dirty mind that craves being dominated in bed, which she has been by a few guys, but none were particularly good at it. She keeps this side hidden from everyone, as she knows it will simply make her twin seem even more perfect. He's a 23 year old petrol head that likes fast bikes and fast cars, and does rally driving professionally, though he also races bikes on the side, and is a general badboy. He's quite rough with girls, loving the control, but his ex wasn't into it as much and dumped him because of it. He does have issues with anger, which tend to bleed through in stressful moments. They meet in a bar when he's in her university town for a bike race, and he quickly takes a liking to this shy reserved girl, prefering her to her far louder and lusty twin sister who she's with, and ends up inviting her to watch his race and she accepts, though she can't keep him out of her mind for other reasons...

Chapter 3: The Race and The Truck

The mile marker was a blur of white paint on grey asphalt, the numbers meaningless now. Evie stood apart from the crowd at the edge of the field, a still point in a storm of noise and gasoline. The spectators were a riot of color and sound—girls in tiny shorts screaming on the backs of boyfriends’ shoulders, men in grease-stained shirts yelling bets, the air thick with burnt rubber and spilled beer. She was a shadow in her oversized hoodie, her thighs clenched tight, a current of excitement and fear wiring her jaw shut.

She watched him.

Jay moved around his bike like it was part of him, a final aggressive check of the throttle sending a raw snarl across the field. Her heart hammered in time with the engine. The flag dropped. He was a streak of black and chrome, leaning so low into the first turn she could see the gravel spray from his back tire. Every controlled slide, every brutal acceleration, was a physical claim on the space, on the air, on her. She didn’t breathe. She watched, mesmerized by the violence of his control, her panties growing damp, her nails biting into her own palms.

When he took the checkered flag, lifting a gloved hand in a casual, victorious wave, the crowd erupted. Evie clapped, the sound swallowed by the roar. She cheered, her voice thin and strange to her own ears. And then his helmet was off, his dark hair sweat-damp, and his eyes scanned the fence line. They found hers. Locked.

Her breath died in her throat.

He vaulted the fence, ignoring the hands slapping his back, and walked straight toward her. The crowd parted for him. He didn’t smile. His gaze was a weight, a tactile thing. He stopped inches from her, the heat and smell of engine and sweat rolling off him.

“You came,” he said, his voice rough from the race. It wasn’t a question.

Before she could speak, his hand fisted in her hair, close to the scalp, and pulled her head back sharply. She gasped. His other arm slid around her waist, crushing her against the hard plane of his body. “Glad you did,” he growled, and his mouth came down on hers.

It wasn’t a kiss. It was possession. His lips were demanding, his tongue pushing past hers, tasting of adrenaline and cheap coffee. She sank into it, a moan vibrating in her clamped throat. His hand left her waist and came down hard on her ass—a sharp, stinging slap that echoed, she was sure, for everyone to hear. Then he grabbed the bruised flesh, kneading it through her jeans, marking her right there in front of everyone. Whistles cut the air. She didn’t care. Heat flooded her, shameful and magnificent.

He broke the kiss, still holding her hair. “Truck. Now.”

He kept a firm hand on the back of her neck, leading her through the leering crowd. She stumbled once, her legs unsteady. He didn’t slow. At the hulking black truck, he released her only to roll his bike up the ramp into the bed, securing it with swift, practiced motions. Then he turned, his eyes dark.

He backed her against the driver’s side door, the cool metal seeping through her hoodie. He took both her wrists in one of his large, calloused hands and pinned them above her head against the window. His body caged hers. He kissed her again, deeper, slower now, a preview of a darker hunger. When he withdrew, she let out a shuddering moan, her hips arching off the truck, seeking friction.

She struggled, not to get free, but to press into him, to goad the beast she saw in his eyes. “Jay, please—”

His other hand came up and pinned her by the sternum, his palm flat between her breasts, holding her firmly in place. The pressure was absolute. “Stop.” The word was quiet, final. She stilled instantly, a fresh wave of wetness soaking her. He studied her face, her parted lips, her blown pupils. “I’d prefer to know two things,” he said, his thumb stroking a rough line over her hoodie, right above her pounding heart, “before I take you to that motel, bend you over, and fuck you until you’re a sobbing, used-up mess on my sheets.”

Evie’s cunt throbbed. She could feel her own pulse there, a desperate, answering beat.

“Your age. And your name.”

She swallowed. “Evie,” she whispered. “I’m twenty-two.”

A slow, dangerous smile touched his lips. “Evie.” He tasted her name. “You behaved today. Watched nice and quiet.”

“Are you going to tie me up now?” she asked, her voice bolder than she felt, teasing the edge she craved. “Throw me in your truck like a prize?”

His grin widened. He released her wrists and chest, stepping back just enough to yank open the passenger door. He reached in, rummaged behind the seat, and straightened up.

In his hands was a length of coarse, tan rope. It was thick, abrasive-looking, the kind meant for securing loads, for tying down engines. Not for binding delicate wrists. Not for dirty, hungry girls who asked for it.

“Something like that,” he said.

“Something like that,” he said.

He didn’t ask. His hand was suddenly in her hair again, a firm, guiding pressure that became decisive. He turned her, shoving her face-first against the truck’s cold flank. “Stay.” The command was a vibration through the metal. He kicked her sneakers apart, planting her feet wider. She heard the rustle of the rope, the sound alone making her cunt clench.

He grabbed her left wrist, yanking it behind her back. The coarse fibers scraped against her skin as he looped the rope tightly, expertly, around her wrist. He pulled it taut, the bite immediate and sweet. Her right wrist followed, bound fast to the left. The knots were solid, unyielding. He pushed her hoodie up, her sweater with it, exposing the small of her back to the cooling air.

“Jay—” His name was a plea, a prayer.

“Quiet.” He dropped to a crouch behind her. His hands gripped her ankles, one after the other, pulling them back. She wobbled, her balance gone. He wrapped the rope around her ankles, securing them together with the same brutal efficiency. She was trussed, vulnerable, her ass pushed out. The position strained her shoulders, a hot ache blooming in her joints.

Then he pulled. He took the length of rope between her wrists and ankles and hauled them toward each other, linking her into a tight, inescapable curve. She was hogtied. The strain was exquisite, arching her back, presenting her completely. A ragged moan tore from her throat. She tested the bonds, struggling not to break free but to feel their absolute claim. The rope dug into her wrists, her ankles, the core of her screaming with want.

“Fuck,” she breathed, her cheek pressed to the dirty truck door.

He stood. His hands, those grease-stained mechanic’s hands, smoothed over the seat of her jeans, palming the curves of her ass. He squeezed, hard. “You love this.” It wasn’t a question. He bent, one arm hooking under her knees, the other behind her shoulders. He lifted her like she was nothing, her bound body folding against his chest.

He dumped her onto the backseat of the truck. The vinyl was cracked and smelled of old smoke and oil. She landed on her side, curled like a captured animal. He looked down at her, his eyes black with intent. “One sound before I say so,” he said, tapping her cheek with a rough knuckle, “and I pull over and leave you on the side of the road.”

He slammed the door. The world shrank to the dim cab, the vibration of the engine starting, the view of the cracked headliner. The truck pulled onto the road. Every bump jolted through her, the rope tightening, her jeans rubbing her swollen clit. She squirmed, loving the helplessness, the anticipation coiling tighter than the knots.

It was too much. The silence, the motion, the memory of his hands. A low, desperate whimper escaped her. Then another. “Jay… please, I need… I can’t…” The words were hormonal babble, hungry and pathetic. She heard him exhale sharply up front.

The truck swerved, tires crunching on gravel, and stopped. Her heart hammered. The driver’s door opened and closed. Her door yanked open. Jay loomed against the grey sky, his expression one of pure irritation.

“I said quiet.” He pulled a red bandana from his back pocket, crumpled it into a rough wad. “Open.” When she hesitated, he pinched her jaw, his fingers forceful. She opened her mouth. He shoved the cloth in deep, the dry cotton choking her words, soaking up her spit. He tied the ends tight at the base of her skull, the knot digging in. “That’s better. Now you can listen.”

He got back in. The truck moved again. She moaned into the gag, the sound thick and muffled. She struggled against the hogtie, the ropes biting deliciously, her body a live wire of submission.

“You’re gonna learn,” his voice came from the front, calm and dark. “That pretty cunt of yours is dripping, I know it is. I can smell it back there.” She whimpered, arching against her bonds. “You’re thinking about that motel room. You’re thinking about me cutting these ropes just to tie you spread-eagle to the bedframe. Ankles to the posts. Wists too. Nothing left to hide.”

Evie’s hips jerked involuntarily. A wet patch bloomed on the seat of her jeans.

“I’m gonna peel these fucking jeans off you. See what I won. I’m gonna spread your legs and eat that cunt until you’re screaming into that gag. Then I’m gonna fuck you with my tongue so deep you taste it in your throat.” She moaned louder, straining, the vinyl squeaking under her. “But that’s just the start, Evie. That’s just me getting a taste.”

He turned the wheel, the truck slowing. “I’m gonna flip you over. Press your face into those cheap pillows. I’m gonna mount you from behind and sink my cock into that tight little hole. And I’m not gonna be gentle. I’m gonna pound that pussy raw. You’re gonna take every inch, you understand? You’re gonna feel me in your guts.”

She was so wet it was a slick, aching agony, her clit throbbing against the denim with each description. She cried out, the sound stifled by the bandana, her body trembling violently.

“You’ll beg with your eyes. You’ll shake. And when I’m done fucking your cunt,” he said, the truck coming to a final stop, the engine cutting, “I’m gonna push that soaking wet little mess of a pussy aside and take your other hole. The one that’s never been touched. I’m gonna claim it. You’re gonna feel yourself split open on me.”

The driver’s door opened. He appeared at her door again, silhouetted by the flickering neon of a motel sign. He looked at her, at her wrecked, writhing form, her eyes wide and streaming. He smiled, a slow, possessive curl of his lips.

“We’re here.”

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