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Ladies of Misfortune

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A transitional home for misbehaved women has a culture of its own. Run by Larissa, she is kept busy keeping her participants in line. Her rules are brutal, but she expects success of her ladies.

Chapter 9: Brush With Humility

The clatter of plastic trays and the smell of overcooked eggs filled the dining room as Abby slid onto the bench beside Shayna. “Did Megan finally find that hairbrush she lost, or did a bird nest in it?” Abby snorted, loud enough for several tables to hear.

Shayna’s lips curved, a nasty remark about bird nests and meth labs already forming. Her eyes flicked up and locked with Mackenzie’s cool, green gaze from across the room, where she leaned against the juice dispenser, just watching.

Abby nudged her arm sharply, the expectant grin on her face demanding a collaborator. Shayna said nothing, the memory of last night’s surrender thick in her throat, while Pippa just silently ate her eggs.

Shayna felt Abby’s eyes boring into her, a silent test she couldn’t afford to fail, so she shoved the memory of Mackenzie’s command aside and forced a sharp, familiar smirk onto her face. “Maybe her hairbrush is stuck up her ass,” Shayna quipped, her voice cutting through the din, and Abby cracked up while Pippa even giggled.

Abby, emboldened, leaned in and sneered, “She’s probably too dumb to find it, even up there.” Mackenzie started walking over, her hips swaying with a casual confidence that made the linoleum floor feel like a stage.

She slid onto the bench right beside Shayna, her thigh pressing firmly against Shayna’s, and smiled sweetly across at Abby. “So,” Mackenzie asked, her voice a light, curious chime, “what’s so funny?”

A cold bolt of pure panic shot through Shayna’s chest, tightening her lungs. Abby, oblivious, just smirked and leaned in, ready to repeat the cruelty.

"Just look at Megan's ratty hair over there," Abby sneered, jutting her chin across the room, "we were just saying her missing brush is probably stuck up her ass." Shayna’s blood ran cold, her stomach lurching as she waited for the axe of Mackenzie’s disapproval to fall.

Mackenzie just smirked and said they were awful with a playful giggle. Then she looked at Shayna, her green eyes knowing, and asked, "Have you ever offered to help her with her hair?"

Before Shayna could answer, Abby cut in with a dismissive wave of her hand. "No, because Megan's an idiot," Abby snorted, and Shayna, again, didn't speak, her jaw tightening as she felt the weight of Mackenzie's expectant stare.

Mackenzie leaned in, her breath warm against Shayna’s ear as she murmured, "Maybe we should offer to do her hair." Abby burst out laughing, a sharp, dismissive sound that cracked through the dining room chatter. "That's a stupid idea," Abby said, still chuckling as she turned to Shayna for her expected approval.

Mackenzie’s hand settled high on Shayna’s inner thigh, the pressure through the denim immediate and electric, a vivid reminder of last night’s bargain and who now held the keys to her pleasure. “I think we should go offer,” Mackenzie said, her voice a soft, inescapable command meant only for Shayna’s ears.

Shayna jerked her thigh away from Mackenzie’s touch, a weak, reflexive act of defiance, before forcing her voice into a flat, compliant tone. “Yeah, okay, we should go offer to help her,” she said, not meeting Abby’s widening, betrayed stare.

Mackenzie’s smile was a slow, private victory as she leaned in, her lips nearly brushing Shayna’s ear, and murmured, “Good girl.” The two words, hot and quiet, sent a violent shudder through Shayna’s core, a humiliating jolt of heat that pulsed directly against the cold, unforgiving plastic of her chastity belt.

Shayna stood on unsteady legs and followed Mackenzie across the dining room, the crinkle of her diaper a private humiliation beneath the chatter. As they walked away, Abby shot Pippa a bewildered look and hissed, “What the hell was that?” to which Pippa calmly replied, “Maybe Shayna’s starting to not be an asshole,” before Abby scoffed and returned to eating.

Megan’s jaw went slack as she watched Shayna, the architect of her daily misery, trail meekly behind Mackenzie toward her table. “Morning, Meg,” Mackenzie said brightly, sliding onto the bench opposite her, “Shayna here has a question for you,” leaving Shayna to sit down with a stiff, mortified silence.

Shayna stared at her own hands, folded tightly on the Formica tabletop, and forced the words out in a soft, halting mumble. "I was wondering if... if maybe I could help you with your hair sometime."

Megan’s eyes darted nervously between them, her fingers instinctively rising to touch her tangled curls, but then she caught Mackenzie’s slight, encouraging nod from behind Shayna’s shoulder.

“Yeah, okay,” Megan said, the words quiet and unsure as she studied Shayna’s unreadable, downcast face. Before Shayna could muster a reply, Mackenzie was already on her feet, beaming, and pulling Shayna up by the elbow with a cheerful, “Perfect! Let’s go find a brush right now.”

They followed Megan out of the dining hall, the echo of their footsteps on linoleum the only sound in the tense silence. As they turned toward the residential wing, Mackenzie’s lips brushed Shayna’s ear, her whisper a low, thrilling vibration: “You’ll get rewarded for your good behavior later.”

The room smelled like stale perfume and resentment as Mackenzie plucked a hairbrush from the cluttered dresser and pressed its cool handle into Shayna’s palm. “Sit on the bed, Megan,” Mackenzie said, her voice leaving no room for argument, “Shayna’s going to brush your hair.”

Shayna’s first strokes were stiff and perfunctory, the brush catching immediately in the knotted ends. Then, as she worked through a particularly stubborn tangle with careful, methodical patience, her own pinched expression began to soften into something closer to concentration, then genuine focus, her fingers gently separating the strands to minimize the pull.

The rhythmic pull of the brush began to feel almost meditative, the repetitive motion calming the frantic buzz in Shayna’s own head. “You know,” she said, her voice quieter now, almost thoughtful, “you’d look better with it all straightened, instead of leaving these bangs—it would really show off your natural blonde streaks.”

She felt Mackenzie’s attentive silence shift behind her into something warmer. “Have you ever straightened it before?” Shayna asked, finally meeting Megan’s wary eyes in the mirror, and saw Mackenzie’s reflected smile, a look of pleasant surprise softening her features.

Megan shifted on the bed, her voice hesitant. "I have a straightener in the bottom drawer, but I always burn my scalp so I stopped," she said, nodding toward the dresser where Mackenzie was already moving.

Mackenzie retrieved the cheap, hot-pink tool as Shayna took it, her fingers testing the heat, and said, "The trick is small sections—I'll show you how to use it without setting your head on fire."

Shayna took a thin section of Megan’s hair, guiding the straightener down its length with a slow, steady hand as she murmured, "You have to hold it taut, but not tight, and keep it moving." After Megan managed a decent pass on the next section herself, Shayna nodded and said, "See? You’re getting it—that’s good."

Mackenzie leaned in, her breath a warm ghost against Shayna’s neck, and whispered, "Good girl."

Mackenzie stepped back toward the door, giving a light tap to the frame. “I’ll be right back,” she said, before slipping into the hallway and leaving them in a sudden, intimate quiet.

“So, how often should you actually do this?” Megan asked, holding up the straightener while examining her smoother hair in the mirror. Shayna, her own resistance momentarily forgotten, began explaining the importance of heat protectant and how overdoing it leads to breakage.

The door swung open again, and Mackenzie reentered with Larissa quietly following, both women pausing in the doorway to watch Shayna’s careful, instructive movements. Larissa’s eyebrows rose in clear, impressed surprise, a slow smile spreading as she observed the uncharacteristic act of patience.

Larissa stepped into the room, her voice warm and deliberate as she said, "I'm genuinely proud to see you doing something helpful like this, Shayna." For one unguarded second, Shayna’s face lit up with a pure, beaming pride before her eyes darted to Mackenzie’s knowing smirk and the warmth curdled into shame.

Larissa’s pleased expression shifted, her nose wrinkling slightly as a faint, acrid scent cut through the floral perfume. “Alright,” she said, her tone turning practical, “who soiled their diaper?”

“I didn’t,” Mackenzie said breezily, shrugging her shoulders, and Shayna quickly shook her head, muttering a firm denial. Megan’s cheeks flushed a deep, mortified crimson as she stared at her lap and whispered, “I did.”

Shayna instinctively said, "Ew," her nose wrinkling in disgust before her eyes flew wide with panic and darted toward Mackenzie's stern face. "Mackenzie, Shayna, give us the room, please," Larissa said, her voice calm but leaving no room for argument as she gestured toward the hall.

They filed into the hall, the door clicking shut behind them, and Shayna immediately blurted, “I’m sorry for saying ‘ew’ in there.” Mackenzie just laughed, a low, soft sound, and pulled her closer by the belt loop. “You can still be human,” she murmured, her thumb stroking Shayna’s hip, “and you were actually really good in there—keep this up all day, and I’ll give you an amazing night later.”

The door opened a moment later, and Larissa gestured them back in. Megan’s face was still flushed as she stared at the floor and muttered, “I was nervous about Shayna being near and that caused me to poop a little bit.”

Larissa looked from Megan’s ashamed face to Shayna’s rigid posture and said, “That’s the amount of fear you put in people when you act like a bully.” Shayna didn’t speak, the truth of it lodging like a stone in her throat, and Mackenzie patted her firmly on the back before adding, “Hopefully that’ll change soon.”

They finished straightening the final section of Megan’s hair in a heavy silence, the sleek result a stark contrast to the morning’s tangled insults. As they prepared to step out, Shayna paused in the doorway, her voice barely above a rough whisper, and told Megan, “I’m sorry I’ve been so awful to you.”

Later that afternoon, Mackenzie found Megan nestled in a faded armchair in the book den, a paperback forgotten in her lap. “Get used to the helpful hair tutorials,” Mackenzie said, perching on the chair’s arm, “because you should expect to see a lot more of that from Shayna in the future.”

Megan looked up, her fingers tracing the smooth lines of her newly straightened hair. “What did you even do to get Shayna to change like that?” she whispered, her voice full of wondering disbelief.

Mackenzie just laughed, a low, secretive sound that held the memory of a stolen vibrator and a shattered queen, and said, “Don’t you worry about it.”

Their conversation shattered as Kara slammed into the book den, her face pale. "Shayna's lost it—she's beating Sarah in the dining area right now!" she gasped, and Mackenzie was already sprinting after her, the echo of their footsteps frantic down the hall.

They could hear the ruckus before they saw it: a clatter and shrieks echoing from the dining area. Abby was holding Sarah by her hair, wrenching her head back, as Shayna stood screaming, "You stupid, clumsy bitch!" her shirt and the floor splattered with pulpy orange juice.

Her shirt and the floor were splattered with pulpy orange juice. Mackenzie shoved past Kara, her voice cutting through the chaos. "Shayna, what the hell is going on?" she demanded, stepping between the two women.

Shayna’s furious snarl faltered, her eyes darting from Sarah’s terrified face to Mackenzie’s commanding gaze, the war between her public rage and private submission locking the words in her throat.

But before she could choke out a single syllable, the dining room door swung open and Larissa filled the frame, her green eyes instantly scanning and assessing the entire scene.

“Abby, let go of Sarah right now,” Larissa commanded, her voice low and slicing through the chaos like a blade. She then pointed a steady finger at the space beside her and ordered, “You and Shayna, step aside.”

Larissa stepped forward, her and Mackenzie asking Sarah if she was alright. She says she is.

Larissa turned her cool gaze on Sarah, who was still trembling by the juice-splattered table, and asked, “What happened here, Sarah?” Sarah wiped her eyes with the back of her hand, her voice small and shaky as she answered, “I tripped and spilled my juice, and some of it got on Shayna.” She took a ragged breath, adding, “Shayna lost her temper, and Abby soon joined in.”

“Go sit down, Sarah,” Larissa said, her voice softening as she guided the shaking girl toward an empty bench. Mackenzie immediately followed, wrapping a protective arm around Sarah’s shoulders and whispering, “Breathe, you did nothing wrong,” just as Larissa turned, her expression hardening into fury, and stormed toward Shayna and Abby.

Larissa stopped inches from them, her voice a controlled, seething whisper. “What is wrong with you two?” She glanced at the drying orange stain on Shayna’s shirt, then back at her face. “Shayna, you had such a good morning helping Megan, and then you do this.”

Both girls stared at the floor, their silence complete and damning.

Larissa studied their bowed heads, the furious trembling in Shayna’s thin shoulders, and sighed. “Decades of therapy, all the gentle guidance in the world,” she said, her voice dropping to a murmur meant only for herself, “and honestly, embarrassment seems to be the only thing that ever gets through.”

A slow, evil grin spread across her face, her green eyes glinting with terrible inspiration.

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