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Generate gay sex novel, mind control theme. It's a normal world but Damain ,normal college guys 175 cm 4 inches soft and 8 inches hard, who's awaken his power to mind control and mind reading. and his roommate, Lewis, would be his first target. Now there's a rule for lewis 1. Lewis must always naked in room. 2. Lewis always tell Damain truth becuase he's closest lewis's friend.

Chapter 10: Chapter 10

The scream died, echoing into a choked, wet gasp. Damian’s three fingers were buried to the knuckle, a brutal fist of intrusion that held Mike rigid, every muscle in his body locked in a spasm of overwhelming sensation. His world had narrowed to the fiery ring of his asshole and the unbearable pressure deep in his gut.

Then, suddenly, the pressure was gone.

Damian withdrew his fingers all at once, a slick, obscene pop echoing in the silent gym.

Mike wasn’t prepared. The abrupt emptiness was a shock almost greater than the penetration. His body, strung tight as a bow, convulsed. A violent, whole-body shudder wracked him from his shoulders to his calves. His hips pistoned forward into nothing, his untouched cock jerking wildly. A thick, pearly rope of cum erupted from the slit, arcing through the air before splattering onto the polished floor between his feet. Then another, weaker pulse. And another. He came untouched, his orgasm ripped from him by the sheer neurological overload of sudden release, his eyes wide with stunned humiliation.

He stood there, shuddering, as the last drops dripped from his still-hard cock onto the small puddle below. The air reeked of sex and sweat.

Damian looked at the spill on the floor, then up at Mike’s shattered face. A slow, cold smirk spread across his lips. He held up his glistening fingers, examining them.

“Look at that,” Damian said, his voice a quiet, mocking sing-song. “Three fingers. That’s all it took. You just painted the floor, Mike. Like a bitch in heat.” He wiped his fingers casually on Mike’s trembling thigh. “If my fingers can’t make you sure what you are…” He turned his head, his gaze slicing over to Lewis, who stood watching, a vacant statue. “…then maybe your captain can help make it crystal clear.”

Damian’s hands went to the drawstring of his own gym shorts. He untied them, pushed them down along with his boxers, and stepped out. His cock, thick and already fully erect, sprang free. Eight inches of flushed, heavy flesh, curving slightly upward, the head dark and broad. He didn’t stroke it. He simply let it hang there, a blatant, living command.

He walked to a clearer space on the gym floor, away from the equipment, and laid down on his back on the cold tile. The fluorescence gleamed on his skin. He looked at Lewis.

“Lewis. Come here. Ride it,” Damian said, his tone flat, instructional. “Show your vice-captain what a bitch is. Show him what happens when you stop fighting it.”

Lewis flinched. A spark of raw, human terror flashed in his deadened eyes. This was a line that hadn’t been crossed. He’d been used in every other way, but this… this was final. The physical reality of it, the mechanics, crashed through the fog of his compliance.

“D-Damian,” Lewis stammered, his voice small, breaking. He took a half-step back. “Please. Is… is that necessary? I don’t… I haven’t…”

“You haven’t taken a cock before?” Damian finished for him, his head tilting. He sounded almost conversational. “I know. That’s the point.” He gestured lazily with one hand towards Mike, who was still standing in his own mess, trembling, and then towards Carver and Eli, who were frozen spectators. “You’re their captain. You’re the team bitch. Being fucked is in the job description. And what better time to lose your virginity,” he continued, the cruelty in his voice so casual it was chilling, “than in front of your whole team? While we’re making your vice-captain into another one? It’s efficient.”

The logic was a cold, surgical knife. It severed Lewis’s last trembling thread of resistance. To refuse was to deny his own defined purpose, to rebel against the identity Damian had crafted for him. It would make everything that came before—the sucking, the fingering, the humiliation—pointless. He was the captain. He led by example.

A low, broken sound escaped Lewis’s lips. He looked at Mike, who couldn’t meet his eyes. He looked at Carver and Eli, their faces pale, their own cocks soft now in the face of this new threshold. There was no solidarity there, only the silence of co-conspirators and captives.

He took a step forward. Then another. His movements were robotic. He knelt on the floor, his knees on either side of Damian’s hips. Damian’s cock stood upright between them, a monstrous, living thing. Lewis stared at it, the veins, the size, the sheer physical impossibility of it.

“Use the lube,” Damian instructed, his voice devoid of any warmth. “You know how. Get yourself ready for it, captain.”

Lewis’s hands shook as he picked up the discarded bottle. He squeezed a slick, cold pool into his palm. The smell of artificial strawberries filled the air, absurd and cloying. He reached behind himself, his face a mask of concentrated dread. He pushed two fingers inside himself, the passage loosened from earlier violation but still tight, still foreign. He worked them, his breath coming in short, sharp gasps, preparing a space that felt like it could never accommodate what was waiting.

“Enough,” Damian said, after a minute. “Stop stalling. Do it.”

Lewis withdrew his fingers. He placed his hands on Damian’s chest for balance. The muscle under his palms was unyielding. He positioned himself, the head of Damian’s cock nudging against his hole. He could feel the heat of it, the blunt, demanding pressure.

He looked down at Damian’s face. There was no encouragement there. No passion. Only expectation, and a flicker of cold, scientific interest.

Lewis took a breath, held it, and sank down.

The initial breach was a white-hot tear. A sharp, incisive pain that made Lewis cry out, a raw, jagged sound. He stopped immediately, only the broad head lodged inside, stretching him wider than any fingers ever had. His body screamed to recoil, to flee.

“Keep going,” Damian said, his voice unchanged. His hands came up to grip Lewis’s hips, not to guide, but to hold him in place. “All of it. Take it like you take orders. Like you were born to.”

Tears streamed down Lewis’s face, silent and relentless. He forced his muscles to relax, an act of will that felt like tearing his own soul in two. He pushed down again, an inch, then another. The burn was catastrophic, a filling, rending stretch that seemed to split him open. He could feel every inch as it penetrated him, a slow, brutal invasion. His own cock, soft and ignored, hung limp between his legs.

He was halfway down when a choked sob broke from him. He paused, trembling violently, impaled, trying to breathe through the fire in his guts.

Damian’s fingers dug into his hips. “Now,” he commanded.

With a final, shattered gasp, Lewis dropped his weight the rest of the way, sheathing Damian completely inside him. He felt the crush of Damian’s pelvic bones against his ass. He was full, impossibly, unbearably full, stuffed to the point of bursting. He sat there, motionless, feeling the thick pulse of the cock inside him, the dull, throbbing ache that was already mutating, the sharp pain blurring into a deep, relentless pressure.

“Good,” Damian breathed, a hint of dark satisfaction in his voice. “Look at you. You’re finally home.” He shifted his hips minutely, and the movement made Lewis whimper. “Now move, captain. Ride it. Show Mike how a real bitch earns his place.”

Lewis trembled, impaled, every nerve shrieking. Then he moved.

He raised himself up, a slow, agonizing drag that made his breath hitch. The thick length of Damian’s cock pulled almost entirely out of him, the stretched ring of his ass clinging desperately to the head. For a second, there was only cool air on his ravaged entrance. Then he dropped back down, a sharp, punishing fall that forced a punched-out groan from his lungs. The brutal fullness returned in a dizzying rush.

He did it again.

And again.

A rhythm built, clumsy and desperate. The initial tearing agony was subsiding, burned away by friction and a deepening, invasive heat. Lewis was lost in the mechanics of it, his world narrowing to the slide of flesh inside him. His own cock, forgotten and soft, began to stir. With each downward plunge, it began to bounce, slapping against his lower abdomen with a soft, wet sound.

His face was turned toward his teammates. He saw them, but he didn’t. His vision was glazed, his mouth slack. A low, continuous moan spilled from his lips, unrelated to any conscious thought. It was a raw vocalization of sensation—of the shame, yes, a scalding humiliation at showing them this, at revealing how completely his virginity was being taken on a dirty gym floor. But underneath that, powering the moan, was something worse: a shocking, undeniable crest of pleasure. His body was accepting the violation, rewriting it as need.

“Oh fuck,” he moaned, the words slurred and thick. “It’s… it’s so deep.” His hips began to work on their own, seeking a better angle, driving Damian deeper. The slap of their skin grew louder, wetter. “Feel it… feel it all…”

Carver and Eli watched, paralyzed. Their earlier shock had hardened into a mute, horrified fascination. This was their captain, the guy who led drills, who gave pep talks. Now he was bouncing on a cock, mewling, his own dick swinging and slapping his abs with every descent. The sound of that slap, thwack-thwack-thwack, was hypnotic and vulgar.

Mike’s gaze was a laser. He saw his friend, his captain, his rival. He saw the intense focus on Lewis’s flushed face, the way his eyes were squeezed shut in concentration on the feeling. He watched the obscene, rhythmic gaping of Lewis’s hole as it consumed Damian’s cock, the slick shine of lube and sweat. Each time Lewis dropped down, Mike’s own body clenched in a sympathetic spasm. His cock, which had softened after its humiliating eruption, was now stiffening again, achingly full, a fresh trickle of pre-cum beading at the tip.

The sound was the worst part. The wet, rhythmic shluck of penetration, punctuated by that skin-on-skin slap from Lewis's own body. It hammered at Mike’s mental defenses, each repetition a nail in the coffin of his old self.

Damian watched Mike’s face. He saw the agony, the horror, the relentless, unwanted arousal. He smirked, his own breathing controlled even as Lewis rode him with increasing ferocity.

“Look at him, Mike,” Damian grunted, his voice rough but clear. “Look at your captain. He finally understands his purpose. He’s not fighting it anymore. He’s chasing it.” He thrust upwards sharply, burying himself to the hilt and making Lewis shriek. “He’s a natural-born cocksleeve. And he’s loving every fucking inch of it.”

Mike’s cock twitched, leaking another silvery strand. He couldn’t look away.

“You’re leaking again,” Damian sneered, his hips meeting Lewis’s frantic downstroke. “Dripping like a broken faucet just from watching. You want to be where he is so bad it’s pathetic.”

“I don’t—” Mike choked out, but the denial was hollow, swallowed by the wet sounds of Lewis being fucked.

“You do,” Damian cut him off, his voice shifting to a tone of casual, devastating command. “Eli. Lie down over there. On your back. Now.”

Eli jolted as if electrocuted. His eyes, wide with terror, flicked to Mike, then to Damian. “W-what?”

“You heard me. On the floor. Now.”

The compulsion wasn’t a suggestion. It was a cold wave that washed over Eli, extinguishing his will. His movements were jerky as he shuffled to a clear space on the cold tile and laid down. His slender frame looked frail against the gray floor. His cock, a slender seven inches, lay soft against his thigh, a testament to his fear.

Damian’s eyes never left Mike’s. “Get over there, Mike. Straddle him.”

The world tipped. “No.”

“Yes,” Damian said, the word absolute. “You want to prove you’re not a bitch? Prove you’re not like Lewis? Then do it. Ride Eli’s cock. Face Lewis. Let him watch you the way you’ve been watching him. Show us all how a real man takes it.”

The logic was a snare, tight and inescapable. Refusal was an admission of everything Damian said. Acceptance was a different kind of ruin. Mike’s breath came in ragged sobs. He looked at Lewis, who was now pounding himself down on Damian with frantic, sloppy abandon, lost in a world of shameful pleasure. He looked at Eli, terrified and exposed on the floor.

He took a step. Then another. The distance to where Eli lay felt like a mile. He stood over the younger player, staring down at his softness.

“Get it hard,” Damian ordered, his own rhythm with Lewis never breaking. “Use your mouth. Use your hands. I don’t care. Get your teammate’s cock hard so you can sit on it. Prove you’re committed.”

A final, silent fracture echoed in Mike’s mind. He knelt between Eli’s legs, his own erection bobbing painfully. He hesitated for one last second, his hands hovering over Eli’s hips.

“Do it, Mike,” Damian growled, his voice a lash. “Or I’ll have Lewis come over and show you how it’s done. Again.”

Mike’s hand closed around Eli’s soft cock. It was warm, unfamiliar. He began to stroke it, mechanically, his head bowed so he wouldn’t have to see the terror in Eli’s eyes. His other hand cupped Eli’s balls, kneading roughly. He leaned down, his breath hot on Eli’s skin. This was the final descent. There was no bottom in sight.

His mouth tasted of salt and fear, a metallic tang on his tongue as he took Eli into his mouth. The flesh was soft, yielding against his lips, then began to swell with a betraying pulse as blood rushed in. Mike worked with a grim, mechanical focus, his mind a white noise of static while his body performed. He heard Eli’s sharp, terrified inhale, felt the tentative twitch against his palate.

In just a few minutes, Eli was fully hard, seven inches of rigid, vulnerable flesh standing up from his body. A low, pathetic whimper escaped Eli’s throat. Mike pulled off, a string of saliva connecting his lips to the glistening tip.

“Look at that,” Damian called from across the room, his voice ragged as Lewis continued to ride him with slapping force. “He’s a natural cock-sucker too. You got a real talent for this, Mike. Maybe that’s your real position. Team cocksucker. First-string fucktoy.”

Mike didn’t answer. He shuffled on his knees, positioning his body over Eli. He looked at Lewis, who met his gaze through a haze of pleasure-pain, his movements on Damian’s cock a lewd, bouncing rhythm. This was the trial. The absolute order. To prove he wasn’t a bitch, he had to become one. His own cock leaked a steady stream onto Eli’s stomach, a hot, shameful drizzle.

He reached behind himself, guiding Eli’s cock. The head nudged against his hole, which was still loose and slick from Damian’s brutal stretching. It felt huge, impossible. He hovered there, trembling, the precipice yawning beneath him. Once he crossed this, there was no comeback. No story to tell himself in the locker room tomorrow.

“Do it, vice-captain,” Damian grunted, punctuating his words with a sharp upward thrust that made Lewis yelp. “Ride it. Face your captain. Let him see you break.”

Mike pushed down.

The initial penetration was a shocking, full burn. He’d taken fingers, but this was different—a solid, living thickness that stretched him with a relentless, blunt pressure. He gasped, sinking an inch, then two, his body shaking with the effort of accepting it. He was halfway down, impaled, his breath coming in short, panicked hitches.

Eli lay beneath him, eyes wide, his hands clenched at his sides.

Then, without warning, Eli’s hands snapped up to Mike’s hips. His fingers, bony and strong, dug into the meat of Mike’s ass. Eli’s face contorted, not with pleasure, but with a frantic, desperate need to make this real, to be the aggressor for one second instead of the victim. He yanked down with all his strength.

Mike’s world split open.

He was pulled down the remaining length in one vicious, searing drop. Eli’s cock buried itself to the hilt inside him, a sudden and total invasion that ripped a guttural scream from Mike’s lungs. His body seized, every muscle locking around the intrusive thickness. The air left him in a violent whoosh.

Eli didn’t lie still. A switch had flipped. He began to buck upward, shallow, frantic thrusts that jolted Mike’s body. “Fuck,” Eli hissed, his voice unfamiliar, raw. “Oh fuck, you’re so tight.”

The feeling was catastrophic. It wasn’t the controlled, degrading pace Damian had set with Lewis. This was animal, a frantic pounding that robbed Mike of all rhythm or thought. Each upward drive scraped that terrifying, electric spot deep inside him, sending convulsions of sensation through his groin. His own cock, trapped between their sweating bodies, leaked furiously, smearing wetness across both their stomachs.

“Stop,” Mike begged, the word a broken sob. He tried to lift himself, to gain some control, some space to breathe. “Wait, I need—I need a break.”

Eli’s eyes were glazed, far away. He didn’t stop. He gripped Mike’s hips harder, his fingers leaving bruising impressions, and increased his pace. His hips pistoned upward, driving his cock in a punishing, ragged rhythm. The sound was wet and brutal, a filthy squelch of overused lube and straining flesh.

“Can’t,” Eli grunted, his voice hollow. “Can’t stop. Gotta… gotta…”

Mike screamed. It was a raw, continuous sound of overwhelming sensation, a feedback loop of pain and a pleasure so deep it felt like his spine was melting. His vision sparkled with black dots. The pressure in his core, the brutal fullness, the friction—it coalesced into a tidal wave his nervous system could not contain.

He felt a warm, sudden flood burst from him, separate from the stream of pre-cum.

A hot gush of urine sprayed from his cock, soaking his own stomach and Eli’s, pooling between their bodies. The humiliation was instant and absolute, a scalding wash that followed the physical release. He was pissing on himself, on his teammate, while being fucked raw in a public gym. His scream choked into a wet, hiccupping sob.

He went limp, his body held up only by Eli’s relentless, driving hands. The urine spread, warm and reeking, a final branding. Across the room, Lewis’s rhythm faltered, his eyes fixed on the golden stream, his own movements growing erratic as he watched Mike’s ultimate surrender.

Damian’s laugh was a low, satisfied sound in the heavy air. “There it is. The proof. Look at him, Lewis. Your vice-captain just pissed himself like a scared puppy getting fucked. That’s not a straight man. That’s our new bitch.”

Mike heard the words through a fog of utter ruin. His body still shuddered around Eli’s pumping cock, his own shame a hotter flood than the urine cooling on his skin. The line was gone. He was on the other side, and there was no way back.

He was on the other side, and there was no way back. The warm piss cooled swiftly on his skin, a clammy, stinging testament. Eli finally stilled beneath him, his own frantic energy spent, his cock going soft inside Mike’s used hole with a wet, shriveling sensation. The only sound was Mike’s ragged, shattered breathing.

A low whistle cut the air.

“Fucking hell, Mike.”

It was Carver. He had moved closer, his arms crossed over his chest, his gaze a mixture of disgust and a dark, gleaming amusement. He stared at the puddle of urine smeared across both their torsos.

“Look at that,” Carver said, shaking his head slowly. His voice wasn’t loud, but it carried in the hollow room. “You actually pissed yourself. You just got dicked down and pissed all over your fucking self.”

Eli, seeming to realize where he was, what he was inside, scrambled out from under Mike with a grunt of revulsion. His soft cock slipped free with a slick, dismissive sound. Mike collapsed sideways onto the cold, wet tile, curling in on himself.

“Lewis never did that,” Carver continued, his tone conversational, almost analytical. He nodded toward where Lewis still mindlessly rocked on Damian’s cock, his movements now slow and exhausted, a puppet with tangled strings. “He took it. He sucked a whole fucking team. He got railed raw at the championship. But he never lost control of his bladder like a fucking infant.”

Mike squeezed his eyes shut. The words were ice picks chipping away at the ruin of his pride. Last hour. Just last hour, he’d been straight. He’d mocked Lewis, called him the team bitch, reveled in his own superiority from the sidelines.

Now he had Eli’s taste in his mouth. He could feel the ghost of Eli’s thickness aching inside him. The smell of his own urine filled his nostrils.

What was he now?

The question echoed in the hollowed-out cavern of his mind. Not a man. Not even a rival. He was a puddle of needs and shame, a thing that leaked and took and broke.

“He’s not another club bitch, Eli,” Carver mused, his shadow falling over Mike’s fetal form. “I think he’s something else. Something lower. A bitch pisses herself when she’s scared. What does that make you, Mike? You piss yourself when you get fucked? Is that your thing?”

Mike couldn’t speak. A tremble wracked his body, starting deep in his gut where he’d been filled.

“Looks like he needs a minute to think about it,” Eli muttered, wiping his own stomach with a grimace, his voice shaky but trying to align with Carver’s cruelty to distance himself from what he’d just done.

“A minute?” Carver snorted. He uncrossed his arms. “Nah. He doesn’t get a minute. The game doesn’t stop.”

Carver walked to the weight bench, picked up his own discarded shorts, and pulled out a wallet. He came back, something small and foil-wrapped in his hand. He tore it open with his teeth, his eyes locked on Mike. He rolled the condom down over his own erection, a six-inch, girthy thickness that looked brutal in the stark light. The latex shone.

“You’re still hard, Mike,” Carver observed, his voice dropping to a flat, cold register. “See? Your body knows what it is. It’s just your brain that’s lagging. We gotta sync that up.”

Before Mike could process the words, Carver was kneeling by his head. A hand, rough and unyielding, fisted in Mike’s sweaty hair and yanked his head up from the tile. Mike cried out, his neck straining.

“Open,” Carver commanded.

Mike’s jaw was clenched tight, a final, feeble lock on his dignity.

Carver slapped him, hard, across the face. The crack was shocking. Mike’s eyes watered. His jaw went slack for a split second.

It was enough.

Carver shoved his condom-covered cock past Mike’s lips, hitting the back of his throat with a blunt, ruthless thrust. Mike gagged violently, his body convulsing, tears springing to his eyes. The taste of latex and precum flooded his mouth.

“Suck it,” Carver said, his voice a low growl. He didn’t move. He just held himself there, deep, making Mike choke on the inert intrusion. “You know how. You just gave Eli a fucking expert-level blowjob. Show me.”

Across the room, Damian watched, a silent monarch observing the natural order asserting itself. He gave a slight, almost imperceptible push—not a command, just a nudge to dissolve resistance, to make the path of least humiliation seem like the only path forward.

Mike’s throat worked. A defeated, hollow sound vibrated around the cock in his mouth. Then his tongue moved. He swirled it around the head, his lips closing, forming a tight seal. He began to suck, a weak, tremulous pull.

“Pathetic,” Carver muttered, looking down at him. He began to move his hips, feeding his cock deeper with short, brutal jabs that made Mike’s eyes roll back. “But you’re learning. Now, don’t you stop riding Eli’s dick just ‘cause he came. Get back on it. You’re not done.”

The order was impossible, insane. Eli was feet away, soft, disgusted. But the compulsion in the air, the sheer weight of expectation, was a physical force. Mike, with Carver’s cock pumping in and out of his mouth, crawled on his hands and knees. The taste of latex and salt was suffocating. Drool and pre-cum dripped from his chin, mixing with the drying urine on the floor.

He reached Eli, who stared at him with wide, horrified eyes. Mike nudged at Eli’s softness with his face, a wordless, desperate plea.

“Fucking hell,” Eli whispered, but his own body was not his own. Under the collective gaze, under Damian’s silent pressure, he began to harden again. It was a slow, reluctant rise, but it was enough.

Mike, impaled on Carver’s cock in his mouth, lifted himself. He guided Eli’s renewed hardness to his own ruined entrance, still gaping and slick. He sank down onto it, a slow, agonizing descent that forced a muffled scream around the flesh filling his throat. He was full at both ends, stuffed, a living conduit for their use.

Carver picked up his pace, fucking Mike’s face with steady, measured strokes. “That’s it,” he grunted, his hands back in Mike’s hair, controlling the rhythm. “Suck my dick like a good bitch. Ride his like a good bitch. This is what you are now. You’re not even the team bitch. You’re the fucking urinal that gets fucked after.”

Mike’s world dissolved into a symphony of violation. The stretch below, the choke above. The slap of skin, the gagging sounds, the squelch of his own overused hole. His mind broke completely, shattering into a million glittering shards of pure, animal sensation. There was no Mike anymore. There was only the cock in his mouth and the cock in his ass and the glorious, humiliating truth that he was made for this.

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