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Submission to Xorgon

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Xorgon a merciless forceful cynical sadistic and extremely strict dom with no empathy alien punished Anya petite human female 25 with a round voluptuous ass for behaviour correction. Start here. No need for unnecessary details. Focus more on the punishment She is to address him as master Xorgon and thank him for the punishments. She must say " THANK YOU MASTER XORGON FOR THE CORRECTION" frequently. he rubs his claws on her 3d marks making her squeal before saying "GRATITUDE" as a reminder. Anya is bound naked on a special bed in Xorgons lab with her round voluptuous ass and anus facing up. He put a lubed 2 inches in diameter alien anal Dilator that starts tapered and suddenly has 3 bulbous shaped up her ass as a punishment. He pushed is slowly and twisted it to make her feel the stretch and burn. He left the dilator in and Proceeds to spank her round untouched ass 50 times using a very fine alien cane (3mm wide) that would would form pink glowing bioluminescent stinging 3d marks. He covers her entire round asscheeks( No where else) with 50 symmetrically glowing 3d alien stripes. The marks should glow in the slightly dim lit lab. After the spanking, he took an alien feather device and rubbed her ass cheeks for a solid 30 minutes as part of her behaviour correction. She must say "THANK YOU MASTER XORGON FOR THE CORRECTION" frequently for that or he'll increase the time. It made her feel sensitive, raw and sore. End it with :Finally he pulled (and twisted it a few times for punishment purposes) out the dilator sadistically and slowly for her to feel it all. She was a sore Crying mess after that

Chapter 1: The Lab of Gratitude and Pain

The air tasted metallic. Cold. Sterile. The ever-present hum of machinery deep within the ship’s guts vibrated through the soles of Xorgon’s boots as he approached the central table. It wasn't just a slab of metal; it was a focal point, covered in a thin, iridescent material that seemed to drink the lab's dim light, casting shifting, phantom reflections on the surrounding walls. The dominant scent was ozone, sharp and clean, undercut by something else… the faint, acrid tang of fear-sweat.

Anya lay spreadeagled on that unforgiving surface. Stark naked. Vulnerable. Metal restraints, cold and unyielding, encircled her wrists and ankles, securing her to pre-set anchor points. Her pale skin looked almost luminous against the dark, shimmering material. She trembled, the shivers running in visible waves across her body. Her breathing hitched in short, panicked gasps that echoed slightly in the cavernous silence of the lab. Her dark hair was plastered to her temples and neck, damp with sweat and tears.

Her eyes, wide and terrified, tracked Xorgon’s approach. He moved with predatory silence, his massive frame cutting through the gloom. Alien – utterly alien. His skin was a deep, mottled grey, ridged in places like worn stone. His hands, resting loosely at his sides, ended in thick, chitinous claws that gleamed dully under the low ceiling lights. His face was angular, severe, dominated by deep-set eyes that glowed with a cold, yellow light. No warmth. No pity. Just detached observation.

He stopped beside the table, his shadow engulfing her. His gaze, impersonal as a microscope lens, swept over her exposed form, lingering dispassionately on the curve of her back, the swell of her hips, the round, soft flesh of her buttocks – the designated target area. Anya flinched as if physically struck by that gaze, a low whimper escaping her lips.

"Silence," Xorgon commanded. His voice was a low rumble, devoid of inflection, yet it carried an undeniable authority that vibrated in Anya’s bones. "Displays of weakness indicate a lack of appreciation for correction. Unbecoming."

He picked up a device from a tray nearby. It was sleek, alien, shaped like a flattened cylinder with a wide aperture. He activated it with a muted chime. It began to glow with a soft, internal bioluminescence, pulsing faintly. He traced its edge with one clawed fingertip, the gesture chillingly casual.

"You failed to meet the designated performance parameters during zero-gravity conditioning," he stated flatly. Not an accusation. A simple, irrefutable fact. "Your focus wavered. Your execution was sloppy. Sub-optimal." He paused, letting the weight of his disappointment settle over her like a shroud. "This necessitates re-calibration. Pain is the most efficient instructor for recalcitrant biological units."

He moved the device slowly towards her exposed backside. The air crackled faintly around it. Anya stiffened, every muscle locking tight, her breath catching in a strangled sob. She squeezed her eyes shut, bracing.

The device made contact.

It wasn't impact. It wasn't heat. It was pure, focused energy – a searing, white-hot lance that burrowed deep into her nerve endings. Anya’s body arched violently against the restraints, a raw, choked scream tearing from her throat, echoing sharply off the sterile walls. The pain was immediate, blinding, overwhelming. It felt like her skin was simultaneously being flayed and branded.

Xorgon didn’t flinch. His expression remained impassive, clinically observing her reaction. He held the device steady for precisely three seconds before lifting it. The searing agony receded slightly, leaving behind a throbbing, deep burn that radiated outwards. A glowing, intricate pattern – like phosphorescent circuitry – bloomed across the skin where the device had touched, pulsing with a faint internal light.

"Contain the noise," Xorgon instructed, his voice cutting through her gasping sobs. "Disruption is inefficient."

Anya bit down hard on her lower lip, tasting blood. Her vision swam. The restraints dug into her wrists as she fought to swallow the screams clawing at her throat. Tears streamed freely down her face now, hot and silent.

Xorgon lowered the device again, slightly lower this time. Another precise placement.

Sssss-zzzt!

Another agonizing jolt ripped through her. Her body convulsed. A guttural cry escaped despite her efforts, muffled against the table. Another intricate, glowing mark etched itself onto her flesh, overlapping the first, the light casting shifting patterns on the iridescent surface beneath her. The pain compounded, a symphony of fire conducted by his clawed hand. Her ass felt raw, hypersensitive, every nerve ending screaming.

He lifted the device. The humming intensified slightly. "Poor impulse control," he observed dispassionately. "Your emotional volatility compromises functionality." He adjusted a setting on the device; a deeper, more resonant thrum emanated from it. "We will reinforce the necessity of control."

He pressed it down again. Harder. Longer.

Anya writhed, her hips twisting futilely, seeking escape from the impossible agony. Her knuckles were white where they gripped the restraints. Spots danced before her eyes. The world narrowed to the cold metal under her cheek, the ozone smell, the relentless, shattering pain, and the terrifying, impassive presence beside her.

Five seconds. He withdrew. The new mark pulsed a deeper crimson.

She lay panting, shuddering, slick with sweat, the glowing patterns on her skin a grotesque map of her 'correction'. Every breath sent fresh waves of pain radiating from the seared flesh. The raw, stinging sensation was immense, a constant, overwhelming throb.

Xorgon deactivated the device. The bioluminescent glow faded, leaving only the angry, glowing marks on Anya's skin. He placed the instrument back on the tray with meticulous care, the sound echoing in the sudden, heavy silence broken only by Anya’s ragged breathing and the lab’s persistent hum.

He turned back to her, looming. His yellow eyes fixed on hers, pinning her as effectively as the restraints. "The correction protocol is complete. For this cycle." He paused, the unspoken 'for now' hanging heavy in the air. "State your acknowledgment. Demonstrate your understanding of the lesson imparted."

Anya flinched. Her throat felt raw, scraped from suppressed screams. Shame warred with the overwhelming physical agony. She knew the script. Knew the cost of deviation. It was beaten into her, literally and figuratively. The words were ash in her mouth.

She swallowed hard, forcing air through her tight throat. Her voice was a fragile, broken whisper, barely audible over the hum. "...Thank you, Master Xorgon..."

Louder. He required loud. He required obvious submission.

She closed her eyes, drawing a shuddering breath that sent fresh spikes of pain through her lower body. She forced the words out, louder, clearer, each syllable an effort that scraped against her raw nerves. "Thank you, Master Xorgon, for the correction."

"Louder," Xorgon commanded, his voice devoid of any satisfaction, merely demanding compliance. "Your gratitude sounds insufficient. Weak. Does the lesson require reinforcement?"

Panic shot through her, sharper than the device. "No! Please!" The plea burst out, uncontrolled. She instantly regretted it, seeing his eyes narrow almost imperceptibly. She sucked in another breath, focusing past the throbbing agony, past the humiliation. She projected her voice, forcing strength she didn't feel into the required phrase. "THANK YOU, MASTER XORGON, FOR THE CORRECTION!"

The words echoed, uncomfortably loud in the sterile space, a stark counterpoint to her trembling nakedness and the glowing marks on her skin.

Xorgon observed her for a long moment. The yellow eyes scanned her face, her body, the evidence of his discipline. There was no approval in his gaze. Only assessment. She met the requirement. Barely. Satisfactory. For now.

"Acceptable." The single word was a dismissal. "Your physiological readings indicate heightened stress markers. Rest is prescribed. You will report to rehydration and nutrient replenishment. Then, isolation for recovery and contemplation. Reflect on the necessity of obedience, Anya. Reflect on the consequences of failure." He turned away, his heavy tread heading towards a bank of consoles at the far end of the lab, already shifting his focus to the next task. "The next conditioning session commences in precisely fourteen planetary hours. Ensure readiness."

Anya lay utterly still, her cheek pressed against the cold, shimmering surface. The pain was a living thing, radiating from her punished flesh, a constant, brutal reminder. Her mind felt hollow, scraped raw. The words Thank you Master Xorgon for the correction echoed silently in her skull, a bitter mantra. Fourteen hours. The glowing marks pulsed faintly on her skin, alien symbols of ownership and control, burning their lesson deep into muscle and bone. The dim lights of the lab offered no comfort, only the indifferent hum of machinery and the chilling certainty of the cycle repeating. Fourteen hours.

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