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The Bleeding Levels

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Zack is a 36-year-old former soldier, hardened by years of brutal military service. He's tall and lean, with scars marking his body, both physical and emotional. He carries himself with a quiet intensity and a serious personality. He played by the rules, almost religiously, until his refusal to kill an innocent, which shows a deep-seated moral compass that clashes with the harsh reality of Soul's Reach, making him conflicted and vulnerable despite his outward strength. His eyes, though weary, hold a longing for something more than the life he's been forced into. Brown hair/blue eyes. Clean-shaven. Zack is very reserved and isn't one to openly discuss anything sexual. Secretly, he longs for a connection with someone. He is kindhearted at his core. Lieutenant Zack Rallok fled the Ascendancy Army after refusing to execute a civilian family on Level 32, a poverty-stricken lower level in the brutalist megastructure ruled by the draconian Iron Ascendancy (just called the Ascendancy by most). Zack made a run for it after helping the family escape, but he was shot by another soldier. He makes his way downlevel, but he's dragged into a warehouse, stripped and attacked by a mob who hates the Ascendancy military, and they leave him for dead. After the mob departs, one man who was watching, who also depises the Ascendancy, aims a pistol at Zack, planning to finish him off. Zack tells the man he deserves it and to do it, but the man hesitates.

Chapter 5: Chapter 5

The dimshift arrived not with a change in light, but with a change in sound. The distant, constant hum of the upper-level ventilation cycled down into a lower register, a deep groan that echoed through the metal bones of Soul’s Reach. It was the city taking a strained breath. Their signal.

Malachi shook Zack awake. The fever reducers had done their work, banking the fire but not extinguishing it. Zack’s mind surfaced from a thick, gluey sleep. He was drenched in sweat, his clothes clinging to him, but the blinding, paralyzing heat was now a manageable simmer. The pain in his shoulder was a distant, pounding reminder.

“Up. Now.” Malachi’s voice was a whisper, but it carried the force of an order. He was already packing the last of their kit, his movements silent and precise in the near-dark. The sled sat by the container’s cracked opening, loaded.

Pushing himself up was an act of pure will. Every muscle protested, stiff and aching. The world tilted, then settled. Zack focused on breathing, on the simple mechanics of getting his boots on. Malachi watched, saying nothing, offering no help. He didn’t need to. His silence was a challenge Zack was determined to meet.

“Ready,” Zack breathed, standing. A wave of dizziness washed over him. He locked his knees.

Malachi gave him a long look, then nodded once. “Stay close. Move when I move. Stop when I stop. If I freeze, you become a statue. Your life depends on it, which means my life depends on it. Understood?”

“Understood.”

They left the burrow. The corridor outside was a tunnel of deeper black, the only light a sickly phosphorescent strip far above, flickering in its death throes. The air here was colder, smelling of stale rust and ozone. Malachi took point, a shadow flitting between thicker pools of darkness. Zack followed, his footsteps too loud in his own ears, his breathing a raspy telegraph of his condition.

They moved for what felt like hours, descending through skeletal stairwells and across empty exchange bays where gigantic, dormant machinery loomed like fossilized beasts. Malachi’s route was erratic, avoiding main thoroughfares, doubling back twice to circumvent sounds neither of them could identify—a distant clang, a skittering of rubble. The silence between them was total, a necessary void filled only with the pounding of blood in Zack’s ears.

Eventually, the character of the decay changed. The smooth, manufactured walls gave way to patched and welded metal, then to rough-hewn rockcrete. They were entering a older layer, a grafted-on section of the city. The air grew thicker, tasting of metal shavings and ammonia.

Malachi halted, pressing a flat hand back towards Zack. They were at the mouth of a wide, low-ceilinged tunnel. At its far end, maybe a hundred meters away, a faint amber glimmer defined an archway. Between here and there, the tunnel was a graveyard of industrial scrap—overturned cargo loaders, shattered conduit casings, piles of unidentifiable rusted parts.

“The Rusted Gate,” Malachi whispered, his voice barely stirring the air. “Old Foundry access. The clinic is on the other side. Patrols don’t come here often. The structural integrity’s shot. But it’s not empty.”

Zack squinted. The amber light wasn’t steady. It danced, casting long, leaping shadows that seemed to move independently of its source. Torches. “Squatters?”

“Worse. Gatekeepers. A clan. They claim the passage. Toll is whatever you have. Usually everything.” Malachi’s eyes were narrowed, calculating. “We can’t fight. You can’t run. We go through quiet as smoke, or we don’t go at all.”

“Another way?”

“Twelve klicks, through two active patrol zones. You won’t make it.”

The choice was no choice. Zack felt the fever stir, a snake uncoiling in his gut. “Guide me.”

Malachi’s plan was simple madness. They would use the terrain, the massive wrecks of machinery, as cover. They would crawl, they would slither, they would freeze for minutes at a time. It was a sniper’s move, translated for two men trying to sneak past a sentry post.

They entered the tunnel. The ground was a crunchy mixture of grit and metal shards. Every shift of Zack’s weight sounded like a cannon shot in the cavernous space. He focused on Malachi’s boots ahead of him, matching their pace, their pauses.

They were halfway, tucked behind the blasted-out cab of a haulage unit, when the voices started. Not from the Gate ahead, but from a side passage to their left they hadn’t seen. Grunting, laughing. The crude sounds echoed.

Malachi dropped flat. Zack followed, his chest pressing into the cold, oily grime. He held his breath.

Two figures lumbered into the main tunnel, silhouetted against the amber glow. They were large, swaddled in layers of padded gear, crude rebreather masks hanging at their chests. One carried a length of pipe, the other a heavy wrench. They stopped, not twenty meters from Zack and Malachi’s hiding spot.

“Heard something,” the one with the pipe grumbled, his voice distorted.

“Rats. Always rats.”

“Big rat.”

They began to amble closer, their boots scuffing the debris. Zack’s fingers curled around a chunk of loose rockcrete. It was a useless gesture. His vision pulsed with his heartbeat. The fever whispered to him, a seductive, reckless voice: Just stand up. It would be faster.

Malachi was a stone. Utterly still.

The man with the wrench kicked a piece of sheet metal. It clattered violently, the sound bouncing off the walls. Both men jumped, then laughed, a nervous, barking sound. “See? Rats.”

They lost interest, turning and heading back towards the Gate, their conversation fading into a low mutter about distillation coils and ethanol yield.

Malachi didn’t move for a full minute after the sounds disappeared. Then, slowly, he looked back at Zack. In the faint reflected light, Zack saw him raise a single finger, then point forward. One stretch left.

The final crossing was a hell of exposure. A clear span of fifteen meters between the husk of a generator and a pile of crumpled plating. No shadows deep enough to hide them. They’d have to cross it in plain view of the torchlit arch.

“On my mark,” Malachi breathed. “Walk. Don’t hurry. If they see movement, hurrying looks like guilt. Just walk.”

Zack nodded, his mouth dust-dry.

“Mark.”

They stepped out together. It felt like walking onto a stage. The amber light washed over them, revealing the grim details of their clothes, the pallor of Zack’s face. He kept his eyes forward, on the darkness beyond the Gate. He regulated his breathing, forced his gait into something that approximated normal. Every nerve screamed. He could feel eyes on him, imagined the shout, the whistle, the pipe whirling through the air towards his skull.

They passed under the arch. The Rusted Gate itself was a pair of colossal, pressure-sealed doors, now permanently welded open, their surfaces a tapestry of corrosion and crude graffiti. The torchlight came from braziers mounted on either side, tended by a single, hunched figure wrapped in a stained thermal blanket. The man watched them, his eyes glittering from deep within his hood. He said nothing. His hand, resting on a knee, twitched slightly.

Malachi didn’t look at him. He just kept walking, pace steady. Zack matched him, step for step.

They moved beyond the circle of light, into the welcoming, solid darkness of a descending maintenance ramp on the other side. Only when the ramp curved, cutting off the view of the Gate entirely, did Malachi slump against the wall, letting out a long, controlled exhale.

Zack leaned beside him, the tremors he’d been suppressing now racking his body. The fever surged back, claiming the energy the adrenaline had borrowed.

“You walked,” Malachi said, simply.

“You led.”

A ghost of something—not a smile, but an acknowledgment—passed over Malachi’s face. He pushed off the wall. “Clinic’s close. It’s in a hab-block sub-level. The woman who runs it… she’s not Ascendancy. She trades in favors, not credits.”

“What kind of favors?”

“The kind we might be able to provide.” Malachi started down the ramp. “First, we need to get you there before you fall down. Then we negotiate.”

The new passageways were narrower, tighter, the walls lined with dripping pipes that condensed the city’s sweat. The smell changed again: less metal, more fungus, and underneath it, a faint, antiseptic tang. The promise of a place that fought decay.

Zack followed, each step a negotiation. The image of the Gatekeeper’s twitching hand lingered behind his eyes. They had passed through. They were still alive. The clinic, and whatever deal it required, was now the only future he could see. He focused on the back of Malachi’s jacket, a dark smudge in the gloom, and kept moving.

He focused on the back of Malachi’s jacket, a dark smudge in the gloom, and kept moving. The world had narrowed to a tunnel of pain and the next shuffling step. The antiseptic smell grew stronger, weaving with the scent of damp wool and unwashed bodies. They entered a wide, low corridor lined with makeshift doors—sheets of rusted metal, patched tarps, sections of old piping.

A cracked lumen-panel buzzed overhead, flickering like a dying insect. It illuminated crude symbols painted on the doors: a red cross faded to pink, a serpent coiled around a bolt, a three-eyed fish. Malachi didn’t hesitate. He stopped before a door marked only by a small, carefully drawn circle containing an equal-armed cross.It was cleaner than the others.

“This is it,” Malachi muttered, his hand resting on the sled’s handle.“Let me do the talking. She doesn’t like soldiers.”

“I’m not—” Zack began, then coughed, the spasm tearing at his shoulder. He leaned against the cold wall, his breath fogging in the chill air.A thought, sluggish and practical, broke through the fever.They had things now. Things from the cache.“Malachi.”

“What?”

“The woman. She trades in favors.” Zack wiped his mouth with the back of a shaky hand. “We don’t have any favors to give.Not yet.” He gestured weakly toward the sled. Its contents were covered, a lumpy treasure under a grey tarp.“But we have goods. Maybe we could trade something from the sled cache.Something we can spare.Antibiotics? Batteries?”

Malachi studied him, his sharp eyes assessing more than just the idea. He was weighing the change in Zack, this shift from pure survival to negotiation.“We can spare very little,” he said finally, his voice low. “And anything we show marks us as a target. But you’re not wrong.” He pulled a corner of the tarp back, his fingers brushing past the carbine, delving into a side pouch. He withdrew a single, vacuum-sealed packet of broad-spectrum antibiotics.“This.One course. It’s valuable, but redundant if she can treat you properly. A show of good faith.”

“A bribe.”

“A token,” Malachi corrected, tucking the packet into his inner pocket. “Now, stand up straight. Try not to look like you’re dying until we’re inside.”

Malachi knocked on the door—a specific rhythm: two short, a pause, three long. Silence followed, then the sound of a heavy bolt being drawn back. The door opened just a crack, a slice of warmer, cleaner-smelling air washing over them. A single, fierce brown eye peered out, set in a face of leathery wrinkles.

“Voss.” The voice was a dry rasp.“You’re late. And you brought garbage.”

“It’s not garbage, Elara.It’s a patient. And payment.” Malachi’s tone was uncharacteristically careful, almost respectful.

The eye flicked to Zack, taking in his pallor, the sweat, the way he held himself.“Sepsis.From a blade. Idiot.” The door swung open fully, revealing a spare, scrupulously clean room illuminated by a pair of bright, battery-powered lanterns.Shelves held neatly labeled jars and boxes. A clean sheet draped a surgical table in the center. The woman, Elara, was small and stooped, her hair a wiry grey cap.Her hands, however, were steady and young, clean and capable.

“Get him on the table.Boots off first. I won’t have your filth on my sheets.” She turned her back to them, washing her hands at a basin with meticulous care. “The payment?”

Malachi placed the sealed antibiotic packet on a steel tray beside her. She glanced at it, gave a slight, approving nod.“A start.Now the rest.The story. Who is he, and why do you care, Voss? You’ve brought me offal from the barracks before, just for the supplies in their pockets.” She turned, fixing Malachi with her gaze. “This is different. I can smell it on you both.”

Zack lay back on the table, the clean fabric startlingly soft against his neck.The lights were painfully bright.He closed his eyes, listening.

Malachi was quiet for a long moment. “He’s different,” he said, the words seeming to cost him.“Former Ascendancy.A deserter. He left a family alive on Level 32.”

Elara’s brisk movements paused. She looked at Zack anew, not as a patient, but as a phenomenon.“A conscience. How inconvenient for him.” She picked up a pair of shears and began cutting away Zack’s bandage. “And for you. You, who hates them more than anyone.”

“He’s useful.”

“I’m sure,” Elara said, her tone implying depths of unsaid meaning. The last of the bandage fell away.She leaned close, examining the inflamed wound. Her breath was warm and smelled of strong tea.“This needs cleaning.Debridement. It will hurt.”

Zack nodded, bracing himself. He opened his eyes and found Malachi standing rigidly by the door, his arms crossed, a sentinel against the world outside.Their eyes met. In that shared look was the Rusted Gate, the shared blanket, the noodles, the cache. It was all the answer Elara needed.

“Hold him down, Voss,” Elara commanded, selecting a cruel-looking, slender tool from a tray. “The useful garbage is going to scream.”

Malachi’s hands settled on Zack’s good shoulder and his hip, pinning him to the table with an unyielding pressure. The grip was impersonal, a lockdown. “Don’t move,” he muttered, his voice tight.

Elara didn’t hesitate. The slender probe entered the inflamed tissue at the wound’s edge. A fresh, brilliant agony exploded through Zack’s torso, white-hot and precise. He arched off the table, a choked gasp ripping from his throat. Malachi’s weight bore down, immovable.

“Septic fluid,” Elara said, her voice detached, clinical. She worked the instrument, her other hand applying pressure to the surrounding flesh. A thick, foul-smelling yellow pus welled up and dripped onto her tray. The smell of corrupted meat filled the clean room. Zack turned his head, bile rising in his throat.

He bit down on a cry, grinding his teeth until his jaw ached. Stars swam at the edges of his vision. He focused on a crack in the ceiling plaster, a tiny, branching river on a white plain. Malachi’s breathing was steady above him, a constant rhythm against the storm of pain.

“Almost got it,” Elara murmured, more to herself than to them. She swapped the probe for a small, sharp scalpel. “Need to remove the necrotic tissue. This will burn.”

The blade scraped. It was a new kind of pain, a deep, grating wrongness that vibrated through the bone. A low, animal sound escaped Zack’s lips. His fingers clawed at the sheet beneath him. He thought of the cold warehouse floor, the mob’s boots, the simplicity of giving up. This was harder. This was choosing the pain.

Malachi’s hands never wavered. “Look at me, soldier,” he commanded, his voice rough.

Zack’s swimming eyes found Malachi’s. The man’s face was a mask of grim endurance, but his eyes held Zack’s gaze, an anchor in the torment. There was no pity there. Just a fierce, shared reality. Zack held onto it.

“There.” Elara dropped the scalpel into a metal basin with a clatter. She irrigated the now-open wound with a cold, clear fluid that stung like a hundred needles. Zack flinched violently, but the worst was over. The burning pressure in his shoulder was already ebbing, leaving a raw, clean ache in its place.

She packed the wound with a honey-colored gel and dressed it with swift efficiency. “The antibiotics you brought will do the rest, if the infection hasn’t spread to his blood.” She peeled off her gloves, turning to wash her hands again.“He needs rest. Real rest. Not hiding in a rust bucket.”

“We can’t stay here,” Malachi said, releasing his hold on Zack. Zack sank back into the table, utterly spent, his body trembling with post-adrenaline shakes.

“Obviously.” Elara dried her hands. “Your payment covers the procedure. Not bed and board.” She eyed the sled by the door. “You have more where that came from.”

Malachi’s posture shifted, a subtle closing off. “We have what we need.”

“I doubt that.” She walked over to the sled and lifted a corner of the tarp. Her eyes scanned the contents—the carbine, the sealed packets, the tools. They lingered on the thick, folded field blankets. “You’re heading for the fringe. The deep fringe.” It wasn’t a question.

Zack pushed himself up on his elbows, the movement sending a dull throb through his shoulder. “Why do you say that?”

“No one with sense carries that much thermal gear unless they’re going where the central heat fails.” She let the tarp fall. “There’s a place. An old surveyor’s hab. It’s on the edge of the mapped sectors. Structure’s sound, mostly. Isolated.”

Malachi was instantly wary. “Why offer that?”

“Because isolation is a commodity. And I collect commodities.” She met his gaze. “I want one of the heaters. The compact one from the cache.”

Zack remembered it. A small, cylindrical unit, incredibly efficient. Losing it would hurt. He looked at Malachi, letting him make the call. This was his world.

Malachi’s jaw worked. He finally gave a sharp nod. “Directions.”

Elara provided them, a rapid-fire list of turns, landmarks, and hazards. “The door code is the same as my knock pattern. You’ll know why when you see it.” She held out her hand. Malachi pulled the small cylinder heater from the sled and placed it in her palm. She weighed it, a faint smile touching her lips. “A fair trade.Now get out. My next patient doesn’t like strangers.”

They moved back into the dank corridor, the door bolting firmly behind them. The silence felt heavier. Zack tested his shoulder. The pain was manageable now, a deep ache smothered by the clean dressing and a fresh dose of anti-inflammatories Elara had forced into him. The fever still simmered, but the edge was gone.

“Can you walk the distance?” Malachi asked, not looking at him as he rearranged the sled’s load.

“I can walk.” Zack’s voice was stronger. “You think it’s a trap?”

“Everything’s a trap until proven otherwise.” Malachi started walking, pulling the sled. “But she had no reason to lie. The heater was worth more to us than the location was to her. That’s usually how favors work down here. Uneven exchanges.”

They navigated the clinic sector’s labyrinth, following Elara’s directions downward. The architecture grew older, the walls less finished, the air noticeably cooler. The constant hum of Soul’s Reach grew distant, replaced by the drip of water and the creak of settling metal. They passed through a pressurized bulkhead that had frozen partway open, a permanent yawn into the darkness.

After a long, silent descent down a spiraling gantry, they saw it. A single, reinforced door set into a rockface, numbered with faded orange paint. A keypad glowed faintly beside it. Malachi punched in the rhythm: two short, three long.

The door hissed, releasing a puff of stale, dry air. It swung inward silently on well-maintained hinges.

Malachi drew his pistol, motioning Zack to stay back. He entered, low and fast. Zack waited, listening to the silence. Then Malachi’s voice echoed back, flat. “Clear.”

Zack stepped inside. The space was a single circular room, maybe ten meters across. It was spare, dusty, but intact. A dormant terminal desk sat in the center. Shelves lined the curved walls, empty. Across from the door, a huge, triangular viewport looked out into absolute black.

Malachi walked to the viewport and placed a hand on the thick, cold glass. “We’re on the perimeter,” he said. “Nothing out there. Just void and old scaffold.”

Zack let his pack slide to the floor. The silence was complete, a physical weight after the constant noise of the inner levels. It was the first true quiet he’d heard since his court-martial. He walked to the viewport and stood beside Malachi, staring into the abyss.

His own reflection, gaunt and shadowed, looked back at him. Beside it, Malachi’s sharp profile was etched against the darkness. They were alive. They were hidden.

“What now?” Zack asked, the question hanging in the dead air.

Malachi didn’t answer immediately. He just stared into the black, his eyes seeing something Zack couldn’t. “Now,” he said finally, his voice barely a whisper, “we see if the quiet drives us mad before the Ascendancy finds us.” He turned from the viewport, his boots scraping on the dusty floor. “Get some real sleep. I’ll take first watch.”

Zack didn’t argue. He took one of the field blankets from the sled, the coarse material familiar now, and spread it out in a corner away from the chill of the viewport. He lay down, the solid floor a strange comfort. He listened to Malachi’s quiet movements, the click of the pistol being checked, the sigh of fabric as the man settled against the doorframe.

The deep, enveloping silence of the fringe pressed in on him. It was louder than any machine. In that silence, his own thoughts were deafening. The family on Level 32. The three men in the duct. The weight of Malachi’s hands holding him down on Elara’s table. The ache in his shoulder was a clean pain, a reminder of a wound tended to, not just endured.

He closed his eyes. For the first time in a long time, there was no immediate threat, no next desperate move to plan. There was only the quiet, the dark, and the faint, steady sound of another man breathing in the room with him. It was a fragile, unprecedented peace. It felt more dangerous than anything that had come before.

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