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The Blonde's Submission

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A gorgeous blonde woman, Ashley, is the sexual deviant of two handsome male best friends Carter and Dominic. The best friends enjoy kinky sex, they love to degrade Ashley and she loves to seek their approval. Carter and Dominic love pushing Ashley to her limits. They even trained her to get aroused by eating their asses, their favorite party trick.

Chapter 1: Skyline Obedience

The city stretched out below Dominic’s balcony like a spilled jewel box, neon signs bleeding into the twilight. Cool night air, carrying the distant scent of rain and exhaust, brushed against skin. Inside the glass enclosure, the world was quiet, just the low hum of the metropolis and the soft chime of ice in a silver bucket.

Dominic lounged in a low-slung modern chair, completely naked, one arm draped over the side. His free hand moved lazily over his own length, a casual display of ownership. He watched her over the rim of his champagne flute.

Ashley crawled toward him on all fours, the plush rug soft under her palms and knees. The dusky light painted her blonde hair in streaks of copper and gold, her body a pale, toned curve in the half-dark. Her green eyes were fixed on him, pupils wide and hungry. Her lips were already slightly parted, breathing quickened.

He took a slow sip, placed the flute on the low black table beside the bottle of Dom Pérignon, the silk ropes, the blindfold. His eyes drifted to the single, glistening anal plug resting on a folded linen napkin. Then back to her.

He patted his thigh. “Come here. Show me how much you missed this.”

A shiver of pure anticipation rolled through her. She closed the final distance, nuzzling against his inner thigh first, a soft, kittenish press of her cheek. She inhaled the clean, masculine scent of him, mixed with the fading tang of his cologne. Her mouth found the base of his shaft, a hot, open-mouthed kiss against his skin before she began to trail lower, her movements deliberate, worshipping.

“Good girl,” Dominic murmured, his voice a low rumble. He leaned back, his hand coming to rest on the back of her head, not guiding, just claiming. “You look perfect like this.”

She moaned in agreement, the sound vibrating against him. Her own need was a sharp, twisting ache between her legs, a throbbing echo to every lick and kiss she bestowed. She reached his ass, her tongue tracing the cleft with a slow, lavish dedication. She poured every ounce of craving into the act, grinding her own hips helplessly against the rug beneath her, seeking friction, finding only a teasing hint of relief.

“Dominic,” she gasped, pulling away just enough to speak, her forehead damp against his skin. “Please. Can I touch myself? Just for a second. I’m so close just from this.”

He chuckled, the sound rich and amused. His fingers twisted gently in her hair. “You know the rules, Ash. Carter doesn’t like that. You come when we say, how we say. Not a second before.” He gave a slight tug, not painful, just a firm reminder. “This isn’t about you getting off. It’s about you being good for us. Now get back to work. Show me that hunger.”

A whimper escaped her, part frustration, part dizzying arousal at the denial. The rule, Carter’s rule, was a wall she threw herself against repeatedly, and the impact always thrilled her. She obeyed, her tongue delving deeper, her moans growing louder, more theatrical. She was putting on a show, and she knew he loved it. Her body moved in a continuous, sinuous roll against the floor, a desperate pantomime of sex.

“That’s it,” Dominic encouraged, his own breath hitching. “Make it messy. Make it sound like you’d die for it.”

The balcony door slid open with a whisper.

Neither of them stopped. Ashley’s rhythm didn’t falter. Dominic’s gaze just shifted from the top of her head to the new figure leaning against the doorframe.

Carter stood there, still in his dark suit trousers and a white dress shirt unbuttoned at the collar, sleeves rolled up. He held two fresh champagne flutes. His expression was unreadable, a cool appraisal taking in the scene: Dominic sprawled in sublime comfort, Ashley lost in her abject service, the city glittering beyond the glass.

“Started without me,” Carter said. It wasn’t a question.

“Just warming her up,” Dominic replied, his voice tight with a grin. “She was begging to touch herself. Almost broke your number one rule.”

Carter’s eyes, dark and focused, locked onto Ashley. She felt the weight of his stare like a physical touch and increased the fervor of her motions, a silent plea for approval.

“Greedy thing,” Carter said softly. He walked over, placed the flutes on the table. His fingers trailed along the curve of her spine as he passed, making her arch violently into the touch. He picked up the anal plug, turning it in the light so it sparkled. “Looks like she needs a reminder about patience. About who owns her pleasure.”

He crouched down beside Dominic’s chair, his face now level with Ashley’s. She pulled back, her lips glistening, her chest heaving. Her eyes darted between the two men—Dominic’s charming, provoking smile and Carter’s intense, controlled gaze.

“You want to come, Ashley?” Carter asked, his voice dangerously soft.

“Yes,” she breathed. “Please.”

“Earn it.” He held the plug up. “Dominic hasn’t finished his champagne. You’re going to take this, right here, and then you’re going to sit on the rail and watch the city while we drink. You’re not going to move. You’re not going to rub against the iron. You’re just going to feel it. And you’re going to wait for our permission.”

Dominic’s laugh was a low, delighted sound. “Perfect. I love the view from that rail.”

Ashley’s heart hammered against her ribs. The rail was a narrow, cold bar of wrought iron, the balcony’s only barrier before a forty-story drop. The idea of sitting there, exposed, full, teetering on the edge while they casually chatted sent a jolt of terror and electric desire straight to her core. It was a validation more profound than any orgasm they’d ever given her.

She looked at the plug, then at Carter’s waiting eyes, and nodded, a desperate, eager little dip of her chin.

“Good,” Carter said. He didn’t smile. He just reached for the bottle of champagne, the pop of the cork a sharp, festive gunshot in the tense, quiet air. “Then let’s begin.”

The pop of the cork echoed in the quiet space, a sharp period at the end of his sentence. Carter poured the fizzing champagne into the two flutes, the liquid pale gold in the city’s reflected light. He handed one to Dominic, who took it with a grateful nod, his other hand still idly stroking himself.

“Up,” Carter said to Ashley, his tone leaving no room for hesitation.

Her limbs felt loose, uncoordinated with want, but she pushed herself up from the rug, the cool air hitting her damp skin. Carter’s hand closed around her upper arm, not rough but unquestionably firm, and guided her back through the open sliding door into the penthouse’s main living area. The shift from the open night to the climate-controlled interior was sudden. The lights were low here too, just a few ambient strips casting long shadows across the minimalist furniture and dark hardwood floors.

Dominic followed, stretching like a cat, his glass in one hand. He watched her with that amused, hungry smile as Carter led her to a long, deep sofa upholstered in charcoal grey linen.

“Here,” Carter said, releasing her arm to sit down. He patted his thigh. “Over you go.”

Ashley’s breath hitched. This was the prelude, the deliberate, slow-burning setup she both craved and feared. She leaned forward, draping herself over his lap, her cheek pressed against the cool, soft fabric of his trousers. The position was profoundly submissive, her ass raised high and exposed. From the corner of her eye, she saw Dominic set his glass down on a side table and approach, unbuckling his belt.

“Look at that perfect little ass,” Dominic murmured. “Just begging for it.”

Carter’s hand rested on the small of her back, a warm, heavy weight. She heard the click of a cap, then felt the cool, slick drizzle of lube between her cheeks. She jerked at the sensation, a gasp escaping her.

“Hold still,” Carter commanded, his voice calm. His fingers, slick and insistent, began to circle her tightest hole, applying pressure without yet entering. The shock of it, the clinical intimacy of the preparation, made her toes curl. It was a violation that felt like a gift, a degradation that sang to the deepest, most hidden part of her need.

Dominic moved in front of her, his cock level with her face. He framed her jaw with his hands, his thumbs stroking her cheekbones. “Open up, beautiful. You’re going to take me deep while he gets you ready. Show us you can do both.”

Ashley opened her mouth obediently, and he guided himself inside, not with a rough thrust, but with a slow, relentless push that filled her mouth, stretching her lips wide. She gagged instinctively, her throat clenching, but she forced herself to relax, to breathe through her nose. The salty, musky taste of him flooded her senses.

“Good girl, take it all,” Dominic encouraged, his voice tight. He pushed deeper, the head of his cock nudging the back of her throat. She focused on the rhythm, on the obscene, wet sounds, on the feeling of being utterly used at both ends.

Behind her, Carter’s finger breached her, a slow, burning intrusion. She cried out around Dominic’s shaft, the sound muffled, vibrating. Carter worked his finger in and out, the lube making it easy, a brutal, stretching rhythm. Then a second finger joined the first, and the burn intensified, a bright, shocking pain that bled instantly into a pleasure so profound it made her eyes water. She moaned, the vibration earning a low groan from Dominic, who began to fuck her mouth in earnest, his hips pumping steadily.

“So fucking tight,” Carter muttered, his voice a gravelly appreciation of a technical challenge. He scissored his fingers, stretching her wider, preparing the clenched muscle for what was to come. “You want this plug, Ashley? You want to sit on it out there for everyone to see?”

She couldn’t speak, couldn’t nod. All she could do was hum her assent around the cock filling her throat, and grind her hips helplessly against the air, her own arousal a slick, aching mess between her legs.

“I think that’s a yes,” Dominic chuckled, his grip tightening in her hair. “Deep now, take it.”

He pushed forward until his pelvis met her face, his cock buried entirely in her throat. She fought her reflex, tears streaming down her temples as Carter, sensing her peak of vulnerability, withdrew his fingers.

The absence was a shock. Then she felt the cold, blunt silicone nudge against her. The plug, wider than his fingers, a tangible promise of fullness.

“Now,” Carter said, and pressed it forward.

It was a slow, inexorable invasion. Her body fought it, clenching wildly around the intruding shape as Dominic held her head still, his cock lodged deep in her gullet. The stretch was immense, a blazing ring of fire that forced a ragged, choked sound from her. Carter worked it patiently, twisting it slightly, pushing past the resistance until, with a final, wet pop, the widest part slid home.

A shudder wracked her entire body. She was full, impossibly full, stretched and stuffed. Dominic pulled his cock from her mouth with a wet slurp, allowing her to drag in a ragged, sobbing breath. Saliva slicked her chin.

Carter ran a hand over the base of the plug, now seated snugly between her cheeks. “Perfect,” he said, almost to himself. “Look at that. All filled up and ready for your perch.”

He guided her off his lap. Her legs were unsteady, the plug an impossible, foreign weight inside her. Every slight movement sent a fresh jolt through her system. Carter took her hand, his touch almost clinical now, and led her back through the sliding door onto the balcony. The night air was a shock, raising goosebumps on her skin.

Dominic followed, carrying his champagne. He leaned against the glass wall, watching.

“Up you go,” Carter said, his voice devoid of its earlier command, now just a flat instruction.

The balcony rail was a cold, black iron bar, about four inches wide. Beyond it, the city fell away in a dizzying grid of light and shadow. Ashley placed her hands on the cool, smooth surface, her heart hammering against her ribs. Carter’s hands gripped her hips, lifting her with an easy strength until she was perched on the rail, her back to the void. The plug shifted inside her, settling deeper, and she gasped, her fingers turning white where they gripped the iron.

“Hands in your lap. Sit up straight. Look at the city,” Carter said, stepping back to appraise his handiwork. “Don’t move. Don’t try to get yourself off on the rail. Just feel it.”

He reached between her legs, his fingers finding a small, almost invisible button at the base of the plug. He clicked it once.

A low, deep hum originated inside her, a vibration that wasn’t gentle. It was a persistent, invasive thrum that resonated in her core, buzzing against her inner walls, teasing the raw, stretched nerve endings of her ass. It was maddening. It wasn’t enough to push her over, but it was more than enough to keep her teetering on a razor’s edge.

A broken sob escaped her lips.

“Fifteen minutes,” Dominic said, checking his watch. He raised his glass to her in a mocking toast. “Enjoy the view.”

They left her there.

The sliding door whispered shut, sealing her in the auditory vacuum of the night, with only the distant city hum and the insidious, intimate buzz between her legs for company. She trembled, the muscles in her thighs and abdomen burning with the effort of holding perfectly still. The vibration was constant, a cruel mockery of pleasure. Every nerve in her body was screaming, hyper-aware of the empty, aching throb of her cunt. It had been clenching around nothing, pulsing with a frantic, rhythmless beat for what felt like an eternity. She was dripping wet; she could feel the slickness cooling on her inner thighs.

Inside, through the glass, she could see them. Dominic had refilled their glasses. Carter was sitting in the chair she’d worshipped him in, one ankle resting on his knee. They were talking, laughing about something—some deal Carter was closing, a stupid thing Dominic’s dog did. Normal conversation. As if she wasn’t perched on the edge of the world, vibrating, on display for anyone in the adjacent towers who might glance over.

Her focus shattered. It narrowed to the buzz, to the relentless, unfulfilled ache in her pussy, to the terrifying, thrilling emptiness where she needed to be filled most. Tears of frustration welled in her eyes, blurring the neon lights. She wanted to rub her thighs together, to press her heel against her clit, to do anything to tip herself over that cliff. But Carter’s rule was absolute. Don’t move. So she sat, a statue of desperate need, her body a live wire of denied sensation.

When the door finally slid open again, she nearly wept with relief. The fifteen minutes had been a lifetime in hell.

They didn’t rush. Dominic finished his champagne, set the glass down, and strolled out. Carter followed, his hands in his pockets.

“Look at her,” Dominic said, his voice full of warm admiration. “Absolutely soaked. Look at that, Carter. She’s made a mess.”

Carter stepped closer, his eyes traveling over her trembling form. He didn’t touch her at first. He just looked. “Did you move?”

“N-no,” she choked out, her voice raw.

“Good.” Then his hand darted out, fingers curling around the base of the plug. He tugged it, just an inch. The sudden movement against her over-sensitized flesh pulled a sharp cry from her throat. He pushed it back in slowly, then pulled it again, a little harder this time, mimicking the shallow thrusts of fucking. “You like that? You like being fucked in the ass while you sit here and take it?”

She could only nod, her head falling forward.

While Carter toyed with the plug, Dominic moved in front of her. He pushed her thighs apart without ceremony, his eyes on her glistening, exposed cunt. “Christ, she’s fucking dripping,” he muttered. He didn’t enter her. Instead, he traced a single finger through her slick folds, from her opening up to her clit, a feather-light, torturous pass.

Ashley jerked, a full-body spasm. “Please…”

“Please what?” Dominic asked, circling her clit with a maddening, lazy precision.

“Please let me come. I can’t… I need…”

Carter tugged the plug again, a sharper pull. “You need what we decide you need.” He leaned in, his breath hot against her ear. “This is the point, Ashley. This feeling right here. This is what you’re really here for. Not the orgasm. The begging.”

Dominic’s finger dipped lower, sliding just inside her entrance, gathering wetness before retreating to paint slow, tight circles around her clit. The dual assault—the deep, violating vibration and pulse from the plug, and the exquisite, superficial torture Dominic was administering—drove her mind into a white-hot frenzy. Her hips bucked involuntarily, seeking more pressure.

“Ah-ah,” Carter chided, his free hand clamping down on her hip to pin her in place. “No moving.”

She was shaking now, her entire body vibrating with a tension that had nowhere to go. Tears streamed down her face freely, mixing with the sweat on her chest. “I’ll do anything,” she babbled, the words tumbling out in a desperate, shaky gasp. “Anything, just let me cum, please, I’m begging you, I can’t think, I can’t…”

Dominic increased the pressure on her clit, his touch becoming more direct, more rhythmic, but still maddeningly controlled, always stopping just short of the pace or pressure that would send her over. “Such a pretty fucking mess,” he mused, watching her face contort. “You’d come in about three seconds if we let you, wouldn’t you?”

Carter finally pulled the plug all the way out with a slow, wet drag that made her see stars. The sudden emptiness was almost as shocking as the fullness. But he didn’t stop. He held the buzzing toy in front of her blurred vision. “You want to come, Ashley?” he asked, his voice low and gravelly.

“Yes! God, yes!”

“Then earn it.” He dropped the plug onto the floor with a clatter and began to unbuckle his belt. “You’re going to take us both. And you’re not going to come until we say.”

The words hung in the cool air, a decree more than a promise. Ashley’s vision swam, the city lights below melting into streaks of gold and red. Her body was a live wire, every nerve screaming from the recent violation of the plug and the teasing denial. The idea of taking both of them, here on this precipice, sent a jolt of pure, animal terror through her that instantly twisted into dizzying need.

Carter’s trousers were already open, his cock hard and jutting. Dominic moved behind her, his hands warm on her shaking thighs.

“Gotta make room, sweetheart,” Dominic murmured, his voice laced with dark amusement. He positioned himself behind Carter, their coordination seamless from years of shared exploits. Carter’s grip on her hips was iron, holding her steady as Dominic guided himself, slick with her own wetness and more lube from the table, not to her empty, aching cunt, but to the newly vacated, loosened channel below it.

The blunt pressure was different this time—broader, more insistent. A broken sound, half-sob, half-moan, tore from her throat as Dominic pushed the head of his cock against her. Carter watched her face, his expression a mask of focused intensity.

“Now,” Carter said, and he thrust forward, filling her pussy in one smooth, brutal stroke.

The feeling was catastrophic. After being so achingly empty, the sudden, complete fullness was a shock that ripped a scream from her lungs. It was too much. It was everything. Her back arched violently, her nails scraping against the cold iron rail. Before she could even process the overwhelming sensation of Carter buried deep inside her, Dominic pushed forward too.

The stretch was beyond anything she’d ever known. A searing, burning fullness that consumed her entire lower body, a pressure so intense it bordered on pain. The two men filled her completely, a double invasion that left no part of her untouched or unclaimed. They began to move, not in sync at first, a disorienting, overwhelming rhythm of opposing forces. Carter pulled back as Dominic pushed in, creating a relentless, piston-like friction that shook her to her core.

“Oh fuck, she’s so tight like this,” Dominic grunted, his hands digging into the soft flesh of her ass.

Carter didn’t speak. His breaths were harsh gusts against her neck, his thrusts deep and punishing, aimed at a spot inside her that sparked white-hot lightning with every impact. The combined sensation short-circuited her brain. The careful control, the agonizing wait on the rail, the vibration, the teasing—it all coalesced into a tidal wave of raw sensation that built with terrifying speed in the base of her spine.

She tried to hold it back. She clenched her jaw, bit her lip until she tasted blood, focused on the sting of her grip on the rail. But her body, tuned to a fever pitch and subjected to this brutal, perfect stimulation, betrayed her. The orgasm tore through her without warning, a convulsive, wrenching wave that crashed over every nerve ending. Her vision whited out. A raw, guttural scream was ripped from her throat, muffled only by the vast city night. Her cunt fluttered wildly around Carter’s cock, her ass clenching rhythmically around Dominic’s.

For a second, there was only the silent, pulsing shock of her climax.

Then Carter stopped moving.

The absence of his rhythm was more jarring than the pleasure had been. Slowly, her vision cleared. Carter’s face was cold, a dark storm in his eyes. Dominic had stilled behind her, a low whistle escaping his lips.

“You stupid little slut,” Carter said, his voice dangerously quiet.

Before she could even form a thought, before the aftershocks had finished wracking her body, his hand came down on her ass in a sharp, loud crack. The pain was bright and shocking, a stark contrast to the pleasure. He didn’t stop. He spanked her again, and again, each blow landing on the same tender spot, his palm stinging the flushed skin. The slaps echoed against the glass balcony walls, a brutal percussion to her choked cries.

“You come when we say!” he snarled, delivering another searing smack. “Not a second before! Your pleasure is ours to give!” Her ass was on fire, the heat spreading through her with a shameful, secondary thrill that made her weep.

Dominic leaned forward, his mouth next to her ear. His cock was still buried deep in her ass, unmoving. “Bad girl,” he whispered, his tone singsong and cruel. “Look what you made him do.” He pulled out of her slowly, the drag a fresh torment. He rounded the rail, coming to stand in front of her, his dick glistening and hard. He gripped her hair, yanking her head forward. “Open up. You owe us a better show.”

Tears streamed down her face as she opened her mouth, her sobs making her gag as he fed his cock past her lips. He didn’t give her time to adjust. He started fucking her throat in deep, punishing strokes, his hips slamming against her face.

“That’s it,” he grunted, his fingers tightening in her hair. “Take it all. You want to be a greedy little bitch and come without permission? Then you can choke on it.” He pushed deeper, hitting the back of her throat, holding himself there as she gagged and sputtered, her eyes watering. He pulled back just enough for her to drag a wet, ragged breath before plunging back in. “Go on, Ashley,” he dared, his voice thick with a taunting thrill. “Bite down. See what happens.”

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