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The Captive's Submission To A Raging Dominatrix - Remix

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Lori decides to take her son-in-law prisoner when he comes over to fix the toilet in her master bathroom. She has hated him for twenty years giving her plenty of time to plan all the cruel things she wants to do to him from humiliation to physical domination. All she knows for sure is she will not show any mercy, and he will submit fully to her, or suffer her wrath.

Chapter 2: Building Tension

With a sly smile, she turns on her heels her big ass brushes against his face. David flinched his whole body struggling to maintain composure. He stands up to follow as Lori marches up the staircase, each click of her heels against the marble floor reverberating through the hallway. David tries not to look at her ass, but everything about her look drives him crazy, and the sound of her voice as she humiliates him pushes him even further his thoughts and, more importantly, his cock, raging a war within him. He feels disgusted by his attraction to the twisted, sadistic woman sauntering up the stairs, but part of him craves the humiliation, the degrading torment, he knows she'll unleash upon him. David follows Lori up the grand staircase, the master bathroom at the end of the long, dimly lit hall. Her hips sway with every step she takes, pulling David in with her captivating charisma. He can't help but stare at her taught, wrinkly ass as she climbs the stairs, her stiletto heels clicking rhythmically against the marble floor. Lori looks over her shoulder, shooting him a sly smile as she catches him staring, causing heat to surge through his cheeks. "You like what you see?" she asks, her voice dripping with sarcasm. He blushes furiously, curse words running through his mind as he struggles to find a response. She chuckles darkly, continuing her journey upstairs. The air hangs heavy as they enter the dimly lit master bedroom, every crass sensation tingling beneath his skin in the gloomy light. Lori waves him inside, the plush carpet silencing her footsteps as she moves toward the bathroom, her hips swaying even more tantalizingly. "This way, my dear son-in-law.

Let me show you the toilet from hell." Lori's voice drips with venom as she beckons David into the bathroom. The air is thick with tension, charged with a dangerous electricity that sets David's heart racing. He hesitates for a moment, his body trembling with anticipation and fear as he soaks in the opulence of Lori's master bathroom. Marble countertops and gold fixtures glint in the soft light, reflecting the sumptuous luxury that surrounds them. The room reeks of wealth, a stark contrast to David's modest lifestyle, but it also reeks of Lori's shit, and piss. The sight of the overflowing toilet, combined with the putrid smell, only heightens David's disgust and confusion. Something is blocking the toilet, and the blockage looked nasty. He can see the brown mess peeking out from the lid, opening the toilet lid he pauses in shock. "For fuck's sake mom, the entire bowl is full of shit, and almost no liquid. You backed the toilet up, and just continued to use it?" David asked incredulously, staring at the disgusting mess in front of him. The smell was making his stomach turn, but the sight of the blockage was what really caught his attention. There were chunks of food, feces, and other unidentifiable debris clogging up the bowl, and one really large log of her shit. "What the fuck were you thinking, Lori?" David asked, turning to face his mother-in-law with a mixture of disgust and anger. Lori merely shrugged, leaning against the bathroom doorway with a sly smile on her face. "I was thinking that this would be the perfect opportunity for you to prove your worth to me, my dear son-in-law. After all, if you can't even handle unclogging a simple toilet, how can I trust you to do anything else?" Her words were sharp as a whip, cracking through the air and stinging David's pride like a physical blow. David's eyes narrowed, his anger and disgust simmering just beneath the surface.

"Fine. Where are the tools to clean this out? I can't plunge it until I get all your waste out of the bowl." David said, trying to remain calm despite the disgust roiling in his stomach. Lori chuckled and stepped closer to him. "Well, you're just going to have to get your hands dirty then, aren't you? There is a large bowl under the sink for you to put my shit in David." Lori says as she pulls the bowl out and slides it to the side of the toilet. "Now you're just going to have to get in there and clean all of Mommy's shit out of the toilet bowl with your bare hands." Lori's eyes gleamed with sadistic pleasure as she watched David's face contort in disgust. She was enjoying every moment of humiliating him and making him submit to her twisted desires. David's throat went dry as he stared at the toilet in horror, the edges of his vision clouding as his anger and disgust came to a boil. The thought of touching Lori's filth with his bare hands nearly made him vomit. But a deeper, darker part of him was thrilled by the prospect of giving in to her demands. It was a challenge, a boundary to push, a line to cross that he knew would change everything once it was breached. He couldn't help but imagine her standing there in the master bathroom, watching him with those cold, calculating eyes as he dove into her filth. The image alone brought a surge of arousal so powerful that he could barely contain it as Lori pushed him to knees in front of the toilet.

David looked away from the toilet for a moment, cursing himself for being so turned on by Lori's sick request. He could feel her gaze burning into him, watching him struggle with his own desires. And with each passing moment, the pull grew stronger, threatening to pull him into a whirlpool of shame and ecstasy that he knew he would never escape. "Come on now, David, I don't have all day. I need this taken care of before I can continue to break you." Lori's voice held a note of amusement, like she was genuinely enjoying herself. "I'm waiting, David." she said, stressing each syllable of his name in a way that made him cringe. He couldn't believe he was about to do this. To give in to her demands and degrade himself in such a way. He had never felt so humiliated and excited at the same time. "D-d-do I have to, mom?" he stammered, his voice betraying the turmoil of emotions roiling inside him. "Yes, you do." Lori replied, her voice firm and unyielding. She crossed her arms and leaned against the sink; her eyes locked on David's trembling form. He could feel her gaze searing into him, willing him to submit to her demands, and as much as he hated to admit it, part of him wanted to, but he knew that once he crossed that line, there would be no going back. As hard as he willed himself to obey, he just could not make himself do it. Reaching in the toilet and picking out her huge load of shit just made him almost sick to his stomach. Knowing damn well Lori would likely physically do something to torment him or make him do it he still sat there refusing to obey.

He knew there was no way he was putting his hands in that disgusting toilet bowl but before he could come up with another alternative Lori grabbed a handful of his hair. She forced his face downwards towards the toilet bowl, a manic grin plastered across her face. The stench of shit hit him like a freight train, and he turned his head away, desperate to avoid the contents of the bowl but Lori only tightened her grip on his hair. "I said clean it out!" she barked, her voice echoing off the walls of the master bathroom. Before David could even process her words, Lori forced his face into the putrid depths of the toilet bowl. A flood of disgusting fluids filled his nostrils, the rank smell of her excrement burning his throat as he struggled to breathe. He could hear Lori's cackling laughter above him, the sound of her cruel delight fueling his anger and humiliation. "That's right, my dear son-in-law, I am going to teach you a lesson you'll never forget." Her words cut through the air like a knife, cold and unforgiving. David's vision blurred as he struggled to breathe, the disgusting mixture of shit and piss filling his mouth and nostrils. He gagged, trying to push himself away from the toilet, but Lori's grip on his hair was unyielding. "You will learn to obey me," she snarled, her voice trembling with rage.

With a swift, calculated motion, Lori shoved David's head back into the toilet, holding it there for several long seconds. His heart raced, panic flooding through his veins as he struggled to break free from her grasp. But Lori's grip was too strong, and David knew he was at her mercy. Just as suddenly as she had forced him down, Lori released her grip on David's hair, allowing him to fall backwards onto the cold, tiled floor. He gasped for air, sputtering and choking as the contents of the toilet bowl dribbled down his chin and onto his shirt. "You will clean it out with your hands, or I will make you eat every last bit of it!" Lori screamed, her voice reverberating off the walls of the bathroom like a gunshot. She stepped closer, her eyes blazing with a mixture of rage and excitement as she brandished a long, slender pair of tongs. "I mean it, David. If you don't clean that toilet right now, I will shove every single piece of that shit down your throat until you choke on it." David's heart raced as he stared up at his mother-in-law, the enormity of the situation finally sinking in.

He couldn't believe what she was asking of him, but he knew he had no choice. With trembling hands, he reached for the bowl, his fingers brushing against the warm, sticky mess that filled it. He retched, fighting back the urge to vomit as the smell of Lori's shit filled his nostrils. But he knew that if he didn't do as she asked, she would make good on her threat. And so, with a deep breath, he steeled himself and began to scoop the shit out of the bowl, each handful bringing him closer to the edge of his sanity. "Faster, David! I don't have all day!" Lori screamed at him, her voice laced with venom as she watched him work. "I want every last bit of it gone!" She stepped closer, the slender pair of tongs clenched tightly in her hand. "I want every last bit of it gone! And if you don't do it quickly enough, I swear to god, I will make you eat every last bit of it!" She threatened, brandishing the tongs in front of his face like a weapon. David's hands trembled as he scooped up another handful of shit, the disgusting texture making his skin crawl. The thought of eating what he was holding made his stomach turn, but he knew that Lori wouldn't hesitate to carry out her threat if he didn't comply. And so, with a sense of resignation, he continued to clean the toilet, his mind reeling from the degradation he was being subjected to.

Every now and then, Lori would yell threateningly, "Eat it like a dog, David!", causing him to shudder with revulsion and fear. He tried to block out the sounds of her voice and focus on the task at hand, but it was nearly impossible. His hands were trembling as he scooped up another handful of shit, the disgusting texture making his skin crawl. Finally, after what seemed like an eternity, David finished cleaning the toilet, his hands raw and trembling from the effort. He couldn't believe what he had just done, and the thought of it made his skin crawl. As David looked up at Lori from his knees, she kicked him in the ribs as hard as she could, yelling "You worthless fucking bitch!" as she smoked a cigarette. The pain shot through his body like a lightning bolt, stealing his breath away and causing his vision to blur. He doubled over, clutching his side as he struggled to catch his breath, his heart racing with fear and humiliation. Lori stood over him, her eyes blazing with rage as she took another drag of her cigarette. The cherry glowed bright red in the dim light of the bathroom, casting eerie shadows across her face. "You will learn to obey me, David," she growled, her voice trembling with fury. Lori reached down, grabbing his cheeks as she dug her nails into his face, and flicked her ash into his mouth. "I will break you, one way or another," she sneered, her eyes glinting with malice as she crushed the cigarette out against his cheek before she tossed it to the ground and ground it beneath her heel.

"You are my bitch now son!" Lori screamed spittle spraying across his face. "If you don't submit completely to me in the next ten seconds David I am telling you. I will use your worthless mouth for my toilet every time I go to the bathroom. I will use your mouth as my ashtray, your body as my punching bag. Worst part for you is that will be all day, every day for the rest of your pathetic existence." Lori's voice was filled with venom as she spoke, her eyes glittering with a cruel pleasure as she watched the fear and disgust written across David's face. In that moment, David knew that he had no choice. He had to submit to Lori's twisted desires, no matter how much it repulsed him. It was a matter of survival. He couldn't bear the thought of being subjected to this kind of humiliation and degradation every day for the rest of his life. Even if there was a dark monster inside him that actually enjoyed the abuse, she was inflicting upon him, he debated submitting willingly for a few brief moments, but his pride would not allow it. Lori knew this and hoped she would have to beat him into submission.

The prospect of breaking him down, piece by piece, and dominating every inch of his being was a heady aphrodisiac. As she taunted David, who was still kneeling on the floor, she could feel herself growing wetter by the second. Her thoughts ran wild, visualizing all the ways she could dominate him and make him submit to her will. Lori imagined how it would feel crushing him under her stiletto heels, how it would feel punching him in the face listening to his whimpers as her rings cut into his flesh. Lori stepped closer as she looked down at him and yelled as loud as she could in his face. "If you will not submit to me, then I will beat the fucking hit out of you like the worthless bitch you are! I will make you bleed! I will make you cry! I will make you beg me for mercy!"" Lori spat, her voice dripping with sadistic pleasure. David could feel himself shaking, the fear and adrenaline coursing through his veins like a drug. His mind raced, attempting to process the events of the past hour. The degradation, the humiliation, the sheer intensity of Lori's rage had left him reeling, unsure of which way was up or down. And yet, amidst the chaos of Lori's twisted desires, something primal and raw stirred within him. As he sat there confused by his feelings Lori grabbed his head as she slammed her knee into his face as hard as she could, knocking him to his back on the floor at her feet. The pain exploded in a burst of white-hot stars, stars that lingered in front of his eyes as he desperately tried to stay conscious.

But Lori showed no mercy. She hoisted her leg up, her stiletto heel gleaming wickedly in the dim light of the bathroom before she brought it crashing down into David's chest. The sound of his ribs cracking was like a gunshot, ringing out in the silence of the bathroom and echoing through David's skull. He gasped, the air rushing out of his lungs in a sharp, agonized cry, his body writhing beneath her as he clutched at his side. Lori looked down at him, her expression a twisted mix of pleasure and rage. She could feel herself growing wetter by the second, her pulse racing with excitement as she contemplated her next move. She could crush him now, finish him off and take her victory, but where was the fun in that? The thought of prolonging his torment, of drawing out the sweet agony of his submission was almost too delicious to resist. Lori had always been a cruel and twisted woman, but there was something about breaking David's will that brought out the worst in her. She reveled in his pain, his suffering, his utter degradation. And as she looked down at him, writhing in agony on the bathroom floor, she knew that she had him exactly where she wanted him as she took a drag off her cigarette and flicked the lit butt in his mouth.

"Suck on that you filthy maggot," she growled like a feral animal, her eyes gleaming with a dark hunger. David couldn't believe what was happening. He was trapped in this twisted, nightmarish scenario with no escape, forced to submit to this cruel, dominant woman who seemed hell-bent on destroying him, and yet he grew more and more aroused the cruller Lori got. He looked in his mother-in-law's eyes hopefully she could not see how turned on he had become, and honestly beginning to crave her abuse. A twisted part of his deep psyche wanting to submit to Lori as long as she never stopped treating him like this. Lori dropped down straddling his chest as she spit in his face as she balled her fists preparing to pound on his face until he submitted to her completely.

"Fucking submit to me you worthless worm! You have no idea what you're in for," she growled, her voice thick with lust. Reaching down, she grabbed his hair, yanking his head back so their eyes met. "Do you understand me, David?" she demanded, her eyes glittering with a primal hunger that sent shivers down his spine. She began pounding on his face, slapping, backhanding, and punching him over and over. Each vicious strike sent shockwaves of pain coursing through his body, but it also fueled an undeniable fire deep within him. He could feel his cock stiffening in his jeans as she abused him, each violent blow sending another shiver of arousal coursing through his veins. He knew it was wrong, twisted even, but he couldn't help himself. The brutal pain mingling with an unfamiliar pleasure, it was an intoxicating combination, and one that he found himself sinking deeper and deeper into with each passing second. His mind swam with a confusing array of emotions as he struggled to reconcile the fact that he was enjoying this, that he wanted more. And as much as he hated to admit it, he knew that he had no choice. Lori held all the cards, and he was powerless to resist her twisted desires. David broke and began to beg Lori to never stop treating him like this and he would submit to anything she demanded of him.

He was no longer fighting the darkness inside him, the one that craved Lori's brutal touch and reveled in the pain she inflicted. He could feel himself drowning in that darkness, sinking deeper and deeper into the abyss of desire that Lori had awakened within him. Lori sneered at him, her lips curling into a twisted grin as she leaned down, their faces mere inches apart. "You're damn right you will" she growled, her spit spraying onto his face as she spoke. She ground her hips down into his chest, rubbing her cunt against his shirt, leaving a wet patch as she gripped his hair tighter, pulling his head back further. Her fist connected with his jaw, snapping his head to the side as she grunted with pleasure. "You're going to be my fucktoy David, my plaything, my slave, my ashtray, my toilet." she hissed, her lips brushing against his ear as she whispered those dirty, filthy words to him. "And I'm going to do whatever I want to you, whenever I want to do it. You'll have no choice in the matter, no say in what happens to your body. I'll make you beg, I'll make you plead, I'll make you cry out for mercy. But it won't matter, because I'll never give it to you." she ground out, punctuating each word with a vicious punch to his face.

"I'll make you scream; I'll make you bleed, I'll break your bones, I'll make you wish you had never been born. And when I'm done with you, when I've broken you completely, then and only then, will I finally grant you the mercy of death. When I am on my deathbed having used and humiliated you every moment for the rest of my life, when I am moments from my own death I will grant you the freedom of your own death. My last act on this earth as your master being taking your life so you can serve me in death as well." Lori hissed, her voice filled with a chilling combination of lust and rage. She gripped his hair tightly, pulling his head back further, her cunt grinding hard against his chest as she growled into his ear. David could only whimper in response, his mind a dizzying whirlwind of shock, disgust, and a strange, twisted arousal as he listened to his mother-in-law's cruel, dominating words. He knew that he should be fighting back, that he should be trying to escape, but somehow, he couldn't bring himself to do it.

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