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The Concrete Heart of Margot's Neighbor

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Y/n Fluents is a Puerto Rican female who was born biologically with just a dick not a trans person. She is 6 feet, short curly hair, greyish blue eyes, muscles for days, quiet, but when around people she’s comfortable with she is a whole different person she’s laughing, smiling telling jokes. She is a blue collar worker in construction and lives in the same building as Margot Robbie.

Chapter 27: The Unexpected Gift

The workday was a blur of noise and muscle memory. The roar of the saw, the grit of concrete dust coating her throat, the heft of a sledgehammer meeting drywall. Carlos kept shooting her looks, little grins he’d hide behind his safety glasses. She felt untethered, her mind looping back to a cool penthouse floor and a promise spoken in a quiet kitchen. I’ll go right by her. The words played on a track, drowning out the foreman’s shouts.

She showered in her own apartment, the water pressure pathetic compared to Margot’s. She stood under the weak spray until the hot water ran out, her skin buzzing with a strange, anticipatory static. She threw on clean shorts and a soft henley, not overthinking it. Her boots were by the door. She stared at them. Then she left them there, padding out in socks, locking her own door behind her.

The elevator ride up felt longer, the silence louder.

Margot’s door was unlocked. The penthouse was dim, lit only by the city’s neon glow bleeding through the windows and a single pendant light over the massive island. Music played low, something with a slow, soulful bassline. The air smelled of clean citrus and the faint, expensive scent of Margot’s perfume.

Margot was at the sink, rinsing a blender. She wore loose linen pants and a thin tank top, her hair twisted up with a pencil. She looked… ordinary. Beautifully, devastatingly ordinary.

“Hey,” Y/n said, her voice rough from the day.

Margot turned, a smile blooming instantly, reaching her eyes. “Hey, you.” She dried her hands on a towel. “I made margaritas. And then I drank one while contemplating the spiritual failure of my avocado toast attempt at lunch. It’s a whole thing.”

Y/n moved into the kitchen, drawn like a magnet. She leaned against the island, her fingers tracing the cool stone. That’s when she saw it. A small, deep blue velvet box, sitting right next to a bowl of limes.

She froze.

Margot followed her gaze. She didn’t say anything. Just waited, her expression softening, a little nervous.

Y/n picked up the box. It was light. She opened the hinge.

Nestled inside wasn’t a ring. It was a simple, polished silver keychain. From it hung a single charm: a tiny, perfectly detailed hammer, no bigger than her thumbnail.

She couldn’t speak. Her throat clamped shut.

“It’s not for this door,” Margot said quietly, moving closer. Her voice was barely above the music. “The building has security, you don’t need a key. And it’s not… it’s not a demand, or a cage, or anything like that.” She took a slow breath. “It’s a promise. That wherever you go, whatever you do… you have a home. With me. A place that’s yours. No conditions. No walls.”

Y/n’s vision blurred. The little hammer caught the light, winking. It was her. It was her work, her strength, her hands. Offered back to her as an invitation, not a definition.

The velvet box trembled in her hand.

All the words she’d ever held back—the fears, the history Carlos had hinted at, the deep-seated certainty that she was too much and not enough all at once—crashed against this simple, profound object. It wasn’t jewelry. It was a tool. A foundational thing.

She set the box down with a soft click. The sound was final.

She looked at Margot, really looked, and saw no pity, no performative romance. Just steady, certain offer.

“You mean it?” The question was raw, stripped bare.

“I’ve never meant anything more.”

Y/n closed the distance between them in one stride. Her hands came up to cradle Margot’s face, her thumbs sweeping over her cheekbones. She searched her eyes, finding only that clear blue truth. Then she kissed her.

It wasn’t like before. It wasn’t curiosity or heat or frantic need. It was a transfer. A sealing. It was deep and slow and pouring, every silent thing in Y/n’s heart passing into Margot, who took it, her mouth yielding, then answering, her arms winding around Y/n’s neck to pull her closer.

Y/n broke the kiss only to slide her hands down Margot’s back, under her thighs, and lift her. Margot gasped, a quick intake of breath, her legs wrapping instantly around Y/n’s waist. She felt solid, real. Y/n carried her the two steps to the island and set her down on the cold stone counter. The velvet box skittered aside.

They were eye to eye now. Breathing the same air.

“Tell me,” Y/n whispered, her forehead resting against Margot’s. “Tell me what you want.”

Margot’s hands slid under Y/n’s henley, palms warm and sure against the skin of her back. “You. Right here. Just you.”

Clothes became obstacles, shed in urgent, mutual pulls. Y/n’s henley over her head. Margot’s tank top shrugged off. The linen pants pushed down. The cool air of the penthouse met her skin, then the warmer touch of hands, everywhere.

Margot leaned back on her elbows, the city lights painting her in streaks of gold and blue. “Look at you,” she breathed, all awe.

Y/n felt exposed, but not afraid. Seen, but not judged. She knelt, her hands on Margot’s thighs, and kissed the inside of her knee, then higher, a slow, open-mouth trail. Margot shuddered, a low sound escaping her.

“Just like that,” Margot said, her voice husky. “Take your time. We have all night.”

Y/n did. She mapped her with lips and tongue, learning the rhythms that made Margot’s breath catch, the places that made her hips shift. She was methodical, devoted. This was a language she understood—action, precision, giving care through tangible effort. Margot’s fingers threaded into her short, curly hair, not guiding, just holding on.

“Y/n…” Margot gasped, her back arching off the cold stone.

The sound of her name, cracked open with pleasure, undid something final inside Y/n. She focused, relentless and tender, until Margot cried out, the sound echoing off the high ceilings, her body taut then melting, boneless, back onto the counter.

Y/n rose, kissing her way up Margot’s trembling stomach, her sternum, the hollow of her throat. She tasted salt and skin. Margot’s eyes were dark, hazy. She pulled Y/n up for a searing, lazy kiss, then rolled them, reversing their positions with a surprising strength until Y/n was the one sitting on the edge of the counter, Margot standing between her knees.

“My turn,” Margot murmured, her hands firm on Y/n’s shoulders.

Her touch was different. Exploratory, reverent. She kissed the column of Y/n’s throat, the line of her collarbone, her hands skimming down the powerful planes of her torso. When her touch dipped lower, Y/n flinched, a tiny, instinctive recoil.

Margot stopped instantly. She looked up, meeting Y/n’s eyes. “We don’t have to.”

“I want to,” Y/n said, the words tight. “It’s just… it’s complicated.”

“I know,” Margot said. Simply. She didn’t look away. “Show me what feels good. Tell me. This is just us. Nothing else exists in this room.”

The permission was a lifeline. Y/n guided her hand, her own covering Margot’s, showing her pressure, rhythm. It was clumsy and vulnerable and so intensely real it hurt. Margot watched her face, learning, her other hand stroking Y/n’s side, a steady, grounding presence.

“Yeah?” Margot whispered.

Y/n could only nod, her head falling forward onto Margot’s shoulder. The sensations built, a slow burn different from anything she’d known. It wasn’t about release; it was about being known. The rough pad of Margot’s thumb, the way she kissed her neck, the whispered, “You’re so beautiful,” against her ear—it all coalesced into a wave that broke over her silently, a shuddering, inward collapse that left her trembling.

They stayed like that for long minutes, wrapped around each other in the quiet kitchen. The music had ended. The only sound was their slowing breaths.

Finally, Margot leaned back, brushing a curl from Y/n’s damp forehead. She smiled, a little wobbly. “Okay?”

Y/n pulled her close again, kissing her softly. “Okay.”

Later, wrapped in a sheet on the living room floor with pillows dragged from the sofa, Y/n played with the keychain. The tiny hammer spun, catching the light. She hooked it onto her key ring, the metal clink definitive. It nestled beside her mundane keys, a small, shining promise.

Margot watched, her head on Y/n’s shoulder. “It looks right there.”

“It does,” Y/n said. She felt spent, scoured clean, and utterly full. The ghosts of the past, the echo of cruel words, the fear of being a problem—they were still there, but they were quieter. Outshone by the weight of a silver hammer and the woman breathing softly against her skin.

The city slept below them. Up here, they were awake. The foundation, for the first time, felt solid.

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