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The Crimson Abduction

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Jill Tallentire 18, copper red hair and grey eyes. Run away from home in the North East of England and living on the streets of London. She is of a diminutive stature, exceptionally beautiful and highly intelligent , fragile and delicate and a virgin. Mycroft Holmes, 28, dark red curls and grey eyes. Works in the shadows of the British government and as an analyst for MI5. For all his aloof and cold demeanour at work, he is actually quite warm and friendly in his personal life. Jill has been living on the streets for a number of months, winter was setting in and she was freezing and starving to death. She has run away from a friend of her father’s who had been touching her inappropriately for months and then tired to assault her. She is abducted from the streets by traffickers and they organise an auction with her virginity as the main prize. Mycroft is there in his role of Spy with MI6 and he buys her, takes her to bed and takes her virginity, she finds out later that she is pregnant. He is very out of character with her by being tender and gentle. Set in modern day 21st century

Chapter 7: The Escape

The world narrowed to the hammering of blood in her ears and the cold, slick marble under her palms. Jill scrambled up, silk tearing, as Meier’s hand missed her arm by inches. The gondolier moved with shocking speed for a man his size, throwing his weight into Meier, driving him back into the room with a grunt of impact.

“Run!” the man barked, his voice a gravelly echo in the hall.

Jill ran.

Her peacock mask, dislodged, clattered and skittered across the floor behind her. The feathered thing was a lie anyway. She left it. The sapphire pin was still a cold, sharp star in her clenched fist. The corridor seemed to stretch and warp, the grim-faced portraits blurring into a smear of oil and judgement. Her satin slippers were silent but treacherous on the polished stone.

Behind her, the sounds of struggle were brutal, concise: a choked-off cry, the sickening thud of a fist meeting flesh, the crash of overturning furniture. No gunshot. That was something. She didn’t look back.

A service door appeared on her left, a plain, dark wood slab nearly invisible in the panelling. The gondolier had said ‘now’, had said ‘they’re coming’. This was the only exit that didn’t lead back toward the music and the light. She hit the iron latch shoulder-first, stumbling through into a sudden, shocking plunge of temperature and light.

A stone staircase, narrow and winding, lit by a single bare bulb. The smell of damp linen, bleach, and garbage rose to meet her. The servants’ stairs.

She took them two at a time, her free hand skimming the rough wall for balance. From above, a door slammed open. Heavy footsteps. Not the gondolier’s. Meier’s voice, raw with fury, echoed down the stairwell. “Find her! You useless—she cannot leave the palazzo!”

Jill’s breath sobbed in her throat. She hit a landing, wrenched open another door, and burst into a vast, steamy kitchen. Copper pots gleamed. A young man in a stained apron gaped at her, a ladle dripping sauce onto the floor. She was a phantom in ruined gold silk, hair wild, face streaked with tears and fear.

“Scusa,” she gasped, and kept moving, weaving between stainless steel tables. The kitchen staff parted before her, too stunned to intervene.

Another doorway led to a damp, vaulted passageway—a cellar. The air was thick with the smell of wine and rot. It was dark. She fumbled forward, one hand outstretched, the other cradling her belly. The flutters inside had become a frantic, rolling agitation, a silent scream in tune with her own.

A sliver of moonlight. A grate. It was an old delivery entrance, half-rusted hinges holding a wrought-iron gate shut with a simple latch. She threw her weight against it. It shrieked in protest but gave way, opening onto a shadowed alley not three feet from the ink-black water of a secondary canal.

The cold night air hit her like a slap. She gulped it, leaning against the damp brick, the world spinning. She was out. But not free.

“Elara.”

The voice came from her right, calm and familiar. Mycroft stepped from the deeper shadows of a doorway, his linen jacket discarded, his shirtsleeves rolled up. In the gloom, his face was all sharp angles and grim purpose. He held out a bundled mass of dark fabric. “Put this on. Now.”

It was a heavy wool cloak, coarse and smelling of lanolin. A common garment. A disguise. She stared at it, then at him, her mind struggling to catch up. “The gondolier—he said the extraction failed. They traced it.”

“I know. The trace was a contingency I’d hoped to avoid. It means Meier’s cyber-security team, and by extension his physical security, are now actively hunting for the source of the intrusion. You.” Mycroft’s voice was clipped, analytical, but his eyes were scanning her, taking in the torn dress, her heaving chest, the wild terror in her eyes. “The data shard captured seventy-eight percent. It will have to suffice. The plan has accelerated.”

He stepped forward and wrapped the cloak around her shoulders himself, his movements efficient, not gentle. He pulled the hood up over her distinctive copper hair. “Seraphina?”

“Down. The gondolier hit her. With a paperweight.” The words tasted of bile.

Mycroft’s lips thinned. A minute calculation. “A complication. Not necessarily a fatal one. Her value to them alive may outweigh their anger. We cannot wait to find out.”

From the palazzo, a new sound emerged—not music, but a raised, concerned murmur, then the sharp blare of a security alarm. The disturbance had reached the party.

“This way.” Mycroft took her arm, his grip firm, and guided her along the narrow fondamenta, away from the main waterway. A small, black motorboat, its engine idling with a low gurgle, was tied to a post ahead. It looked nothing like the graceful gondolas; it was functional, anonymous.

As they reached it, a figure detached itself from a nearby bridge. The gondolier. He moved with a slight hitch in his step, one hand pressed to his ribs. A dark rivulet of blood traced a line from his temple into his collar.

“The package?” Mycroft asked, helping Jill into the boat. She stumbled, the boat rocking violently beneath her.

“Contained,” the gondolier grunted. “He’ll have a headache to rival the girl’s. Bought you five minutes, maybe ten. His people are mobilising. They’ll check the docks, the vaporetti.”

“Understood. Your exit?”

“Pre-arranged. I’m a ghost.” The man nodded once at Jill. There was no warmth in his face, only a professional assessment. “She’s tougher than she looks.”

Then he was gone, melting into the labyrinth.

Mycroft cast off the line and settled at the boat’s tiller. With a twist of his wrist, the engine coughed and then roared to life, a vulgar sound in the silent canal. He guided the boat away from the bank, not toward the Grand Canal’s openness, but deeper into the tight, dark veins of the city.

Jill huddled in the cloak, the wool scratchy on her skin. The adrenaline was leaching away, leaving her trembling and hollow. The sapphire pin was still in her hand, its metal warm now from her grip. She looked at it, this useless, dangerous thing. “Seventy-eight percent,” she said, her voice flat. “Is that enough to burn it down?”

Mycroft navigated a sharp turn, the boat’s wake slapping against mossy steps. “It is enough to identify three offshore holding companies, two shipping manifests, and the digital signature of a senior partner in a Berlin-based private bank. It is a flare. It will draw official attention, the kind Meier’s money usually smoothes away. When combined with the witness testimony I will extract from you, it becomes a foundation.” He glanced at her. “It is enough to justify what comes next.”

“Which is what?” She stared at the black water sliding past. “He felt them, Mycroft. He knows. He won’t just let me go. He’ll turn this city upside down.”

“He will try,” Mycroft conceded. “Which is why Elara Vance must die tonight.”

The words should have been shocking. They felt inevitable. Jill nodded slowly, the weight of the last months pressing down on her. The auction, the gilded cage, the constant performance. The life inside her, kicking in protest. “How?”

“An accident. A tragic, chaotic accident during a security incident at the palazzo. A body, unidentifiable, will be found in the water later. It will be wearing your dress, your size, with a convincing replica of that hairpin caught in the fabric.” He spoke as if outlining a budget report. “Meanwhile, you will be on a private medical transport to a secure location outside Italy. Jill Tallentire will re-enter the system as a vulnerable British national recovered from a trafficking situation, in need of urgent prenatal care and protective custody.”

It was clean. It was cold. It might work.

“And the twins?” The word felt strange and huge in her mouth.

Mycroft was silent for a long moment, the only sound the putter of the engine and the watery echo of their passage. “They are a complicating factor. But they are also your conclusive proof. DNA evidence linking you incontrovertibly to Meier. They make you more valuable as a witness, not less. The Crown’s protection will extend to them.”

It wasn’t reassurance. It was a statement of utility. From him, it was the closest thing to a promise she would get.

The boat slid into a small, covered boatyard, a squero that smelled of tar and wet wood. He cut the engine, and the sudden silence was ringing. He helped her out onto a unstable dock.

A car waited in the adjacent alley, a nondescript grey Fiat. A woman stood beside it, middle-aged, with a sensible haircut and a medical bag over her shoulder. She gave Mycroft a brisk nod.

“This is Dr. Lina,” Mycroft said. “She will accompany you. You’re in shock, and you’re dehydrated. You need monitoring.”

The clinical concern was a new kind of performance. Jill allowed herself to be led to the car, bundled into the back seat. The doctor followed, immediately taking her wrist to check her pulse, her hands competent and impersonal.

Mycroft leaned in the open door. In the yellow light of the streetlamp, he looked exhausted. The aloof analyst was gone; in his place was a man who had just orchestrated a violent, messy extraction and was staring at the consequences.

“The next twenty-four hours will be disorienting,” he said, his voice lower now, for her alone. “You will be safe. Follow the doctor’s instructions. Try to rest.”

“You’re not coming?”

“I have to stay. To light the fuse.” He managed something that wasn’t quite a smile. “To make sure the fire is convincing. I will see you in England.”

He went to close the door, then stopped. His grey eyes, so like her own, held hers. For a second, the professional wall fully cracked, and she saw the sheer, staggering depth of his worry. “The hairpin, Jill.”

She had forgotten she was still clutching it. She opened her stiff fingers. The sapphire winked in the low light.

He took it. His fingers brushed her palm. “Well done,” he said, softly. Then he shut the door.

The car pulled away, moving sedately through the sleeping back streets of Venice, leaving the chaos behind. Jill watched through the window as the doctor rummaged in her bag. They crossed the Liberty Bridge, leaving the ancient island city behind, its golden glow receding in the night.

“Here,” Dr. Lina said, not unkindly, offering a bottle of water and a small, white tablet. “For the stress. It’s mild. It’s safe for the babies.”

Jill took the pill. She swallowed it with a gulp of water. She leaned her head against the cool glass of the window.

Somewhere behind them, Elara Vance was drowning. Somewhere ahead, in the anonymous dark of the mainland, Jill Tallentire was being born again, fragile, terrified, and carrying the only evidence that mattered. The boat’s engine hum faded into memory, replaced by the steady drone of the car. The flutters in her womb slowly settled into a tired, rhythmic pattern.

She closed her eyes. The burn had begun.

The car’s heater blew stale, warm air that smelled of old cigarettes and pine disinfectant. Jill watched the industrial outskirts of Mestre blur past, warehouses and lots of silent lorries replacing ancient palaces. The tablet left a chalky, chemical aftertaste on her tongue. Her body felt like a borrowed thing, trembling on a delay.

“Try to sip, don’t gulp,” Dr. Lina said, watching her over the rim of her own water bottle. “The shock will make you nauseous. The medication will help that, too.”

“What’s in it?” Jill asked, her voice rough.

“A mild benzodiazepine. Mostly. And a prenatal vitamin.” The doctor offered a thin, professional smile. “Your blood pressure is elevated, but not dangerously so. The babies are active, which is a good sign. Stressful for you, but a sign of resilience.”

The word ‘babies’ in this context, in this sterile car, was jarring. It made them real in a new, terrifying way. They were no longer just a secret to hide; they were patients. Assets. Proof. She placed a hand over her belly, feeling the firm, unfamiliar curve beneath the coarse wool. The flutters had quieted to a vague, internal shifting.

“Where are we going?” Jill asked.

“A safe house. For assessment and stabilization.” Dr. Lina’s tone did not invite further questions. She looked out her own window, her posture alert. “Try to rest. The journey is over an hour.”

Rest was impossible. Every shadow outside held a pursuing face. Every bump in the road made her heart stutter. She replayed the gondolier’s grunt of pain, the wet sound of the paperweight meeting Seraphina’s skull, the absolute void in Meier’s eyes when the kindness vanished. The pill eventually smoothed the sharpest edges off her panic, leaving her floating in a detached, weary haze.

They turned off the autostrada onto progressively smaller roads, winding through dormant vineyards and sleeping hill towns. The car finally slowed before a high, iron gate set in a stone wall. A security camera swivelled silently. The gate swung open.

The house was a modern, blocky thing, all sharp angles and grey concrete, nestled obscenely among the softer historic farms. A single light glowed above a stark front door. It looked less like a sanctuary and more like a clinic.

Inside, it was spotless and echoingly empty. The floors were polished concrete, the furniture minimalist and unwelcoming. A medical examination table, conspicuously present, dominated the living area. Jill stood in the doorway, clutching the cloak around her.

“Right then,” Dr. Lina said, switching to brisk English. “Let’s get you properly checked. Then a shower, some food. You’re running on empty.”

The examination was thorough and impersonal. Blood pressure, heart rate, a Doppler to find the twin heartbeats—a rapid, galloping sound that filled the quiet room. Jill stared at the ceiling, tears leaking silently into her hairline as the whoosh-whoosh-whoosh played out. Proof of life. Her own heartbeat felt sluggish in comparison.

“Strong,” Dr. Lina pronounced, wiping the gel from Jill’s abdomen. “Both of them. You’re about eighteen weeks. They’re perfectly on schedule, despite everything.”

After a lukewarm shower in a bathroom with no windows, Jill found clean clothes waiting—soft grey joggers and a loose sweatshirt. They were anonymous, comfortable. They felt like a uniform. In the kitchen, Dr. Lina microwaved a container of plain pasta.

“Not glamorous, but it’s food,” she said, placing it on the table.

Jill ate mechanically. The pasta was tasteless. As she forced it down, her mind cleared slightly from the drug’s fog. The reality of her situation crashed in with fresh, brutal clarity. “What happens if he doesn’t believe it? That she’s dead?”

Dr. Lina sat opposite her, cradling a mug of tea. “That’s not my department. My job is you, and your condition. The operational details are Mr. Holmes’s concern.”

“Mycroft,” Jill corrected, softly. She pushed the pasta away. “He’s good at details. But Meier… he’s obsessive. He’ll want a body. He’ll want to see it.”

“And he will be provided with one that will withstand all but a DNA test, which will be conveniently delayed and contaminated by canal water.” The voice came from the doorway.

Mycroft stood there, leaning against the frame. He looked like he’d aged a decade in a few hours. His shirt was rumpled, a smudge of soot or dirt on his collar. His red curls were dishevelled. In his hand was a manila folder.

“The fire is lit,” he said, his voice flat with exhaustion. “A body, matching Elara’s description, was recovered from the water near the Palazzo Gritti an hour ago. Venetian police are investigating an apparent fall during a chaotic security alert triggered by an attempted cyber-breach. The story is coherent and already attracting the right kind of inconvenient attention.”

Jill swallowed. “Seraphina?”

“In a private clinic, under guard. Meier’s guard. She has a severe concussion and a fractured skull, but she’s conscious. She’s claiming she was attacked by an intruder she mistook for you. She’s playing her part.” He didn’t sound convinced. He entered the kitchen and dropped the folder on the table. “For you. The first step.”

Jill opened it. Inside was a British passport. The photo was of her, but her hair was darker, a deep auburn, and cut to her shoulders. The name read ‘Jenna Eleanor Teale’. Birthplace: Newcastle. There were NHS cards, a birth certificate, a driver’s provisional licence. The paperwork of a life.

“Jenna Teale,” she whispered.

“A real person who died of a viral meningitis at age six. The record has been reactivated for you. It’s a solid, backstopped identity. You’ll use it until the legal proceedings begin.” He pulled out a chair and sat, the weight of the world seeming to bow his shoulders. “We leave for England in seven hours. A Royal Air Force medical transport. You’ll be met by social services and a security detail.”

“Social services,” Jill repeated, the term feeling absurd.

“You are a minor, Jill. A recovered trafficking victim. The system must appear to follow its course. It provides a layer of public legitimacy no intelligence service can match.” He met her eyes. “It also means you will have a legally appointed guardian. Someone to advocate for you within the bureaucracy.”

A cold suspicion crystallized. “Who?”

Mycroft held her gaze. “Given the exceptional circumstances and the national security implications, the courts have approved a special appointment. Pending your consent, I have been provisionally assigned as your legal guardian.”

The silence in the kitchen was absolute. The hum of the refrigerator seemed to grow louder. Dr. Lina discreetly looked away, busying herself with her mug.

Jill stared at him. The spymaster. The analyst. The man who bought her at an auction. Her guardian. “Why?”

A complex parade of emotions crossed his worn face—frustration, duty, a flicker of that same uncharacteristic tenderness she’d seen in flashes before. “Because I am already compromised,” he said simply. “My involvement is already documented in certain sealed files. This formalizes it. And because,” he added, his voice dropping, “no one else will understand what you have seen. What you have survived. The threats won’t end with a court date.”

It wasn’t about kindness. It was about continuity. About control. And yet, the offer felt like a raft in a raging sea. A known entity, however complicated.

“Okay,” she said, the word barely a breath.

“Okay,” he echoed. He nodded, once, as if closing a deal. He pushed himself up from the chair. “Get some sleep. Dr. Lina will monitor you. We depart at 0500.”

He left the room, his footsteps echoing on the hard floor. Jill looked back at the passport photo. Jenna Teale had her grey eyes, but they looked emptier. Haunted already.

Dr. Lina stood. “I’ll set up a monitor in your room for the night. For the babies. Standard procedure after maternal trauma.”

Jill didn’t argue. She let herself be led to a spare bedroom, let the sensors be strapped to her belly. The machine by the bed quietly printed a rolling trace of two heartbeats, a jagged double line on green graph paper.

She lay in the dark, watching the lines peak and trough. The burn was spreading through Elara Vance’s world, through Meier’s empire. But here, in this cold, safe house, a new kind of fear was taking root. It was the fear of paperwork and courtrooms, of social workers and legal guardians. It was the fear of having to explain the inexplicable, of carrying these two silent witnesses into a world that demanded simple stories.

One of the twins gave a strong, sudden kick, a palpable jerk against the sensor belt.

Jill placed her hand over the spot. “I know,” she whispered into the dark. “I’m scared too.”

The heartbeat lines on the monitor spiked, then settled, steady and sure, marching on toward morning.

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