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The Fallen Immortal

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Lia a female Xianxia cultivator with great power defeats a demon and is thrown into a dimensional portal to survive the crossing of worlds she burns through a great deal of here cultivation and lands much weaker in a medieval world with magic. The kingdom she has landed in is ruled by benevolent Queen. Lia travels to capital city and gets becomes a waitress in a bar while learning of this new land. Spends a year recovering a small amount of her cultivation since cultivation is much harder in this new world. She hears rumors of problems the kingdom faces with the wizard king of the north who wants to conquer all.

Chapter 6: The changes of the queen

The cobblestones of Valerian’s Crown bled into a dizzying kaleidoscope beneath Lia’s worn boots. The air, thick with the cloying sweetness of roasting chestnuts, the iron tang of horse dung, and the shrill cries of hawkers, pressed in like a physical weight. It was noise. Life. Confusion. Perfect camouflage. Beside her, Martha moved with stiff, unnatural grace, her transformed body – taut skin, sharp cheekbones, defiant curves straining her finer, stolen dress – drawing stares that slid away the moment Lia’s flat, amber gaze met them. Fear was a scent Lia carried now, sharp and metallic, cutting through the city stink.

"Never seen so many… people," Martha muttered, her newly resonant voice tight. Her knuckles were white where she gripped the leather strap of the satchel containing Lia’s sparse belongings – and the weight of stolen power. "Like ants on a carcass."

"The carcass is theirs," Lia murmured, her eyes scanning the soaring spires of the Royal Palace, a jagged silhouette against the bruised twilight sky. "We’re just the maggots burrowing in." She felt the familiar, hollow ache in her core, the void where the King’s unmaking fire had left its scar. It pulsed now, hungry. The palace wasn’t just stone; it was a reservoir of latent desire, fear, and brittle authority. A banquet.

Infiltration was laughably simple. The Queen, Althea Valerian, held court for petitioners in the Rose Hall once a week. Lia donned the guise of a minor noble’s disgraced daughter seeking royal clemency – a fiction woven with threads of stolen confidence and projected meekness. Martha, radiating an unnerving combination of predatory stillness and raw sensuality, played her taciturn handmaiden. The guards at the gilded doors, their eyes lingering too long on Martha’s heaving bosom, barely glanced at Lia’s forged parchment.

The Rose Hall stole Lia’s breath, not with beauty, but with the sheer, choking concentration of want. Sunlight streamed through stained glass, dappling the polished marble floor. Courtiers preened in silks, their laughter sharp and brittle. The scent of beeswax, rare perfumes, and something deeper, muskier – ambition, desperation – hung heavy. And on the dais, flanked by two stern knights in burnished silver plate, sat Queen Althea.

She was beautiful in the way ice was beautiful. Pale skin stretched over fine bones, hair the colour of winter wheat swept into an intricate, severe crown. Her eyes, large and a startlingly cold blue, scanned the room with detached curiosity. But Lia saw the cracks. The faint tension at the corners of her mouth. The almost imperceptible tremor in the hand resting on the carved lion’s head of her throne. The Queen was a bird in a gilded cage, singing a song she didn’t know the words to. Beside her, the taller knight, his helm under his arm revealing a face of stern, weathered handsomeness – Captain Garrick, Lia gleaned from whispered court gossip – stood rigid. His gaze, however, wasn't fixed on potential threats. It kept flicking towards the Queen’s profile, a look of such fierce, hopeless devotion it was almost painful.

Lia’s fractured core throbbed. Devotion. Fear. Suppressed longing. A feast laid bare. She stepped forward when her alias was called, projecting an aura of trembling vulnerability. She spun her tale of woe – a fabricated scandal, a cruel father – pouring subtle tendrils of power into her voice, making the story resonate with a pathetic truthfulness. She saw the Queen’s cold eyes soften, ever so slightly. Saw Captain Garrick’s stern jaw tighten further, his knuckles whitening on his sword hilt. He felt protective. Possessive. Perfect.

"Your plea is… unusual, child," Queen Althea said, her voice clear but lacking warmth. "The crimes attributed…" She trailed off, her gaze drifting momentarily towards the towering windows, towards the unseen sky. A flicker of profound weariness, of something like despair, crossed her face. It vanished instantly, replaced by regal composure. "We shall consider it. You may retire to the Amber Antechamber. Captain Garrick will attend you shortly with our decision." A dismissal, but one tinged with an uncharacteristic pause, a moment of indecision Lia latched onto like a leech.

The Amber Antechamber was smaller, intimate, dominated by a heavy oak table and tapestries depicting pastoral scenes that felt like cruel jokes. Lia stood near the cold fireplace, Martha a silent, watchful statue by the door. Lia didn’t wait. She reached into the humming void within her, drawing not just on her own stolen power, but on the ambient desperation of the court, the Queen’s hidden weariness, Garrick’s bottled-up devotion. She wove it into a subtle compulsion, a psychic shove aimed not at action, but at inclination.

The door opened. Captain Garrick entered, his face set in its usual stern lines, but his eyes held a faint, unfocused haze. He closed the door behind him. "The Queen is… deliberating," he began, his voice gruff. He took a step towards the center of the room, his gaze sweeping over Lia, then snagging violently on Martha. He stopped dead. His breath hitched audibly. Lia saw the pulse hammering in his neck.

Lia moved. Not towards him. Towards Martha. She stopped inches from the transformed tavern keeper, her back to Garrick. She reached up, her fingers trailing down Martha’s smooth, unnaturally defined jawline. "You feel it, don't you, Martha?" Lia murmured, loud enough for Garrick to hear. "The heat? The power? The way they stare?" Her hand slid lower, tracing the prominent swell of Martha's breast over the fabric of her dress, deliberately outlining the stiff peak of her nipple. "Like they want to devour you." Martha shuddered, a low whimper escaping her – part fear, part the involuntary echo of the pleasure Lia could force upon her. Her eyes, wide and terrified, locked on Garrick's.

Garrick made a choked sound. Lia felt the surge of his desire, hot and confused, warring with his duty. She turned slowly, deliberately placing herself between Garrick and Martha, but angling her body so both were visible. Her own gaze locked onto his. Her amber eyes seemed to deepen, swirling vortices of ancient hunger.

"You watch her," Lia stated, her voice dropping to a velvet purr that vibrated in the small room. "You watch your Queen. With that same hungry look." Garrick flinched as if struck. "You dream of touching her," Lia pressed, stepping closer to him. His hand went to his sword hilt, but it was a reflex, lacking conviction. She was inches away now, smelling the oiled leather and sweat and the sharp tang of his arousal. "You dream of bending her over that gilded throne, ripping that pristine gown, and fucking her royal cunt raw while the whole court watches." The obscenity, delivered in Lia's cool, detached tone, was electric.

Garrick gasped, his face flushing crimson. "Silence, witch! I'd die before—"

"You ache for it," Lia hissed, cutting him off. She placed a hand flat on his chest plate. Not over his heart, but lower. She pushed a concentrated thread of pure, stolen lust – Martha's, the court's, her own dark energy – straight into him. It bypassed thought, bypassed loyalty. It was pure, feral need. His eyes glazed over, pupils blowing wide. His cock, confined within the leather breeches beneath his armour, strained visibly, an obscene bulge. A strangled groan tore from his throat.

The door clicked open. Queen Althea stood framed in the doorway, her face pale, her icy blue eyes wide with shock, then dawning horror as she took in the scene: Garrick, flushed and panting, his erection tenting his pants, his gaze fixed on Martha with animal hunger; Martha trembling, radiating terrified allure; Lia standing between them like a dark conductor.

"Garrick!" Althea's voice was sharp, laced with disbelief and a tremor of fear.

Lia turned her head, her amber gaze pinning the Queen. "He wants her," Lia said, her voice soft, insidious. "But he dreams of you. Don't you, Captain? Dream of spreading your Queen's perfect thighs? Of tasting her?" Lia focused, sending another, sharper pulse of power, this time aimed directly at the Queen’s core, amplifying her own hidden loneliness, her unacknowledged physical yearning buried beneath layers of duty and ice. Althea gasped, a hand flying to her abdomen. A flush, unbidden and shocking, crept up her neck.

"No!" Garrick roared, the sound raw, torn between duty and the tsunami of lust Lia had unleashed. He lunged, not for Lia, but towards Althea, perhaps to shield her, perhaps driven by the distorted command in his head. His gauntleted hand grabbed Althea's arm, the gesture rough, possessive.

"Unhand me!" Althea shrieked, but her voice lacked its usual command. Her skin burned where he touched her. Lia's power was a fever inside her, melting the ice, exposing raw, desperate need beneath the regal facade. Her own breath came in short, sharp gasps. She tried to pull away, but Garrick's grip tightened.

Lia stepped back, a cold spectator. "Show her, Captain," she commanded, her voice resonating with unnatural power in the small room. "Show your Queen the devotion burning inside you." She poured more energy into Garrick, stripping away the last vestiges of his control. The compulsion was absolute.

With a guttural sound that was half sob, half growl, Garrick yanked Althea towards him. His other hand fumbled at the intricate fastenings of her gown. Silk tore. Althea cried out, a sound lost between outrage and something else, something deeper and more terrifying. She struggled, but her movements were weak, confused, her body betraying her under Lia’s relentless assault on her senses. The torn gown slipped from one shoulder, revealing the smooth curve of her pale breast. Garrick’s mouth crashed down on hers, not a kiss, but a devouring, biting, claiming. Althea moaned into it, her body arching against him despite herself, the shock of sensation overwhelming her resistance.

Lia watched, the void within her drinking deeply. The raw, forbidden energy of the Queen’s unraveling composure, Garrick’s savage, loyal lust twisted into violation – it was intoxicating, richer than anything she’d consumed before. Martha cowered against the wall, watching with terrified fascination, her own body humming with the echoes of the unleashed power.

Garrick broke the brutal kiss, trailing biting, desperate kisses down Althea’s throat. He shoved her backwards against the heavy oak table. Goblets clattered to the floor. He ripped the remains of her gown down, baring her small, perfect breasts, the pale nipples already hard peaks. Althea’s head fell back, her eyes wide, staring blindly at the ceiling, tears leaking from the corners, but her hips bucked involuntarily as he pawed at her. He tore at his own breeches, freeing his thick, straining cock, flushed dark and slick at the tip.

"No... please..." Althea whimpered, the plea feeble, lost in the haze.

Garrick didn't hear. Driven by Lia’s amplified command and his own warped desire, he hooked his hands under her thighs, spreading her legs wide against the edge of the table. Her delicate silk underclothes offered no resistance. He shoved them aside, revealing the pale, delicate curls beneath. He positioned himself, the blunt head of his cock pressing against her entrance. Althea tensed, a sharp cry escaping her.

Lia stepped closer. She placed a hand on Garrick’s heaving back, another on Althea’s cold, trembling shoulder. She poured her power into both simultaneously – forcing acceptance into the Queen, forcing brutal, claiming possession into the Knight. "Take her," Lia hissed, her voice a serpent's tongue in their minds. "Claim your Queen. Fill her cunt with your loyal cock."

With a ragged shout, Garrick drove himself forward, burying his thick cock to the hilt in Queen Althea Valerian’s tight, unprepared pussy in one brutal thrust. Althea screamed, a raw sound of pain and shocking, unwanted pleasure, her back arching off the table. Garrick roared, his fingers digging into her thighs as he began to piston into her with savage, unrelenting strokes. The wet, slapping sound of flesh on flesh filled the antechamber, punctuated by Althea’s choked sobs and Garrick’s animalistic grunts. Her small breasts bounced with each jarring thrust, tears streaking her face, her body convulsing around the invading hardness. He fucked her like he was conquering territory, deep, punishing strokes that shoved her body up the table.

Lia absorbed it all: the Queen’s agony and burgeoning, shameful ecstasy; Garrick’s frenzied, duty-twisted lust; Martha’s terrified arousal radiating from the corner. The power swelled within her fractured core, mending the edges, making her feel terrifyingly solid, terrifyingly strong. She watched the Captain’s balls slap against Althea’s ass, watched the Queen’s delicate fingers claw helplessly at the polished wood, watched her mouth form silent screams that turned into guttural moans as Garrick’s cock brutally stroked a place inside her that ignited despite her terror. Her body was betraying her utterly, spasming around his brutal thrusts.

Garrick’s rhythm became frantic, erratic. "My Queen... forgive me... Ahh, fuck! FUCK!" he bellowed, his hips slamming forward, grinding deep. He held himself there, buried to the root, as his cock pulsed violently inside her, jetting thick ropes of hot come deep into the Queen’s violated cunt. Althea convulsed, a shuddering, silent scream tearing through her as an unwanted, shattering orgasm ripped through her, her body clamping down hard on Garrick’s spurting cock, milking him, her own slickness mixing with his seed.

He collapsed forward onto her, his armour cold against her skin, his breath ragged gasps against her torn gown. Althea lay pinned beneath him, trembling violently, tears streaming down her temples into her hair, her eyes vacant, staring past the ceiling. Spent. Shamed. Utterly broken open.

Lia removed her hands. The connection snapped. The room was suddenly silent except for the harsh breathing and the drip of fluids onto the marble floor beneath the table. Lia looked down at the ruined Queen and the horrified Captain slumped over her. Then she turned her gaze towards the ornate throne visible through the open door of the Rose Hall. The hunger within her, momentarily sated, yawned open again, wider, deeper.

She smiled. It wasn’t a pleasant expression. "Martha," she said, her voice crisp, echoing unnaturally in the stillness. "Clean them up. We have a King to prepare for." She stepped over the tangled limbs of the Queen and her knight, her gaze fixed on the distant throne. The true feast was yet to come. The void within her hummed, ready. Valerian’s Crown would bleed.

The silence in the Amber Antechamber thickened, broken only by Garrick’s ragged gasps against Althea’s neck and the Queen’s shallow, shuddering breaths. The smell of sex, sweat, and shame hung heavy, cloying. Lia inhaled it, letting the raw aftermath settle into her fractured core like rich sediment. Power thrummed, denser now, more dangerous.

"Clean them up, Martha," Lia repeated, her voice cutting through the stillness like shards of ice. She didn’t look back.

Martha flinched, pressing harder against the tapestry-covered wall. Her transformed body, sleek and powerful, trembled. "Lia... please... I can't..." Her whisper was thick with terror, her gaze fixed on the tableau of ruin on the table – the Queen’s pale, torn skin, Garrick’s slumped, armoured form pinning her, the glistening mess between Althea’s thighs.

"You can," Lia stated, turning slowly. Her amber eyes pinned Martha, stripping away resistance. "You will." She poured a thread of command, colder and sharper than before, directly into Martha’s core. It wasn't just compulsion; it was a reminder of the cellular reshaping, the leash of dark magic binding her. "Wipe away the evidence. Make them... presentable."

Martha whimpered, a trapped animal sound. The command burrowed deep, overriding her revulsion. She pushed herself off the wall, movements stiff, jerky. She grabbed a linen cloth from a sideboard, her hands shaking violently. Approaching the table felt like walking towards an open grave.

Garrick stirred, lifting his head. His eyes, clearing slightly from the haze of Lia’s forced lust, focused on Althea beneath him. Horror dawned, stark and absolute. He scrambled back, his armour scraping harshly on the marble floor, his spent cock dangling obscenely. "Your Majesty! Gods... forgive me! I didn't... I couldn't..." His voice cracked, raw with self-loathing and terror. He stared at his own hands as if they belonged to a monster.

Althea didn't move. She lay sprawled on the polished oak, staring blankly at the vaulted ceiling. Tears carved clean tracks through the smudged remnants of her royal composure. Her torn gown gaped, revealing bruised flesh and drying seed smeared across her inner thighs. A low, continuous moan vibrated in her throat, the sound of utter desolation.

Martha reached the table. The scent of sex and fear intensified, making her gorge rise. She hesitated, the cloth hovering over Althea’s exposed thigh. Lia’s silent command pulsed, insistent, painful. Martha flinched and pressed the cloth against the Queen’s skin. Althea jerked violently, a choked gasp escaping her. Her vacant eyes snapped towards Martha, filled with a sudden, animal panic.

"No! Don't touch me!" Althea rasped, trying weakly to push Martha’s hand away. Her voice was shredded, barely audible.

"Shhh," Martha murmured, the sound alien even to her own ears. The command forced her hand to move, wiping clumsily at the sticky mess on Althea’s skin. Her fingers brushed the Queen’s swollen labia. Althea cried out, flinching away, her body curling in on itself. "Just... just hold still," Martha pleaded, her own terror warring with the unnatural compulsion. She wiped faster, roughly, trying to erase the violation, her knuckles grazing Althea’s sensitive flesh repeatedly. Each touch elicited a fresh whimper from the broken Queen.

Garrick watched, frozen, his face grey. "Stop it! Leave her!" His hand went to his sword hilt again, trembling. He looked towards Lia, a desperate plea in his eyes. "Make her stop!"

Lia observed, a sculptor assessing clay. The Queen’s raw terror, the Knight’s impotent rage – potent flavors. "She’s cleaning your mess, Captain," Lia said coolly. "The mess you made." Her gaze shifted back to Althea, writhing weakly under Martha’s ministrations. "Lie still, Majesty. Accept the care." She sent another pulse, gentler this time but no less absolute, washing over Althea like icy water. The Queen’s struggles ceased instantly. She went limp, her eyes rolling back slightly, surrendering to the invasive touch. Only the faintest tremor betrayed her consciousness.

Martha finished wiping Althea’s thighs, the cloth sodden and foul. She moved hesitantly towards the Queen’s weeping sex. Althea whimpered softly as Martha pressed the cloth against her folds, soaking up the mingled fluids. Martha’s fingers slipped, probing slightly into the slick, swollen entrance. Althea’s hips jerked involuntarily, a choked gasp escaping her lips – a horrifying echo of pleasure amidst the trauma. Martha snatched her hand back as if burned, bile rising in her throat.

"Now him," Lia commanded, nodding towards Garrick.

Garrick recoiled. "No! I'll do it myself!" He fumbled for his discarded breeches, trying to cover his nakedness, his softening cock smeared with Althea’s fluids and his own release.

Lia’s power lashed out, invisible but crushing. Garrick froze mid-motion, his breath catching. His arms fell uselessly to his sides. "Martha will attend you," Lia stated. "You forfeited the right to dignity."

Martha approached Garrick, her steps leaden. He stood rigid, trembling, humiliation radiating off him in waves. She avoided his eyes, focusing on the mess glistening on his groin and thighs. The smell of him – sweat, iron, sex – was overwhelming. She dabbed the cloth against his sticky cock. He flinched violently, a low groan escaping him. She wiped roughly, her knuckles scraping his sensitive shaft and balls. He hissed, his jaw clenched tight, tears of shame welling in his eyes. She cleaned his thighs, the rough linen chafing his skin. When she brushed against his half-hardening cock again, he couldn't suppress a shuddering gasp.

"Enough," Lia said softly. Martha stumbled back, dropping the filthy cloth, her breath coming in ragged sobs. Lia stepped forward, placing one hand on Althea’s cold, damp forehead, the other on Garrick’s heaving chest. The Queen flinched; the Knight froze.

The fractured core within Lia ignited. She drew not just on her own reservoir, but on the raw, bleeding emotions saturating the room: Althea’s shattered dignity and latent, terrified arousal; Garrick’s crushing guilt and twisted devotion; Martha’s corrosive fear. Lia wove them together with threads of her own dark, reforged essence – the wild magic from the stones, the King’s unmaking fire she’d survived. She pushed this amalgamated power into both Queen and Knight simultaneously.

It wasn't transformation like Martha’s. It was branding. Sealing.

Althea arched off the table with a silent scream, her eyes snapping open wide, pupils dilating until only a thin ring of icy blue remained. Garrick convulsed, dropping to his knees, a guttural cry tearing from his throat as invisible chains seemed to clamp around his soul. Lia felt the connection forge – cold, unbreakable filaments anchoring their deepest fears, their most shameful desires, their very life-force, directly to her fractured core. She owned their terror. She owned their hidden lusts. She owned them.

The surge was immense. Power flooded Lia, hotter and darker than before, mending cracks in her essence, solidifying her presence until the air around her seemed to vibrate. She felt Althea’s phantom heartbeat thudding against her palm, Garrick’s ragged breath echoing in her own lungs. Their wills were brittle twigs beneath hers.

Lia released them. Althea collapsed back onto the table, utterly still, her eyes vacant pools reflecting the void Lia carried. Garrick slumped forward onto his hands, retching dryly, his body wracked with tremors. Martha cowered, hugging herself, understanding dawning with horrifying clarity.

Lia flexed her fingers, feeling the new tethers thrumming with stolen vitality. She turned her gaze towards the grand archway leading back to the Rose Hall, and beyond it, the unseen heart of the palace where the King resided. The scent of his latent power, the power that had unmade her village, unmade her, teased her senses – a challenge, a promise of annihilation or apotheosis.

The void within her yawned, not sated, but sharpened. Refined. Ready. She smiled, a predator scenting blood on the wind. Valerian’s Crown would indeed bleed. Starting with its King.

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