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The Forbidden Fruit

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Angel is an 18 year old girl who loves sucking dick more than anything in the world. She walks in on her brother in the shower and discovers he has a huge cock.

Chapter 1: Caught in Steam: A Forbidden Feast

The bathroom air was thick and wet, clinging to her skin before she’d even turned on the tap. Angel pushed the door shut with her hip, the familiar squeak of the hinges muffled by the damp towel she’d thrown over the rod last night. Steam already curled from behind the half-drawn plastic shower curtain, painting the floral tiles in a blurry, wet sheen.

Someone was already in here.

She could hear the water—a steady, hissing patter—and the low, off-key hum of a voice she knew better than her own. Jason. Of course. Her brother’s morning routine was a sacred, immovable thing. She rolled her eyes, already turning to leave, her own plans for a quick, private moment dissolving.

But her glance, meant to be fleeting, snagged on a gap in the curtain.

It was just a sliver, a vertical stripe of the shower’s interior framed by yellowing plastic. He was facing away, rubbing shampoo into his short, dark hair. Water sluiced down the hard planes of his back and shoulders, the muscles in his arms flexing. And there, between his legs, framed by the spray and the steam, was his dick.

Angel froze.

It wasn’t just seeing it. It was the sheer, shocking size of it, thick and heavy even in its soft state, swinging slightly as he shifted his weight. A bolt of pure, undiluted heat shot through her, so intense it stole the breath from her lungs. Her mouth actually watered, a sudden, involuntary rush of saliva that made her swallow hard.

Her brain emptied of every thought except one, loud and singular: I want that in my mouth.

The urge was physical, a clawing in her gut. She’d had her share of experiences, had happily gone to her knees more times than she could count, chasing that perfect feeling of power and fullness. But this… this was different. This was Jason. Her brother. The guy who pinned her in headlocks and stole her fries and whose laugh could fill up a whole house.

He started to turn.

Panic, hot and slick, joined the desire churning in her stomach. If he saw her standing here, staring… She should go. Now. Her feet stayed rooted to the fuzzy bath mat.

He faced the spray, rinsing his hair, and now she had a full, unobstructed view. He was half-hard, maybe from the heat of the water, and the sight was almost obscene. Beautiful. Her fingers twitched at her sides.

The rational part of her mind, a tiny, fading voice, screamed that this was a line, bright and nuclear, that you just did not cross. It was drowned out by the pounding of her heart and the insistent, throbbing ache between her own legs. This wasn’t about love, not in the way people usually meant it. This was hunger. A deep, curious, and absolutely relentless want.

Without conscious decision, her hands went to the hem of her sleep shirt. She pulled it over her head in one swift motion, letting it fall silently to the damp floor. Her shorts and panties followed, a pool of fabric at her feet. The air, thick with steam, felt cool on her naked skin.

She watched him through the curtain, her breathing shallow. He was wiping water from his face, completely oblivious.

Here was the moment. Walk away, right now, and it was just a weird, secret moment she’d try to forget. Or…

She reached out, her fingers brushing the cold, wet plastic of the shower curtain. The sound of the water was deafening. She pulled it back slowly, the rings scraping along the rod.

The noise made him flinch. He spun around, hands coming up instinctively, water flying.

“What the—Angel? Jesus!”

He stared, shock wiping his face blank. He didn’t even move to cover himself. He just stood there, water cascading down his chest, his eyes wide with pure, uncomprehending disbelief.

She stepped over the lip of the tub, the hot spray instantly plastering her hair to her skull and shoulders. The space was suddenly, profoundly small. She could feel the heat radiating from his body.

“What are you doing?” he finally managed, his voice a rough bark over the water’s din.

Angel didn’t answer with words. Her gaze dropped, locked onto him. He was fully hard now, the sight even more formidable up close. The hunger yawned open inside her, wide and demanding.

She looked back up at his face, meeting his stunned eyes, and let her own intention show, raw and unfiltered. A challenge. A plea.

His breath hitched. He saw it. He understood.

“Angel,” he said again, but this time it wasn’t a question. It was a low, warning growl that didn’t match the way his body was reacting to her nakedness in the confined space.

It was a low, warning growl that didn’t match the way his body was reacting to her nakedness in the confined space.

“Just listen,” she said, the words tumbling out in a rush, mingling with the spray. Her heart was a frantic bird against her ribs. “I have this… thing. This fetish. It’s stupid, maybe, but it’s real. I love sucking cock. Like, really love it. And I walked in and I saw… Jason, I saw how big you are.”

She watched his face, saw the shock deepen, his jaw going slack. There was no taking it back now. The honesty was a floodgate she couldn’t close.

“Please,” she begged, her voice dropping to a whisper barely audible over the shower. “Let me get on my knees. Just let me worship it with my mouth. That’s all. It doesn’t have to mean anything else, it doesn’t have to go anywhere. I just… I need to taste it. I need to feel it stretch my throat. Please.”

He didn’t speak. He just stared at her, his expression unreadable—a chaos of confusion, shock, and a dark, dawning curiosity. The water plastered his lashes together. He was softening, the initial surge of stunned arousal fading under the weight of her insane confession.

His silence was permission. It had to be.

Slowly, never breaking eye contact, Angel sank down. The porcelain of the tub was hard and unyielding under her knees. The warm water beat against her back and shoulders. Now, at his eye level, she was face-to-face with him. He was mostly soft, but still impressively thick. She could smell him, clean skin and soap and something uniquely, musky male.

She leaned forward, her breath ghosting over him. She heard his sharp intake of air.

Then she opened her mouth and took the head of his cock inside.

It was soft, smooth. She swirled her tongue around the tip, tasting clean water and the subtle, salt-tinged flavor of him. Her eyes drifted closed in pure, focused concentration. She hummed softly, a vibration that traveled through her lips and into him.

And she felt it. A twitch. Then a pulse. A slow, inexorable swell of blood and life as he began to harden against her tongue. It was a victory, profound and primal. She applied gentle suction, her lips forming a tight seal, and felt him grow further, filling her mouth, stretching her jaws in the most delicious way. He was growing so fast, the weight and girth becoming substantial, real. She began to suck in earnest, a slow, steady rhythm, one hand coming up to cradle the base of him, feeling the hot, rigid length of him throbbing in tandem with her own pulse.

She began to suck in earnest, a slow, steady rhythm, one hand coming up to cradle the base of him, feeling the hot, rigid length of him throbbing in tandem with her own pulse.

This was her element. Her art.

She took her time, learning him. The shower’s spray was a warm, constant rain on her back as she bent to her work. She didn’t rush. She explored the full, thick length of him with her mouth, sliding her lips down until the head nudged the back of her throat. She relaxed, swallowed, and took him deeper, feeling a fierce pride at the way her body opened for him. She pulled back, lungs burning pleasantly, and dragged her tongue slowly up the thick vein along the underside, tracing its path from root to tip.

Jason made a choked sound above her, his hands slapping against the wet tiles on either side of her head for support.

Angel ignored it, lost in sensation. She swirled her tongue around the broad, smooth head, tasting the pre-cum that had begun to bead there. Salty. Clean. Him. She suckled gently, then with more pressure, humming again. She moved her mouth down once more, this time varying her rhythm—long, deep strokes followed by quick, fluttering sucks just below the head. One of her hands left his hip to cup his heavy balls, rolling the warm weight in her palm before she lowered her mouth to them. She took one, then the other, into the wet heat of her mouth, sucking gently, worshipping them with a tenderness that made his whole body shudder.

She was enthralled. By his size, yes—he was the biggest she’d ever had, stretching her lips and jaw in a constant, breathtaking ache—but more by his control. He didn’t cum. He just… held on. His breathing was ragged, his abdomen tight and quivering, but he stayed at that exquisite edge. It was a challenge she embraced with fervor.

She lost track of everything but the mechanics of pleasure. The steam. The slap of water. The taste of him. She used every technique she’d ever learned or instinctively discovered. The flat of her tongue along the shaft. The tip circling the frenulum. A twisting motion with her hand as she bobbed her head. Deep-throating until her eyes watered, then pulling back to let him glide over her tongue. She switched between passionate, noisy enthusiasm and slow, hypnotic devotion. She was relentless, driven by a pure, hungry joy that had nothing to do with obligation and everything to do with her own dark, glittering satisfaction.

Minutes bled together, marked only by the cooling of the water and the growing tremble in Jason’s legs.

For forty-five minutes, she served him with a single-minded passion that left no part of him ignored. Her knees protested the hard tub, her jaw began to ache in earnest, but she didn’t care. This was a feast, and she was starved.

Through it all, Jason watched her. The initial shock had melted into a dazed, heavy-lidded awe. He looked down at the top of her head, at her cheeks hollowed with effort, at the obscene, perfect glide of her lips on his skin. He saw the absolute focus in her face, the genuine delight in the curve of her brow. He heard the little pleased sounds she made in her throat.

He couldn’t believe it. Couldn’t reconcile the giggling sister who stole his hoodies with this sensual, commanding creature between his legs. Couldn’t process how much she clearly, visibly enjoyed it. Her skill was undeniable, intuitive, and it was unraveling him.

“Angel,” he grunted, the word strained and foreign.

She paused, releasing him with a soft pop, and looked up. Her lips were swollen, her face flushed from steam and effort. She didn’t speak. Just held his gaze, her eyes dark and questioning, before she leaned in again and took him back into the perfect, devastating heat of her mouth.

He threw his head back against the tiles with a thud. His fingers tangled in her wet hair, not pushing, not guiding—just holding on, as the last of his resistance washed down the drain with the soap suds. He was a passenger now, and she was driving them both straight off a cliff he hadn’t even seen coming.

He was a passenger now, and she was driving them both straight off a cliff he hadn’t even seen coming.

With a final, lingering suck, she released him. The sudden cool air on his wet skin made him gasp. Her small, slick hand immediately began stroking him, up and down, with a practiced, confident rhythm that kept him painfully, perfectly hard.

She looked up, water droplets clinging to her eyelashes. “So?” she asked, her voice husky but bright, almost conversational. “What’s the verdict? How are my skills?” She gave him a sly, swollen-lipped smile. “And how fucking awesome is it that I love this so much? I mean, I really, really love it.”

Jason could only stare. His mind was white noise. He managed a strangled, “Jesus, Angel.”

“That’s not a grade,” she teased, speeding her hand slightly. “But I’ll take it. How much longer can you last?”

The question, so blunt and expectant, shattered the last of his coherence. “I don’t know,” he breathed, his hips giving a tiny, involuntary thrust into her fist. “As long as you want, I guess.”

Her face lit up with pure, unadulterated joy. She giggled, a sound that was utterly incongruous with their position, and rested her cheek against his thigh for a second. “Seriously? That’s the best answer ever.” She turned her head, pressing a kiss to his hip bone. “I could suck you all night. I want to.”

Then her expression shifted, the playful glint softening into something darker, more urgent. Her stroking slowed. “But Jason… I want you to do it now. I don’t want to be in charge anymore. I want you to take it. Please.”

She leaned back, giving him space, her eyes wide and pleading. “Use my mouth. However you want. It’s yours. Just… just fucking use it. Fuck my throat like it’s a pussy. Make me deepthroat it. As hard as you want. Don’t hold back.”

She opened her mouth, tilting her head back in clear, total submission. A string of saliva already connected her lower lip to his shaft, glistening in the humid air.

“Come on,” she begged, the words slurring with desire. “Fuck my mouth. Just wreck it. I can take it. I want you to.”

She wasn’t just offering. She was demanding her own obliteration.

The permission—no, the invitation—unlocked something primal in him. The shock finally burned away, consumed by a furnace-blast of need. His hands, which had been braced against the tiles, came down. One tangled tightly in her soaked hair, not gently this time, gathering it into a firm grip at the base of her skull. The other hand guided himself, the broad, slick head of his cock bumping against her parted lips.

She let out a happy, muffled sound and relaxed her jaw.

He pushed forward.

It wasn’t the slow, worshipful glide from before. This was a claiming. He fed himself into her mouth, watching her lips stretch obscenely around his girth. He saw her eyes water instantly, but she stared up at him, blinking rapidly, her hands coming up to grasp weakly at his thighs as if to steady herself.

He pulled back until just the tip remained, then thrust in again, deeper. Her throat opened for him, a hot, tight, incredible pressure. A low groan ripped from his chest. He set a rhythm, shallow at first, then deeper with every stroke. The sounds were filthy, wet, and choking. Saliva dripped from where their bodies joined, running in rivulets down her chin, onto her neck, soaking the swell of her breasts.

“Yeah,” she gurgled around him, the vibration nearly making him lose it. “Just like that. Use it.”

He lost himself in the feeling, in the surreal, impossible reality of it. The tile was cold against his back, the water was now lukewarm, but her mouth was scorching. He focused on the visual: his sister, on her knees, face fucked with a growing, brutal intensity. Her makeup was gone, her features blurred by water and strain, but her eyes held a dizzy, ecstatic pride every time he met them.

He drove deeper, holding her head in place, testing her limit. She gagged, her body convulsing, but her hands just tightened on his legs, pulling him closer. She took every inch, her throat working desperately around him. The surrender was total. He was no longer a passenger. He was piloting the plunge over the edge, and she was begging for the impact.

The bathroom was a symphony of choked gasps, slapping skin, and the shower’s endless hiss.

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