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The Jedi's Playful Revenge

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Light-hearted Star wars story featuring Bultar Swan, Barriss Offee, Luminara Unduli, Rey Skywalker, among other female characters. Features spanking wedgies and other embarrassing pranks

Chapter 31: The Bet's Price

The transition from the Halls’ serene, hushed atmosphere to the vibrant pulse of the east courtyard was like stepping into another world. The golden afternoon light was a physical presence, thick and honeyed, warming the ancient stone flags beneath my soft new boots. Med-trees lining the arched walkways trembled with delicate, fragrant blossoms; a breeze sent a shower of pink and white petals dancing through the air like a lazy celebration.

And there, in the center of it all, was the celebration itself.

A cluster of Jedi stood beneath the shade of a great stone pillar, their laughter ringing out in clear, bright notes. I saw Bultar Swan, her tail flicking in a sharp, mischievous rhythm as she whispered something to Barriss Offee. Barriss’s smirk was a small, precise knife of amusement. Rey was there too, her hand clutching her side as if it ached from laughing, her grin wide and unguarded. Their eyes were already on me, sparkling with anticipation. This was an audience. They’d been waiting.

My gaze swept past them, searching.

I found her pacing between two blossoming trees, a streak of motion in the dappled light. Ahsoka’s blue and white montrals cut the air, her steps a tight, restless rhythm on the flagstones. She turned on her heel, and the sunlight caught the sharp angle of her cheekbone, the intent focus in her bright blue eyes. She saw me, and her pacing stopped dead.

A grin split her features. It wasn’t Rey’s warm smile or Aayla’s playful smirk. This was pure, competitive fire.

“There he is!” she called, her voice carrying across the courtyard. “The walking wounded! We were starting to think you’d dissolved into a puddle of bacta.”

I walked toward her, the eyes of the others tracking my every step. My body felt miraculously light, the deep ache replaced by a lingering tenderness that was almost pleasant. It made me feel hyper-aware of every movement. “Sorry to disappoint,” I said, stopping a few paces from her. “Doctor Nema’s pretty thorough. I’m all put back together.”

“Oh, I can see that,” Ahsoka said, her eyes doing a quick, assessing sweep of me. There was a challenge in her look, an old, familiar electricity crackling between us. It cut through the residual fog of the healing halls. This was our language.

She hooked her thumbs into her belt. “So. You’re mobile. You’re coherent. That means you’re fit to settle our business.”

I knew exactly what she meant. The memory surfaced, crisp and clear: a rainy afternoon in the training salle, the two of us breathless and sweating after a marathon spar. The wager had been impulsive, ridiculous. First one to land a clean, undeniable hit in our next match. Winner gets a servant for a full day. Loser is the servant. We’d shaken on it. Then the chaos of the refectory prank had swallowed everything, and in the aftermath of my punishment, I’d forgotten.

My stomach did a small, delicious flip. “That old thing? You’re kidding. After the morning I’ve had, you want to call in a bet?”

Her grin widened. “The bet didn’t have an expiration date. And seeing as you’re freshly… refurbished,” she said, the word dripping with implication, “I’d say you’re in perfect condition to lose.”

“Who says I’ll lose?” I shot back, falling into the rhythm easily. The brattiness was a reflex, a comfortable armor. “I’m feeling pretty agile.”

“Are you.” It wasn’t a question. It was a statement loaded with intent.

Her hand twitched, a barely perceptible flick of her wrist.

The Force hit me like a silent, solid wave. It wasn’t a violent push, but a sudden, insistent shove against my chest. My feet, still finding their full connection to the ground, skidded on the smooth stone. I stumbled backwards, arms pinwheeling for a balance that was already gone.

With a splash that echoed loudly in the courtyard, I landed squarely in the ornamental fountain behind me.

Cool water engulfed me. I came up sputtering, petals clinging to my hair and tunic. The laughter from the pillar was immediate and full-throated. I blinked water from my eyes. Ahsoka stood at the fountain’s edge, looking down at me, one hand resting on her hip.

“A clean, undeniable hit,” she declared, her voice ringing with triumph. “Force-assisted, but a hit is a hit. You’re down.I’m up. By my count, that makes me the winner by default.”

I treaded water, the shock of the cool plunge giving way to a rising, giddy indignation. “That was a cheap shot! We didn’t even start the match!”

“You said ‘go,’” she shrugged, her lekku bouncing with the motion. “I interpreted generously.” She extended a hand. “Now, are you going to wallow in there, or are you going to honor our deal?”

I looked at her hand. I looked at the gathered Jedi, their faces alight with glee. Rey gave me an encouraging nod, as if I were accepting a medal. This was the game. This was always the game. I took Ahsoka’ somewhat-rough hand.

She hauled me out of the fountain with a grunt. Water streamed from my clothes, pooling at my feet on the flagstones. I stood there, dripping, the afternoon sun already warming my soaked back.

“A deal’s a deal,” I said, shaking my head like a wet dog. A spray of droplets caught the light.

“Good boy,” Ahsoka said. The words were patronizing, but her eyes held that spark of shared conspiracy. Then she reached to her belt. Her fingers closed around a loop of supple, dark leather. She pulled it free.

It was a collar. Simple, well-made, with a sturdy metal ring at the front. It looked like something for a working animal, not decorative, but functional.

My breath hitched.

“For official purposes,” she said, her voice dropping to a tone meant only for me, though everyone could hear. “So there’s no confusion about the chain of command.”

She stepped close. The scent of her, leather and sunshine and clean sweat, cut through the smell of fountain water and wet cloth. She looped the collar around my neck. The leather was cool and smooth against my skin. I held still as she fastened the buckle at the back, the click of the clasp absurdly loud in my ears. It sat snug, not tight, but present.A undeniable weight.

She gave the ring at the front a little tug, a testing pull. A jolt, sharp and bright, raced down my spine. It had nothing to do with pain.

“Perfect,” she murmured. Then, louder, to the courtyard: “Looks like I’ve acquired some new property! Anyone object?”

A chorus of cheers and catcalls answered her. Bultar whistled. Barriss offered a slow, mocking clap.

“Right,” Ahsoka said, turning on her heel. She didn’t look back. “Follow.”

She strode toward the archway that led back into the temple’s main corridors. I followed. The wet squelch of my boots echoed my steps. The collar’s weight was a constant, gentle pressure. People we passed in the halls did double-takes. A Rodian Padawan choked on his drink. A elderly Jedi Master simply raised a brow, a faint smile on his lips. The Temple hummed around us, indifferent to my damp, collared state.

She led me not to some secluded chamber, but straight to the main training hall—the very site of my morning’s ordeal. The space was busy now, alive with the grunts and hums of afternoon practice. Jedi moved through forms, Droids reset targets, the air thrumming with expended energy.

Ahsoka stopped just inside the entrance, in full view of perhaps two dozen people. She turned to face me. Her expression was one of serene ownership.

“Kneel,” she said, her voice calm and clear.

A fresh wave of heat, unrelated to the sun, washed over me. The eyes of the room were turning toward us, curiosity shifting to amusement. I lowered myself slowly onto the hard floor, the dampness of my trousers seeping through instantly. The position made the collar feel more significant, orienting me toward her.

“Louder, please,” Ahsoka instructed, crossing her arms. “For the room.”

I took a breath. The words were absurd, humiliating, electrifying. I projected my voice, letting it carry over the sounds of practice. “My name is Charlie. For the next twenty-four standard hours, I am the property of Padawan Ahsoka Tano. I am here to serve.”

Silence fell for a beat, broken only by the distant buzz of a lightsaber. Then the room erupted. Laughter, hoots, a few cries of “Good luck, kid!” and “Better you than me, Tano!”

Ahsoka’s hand came to rest on top of my damp head. She patted it twice, the gesture utterly patronizing and dripping with satisfaction. Her fingers scratched lightly at my scalp, a mockery of affection.

“See?” she said, her voice sweet with victory. “Was that so hard?”

She left her hand there, a claim stamped firmly in place, as the crowd’s laughter washed over us.The game was on. And I was right where I secretly, desperately wanted to be: caught.

Her hand remained, a warm, heavy weight amidst the drying coolness of my hair. The laughter of the training hall washed over me, a buzzing wave of approval and amusement that sharpened my isolation in the middle of it. I was a spectacle, a statue of surrender, and the thrill of it was a live wire humming under my skin.

“Up,” Ahsoka commanded, her voice losing its theatrical ring and settling into something more casual, more real. The hand left my head. I rose, my knees protesting the hard floor, the damp linen of my trousers sticking unpleasantly to my thighs. She surveyed me, head tilted, a proprietor inspecting recently acquired, and slightly water-damaged, goods. “First order of business is getting you out of those wet things. You’re dripping on the floor.”

“Wouldn’t want to inconvenience the floor,” I muttered, swiping a trickle of water from my temple.

She heard me.A quick, sharp grin flashed.“Attitude already? The deal was for a servant, not a sarcastic gnat.” She turned and began walking, not checking to see if I followed.The implicit understanding that I would was more powerful than any tug on the collar. I fell into step behind her, my sodden boots making squelching echoes against her clean, firm strides.We exited the training hall, but not into the main thoroughfares. Instead, she led me down a narrower, utilitarian corridor used by maintenance droids. The lights were lower here, the air smelling of polish and ion discharge. It felt private, a world away from the public courtyard and the crowded hall. The dynamic shifted in the quiet; the performance was over, but the rules remained.She stopped before an unmarked door and keyed open a simple lock code. It hissed open to reveal a small, personal sparring chamber, not much larger than a storage closet. Mats lined the floor, and a single shelf held spare training tunics, towels, and a water basin. This was a knight’s private prep room, a space of solitude before facing the galaxy.

“In,” she said, gesturing.I stepped inside. The door shut behind us with a soft, definitive thud.The sound sealed us in. The air was still, cool, and carried a faint hint of her scent—the ozone of lightsaber practice, clean linen, and something uniquely Ahsoka.

She leaned back against the door, crossing her arms.“Strip.Everything’s wet. You can’t serve me while smelling like a stagnant pond.” Her tone was matter-of-fact, almost bored, but her blue eyes were watchful, tracking my every reaction.A challenge, clean and simple. The privacy of the room magnified it. There was no crowd to play to now, no performance except the one between us. I held her gaze for a beat, then reached for the buckle at the back of the collar.The leather was already warmer from my skin.

“The collar stays,” she said, her voice leaving no room for debate. “That doesn’t come off until I say it does.Everything else.”

A slow, deliberate smile spread across my face. I was brattiness incarnate. “You just want an excuse to see the masterpiece your friend Doctor Nema fixed.”

Ahsoka snorted.“Please. I’ve seen more interesting topographical maps on dusty backwater planets.” But she didn’t look away.

I pulled the soaked tunic over my head, the movement making the collar ride up against my jaw. The cool air hit my skin, raising goosebumps.I dropped the tunic to the mat with a wet plop. Next were the boots, each one a struggle with wet socks. Finally, I hooked my thumbs into the waistband of the simple grey leggings and pushed them down, stepping out of the damp pile.

I stood before her, the chill of the room a sharp contrast to the heat in my face. The sense of exposure was total, absolute. I was just Charlie, pale and lanky and marked, the fading bruises a watercolor wash of purples and yellows across my backside and thighs. The “masterpiece” was on full display.

Ahsoka’s eyes didn’t flicker with pity or glee.They conducted a slow, thorough inspection, analytical and detached. She pushed off from the door and walked a slow circle around me.Her footsteps were silent on the mat. I felt her gaze like a physical touch tracing the borders of each bruise, assessing the healing skin.

“Nema does good work,” she commented from behind me.Her voice was closer now. “The patterning’s almost gone.Just deep-tissue blooms left.” A pause. Then, a single, dry finger pressed gently against a particularly vivid bloom on the crest of my right cheek. The touch was clinical, testing the resilience of the tissue. A shockwave of sensation, neither pure pain nor pure pleasure, radiated out from that point.I inhaled sharply.

“Sensitive?” she asked, her voice low near my ear.

“Insightful,” I breathed out, staring straight ahead at the blank wall.Her finger lifted.She completed her circle, coming to stand in front of me again. Her expression was unreadable.“You’re a mess. Clean up.” She nodded toward the shelf.“Towels.Then put on a dry training tunic from the shelf. The grey one. It’ll be big, but it’ll do.”

She was all business again, the moment of intimate inspection severed. I fetched a towel, its rough weave a welcome abrasion against my skin as I dried off.The grey tunic was indeed oversized, the fabric soft from repeated washing. It fell to mid-thigh on me, the sleeves dangling past my fingertips. I felt absurd and, somehow, more exposed than when I was naked. The tunic was a uniform of servitude, the collar its definitive insignia.I rolled the sleeves up. “Now what, Master?”

The title, deliberately chosen, hung in the air.Her eyes narrowed, recognizing the bait. She smiled, a predator’s smile.“Now, we see how well you follow instructions. Kneel again.”

I did, the mat firm beneath my knees. She walked over to the small basin, filled a cup with cool water, and brought it back. She placed it on the floor in front of me.Then she sat on a low bench against the wall, stretching out her legs, crossing her ankles. She looked at the cup, then at me.

“You may bring me a drink,” she said, her tone regal and absurd.This was the game within the game. The petty power play, the reduction to basic, ceremonial acts.The humiliation was in its trivial simplicity. A flicker of resistance, of genuine annoyance, sparked. I quashed it, feeding the secret, hungry part of me that craved this precise degradation.

I picked up the cup with both hands, the water sloshing gently. I shuffled on my knees across the few feet of mat that separated us, the rough texture biting.I stopped before her extended legs and lifted the cup, presenting it.

She didn’t take it immediately. She looked at my hands, at the earnest offering, and then finally into my eyes.Her gaze was a locked door. “You learn quickly,” she conceded, no warmth in the words.She took the cup, her fingers brushing mine. She drank slowly, watching me over the rim the entire time.She drained it and handed the empty vessel back. “Again.”

We repeated the ritual twice more.Each kneeling journey felt longer, more deliberate. The room’s silence was filled with the sound of my knees on the mat, her swallowing, the cup changing hands. On the third return, as I placed the empty cup on the floor, she shifted.

She uncrossed her ankles and planted her boots firmly on the mat on either side of my knees. I was kneeling in the space framed by her legs, a cage of muscle and intent.The air changed, charged and close.

“Tell me,” she said, her voice a low, conspiratorial murmur. “When Rey was holding you this morning… when Aayla was getting you dressed… did you like it?”

The question was a punch to the solar plexus, blunt and unexpected. It bypassed all the role-play, cutting straight to the raw, shameful core of me.She saw everything. She always had.I couldn’t lie.Not here, not like this. “Yes,” I said, the word barely audible.“And when I pushed you into the fountain? When I put this on you?” Her finger tapped the metal ring of my collar.It rang with a tiny, clear note.

“Yes.”

She leaned forward, her elbows on her knees, her face now close to mine. Her blue eyes were endless. “And kneeling here, fetching water like a well-trained nexu?”

A dry, desperate laugh escaped me. “You know I do.”

“I know.” She didn’t move back.“But I wanted to hear you say it.Out loud. To me.” She let that settle, the confession hanging in the space between our breaths. “That’s the real prize, isn’t it?Not the servitude.The acknowledgment.”

She saw me. Truly saw me.The understanding was more intimate than any touch.My throat tightened.

“Get up,” she said, her voice softening a fraction.She stood, offering a hand. I took it, and she pulled me to my feet.My knees ached.She was still holding my hand. She turned it over, examining my palm as if reading a destiny there. Her thumb traced a line across it.

“The problem with brats who like being punished,” she said, not looking up, “is that it takes the fun out of punishing them. It just becomes… giving them what they want.” She finally met my eyes again, a new, more dangerous glint in hers. “So we need to change the game.Again.”

She released my hand and moved back to the shelf. She pulled down a small, flat box I hadn’t noticed before. It wasn’t Temple-issue. She opened it and withdrew two objects: a slim, cylindrical datapen, and a small, neutral-colored adhesive patch.

“You’re going to wear this,” she said, holding up the patch.“It’s a biometric monitor.Very sensitive. It’ll track your galvanic skin response, your heart rate, your core temperature.” A wicked smile played on her lips. “It tells me what you’re feeling.Exactly. No lies, no bravado, no silent suffering.”

My mouth went dry.This was a level of exposure I hadn’t imagined.

“And this,” she lifted the datapen, “is linked to it. I’ll have the readout. I’ll know, in real time, what bores you, what excites you, what terrifies you, what… arouses you.” She stepped close again. “The rules are simple.You serve me for the next twenty-four hours. You do everything I ask, without complaint. And I,” she said, peeling the backing from the adhesive patch, “I will learn you. I will find the lines between what you think you want and what actually makes you squirm.”

She reached out and pressed the patch high on the inside of my thigh, where the tunic barely covered.The adhesive was cool, then instantly warm against my skin. A tiny, steady green light on its surface began to pulse.“There,” she whispered. “Now we’re connected.”

She tapped a command into the datapen. Its screen lit up, a stream of data I couldn’t decipher scrolling past. Her eyes flickered from the screen to my face, reading me in two different languages at once.A slow, satisfied hum escaped her.

“Interesting,” she said, her gaze locking onto mine.“Your heart rate just jumped eighteen percent. Right now.”

She knew. She could see the spike her proximity, her words, her control, had caused.The game had become infinitely more complex, and infinitely more truthful.The collar was just a symbol. This was the real leash.

“Come on, servant,” she said, turning toward the door, the datapen held loosely in her hand like a conductor’s baton. “We have a whole Temple to bother. And I want to see what happens to these numbers when I make you polish my lightsabers in front of everyone with your tongue.”

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