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The Listening Bride

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Eighteen-year-old Soleil Carter is a beautiful Black woman with light caramel skin, long dark chocolate curls, honey-brown eyes, full lips, and a curvy figure with a tiny waist. Gentle, feminine, nurturing, and an incredible cook and homemaker, Soleil believes she’s married to Marcus Davenport, a wealthy, spoiled man whose secluded Louisiana property borders the legendary Baptreaux swamplands. Behind closed doors, Marcus is controlling, unfaithful, cruel, and violently abusive, constantly criticizing Soleil until she’s become quiet, numb, and accustomed to hiding bruises. What Soleil doesn’t know is that Marcus never filed their marriage papers—legally, she was never his wife. Twenty-seven-year-old Kordell Baptreaux is the feared heir to Louisiana’s oldest and wealthiest Black family. Standing 6’6” with dark skin, broad tattooed shoulders, slanted obsidian eyes, a groomed beard, and shoulder-length locs decorated in gold, Kordell is quiet, thuggish, dominant, deeply Christian, and fiercely protective. His family possesses The Listening, a sacred bond allowing them to hear their ancestral land—and the land to answer them. Every Baptreaux is also given their One, the person God created specifically for them. When a devastating hurricane makes much of Baptreaux land temporarily unlivable, an ancient deed allows hundreds of Baptreauxs to move onto Marcus’s property, land gifted to his ancestor generations ago under the condition that the family could reclaim temporary use whenever their own land became unsafe. Granny, Big Papa, and Kordell move into the main house while the rest spread across the massive property. Kordell has never met Soleil, but the instant he sees her, The Listening erupts around him. He knows immediately—she is his One. The problem? She introduces herself as Marcus’s wife. Bound by his faith and unwilling to disrespect what he believes is a marriage, Kordell holds himself back while being forced to watch Soleil’s reality slowly reveal itself. She apologizes constantly, hides bruises, flinches at sudden movements, waits on Marcus hand and foot, and barely reacts when the Baptreauxs praise the phenomenal cooking her husband constantly insults. The family grows protective of her while Marcus becomes increasingly jealous, and every new bruise pushes Kordell closer to losing control. Then, just as the Baptreaux land is nearly restored, their attorney uncovers the truth: Marcus never filed the marriage license. Soleil was never legally his wife.

Chapter 1: The Arrival of Uninvited Guests

The rain didn’t fall so much as it was hurled, sideways, in thick sheets that turned the world into a roaring, gray-green fury. For three days, the hurricane sat on the Baptreaux land, the ancient cypress trees bowing and screaming in the wind. Inside the big house, the family waited, a generator humming like a trapped beast in the pantry. Kordell stood at the window, his palm flat against the vibrating glass. The Listening was a dull roar in his blood, the land’s pain echoing his own restless tension.

When it finally passed, the silence was heavier than the noise had been.

They filed out into a world remade. The familiar gravel drive was a river of mud and scattered limbs. One of the old guest cabins had a live oak laid across its roof like a careless hand. The fence line was down for a quarter mile. The air smelled of wet pine, torn earth, and danger.

Big Papa Baptreaux walked the perimeter, his silver locs damp, his face unreadable. He stopped beside Kordell, both men looking at the ruined cabin. “Land’s hurt,” Big Papa said, his voice a low rumble. “She’ll heal, but not with us stomping on her while she does. We need to let her breathe.”

Kordell nodded once. He’d already heard it—the land’s quiet, pained request for stillness.

Big Papa turned, clasping his hands behind his back. “Pack,” he said to the family gathered behind him. His word was quiet but it cut through the murmurs. “We’re going to the Davenport place for a spell.”

Granny, her own white locs piled high, slipped her hand into her husband’s. “I’ll call,” she said, though no one had asked. She already knew what he needed.

An hour later, Big Papa stood on the porch, phone to his ear, his charm turned on like a bright, warm light. “Marcus, my boy,” he said, his voice smooth as aged whiskey. “We’ve had a bit of a disagreement with a hurricane over here. Wondering if we might impose on that empty tenant row of yours for a few weeks, just ’til we can get our feet back under us.” He listened, nodding. “Your daddy would’ve done the same for mine. I appreciate it, son. We’ll be quiet as church mice.”

He hung up. The charming light snapped off. His eyes met Kordell’s. “We go in two hours. He said yes.”

The kitchen at Davenport Manor was all soft, morning light and the scent of lemon polish. Soleil was on her knees, a bucket of soapy water beside her, scrubbing at a scuff on the wide-plank oak floor. Her back ached. The faded cotton of her dress was damp with sweat and suds.

In his study, Marcus’s voice, muffled but melodious, floated down the hall. “—of course, Mr. Baptreaux. Think nothing of it. It’s what neighbors do.” His laugh was a perfect, generous sound. “We’ll be happy to have you. Absolutely.”

She concentrated on the circular motion of her hand, the rhythmic squeak of the brush. Please let him stay in a good mood, she prayed silently. Please.

The study door opened. His footsteps, sharp and precise on the hardwood, came toward the kitchen. She kept her head down, her scrubbing a little more focused. He stopped in the doorway.

The silence was thick.

“Look at me.”

She lifted her head. He leaned against the doorframe, phone still in hand, his handsome face now devoid of any warmth from the call. His dark eyes were flat, cold.

“A bunch of backwoods Baptreauxs are moving onto the west tenant row,” he said, his voice a low wire. “Hurricane messed up their swamp. They’ll be here a few weeks.”

Soleil nodded slowly, waiting.

“You will cook for them. You will be polite. You will be invisible.” He took a step into the kitchen. “But if you so much as look at one of them wrong, if you give that old man or his thug grandson a single reason to think you’re anything but my perfectly content wife, I will make the rest of your life a living hell. Do you understand me?”

“Yes, Marcus.”

“What was that?”

She cleared her throat. “Yes, Marcus. I understand.”

“Good.” He tossed his phone onto the counter. It skittered near her bucket. “Start cooking. I want them fed. I want them grateful. I want them gone as soon as possible.”

He left. She heard the study door lock.

She let out a breath she didn’t know she was holding. Then she moved. She rose, emptied her bucket, washed her hands, and tied on a fresh apron. The numbness settled over her like a familiar shroud. She pulled pots from cabinets, gathered onions, bell peppers, celery. Her knife moved in a steady, automatic rhythm on the cutting board. The holy trinity for the gumbo. She browned the flour for the roux, standing over the pot as it turned from pale gold to a deep, nutty brown, the rich smell anchoring her in the task.

For hours, the kitchen transformed into a haven of simmering magic. A massive pot of chicken and sausage gumbo bubbled gently. A skillet of cornbread cooled on the stove. She battered and fried chicken until her arms were speckled with hot oil. She washed and chopped collard greens, seasoning them with smoked turkey. The feast grew, a tangible barrier between her and Marcus’s anger, a language of care she could still speak.

The rumble started late in the afternoon. Not one engine, but many—a low, rolling thunder of trucks and SUVs coming down the long gravel drive.

Marcus appeared, now in a crisp linen shirt, his smile already plastered on. “They’re here. Turn the burners to low. Come to the porch. Smile.”

She did as she was told, wiping her hands on her apron before following him out.

The vehicles kept coming, spilling people onto the gravel like a sudden, vibrant migration. Kids tumbled out of backseats, laughing and immediately chasing a dog. Women carried still-warm casseroles and laundry baskets full of linens. Men hauled toolboxes and duffle bags. It was organized chaos, a whole community arriving all at once.

An older man with a crown of stunning silver dreads stood in the center, directing with a subtle point of a finger or a nod. He was tall, powerful in a way that had nothing to do with muscle, his face calm and watchful. Beside him stood an older woman, regal and beautiful with long white locs piled high, her eyes scanning the house and land with a gentle, knowing intensity.

Marcus moved forward, his hand extended. “Mr. Baptreaux. Welcome.”

“Big Papa, please,” the older man said, shaking his hand. His voice was deep, warm. “We appreciate this, Marcus. This is my wife, Doretha. Granny to most.”

“A pleasure,” Marcus said, oozing charm. “The row is all ready for you. Keys in the doors.”

“We’ll get settled and out of your way directly,” Big Papa said. His eyes, sharp and assessing, drifted past Marcus and found Soleil on the porch steps. They lingered for a half-second, softening at the edges, before moving back to Marcus.

The crowd began to disperse, families heading toward the line of small, tidy cottages in the distance. But the older couple, and one other, remained.

He had stepped out of the last truck, unfolding himself slowly. He was immense, a good head taller than any other man there. His skin was the color of dark earth, his shoulders impossibly broad under a simple black t-shirt, intricate tattoos winding down his powerful arms. His hair was long, thick locs, some tipped in dull gold, pulled back from a face that was all hard lines and severe beauty. He didn’t join the others. He just stood by the truck door, his slanted obsidian eyes sweeping the property—the house, the land, the porch—until they landed on her.

Soleil felt the air vanish from her lungs.

His gaze wasn’t like Marcus’s, which stripped and assessed. It wasn’t leering. It was… consuming. It held her, motionless, as if he was listening to something no one else could hear. A faint, almost imperceptible tremor went through him. He didn’t smile.

“And this is my grandson, Kordell,” Big Papa said, noticing where the young man’s attention had fixed.

Kordell’s eyes finally broke from hers to acknowledge Marcus with a nod so slight it was barely there. Then they were back on her.

Marcus’s hand closed around Soleil’s upper arm, possessive and tight. He pulled her forward. “This is Soleil. My wife.”

The word ‘wife’ hung in the air. Kordell didn’t react to it. He just looked at her, really looked, seeing the faded bruise on her wrist partially hidden by her sleeve, the careful emptiness in her eyes, the way she held herself perfectly still. He saw it all.

He inclined his head, just once. “Soleil,” he said. His voice was low, a gravelly rumble that seemed to travel up through the porch boards and into the soles of her feet.

It was the first time anyone had ever said her name like it was a whole prayer.

The silence that followed his word stretched, thin and taut, until Granny Baptreaux stepped forward, her smile like a cool hand on a fevered brow. “Well, Soleil,” she said, her voice a melody of warmth and gravel. “That’s a name that holds light. It suits you, child.”

Soleil felt her cheeks heat, a unfamiliar sensation. She couldn’t remember the last time she’d blushed. “Thank you, ma’am.”

“Granny. Everybody calls me Granny.” She walked up the porch steps, not waiting for an invitation, and took Soleil’s hands in hers. Her touch was dry, gentle, and her eyes, a deep knowing brown, searched Soleil’s face. She didn’t comment on the fading yellow near Soleil’s hairline. She just gave her hands a soft squeeze. “Something smells like heaven itself in this house. You been cooking all day for this rowdy bunch?”

“Yes, ma— Granny.”

“Bless your heart.” Granny turned to Marcus, her smile never slipping but somehow becoming less warm. “Marcus, honey, our place is a mess of wet timber and mud. Big Papa and I, and Kordell here, we were hoping you might spare a corner of this big old house for a night or two, just ‘til we can get the main cabin aired out and safe. We don’t want to be a burden on your… hospitality.”

The request landed in the space between them. Marcus’s jaw tightened almost imperceptibly. Saying no to Big Papa Baptreaux was not an option, not in this town, not on land that bordered his. His charm flickered back on, a forced grin. “Of course! We have plenty of room. The east wing is all made up. Soleil, show them, would you?”

He said it like she was staff. Maybe she was.

“I’d be happy to,” she murmured, her eyes dropping from Granny’s penetrating gaze.

“Let me help you bring in the food,” Big Papa said, his arm sweeping toward the trucks. “Boys! Bring the tables and the benches. We’ll eat right here on the porch. Give this young lady’s kitchen a rest.”

It wasn’t a suggestion. Baptreaux men, young and old, began unloading folding tables and long benches from a truck bed, setting them up under the wide porch roof with a practiced, quiet efficiency. They moved around Marcus as if he were a ghost, their respect directed solely at Big Papa and, Soleil noticed, at Kordell, who still hadn’t moved from his spot by the truck.

He was watching the men work, then his eyes would slide back to her, a constant, simmering attention that made the tiny hairs on her arms stand up. It wasn’t fear. It was something else, something that felt like the first sip of water after a long thirst.

The next hour was a blur of motion that Soleil navigated on instinct. She directed the placement of steaming pots and bowls on the long tables. Granny and the Baptreaux women brought out their own contributions—potato salad, pickled okra, a massive peach cobbler—blending seamlessly with Soleil’s feast. The air grew thick with the layered scents of spices, fried chicken, and sweet perfume.

Children laughed and darted between the legs of adults. Men talked in low tones about the storm damage, about repairs. It was a noise so full of life it seemed to press against the silent, polished walls of Davenport Manor, threatening to crack them.

Marcus circulated with a glass of sweet tea, the perfect host, but his laughter was a beat too high. He watched, eyes narrowed, as Big Papa settled at the head of a table and pulled out a chair for Granny. He watched as Kordell finally moved, not to sit, but to walk toward Soleil where she stood nervously by the screen door.

“Need anything else from the kitchen?” His voice was close, that same low rumble.

“No. I think… I think everything is out.”

He nodded. His eyes dipped to her hands, clenched in the fabric of her apron. “You cooked all this. By yourself.”

It wasn’t a question. She just nodded.

“It’s…” He seemed to search for a word, his brow furrowing slightly. “A gift.” He said it with a finality that left no room for argument. Then he turned and went to sit beside Big Papa, leaving her breathless.

The meal began. Plates were passed, filled, praises sung. “Soleil, this gumbo is a revelation,” Big Papa boomed, taking a second helping. “Got your roux just right.”

“Best cornbread I’ve ever tasted, baby,” Granny added, patting the empty seat next to her. “Now you come sit down here and eat something yourself. You worked harder than anybody.”

The invitation was a lifeline and a trap. Sitting with them meant sitting under Marcus’s watchful, jealous gaze. But refusing Granny was unthinkable. Soleil slid into the chair, her body stiff.

“So, tell me about yourself, Sunshine,” Big Papa said, using a name that made her heart squeeze. “Where’s your people from?”

She kept her eyes on her plate. “I don’t really have people, sir. It’s… just me.”

“And Marcus,” Marcus added from two seats down, his smile tight.

“And Marcus,” she echoed softly.

Kordell, who had been eating with a single-minded focus, looked up. “You cook like you had a teacher. A good one.”

The observation was so sharp it startled her. “My… my mama. Before she passed.”

Granny nodded slowly. “She passed that love on to you. It’s in every bite.” She leaned closer, her voice dropping just for Soleil. “That kind of love doesn’t come from a numb heart. It’s still beating in there, girl. I can taste it.”

Tears, sudden and shocking, pricked at the corners of Soleil’s eyes. She blinked them back fiercely, focusing on cutting a piece of chicken that suddenly felt like ash in her mouth. No one had spoken about her mother in years. No one had ever suggested that anything of hers, especially love, could still be alive inside her.

The conversation flowed around her, Baptreaux family stories of the swamp, of storms past, of foolish things uncles had done. It was easy. It was normal. For a moment, tucked between Granny’s gentle questions and Big Papa’s rumbling laugh, she almost felt like she belonged at the table.

Then she felt Marcus’s stare. It was a cold spike through the warmth. She glanced up. He was watching her, then his eyes shifted to Kordell, who was listening to a cousin’s story but whose hand, resting on the table, was curled into a loose fist. Marcus’s gaze lingered on that fist, on the dark ink twining over the knuckles, and a flash of pure, unadulterated fear crossed his face before he masked it with a sip of tea.

Kordell felt the look. His head turned, slowly, and his obsidian eyes met Marcus’s. He didn’t glare. He didn’t challenge. He just looked, his expression utterly blank, as if he was seeing something small and insignificant. Marcus was the first to look away, coughing slightly and turning to answer a question from Big Papa.

The rest of the meal passed in a wave of fullness and fading light. Fireflies began to wink in the trees beyond the porch. Stomachs were full, laughter grew drowsy. As people began to clear plates, Granny stood.

“Soleil, Sunshine, you come show me where those linens are for our beds. Let these menfolk clean up this mess.”

It was a command wrapped in kindness. Soleil led her into the cool, dark house, through the grand hallway to the linen closet. As Soleil pulled out sheets and towels, Granny closed the closet door softly behind them.

The older woman leaned back against it, the earthy warmth of her giving way to something more solemn. She took Soleil’s face in both her hands, her touch firm and undeniable.

“Child,” Granny whispered, her eyes boring into Soleil’s. “You listen to me. That boy out there, my Kordell? The land woke him up when he saw you. You understand what I’m saying? The land spoke. It don’t do that for just anybody.”

Soleil’s breath caught. She didn’t understand, not really, but the certainty in Granny’s voice vibrated in her very bones.

Granny’s thumbs stroked her cheeks. “Something’s coming. A change so big it’s gonna feel like the ground shakin’. You hold on, you hear? You hold onto that light inside you. Your name ain’t no accident.” She dropped her hands, her face softening back into its gentle lines. “Now, let’s get these sheets to those dusty old men.”

Out on the porch, the tables were almost cleared. Kordell was stacking chairs, his movements efficient and powerful. As Soleil and Granny reappeared, he stopped, his gaze locking onto Soleil once more. This time, he didn’t just look. He listened. She saw his head tilt, just a fraction, as if catching a distant song.

Big Papa clapped Marcus on the shoulder, a gesture that looked friendly but held Marcus in place. “We’re grateful for your roof, Marcus. We’ll be out of your way early. Come on, boy. Let’s get some sleep.”

Kordell obeyed, following his grandparents into the house. As he passed Soleil in the doorway, he didn’t speak. But his hand, broad and warm, brushed against the back of hers where it hung at her side. It was an accident. It wasn’t.

The contact was less than a second, but it sent a current through her so intense her knees nearly buckled. It wasn’t a spark. It was a completion, a circuit she hadn’t known was open suddenly slamming shut.

Then he was gone, down the hall, his locs swaying against his broad back.

Marcus waited until the door to the east wing closed. He walked up to Soleil, his face a mask of cold fury in the dim porch light. He didn’t hit her. He didn’t need to. His voice was a venomous whisper.

“You made a fool of me. Smiling and blushing like some stupid girl.”

“I didn’t—”

“Don’t.” He grabbed her wrist, the same one Kordell had seen the bruise on, and squeezed, his fingers digging into the tender flesh. “You belong to me. Remember that. Now go clean this trash off my porch. Every last crumb.”

He released her and strode into the house, leaving her alone in the humid dark.

She stood there, the ghost of Kordell’s touch on one hand, the fresh, throbbing pain of Marcus’s grip on the other. In the silent swamp beyond the property line, a chorus of frogs began to sing, a wild, pulsing sound that seemed to echo the frantic beat of her heart. She looked down at her wrists, one marked, one clean, and for the first time, the numbness didn’t quite cover the ache. Something had cracked open. And through the crack, a dangerous, fragile hope now bled, as real and as terrifying as the man sleeping under her roof.

And through the crack, a dangerous, fragile hope now bled, as real and as terrifying as the man sleeping under her roof.

The night insects throbbed outside, a sound so loud it felt like it was inside her skull. Soleil moved through the dark kitchen, putting away the last of the clean dishes. Her wrist ached where Marcus had gripped it, a dull, familiar pulse. She rubbed it absently, the motion as ingrained as breathing.

A floorboard creaked overhead. She froze, head tilted upward, listening. It was just the old house settling, or someone shifting in bed. Probably him. He’d be waiting, expecting her to come up. The thought was a cold stone in her stomach.

She finished wiping the counters, each stroke methodical, putting the world back in its proper, silent order. The kitchen was hers again, but it felt different now. The air still held the ghost of gumbo and laughter, the imprint of Kordell Baptreaux’s silent presence by the truck. She could still feel the brush of his hand, a brand on her skin.

“What are you doing down here?”

His voice came from the doorway, flat and cold. She hadn’t heard him come down. She jumped, her shoulder hitting the cabinet. “Sorry. I was just finishing up.”

Marcus stood in the shadow of the hall, backlit by the weak nightlight in the foyer. He was in his silk pajama pants, bare-chested. “You left a spoon on the porch. One of their kids could have tripped. It makes us look sloppy.”

“I’ll get it.”

“I already did.” He held up a single, gleaming teaspoon. He walked into the kitchen, his bare feet silent on the wood. He placed the spoon on the island counter with a sharp click. “You were too busy making eyes at that swamp rat to do your job properly.”

Her heart hammered against her ribs. “I wasn’t. I didn’t.”

“Don’t lie to me.” He closed the distance between them, not quickly, but with a slow, predatory grace. “I saw you. Blushing when he spoke to you. Letting that old woman paw at you. Sitting with them like you were part of their little backwoods family.” He stopped inches from her, his breath smelling of mint and the bourbon he’d drunk after dinner. “You are not part of them. You are part of this. You are mine.”

“I know, Marcus.”

“Do you?” His hand came up, and she flinched, a full-body recoil that was pure instinct. He saw it. A cruel smile touched his lips. He didn’t hit her. Instead, his fingers traced the line of her jaw, a mockery of tenderness. “You flinched. Why would you flinch? I’m just touching my wife.”

She stood perfectly still, her eyes fixed on the hollow of his throat. “I’m tired. It was a long day.”

“It was.” His thumb pressed against the soft skin under her chin, tilting her face up. “You worked hard. You always do. And you’re so good at it. So good at making everything look perfect.” His voice dropped to a whisper. “But I see the cracks, Soleil. I see you looking at him like he’s some kind of savior. He’s nothing. A violent, uneducated thug who lives in a shack. He’s beneath you. Which means he’s far beneath me.”

His grip tightened slightly, not enough to bruise, but enough to promise it. “If you ever disrespect me like that again—if you ever make me look small in front of a man like that—the consequences will be more than you can bear. Do we understand each other?”

Tears of shame and terror burned behind her eyes. She willed them not to fall. Crying always made it worse. “Yes.”

“Yes, what?”

“Yes, Marcus. I understand.”

He stared at her for a long moment, his dark eyes searching hers for any hint of defiance. Finding none, he released her chin with a slight shove. “Good. Now come to bed. I’m not finished with you.”

He turned and walked out, expecting her to follow. She always did.

In the dark of their bedroom, the air was thick and still. She lay beside him, her body rigid as a board, staring at the intricate pattern of the ceiling molding she knew by heart. His hands were impersonal, demanding. She closed her eyes and let her mind drift away, a skill she’d perfected. She went to the kitchen in her head, to the safe rhythm of chopping onions, the steady bloom of roux in a pot. She focused on the memory of Granny’s hands holding hers. Your name ain’t no accident.

Afterward, he rolled away from her without a word. Within minutes, his breathing deepened into sleep.

Soleil slipped out from under the sheets. She pulled on her robe and crept downstairs, past the closed door of the east wing. The house was tomb-quiet. She stepped out onto the back porch, the wood still warm from the day’s sun.

The night was alive. Crickets sawed, frogs sang their throbbing chorus from the treeline. In the distance, a single light glowed from one of the tenant cabins. A shadow moved past the window—tall, broad. Her breath caught. It was him.

She watched, hidden in the deeper shadows of the porch. The shadow paused, as if feeling her gaze. Then the light went out.

A deep, resonant sound began, so low she felt it in her chest more than heard it. It was a man’s voice, humming. A hymn she vaguely remembered from childhood church services she hadn’t attended in years. “Blessed Assurance.” The melody was slow, somber, and it wrapped around the night sounds, a thread of profound, unshakeable calm woven through the chaos.

Kordell.

He was humming on his dark porch, looking out at the same night she was.

The sound was a physical touch. It didn’t feel like an invitation. It felt like a fact. A declaration of existence. He was there. He was awake. And he was, in his own way, keeping watch.

Soleil wrapped her arms around herself, the thin robe no match for the shiver that ran through her. It wasn’t from the cold. The hope that had bled through the crack in her numbness now pulsed, warm and terrifying. She wasn’t alone on the porch in the dark. Someone else was out there, awake in the world.

She didn’t know what it meant. She didn’t dare to. But for the first time in longer than she could remember, the oppressive weight of the house at her back felt slightly less absolute. There was another presence on the land. And it hummed old hymns in the dark.

She stayed there until the humming stopped and the cabin was just a darker shape against the trees. Then she went inside, back up the stairs, and slid into bed beside Marcus’s sleeping form. The memory of the hymn was a knot of warmth under her ribs, a secret she clutched tightly as she finally, cautiously, let sleep pull her under.

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