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The Problem With Jane

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Jane goes to a "New You" station for a a bit of a touch up. But it's been hacked. She wanted a nice summer beach bod and a more playful personality but got something else instead

Chapter 30: Final Preparations

The air in Jane’s apartment hummed with a different kind of energy now. It wasn’t just the residual ozone from the lab or the city’ perpetual growl outside the windows. It was the sharp, focused crackle of impending corporate warfare. Serena had commandeered the vast black stone dining table, her tablet and holoscreens casting a pale blue glow on her impassive face.

“We lead with the problem,” she said, her voice a scalpel. “The existential flaw in NewYou’s current model: the erasure of self. We position the synaptic buffer not as a patch, but as a paradigm shift.The next evolutionary step. Adding, not overwriting.”

Marcus nodded, typing notes into the air. His mind kept snagging on the memory of her hungry eyes watching Judy. He pushed it down. “We need clean before-and-after sequences. Roger’s neural mapping visuals are perfect. Shows the preservation of core personality pathways.”

“We’ll use Audra first. Her story is… sympathetic. A tragedy corrected.” Serena’s lips thinned. “Then Judy.The voluntary augmentation. The employee who chose to become more for the company. The narrative writes itself.”

Across the open space, far from the strategic murmurs, Judy sat curled in a huge leather armchair by the fire. But she wasn’t relaxing. Her hands were a blur.

It had started as an itch, a phantom sensation at the tips of her two smallest new fingers. A need to pull, to weave. She’d ignored it for a day, but it grew, becoming a hum in her bones. Finally, in a kitchen drawer, she’d found a pair of metal knitting needles Jane had once bought on a whim.

The moment her new hands closed around them, the hum settled into a purr of rightness.

She didn’t have yarn. She didn’t need it.

She lifted a hand, focusing on the tiny, almost invisible spinneret glands she’d discovered at the base of her new wrists. With a soft, concentrated breath, a filament of pure, lustrous silk emerged, gleaming like liquid platinum in the firelight. It was stronger than steel, finer than a human hair. She caught it on the needle, and began.

Her original hands worked in tandem with the four new ones, a mesmerizing, six-limbed ballet. The needles clicked a rapid, soothing rhythm. The silk flowed from her, a part of her, responding to some deep-coded instinct. She wasn’t thinking of patterns. Her hands simply knew.

“That is deeply unsettling and also kind of beautiful,” Erin said, padding over on silent feet. She crouched by the chair, watching the silk spill forth. “You’re literally making fabric out of your body.”

“It feels… necessary,” Judy murmured, her eyes not leaving her work. “Like blinking. Or breathing after holding your breath.” A small, freckled smile. “Besides, the company health plan doesn’t cover custom tactical wear.”

Over the next forty-eight hours, Judy became a fixture in the corner, a silent, weaving engine. The compulsion never faded. When she slept, she dreamed of complex weaves and tensile strengths. She’d wake and return to the chair, the growing pile of silk fabric spilling over her lap like a strange, metallic organ.

Meanwhile, Roger worked with detached precision in the lab. Petra, the concierge, had been brought into the fold after discreetly helping Audra navigate the building’s service elevators. Her compensation was not money, but curiosity.

“I’ve seen every kind of body mod come through this tower,” she’d said, her smart glasses glinting. “The carbon-fiber limb replacements, the mirrored-skin cultists. This? This is different.This is story. I want in.”

Serena saw another demonstrator. Roger saw a logical progression.

On the eve of the presentation, with the holographics finalized and Serena rehearsing her delivery with cold perfection, two final pieces fell into place.Judy held it up. A catsuit, sleek and dark as a shadow at midnight. It seemed to drink the light. “For you,” she said to Erin. “Try it on.”

In the bedroom, Erin shimmied into it. The material was cool at first, then warmed instantly to her skin. It fitted her every curve—the powerful sweep of her thighs, the lean muscle of her abdomen, the swell of her breasts—with an intimacy that was neither tight nor restrictive. It felt like a second epidermis, a whisper of impossible strength. She walked out.

The room stilled. The suit was devastating, highlighting every lethal, graceful line of the Huntress frame.

“Pressure test,” Roger stated, picking up a forensic laser scalpel from the lab bench. Before anyone could object, he aimed the beam, set to cut through polymer steel, at Erin’s forearm.

The brilliant red line touched the silk and diffused, scattering into a harmless orange halo before fading. The fabric beneath was unmarred.

Erin looked at her arm, then at Judy, her violet eyes wide. “Bulletproof?”

“Theoretically,” Judy said, her multitude of arms giving a proud, fluttery gesture. “The weave disperses kinetic energy across the entire matrix. Stabbing would be… trickier.But bullets? Probably.” She blushed. “I also made it breathable and moisture-wicking.”

Erin walked over, took Judy’s original, chitinous hand, and kissed her knuckles. “You are a wonder.”

The second piece was Petra.

She stood in the transformation chamber, her professional demeanor replaced by a giddy resolve. “No office drone template,” she’d insisted. “Something with teeth.”

Roger had complied. The ‘Night Witch’ template was an obscure, abandoned fantasy game asset, heavy on aesthetic, light on practical code. He’d spliced it with instinctual alchemical knowledge bases and the now-standard synaptic buffer.

The golden mist cleared.

Petra stepped out, and the air seemed to darken around her.

She was taller, her limbs elongated and elegant. Her skin was a deep, lustrous violet, dotted with faint, star-like silvery speckles across her cheeks and shoulders. Her hair, freed from its bun, was a cascade of white-silver to her waist. Her ears swept up into delicate points. But it was her eyes that commanded attention—pools of solid, glowing amber, like captured candle flames.

She looked down at her hands, long-fingered and tipped with nails like polished obsidian, and laughed. The sound was lower, mellifluous. “Oh, the things I know,” she breathed. “The recipes in my head… I could make a love philtre from rainwater and shadow, or a poison from the bark of that ornamental ficus.”

To demonstrate, she walked to Jane’s kitchen island. With fluid motions, she took a lime, a pinch of salt from a dish, a drop of dish soap, and a copper penny from her pocket. She crushed them in a ceramic bowl with her bare hands, her motions sure and instinctual. The mixture didn’t froth. It smoked, coalescing into a small, viscous ball of emerald gel.

“Adhesive,” she said, her new voice a husky melody. “Strong enough to anchor a steel beam. Or glue a rival’s lips shut.” She flicked it at the stone wall, where it stuck and hardened instantly.

Serena had stopped her rehearsal. She watched, her earlier hunger now refined into a razor-sharp appraisal. Four subjects. A cat-girl, a spider-woman, a vampire hunter, and now a dark elf witch. Each distinct. Each enhanced. Each irrevocably themselves.

“Perfect,” Serena whispered, not to Petra, but to the concept itself. She turned to Marcus, her eyes alight with triumph. “We don’t just have a fix for a bug, Marcus. We have a new product line. ‘Ascension, not Erasure.’ We’ll sell them their wildest selves, and charge a premium for the privilege of staying sane.”

Marcus felt a chill that had nothing to do with the air conditioning. He looked at Judy, contentedly weaving a new project. At Audra, currently trying to bat a holographic cursor out of the air. At Erin, testing the limits of her new suit’s flexibility. At Petra, examining the chemical structure of window cleaner with academic fascination.

They were people. They were his friends. And in Serena’s eyes, they had just become the most valuable commodities on earth.

“The board meeting is at ten,” Serena said, gathering her tablets. “Get some sleep. Tomorrow, we redefine humanity.” Her smile was a promise of revolution, and in its brilliance, Marcus couldn’t quite discern where ambition ended and monstrosity began.

Her smile was a promise of revolution, and in its brilliance, Marcus couldn’t quite discern where ambition ended and monstrosity began. The team dispersed, a quiet exhaustion settling over the penthouse after the feverish preparation. Serena left last, her heels clicking a sharp, final cadence toward the elevator, her mind already rehearsing tomorrow’s conquests.

Marcus stood alone for a long moment in the center of the vast, quiet room. The holographic schematics of four transformed neurologies still hung in the air, slowly rotating. He waved a hand, and they dissolved into silent pixels.

A gentle weight settled on his shoulders. Jane’s hands, soft and warm, began kneading the tension from his muscles. Her scent, that impossible mix of vanilla and lightning, enveloped him. “You’re holding the entire city on your back again,” she murmured into his ear. “It’s going to crack.”

“It might,” he admitted, leaning into her touch. “Tomorrow either fixes everything or sets it all on fire.”

“Come outside with me. The city’s louder than your thoughts. It helps.”

They took a thick, wool blanket onto the balcony. The night was crisp, a biting wind skating in off the bay and whipping around the tower. Below, the neon grid pulsed with indifferent life. They settled onto the wide chaise lounge, the cold metal frame biting through the blanket until their shared warmth pushed it back. Jane tucked herself against him, her head on his chest, her platinum hair a cool spill over his arm.

For a while, they just listened to the urban white noise. A siren wailed somewhere, a thin, dying sound against the constant hum.

“A year ago, I was proofreading tax returns in a cubicle with bad lighting,” Jane said, her voice a soft vibration against him. “I’d wear beige.Beige! I thought a bold choice was the maroon cardigan.”

Marcus chuckled, the sound rumbling in his chest. “I liked the maroon cardigan.”

“You are a liar with terrible taste, and I love you for it.” She shifted, looking up at the smudged stars. “Then some bastard hacked your ‘perfect girlfriend’ code into a NewYou booth. I woke up looking like… this. Feeling like a stranger was wearing my skin, but thinking with my own terrified brain.”

He flinched. That fear was the ghost that never left him.

She felt it and squeezed his arm. “Hey. I’m not there anymore. That was then.This is now. I’m not the mousy accountant, and I’m not just the ‘Michelle++’ mistake. I’m the alloy. And I like the alloy.” She paused. “Seeing Judy today… she’s not scared at all. She’s joyous. Marcus, that’s not a sin.”

“I built a tool. Serena’s holding it now. You know what she sees when she looks at them? Units. Premium subscription packages.” He stared at the glinting NewYou headquarters across the cityscape. “She’ll sell this. She’ll sell Audra’s recovery, Judy’compulsion, Petra’s… whatever that is. She’ll sell their very specific wonders until they’re just commodities.”

“So we don’t let her,” Jane said, simple and firm.

“How?”

“We haven’t figured that part out yet.” She traced an idle pattern on his chest with a finger. “We’ve been a little busy. In the past year, you’ve also resurrected a cat-girl from a locked-in prison, given my girlfriend six arms and a side career in textiles, and turned my concierge into a spell-slinging dark elf. Date nights have gotten weird.”

The laugh that escaped him was real, startling the gloomy thoughts.“Understatement. Remember when a date was just bad pasta and a movie we’d forget?”

“I remember.” She grew quiet again, the humor fading into something more profound. “I also remember you looking at me—really looking—after the change. Not at the body, but through it. You were the only one who saw me in there, tangled up in all that new code and pheromones. You fought to keep me whole.” She looked up, her baby-blue eyes catching the city light. “That’s why this works. Not the perfect skin or the voice. Because you see the person, not the template.”

He kissed her forehead, holding his lips there for a long moment. The chill receded.

“Roger’s sister is free because of you,” she whispered. “Judy found a power she didn’t know she wanted. Even Petra got to choose her own strange. You gave them that choice. That’s the part Serena doesn’t understand. It’s not about the product. It’s about the door.”

He held her tighter, the blanket a cocoon against the vast, judging night. The dread for tomorrow was still there, a cold stone in his gut. But under it, tempered by her words and the weight of her against him, was a fragile strand of something else. Not hope, exactly.Resolve.

The wind shifted, carrying the distant, rhythmic thump of a nightclub’s bass. A beacon from a passing airship swept across their faces, then vanished.

“We should go in,” he said, his voice rough.

“In a minute,” she replied, nestling closer. “Let’s just be here a little longer. Before tomorrow comes and decides what we are.”

They fell silent, two small shapes under a blanket, watching the indifferent city burn its eternal lights. The past year hung between them, a tapestry of chaos and miracles, of terrifying glitches and breathtaking beauty. It was theirs. And for now, that was enough.

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