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The Queen of Savages and the King of the Undying

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Elizeah of Thornes, 45, had been Queen of the Savages since she was young. Granddaughter to Atarin the Bloodborn, she took over when her father had gone mad. She loves her kingdom and her people and took the decision to never marry, to never let her sight get blinded by feelings like her father did. But something is attacking the neighbor kingdoms and the only way to save her people is to seek an alliance with the King of the Undying. Thayne the Dragonclaw, over thousand years old, is the King of the Undying an old race of the Highelves. Old and not very fond of humans he does only what is good for his people, even when they see him as cold and distant. His son, Ario, 200years, is all that is left of his once great love and the opposite to his father. It's him, that wishes to help their human neighbors.

Chapter 2: Blood Moon Revelation

The walk out of the Gloommar was conducted in a silence thicker than the web they’d burned through. Thayne led, a silent, gliding sentinel ahead of them. Elizeah’s stallion carried one dazed scout; Thayne’s own mount, a creature of silver-grey that seemed woven from mist and shadow, carried the other two. Ario walked beside Elizeah, the weight of his father’s disapproval a physical chill in the air between them.

They crossed the threshold where the gnarled trees gave way to younger, healthier woods. The unnatural stillness lifted. The sound of the wind returned, along with the distant call of a nightbird. Thayne stopped.

“This is far enough,” he said, not turning. “My healers will meet us here. You will convey your scouts to them.”

Elizeah didn’t argue. She saw the figures emerging from the trees—three Highelves in robes of muted grey, their movements efficient and silent. They took the scouts with gentle, professional hands, speaking in soft, melodic tones that seemed to ease the panic in the men’s eyes.

Thayne finally turned to face them. In the dappled moonlight, he looked even more like a statue brought to life. “The debriefing will be at first light. In the Spire of the First Dawn. You will be escorted.”

“I sleep in my own camp,” Elizeah stated.

“You will sleep in quarters provided. For security.”

“Your security or mine?”

“Ours.” The word was final. He looked at his son. “Ario. You will come with me.”

Ario’s jaw tightened. He glanced at Elizeah, a look of profound apology and frustration. “Father, the Queen should—”

“The Queen,” Thayne interrupted, his voice like a door sliding shut, “is a guest who has overstayed her welcome in a quarantined zone. You are a subject who has broken decree. The matters are separate. You will come. Now.”

For a heartbeat, Ario looked like he might refuse. He stood straighter, that human stubbornness squaring his shoulders. Then his shoulders dropped, not in defeat, but in tactical retreat. He gave Elizeah a barely perceptible nod—play along—and walked to his father’s side.

Thayne’s gaze lingered on Elizeah for a moment longer. “The escorts will see you to your quarters. Do not wander.”

Then he and Ario were gone, disappearing into the forest with the silent healers, leaving Elizeah alone with two very rigid Highelve guards in silver-etched armor.

Her provided quarters were in a structure that seemed grown rather than built, a living tree coaxed into forming rooms. It was beautiful, airy, and felt like a gilded cage. The guards took positions outside her door. She barred it from the inside.

Sleep was a futile idea. Every time she closed her eyes, she saw the milky, unseeing stare of her scouts, felt the nullifying wave of the entity’s death-throes. And she saw Thayne’s face, a mask of glacial judgment. A trigger, he’d said. He wasn’t wrong. But sitting and waiting for him to devise a millennia-long plan wasn’t an option either.

A soft tap came at her window, not the door.

She was on her feet, dagger in hand, in one fluid motion.

The lattice of woven branches was being pushed inward. Ario’s face, strained and smudged with dirt, appeared in the gap. “Need a breath of air?” he whispered, his voice tight with urgency.

“How did you get past them?”

“I grew up here. I know the servants’ routes. The guards are watching the door and the main path. They don’t watch the old growth. Come on.”

She didn’t hesitate. She shoved her feet back into her boots, grabbed her sword belt, and squeezed through the window after him. They dropped onto a soft bed of moss behind the tree-structure and melted into the deeper shadows of the forest.

“This is a spectacularly bad idea,” she muttered, keeping low as they moved between massive, sleeping tree trunks.

“Probably,” Ario agreed, leading her with unerring confidence. “But if we wait for dawn, my father will lock you in a chamber of truth-seeking and me in a tower of reflection. We’ll be useless for weeks. And that thing doesn’t have weeks. It’s hungry now. It knows about me.”

“So where are we going?”

“Somewhere he won’t look. Somewhere he avoids.”

They walked for what felt like an hour, leaving the refined elegance of the Highelve living spaces behind. The forest grew wilder again, but this was a different wild—older, deeper, serene. The air lost its metallic chill and grew soft, carrying the scent of night-blooming flowers and still water.

The trees parted.

The Moonlit Clearing opened before them, vast and silent. It was a perfect circle of velvety grass, silvered under the full moon. At its center, a lake lay so still it looked like a sheet of obsidian glass, perfectly mirroring the sky. The reflection of the moon was a blinding white coin on its surface. No wind stirred. The only sound was the low, sub-aural hum of power, the vibration of ancient magic seeping from the ground itself.

“This is a consecrated place,” Ario said, his voice hushed. “My mother’s people—the humans who lived in harmony with this forest long before my father’s kind built their spires—they called it the Mirror of Potential. They communed with spirits of memory and choice here.”

Elizeah approached the water’s edge. Her reflection looked back, but it wavered, showing not her face as it was, but glimpses—a younger, fiercer version; an older, wearier one; a self dressed in hides, another in silks. She blinked and it settled, unnerving her. “Why does Thayne avoid it?”

“It shows things as they are. As they could be. He finds that… distracting. He prefers a single, controlled path.” Ario knelt by the water, pulling a few items from a pouch at his belt: a small, smooth stone, a twist of dried herbs, a silver cup. “The entity got into my head. It left a… resonance. A scent on my psyche. I can feel it, like a tickle at the back of my skull. Before we face it again, I need to strengthen my own wards. And I could use an anchor.”

“Meaning me.”

“Meaning someone whose will is harder than stone.” He glanced up at her, a faint, tired smile on his face. “You qualify.”

She snorted but nodded, crouching beside him. “What do I do?”

“Just sit. Hold this.” He handed her the smooth stone. It was warm. “And don’t let go, no matter what you see or hear.”

He began the ritual. It wasn’t flashy. He breathed onto the herbs, crushed them in his palm, and let the fragments fall onto the water’s surface. They didn’t sink. They floated, tracing a slow, circular pattern. He whispered words, not the hard, angular language of High Elven magic, but something softer, older. Human words, she realized. His mother’s tongue.

The hum in the clearing deepened. The reflected moon on the water brightened.

Ario reached for the silver cup, dipped it into the lake, and brought it to his lips. He drank. Then he held his hand out to Elizeah, palm up. “Your hand. I need a tether to the present, to a will that isn’t mine.”

She placed her free hand in his. His skin was warm, his grip firm. As he closed his eyes and began chanting again, a current seemed to pass between them, not unpleasant, but intense—a flow of focus, of defiance.

Their clasped hands became the still point in the turning ritual. Her thumb brushed the ridge of his knuckles. He shifted his grip, his fingers interlacing with hers for a better anchor. The contact was pragmatic, necessary, but in the charged silence of the clearing, it felt loaded. She could feel the calluses on his palm, the steady beat of his pulse against her wrist. She focused on the stone’s warmth in her other hand, on the solid reality of it.

The visions began as whispers at the edge of sight.

Shadows flitting in the trees that weren’t there. The scent of ozone. The image of the altar, pulsing.

Ario’s chanting grew more forceful. Sweat beaded on his temple. “It’s trying to use the link. It’s trying to show me… to show us…”

The clearing dissolved.

One moment they were kneeling on cool grass, the next they were standing in a future that reeked of despair.

They were in the Gloommar, but it was worse. The trees were gone, replaced by pulsing, organic spires of the same blue-veined substance. The sky was a bruised, weeping violet. And before them stood the altar, grown colossal, a grotesque heart of the new world.

Bound to it by coils of living shadow was Ario. Not as a prisoner, but as a component. The blue light pulsed within his chest, his eyes were orbs of solid, sickly cerulean. His face was a mask of agony and eerie bliss.

And standing before him, her sword aimed at his throat, was Elizeah. But not the Elizeah of now. This version was older, her hair streaked with white, her face carved with deep lines of hatred and unbearable loss. Her eyes held no calculation, only a furious, ravaging grief.

“The bridge must be burned,” the future-Elizeah spat, her voice ragged. “It’s the only way to starve the heart. I should have done it the first day I met you.”

The bound Ario smiled, a terrible, accepting smile. “You waited too long, Lizzie. The foundation is already set.”

The vision was visceral, choking. It wasn’t a prediction; it was a possibility, woven from their deepest fears—his of being used as a tool, hers of being forced into a merciless, lonely choice. It was the entity’s retaliation, using the ritual’s connection to poison their alliance before it could truly form.

Back in the clearing, Ario gasped, breaking the chant. He recoiled, snatching his hand from Elizeah’s as if burned. They were both panting, the tranquil clearing now feeling like a crime scene.

The black lake was churning, the reflected moon shattered into a thousand shimmering fragments.

“It wasn’t real,” Elizeah said, but her voice was hoarse. Her hand, the one that had held his, was clenched in a fist.

“It could be,” Ario whispered, staring at his own hand. “That’s what this place shows. Potential. Pathways. It twisted the ritual to show us the worst one. To make us fear each other.” He looked at her, his winter-blue eyes wide with a horror that wasn’t for himself. “It saw your resolve. It knows you’d do anything to save your people. It’s trying to make you believe that ‘anything’ includes killing me.”

The hum in the clearing faded, leaving a ringing silence. The moon’s reflection slowly pieced itself back together on the water’s now-still surface.

Elizeah stood, her legs feeling unsteady. She looked down at him, still kneeling by the water. The image of her future self’s tormented face was seared behind her eyes.

"If your father finds out, he will kill me before I can even think of killing you", she says.

Ario stood, the grass whispering against his knees. "He won’t find out. Not if we’re smart." He said it like a promise, but his eyes kept flicking to the disturbed water, to where the vision had bled through.

A twig snapped in the forest behind them. Not an animal. Too deliberate.

They both froze, hands going to their weapons. The clearing’s serene magic curdled, the humid air suddenly sharp with the scent of ozone they’d smelled in the Gloommar. It was here. It had followed the psychic thread.

From the tree line, shadows detached themselves. They didn’t walk. They poured, liquid and silent, flowing over roots and moss to pool at the edge of the silvered grass. They formed into approximations of men—skeletal, with eyes of faint, hungry blue.

"An echo," Ario breathed, shifting to put his back to Elizeah’s. "Just a projection. But it can still hurt us."

The shadow-men charged. There was no roar, no battle cry. Just the terrible silence of their advance.

Elizeah met the first with a downward chop of her sword. The steel passed through it like smoke, but the creature shrieked, a sound of tearing parchment, and dissipated. The force of the blow vibrated up her arm, cold and numbing. "Solid enough!"

"Don’t let them touch you!" Ario swung a wide arc with a short blade he’d pulled from his boot. His movements were efficient, desperate. "The touch drains. It feeds the main body."

Another shadow darted at Elizeah’s flank. She pivoted, letting it rush past, and severed its form at the knees. It collapsed into a puddle of ink that boiled away on the grass. The smell was awful—burnt hair and spoiled meat.

They fought in tight, controlled circles. Back to back. Each movement was communicated through a shift in weight, a shared breath. He covered her blind spots. She intercepted the shadows that lunged for his openings. It was a brutal, silent dance under the mocking moon.

One shadow, craftier than the rest, flowed low and fast, aiming for Ario’s ankle. Elizeah couldn’t get her sword around in time.

"Step!"

He trusted her instantly, lifting his foot. Her boot came down, crushing the shadow’s forming hand into the soil. It writhed and dissolved.

The last of the projections faded. The clearing was quiet again, but the peace was gone. The grass where the shadows had died was blackened and brittle.

Elizeah lowered her sword, her chest heaving. Not from exertion, but from the adrenaline’s sharp, sickening drop. "It’s learning. It sent scouts to test our coordination."

Ario knelt, touching the dead grass. It crumbled to ash. "It’s mapping us. Our reactions, our weaknesses." He looked up, his face grim. "That vision wasn’t just to scare us. It was bait. To get us to open a connection here, at this volatile place, so it could get a taste."

He rose, sheathing his blade. "We need to move. Now. That taste? It’s a trail."

As if summoned by his words, a new sound began. A low, vibrational hum, coming from the direction of the Highelve spires. It was a resonant, calling note, deep and authoritative.

"The Spire of the First Dawn," Ario said, his shoulders slumping in a mix of relief and dread. "My father knows we’re gone. That’s the assembly chime. He’s calling everyone in."

Elizeah wiped her blade on the clean part of the grass. "So much for not finding out."

"We stick to the story. We came out here because I sensed a residual trace of the entity. We were investigating. It’s technically true." He ran a hand through his hair, making it stand on end. "Just leave out the ritual. And the vision."

"Can he tell? Can he read lies?"

"Not directly. But he’s a thousand years old, Elizeah. He reads everything." He started walking, not back the way they came, but on a new, more direct path toward the rising hum. "Come on. Running makes us look guilty. Walking briskly with purpose looks like we’re answering the summons."

They walked in silence for a while, the unnatural events of the clearing clinging to them like a film.

"You’d really do it?" Ario’s question, when it came, was quiet. Almost conversational.

"Do what?"

"What your… what the other you did in the vision. If it was the only way to starve that thing. If it was me on that altar, fused with it. Would you cut the knot?"

She didn’t answer immediately. The path sloped upward toward the gleaming spires now visible through the trees. The air grew cooler.

"I’ve given orders that sent a hundred men to their deaths to hold a bridge," she said finally, her voice flat. "I watched my father’s mind unravel until he tried to burn our own granaries. I rule a people called Savages because we do what’s necessary to survive." She glanced at him, her eyes like flint in the predawn gloom. "So don’t ask me questions you don’t want the answer to."

He absorbed that, nodding slowly. Not in agreement, but in understanding. "Then we make sure that particular pathway stays closed."

The trees ended. They stood at the edge of a vast, manicured plaza of white stone that seemed to glow with its own light. Before them, towering so high it made her neck ache, was the Spire of the First Dawn. Its surface was seamless mother-of-pearl, and the assembly chime vibrated from deep within it.

At the base of the great stairs leading to its entrance stood Thayne.

He wasn’t alone. Two dozen Highelve guards in full ceremonial armor flanked him, spears vertical and perfect. His expression was unreadable, a mask of calm authority. He watched them approach, his eyes missing nothing: the dirt on Ario’s knees, the faint sheen of sweat on Elizeah’s temple, the way their bodies still carried the residual tension of a fight.

He waited until they were ten paces away before speaking. His voice cut through the fading chime.

“The entity in the Gloommar has manifested a physical brood. It slaughtered a perimeter squadron an hour ago.” He let that hang, his gaze pinning Ario. “Their outpost was in the sector you accessed to leave the guest quarters. Explain the coincidence.”

Ario opened his mouth, but Elizeah stepped forward, crossing her arms. “The coincidence is that your son has a sensitivity to it that you’re ignoring. We felt a resonance spike. He led me out to investigate it. We were attacked by shadow projections at the Moonlit Clearing. They’re testing our defenses. Mapping them.”

Thayne’s eyes flicked to her. “You entered a consecrated grove without sanction.”

“I entered a clearing to avoid being slaughtered by a psychic plague. Forgive the breach of etiquette.”

A faint, almost imperceptible twitch at the corner of Thayne’s mouth. It wasn’t a smile. It was the acknowledgment of a point scored. He shifted his weight, the first truly human movement she’d seen from him. “The projections. Describe them.”

Ario did, in quick, clinical detail. The silence of them. The cold touch. The way they dissolved.

Thayne listened, then turned without a word and started walking up the broad stairs. The guards parted for him. He spoke over his shoulder, expecting them to follow.

“The assembly is not for you. It is for my war council. You will wait in the antechamber.” He paused on a step, looking back down at them. The first ray of true dawn hit the spire above him, scattering light like shattered diamonds. “The entity is accelerating its cycle. Your unsanctioned excursion provided data. Unintentionally, you have confirmed its territorial response to potent magic.” His ice-blue eyes held Elizeah’s. “It is not just hunting. It is practicing. For when it has a true source of power to consume.”

He glanced at Ario, and for a second, the frozen mask cracked. Something raw and terrifying lived beneath it—not anger, but a profound, weary fear.

“It is practicing for you.”

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