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The Spring of Broken Pride

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Jak (from Jak and Daxter) is relaxing in a hot spring after work. Several muscular men sit down next to him. They smell incredibly masculine. Jak suddenly feels aroused. One of the men offers to fuck Jak, and he suddenly agrees. He doesn't understand what came over him. Jak is always considered himself straight. But there's no turning back, and Jak sits down on the cock. He thinks to show that it doesn't really bother him, but suddenly he feels satisfaction and moans. The other men join in and fuck all of Jak's holes. They mock Jak and humiliate him. He loses his pride, cums violently, and ends up covered in cum. They put a collar around his neck and leave him fucked in the spring, giving him their number as a parting gift.

Chapter 1: Steam and Submission

The water was agony and bliss, in equal measure. Jak sank into the steaming pool with a groan that was torn from somewhere deep in his chest. Every muscle screamed. His knuckles were split, the wounds stinging as the mineral-rich water seeped into them. Above, the moon was a cold, silver chip in a velvet sky, and the amber glow from submerged lights made the rising mist look like smoke.

He leaned his head back against the smooth rock, his spiky blond hair plastered down. The heat was unraveling the day’s violence—the crunch of Metal Head carapaces, the acrid smell of eco-charged bolts, the cheers from the Haven City guards as he’d trudged back through the gates. Hero. Champion. Words that felt hollow now, just noise to drown out the quiet static in his head.

A shift in the air. A displacement of sound.

The water sloshed heavily against his chest. Footsteps, deliberate and sure, crunched on the gravel path. He didn’t open his eyes, not at first. It was probably just other miners or off-duty guards coming to soak out their own aches. But the scent hit him before the sight did—pine resin, leather, and the straightforward, uncomplicated smell of male sweat. It was potent, a physical presence that seemed to cut through the clean mineral steam.

Jak’s eyes opened.

Three figures stood at the pool’s edge, silhouetted against the deeper dark of the pines. Big. Not guard-big. Mercenary-big. The kind of size earned through brutal, unsanctioned work.

The first one, a massive guy with a shaved head and a beard that looked like it could stop a knife, met his gaze. A slow, easy smile spread across his face. “Room for a few more, hero?”

Brutus. The name floated up from some half-remembered wanted poster. Former Krimzon Guard. Now freelance trouble.

Jak’s muscles tensed, his body instinctively coiling for a fight even as exhaustion weighed his bones. He gave a single, tight nod. “It’s a free country.”

They slid into the water, one after another, with groans of satisfaction that were too intimate. The pool suddenly felt small, the water displaced by the sheer mass of them. Brutus settled on the bench-rock to his right, close enough that their shoulders would touch if either of them leaned. To his left was a leaner man with dark hair tied back, tattoos snaking over defined shoulders. Garrick. He said nothing, just watched with dark, appraising eyes. Across from him, a broad-shouldered man with a graying beard and a map of scars across his chest sunk down until the water lapped at his collarbones. Titus. His laugh was a low rumble that vibrated through the water.

“Long day saving the world?” Brutus asked, his voice a gravelly baritone.

“Something like that,” Jak muttered, looking straight ahead. He felt exposed. Not just without his armor and weapon, but in a way he couldn’t name. Their collective heat, their smell, it was everywhere. It was doing something to him, short-circuiting the usual alerts in his brain. A strange, heavy warmth was pooling in his gut, unrelated to the spring’s heat.

“Looks it.” Brutus stretched, the powerful cords of his arms breaking the water’s surface. The movement brought him another inch closer. The dark hair on his chest was wet and matted. “All that tension’s gotta be locked in your spine. Makes a man tight. irritable.”

Jak said nothing. His heart was beating a strange, thick rhythm against his ribs.

“Might be you need a different kind of release,” Brutus continued, his tone conversational, as if discussing the weather. “All that fight, all that holding on. Gets boring.”

The meaning dripped into the steam between them, heavy and unmistakable. Jak should have gotten up. Should have summoned a crackle of blue eco to his fist and told them to get lost. But his body wouldn’t obey. The thought of moving, of breaking this terrifying, charged stillness, seemed impossible. The arousal was a live wire now, sizzling through his veins, shameful and absolute.

Garrick’s quiet voice came from his left. “See how he’s looking, Brutus? He’s not saying no.”

Titus chuckled, a deep, wet sound. “Hero’s got a quiet tongue all of a sudden.”

Brutus turned fully towards him. The man’s eyes were like chips of flint. “I’m gonna ask you straight. You want me to fuck it out of you? That coiled-up little knot of pride you’re sitting on?”

The words should have been a grenade. They should have triggered fury. Instead, they landed in the center of that swirling, needy heat and detonated a surrender so complete it stole his breath. His own voice, when it came, was hoarse and foreign to his ears.

“Yeah.”

The air left the space in a collective, hungry rush.

“Yeah what?” Brutus pressed, leaning in. His breath was hot on Jak’s cheek.

“Yeah. Fuck it out of me.”

It was like throwing a switch.

Brutus moved with a startling lack of ceremony. A massive hand clamped around the back of Jak’s neck, not to hurt, but to possess. He was pulled, maneuvered, his body limp and pliant as he was guided onto Brutus’s lap. The hard, thick press of the man’s cock against his ass cheek was a shock of reality. This was happening.

“Good,” Brutus grunted, spitting into his own palm before slicking himself. The sound was crude, final. “Now take it.”

There was no gentle breach. It was a claiming. A blunt, burning stretch that forced a ragged yell from Jak’s throat, part pain, part devastating relief. He was pinned, impaled, his own cock hard and trapped between their stomachs. Brutus held him still for a long moment, letting him feel every inch, before setting a ruthless, deep rhythm that sloshed water against the rocks.

“Look at that,” Garrick murmured, moving in front of them. He fisted his own erection, tapping it against Jak’s slack mouth. “Hero’s got a mouth on him too. Put it to use.”

Dazed, overfilled, Jak opened his lips. Garrick shoved in, the taste of salt and skin flooding his senses. He was held between them, used at both ends, a conduit for their grunts and thrusts. The world narrowed to the slap of wet skin, the guttural sounds torn from the men above him, the overwhelming, suffocating musk of them.

“Fell pretty far, pretty fast, didn’t you champion?” Garrick taunted, his hips snapping. “Just a cheap hole now.”

Titus watched, his hand working slowly under the water, his scarred face a mask of amusement. “Thought he’d be tighter. All that heroics must’ve relaxed him.”

The humiliation was a hot brand, but it only fed the fire. His body arched and clenched, chasing a shameful peak on Brutus’s relentless cock. When Brutus finally groaned, hips stuttering, the hot flood inside him triggered his own climax, a silent, violent shudder that left him blind.

He barely had time to gasp before Brutus pushed him off, towards Titus. “Your turn. He’s warmed up.”

Titus dragged him around, bending him over the rocky edge of the pool. The cold stone against his cheek. The water lapping at his waist. This was different. Slower. More deliberate. Titus’s entry was just as inexorable, but he paused, his broad hands spanning Jak’s hips.

“You belong to the water now,” Titus rumbled into his ear, the words a dark promise. “To the dark and the steam. To us. You just didn’t know it until tonight.”

He fucked him with a devastating, rolling patience that felt like it would never end. Jak’s cries were weak things, lost in the mist. When Titus finally spent himself, he held Jak there for a long minute, before letting him collapse into the water.

Jak slumped against the side, trembling violently. His body was a map of their use, aching, full, marked. He couldn’t meet their eyes.

The men climbed out, the night air chilling the water they displaced. They dried off with rough towels, dressing with the efficiency of soldiers. Brutus glanced back at him, a final smirk on his face. “Not so straight after all, huh hero?”

Garrick chuckled, zipping his pants.

It was Titus who walked back to the pool’s edge. He held something in his hand—a thick, leather collar, studded with dull metal. He crouched, his knees cracking.

Jak tried to flinch back, but he had nothing left.

“A reminder,” Titus said, his voice quiet but carrying. The clasp clicked shut around Jak’s throat. It was snug, not choking, but inescapably present. A dog’s tag. Titus patted his cheek, twice, hard. Then he took a crumpled piece of paper from his pocket and set it on the rock next to Jak’s head. A phone number was scrawled on it in blunt graphite.

“We get bored, we’ll call. You come. That’s the deal you made tonight.” He stood, looking down at the shattered man in the water. “You’re ours now.”

They left, their footsteps fading into the pine forest.

Jak didn’t move. The steam curled around him. The water cooled. The collar was a weight his pride could never lift. He stared at the crumpled number on the rock, and the void inside him, the one the heat and the violence had briefly filled, opened up again, wider and darker than ever.

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