Cover of The Sugar Pit

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A new bakery opens across the street from a husband and wife antique shop. It’s this like ultra bright bubbly dessert store. The owner is the tall absurdly busty, giant haired, eerily happy woman. And the bakery quickly becomes extremely popular, only with women. And slowly something is very off, the way she treats her customers is like a condescending too sweet per owner. And the women in there are seemingly more and more addicted. Women are around town with frosting all over their mouth and face, all dumber. The husband and wife swear they see women enter and leave with triple the breast size. And it’s clear theirs something very wrong with this bakery (main characters: store owner, husband and wife owners, and two new college aged customers, who are part of the addiction)

Chapter 5: The Horde

The line for Sweet Peppers began at the pink-glazed door and snaked around the corner, a silent, shuffling queue of women under the midday sun. They didn’t talk much. They fanned themselves with flyers that smelled, faintly, of burnt sugar and copper. Their faces, many of them, were dusted with a fine, iridescent powder or smudged with swipes of buttercream, like war paint they’d forgotten to wash off.

Inside, the air was a solid thing. It clung to skin and clothes, that signature scent of vanilla extract and hot metal. The bell above the door jangled incessantly, a sound that seemed to annoy only the people who weren’t there to eat.

Pepper Sweeting presided over it all from behind her mountain of perfect pastries. Her apron was, as ever, immaculate. Her hair was a towering monument. She moved with the slow, deliberate grace of a lighthouse beam, her cold eyes sweeping over her domain.

“Orderly, my lovelies, orderly!” she trilled, not raising her voice, yet every woman in line heard it perfectly. “We must be pretty and patient. The quiet is worth the wait. Isn’t it, Linda?”

Linda, the soccer mom, was at the counter. The sugar-starburst on her eyelid had sprouted tiny, crystalline filaments. She nodded, her head bobbing on a limp neck. “So worth it, Pepper.”

“Good girl.” Pepper’s smile was a knife-slash of pink. She slid a box across the counter. “Your usual. The double-fudge quiet-cakes. Eat one before you even get to your car, darling. You look peaky.”

“Yes, Pepper.”

“And you, sweet thing.” Pepper’s gaze landed on a nervous-looking woman in her twenties, new to the line. “First time? Don’t be shy. We don’t bite.” She let out that tinkling laugh. “We nibble. What’s your name?”

“Jenny,” the woman whispered.

“Jenny. You have a noisy mind, Jenny. I can see the thoughts buzzing behind your eyes. Like nasty little flies.” Pepper leaned over the counter, a monumental shelf of bosom and benevolence. “I have just the thing to swat them all away.” She produced a single, glowing violet macaron. “A little amethyst amnesia. On the house. For pretty new friends.”

Jenny took it. Her hand trembled. She looked from the cookie to Pepper’s unwavering grin. She took a bite. Her eyes glazed over instantly, the tension in her shoulders melting away into a soft, languid slump. A line of purple filling traced her lip.

“See?” Pepper crooned. “So much better. Now, to the back of the line with you. You’ll need a dozen more.”

As Jenny shuffled away, compliant, Pepper clapped her hands together. “A moment of attention, my darlings! A new menu item! For my very best, very quietest girls.”

She bent down behind the counter and produced a small, ceramic bowl. It was pink, with tiny white bones painted around the rim. She placed it on the glass counter with a deliberate click. Then, from a stainless steel canister, she scooped out a dense, shimmering lump of rose-colored frosting, dropping it with a wet plop into the bowl. She placed a single, dainty silver spoon beside it.

“The Obedient Mousse,” she announced, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial whisper. “Rich. Concentrated. For when you need an extra-strength dose of the quiet. Only for my most devoted.” Her eyes swept over Linda, over Chloe, over a dozen other familiar, frosting-flecked faces. They brightened with a hungry recognition. “Who’s a good girl? Hmm?”

A low, collective sigh moved through the line.

Across town, in a neat subdivision house that smelled of lemon polish and regret, Chloe’s husband, Mark, was trying to connect.

He’d reheated the lasagna. He’d poured the wine. He’d even put on the podcast she used to like, about true crime. She was picking at her food, pushing the noodles around. A tiny, hardened drip of something pearlescent was stuck in her hair, just above her temple.

“So, work was okay?” he tried.

“Mhm.”

“Madison asked about you today. Said she hasn’t seen you at book club in weeks.”

Chloe just smiled, a vague, distant thing. Her eyes were on the window, though all that was out there was the darkening street and the glow of their own porch light.

Mark put his fork down. “Chloe. Look at me.”

Slowly, she did. Her smile stayed fixed. It was starting to unsettle him, that smile. It was the one from their wedding photos, but it had been photocopied too many times, the warmth faded out of it.

“You’ve been at that bakery a lot,” he said, keeping his voice gentle, neutral. “Like, every day. It’s getting… I don’t know. A little odd.”

“Pepper needs me,” Chloe said simply, as if explaining that the sky was blue.

“Pepper needs customers, babe. She’s running a business.” He reached across the table, covered her hand with his. It was cool and limp. “How about tomorrow, we skip it? You and me, we get dinner at that Italian place you love. We’ll get that wine, the Nebbiolo. Remember?”

For a fraction of a second, her smile flickered. Something like panic, or maybe fury, flashed in her dulled eyes. Then the smile locked back into place, wider, harder.

“No,” she said. The word was sweet, but final. “No, no, no. I have to go. I will go.”

“Chloe, come on. It’s just a bakery.”

“You don’t understand.” She pulled her hand away. “It’s not for you. It’s for me. It makes me pretty. It makes me quiet.” She stood up, her chair scraping loudly. “I need to be quiet.”

“Honey, you’re scaring me a little.” He stood up too, moving around the table. He could see the sheen of grease on her face from the day’s accumulated sugar. He reached out, thumb aiming for a smudge of peach-colored frosting on her cheekbone. “You’ve got a little something…”

The moment his skin made contact, she moved.

It wasn’t a recoil. It was a lunge. Her head darted forward, teeth closing around the pad of his thumb with a sharp, decisive pressure. Not hard enough to break skin, but enough to trap him, to startle a yelp out of him.

“Jesus, Chloe!”

She released him. And then the smile changed. The empty cheer melted into something languid, heavy-lidded. She looked at his mouth, then lower. She pressed her body against his, the sugary, metallic smell enveloping him. Her hands fumbled at his belt.

“I’ll be quiet,” she breathed, her voice a husky parody of seduction. Her tongue, sticky-sweet, licked the spot where her teeth had been. “But you be loud. Okay? Be loud for me. Give it to me. I need it. I need you. Right now.”

Mark’s mind was a static of confusion and a raw, instinctive response to his wife’s sudden, aggressive heat. This was a script from years ago, from fights followed by passion, but the words were all wrong, the tone was plastic. She was tugging at him, pulling him toward the living room couch, her strength surprising.

He let himself be pulled. Because she was kissing him, and she tasted like candy and pennies, and part of him was just a dumb, hopeful animal that thought maybe this was the crack in the shell, the return of the woman he missed.

But as he fumbled with his jeans, as she giggled that same hollow heh-heh-heh against his neck and guided him inside her with a frantic, mechanical urgency, he stared over her shoulder. He stared at the empty lasagna plates, at the wine glasses catching the lamplight, at the happy, smiling faces in the framed photo on the wall behind them.

Her eyes were open. She was staring at the ceiling. That same, wide, rigid smile was plastered on her face, a mask of ecstasy that didn’t touch the vacant, hungry dark in her pupils. She was gone. And he was just another thing she was consuming, silently, in her pretty, quiet room.

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