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The Visitor's Gaze

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Write a scandalous NTR story about you and your happily married wife, Krissy. Your name is Tim and your wife is Krissy, a very shy, reserved, loving and devoted wife. She has enormous breasts and a soft, pillowy body, but is shy and conservative. She volunteers to join a culture exchange program, and is asked to host a young man from an exotic country. His name is Dominic, and he is from a remote South American village, and he does not know of western culture at all. The program asks that you get and accommodate as best you can, so that you don't make any cultural mistakes, which leads to many situations where Dominic looks at Krissy with lecherous intent. Krissy is initially torn between her unwavering loyalty to Tim, and her genuine attempt at accommodating Dominic's culture, which leads her to nervously accept his advances.

Chapter 13: The Long Afternoon

Tim’s keys jangled in the silence of the front hall, a sound that felt obscenely loud. He’d left work early, a headache brewing behind his eyes that the office fluorescents only aggravated. He’d texted Krissy, but she hadn’t replied. Probably busy with her guest.The house felt different as he shut the door.Not empty.Thick.

A sound stopped him from calling out.

It was a moan, low and throaty, unmistakably Krissy’s, but twisted into a shape he’d never heard before. It came from upstairs, followed by a rhythmic, slapping cadence—skin on skin. His feet carried him into the living room, moving on numb legs. He sank into his armchair, the one where he read the Sunday paper.The frame groaned under him.Upstairs, the guest room door was open. Their voices spilled down the staircase, clear and horribly intimate.

“Right there, Mark, oh God, right there!” Krissy cried out, her voice breaking on a pitch of pure, unraveling pleasure.

“You like that, you hungry fucking cunt?” Mark’s voice was a guttural rasp, devoid of its usual polite timbre.“Taking my cock like that?”

“Yes! I love it!Don’t stop!”

Tim’s hands gripped the armrests. The wood dug into his palms.He stared at the ceiling as if he could see through it. The slapping sounds grew faster, wetter.“Whose pussy is this?” Mark demanded.

“Yours!” Krissy screamed, immediate and desperate.“It’s yours, Mark! All yours!”

A low, animalistic groan from Mark, a series of sharp, frantic cries from Krissy, and then a heavy, shuddering silence.Tim sat frozen, the blood pounding in his ears. He heard a soft laugh, a murmur, the squeak of bedsprings.

He didn’t know how long he sat there.Time pooled around him like spilled oil.Then, movement. Footsteps overhead, moving to the master bedroom.Their bedroom. The floorboards creaked under a shared weight. More whispers, then Krissy’s voice again, softer now but no less fervent.“I want to taste you,” she was saying.“Let me taste you. Please.”

Tim’s stomach clenched.He stood up, the room tilting. He moved to the foot of the stairs, drawn by a morbid gravity.He leaned against the wall, listening.

The unmistakable, soft sucking sounds filtered down. Krissy making contented, needy noises in the back of her throat.Mark’s low curse of appreciation.“Jesus, Krissy.Look at you. Such a pretty mouth for such a filthy job.”

The sounds intensified. Tim could picture it with devastating clarity: Krissy on her knees, her big, soft breasts swaying, her lips stretched around him, her eyes closed in devotion.A devotion that was supposed to be his.

“Gonna cum in that sweet mouth,” Mark grunted, his breathing growing ragged.“You want it? Swallow it all?”

Krissy’s answer was a muffled, eager moan that vibrated through the floorboards and straight into Tim’s chest.

Mark’s climax was a series of sharp, loud groans.A final, shuddering exhale. Then quiet, broken only by the sound of Krissy swallowing, a delicate, intimate click in her throat.Silence again. A long, aching silence.Then Krissy’s voice, small and utterly shattered. “I’ve never… I didn’t know I could feel like this.”

“You can feel it anytime,” Mark replied, his voice smug and sated.“Your husband doesn’t own this. You do.This hungry, perfect little body.”

The bed creaked.They were moving again. Talking in low tones.Tim should have stormed up there.He should have roared. He stood paralyzed, a ghost in his own home.An hour passed.The sun shifted. A car door slammed outside, making him jump.Upstairs, a shower turned on. He heard them together in the spray, laughing.The mundane sound of domesticity applied to this atrocity.Later, dressed, they came downstairs. Tim had retreated to his chair, a statue.He watched them enter the living room. Krissy was wearing one of her plain, high-necked dresses, but her skin was flushed, her lips swollen.Mark had a proprietary hand on the small of her back.Krissy saw him. Her eyes widened, a flash of sheer terror before a mask of placid normality slammed down.“Tim! You’re… you’re home early.” Her voice was too bright, a thin veneer over rot.“Headache,” he managed, his own voice sounding foreign.

Mark’s smile was seamless, confident.“Tim.Good to see you. Krissy was just showing me some of your photo albums.Fascinating stuff.”

The lie hung in the air, putrid and enormous. Krissy’s eyes begged him not to pierce it.

“Yeah,” Tim said, looking from his wife’s guilty face to the guest’s victorious one. “Fascinating.”

He sat there long after Krissy had hurried to the kitchen to start dinner, after Mark had retired to the guest room with a courteous nod. The sounds of the house settled around him—the clatter of pans, the hum of the refrigerator, the faint, imagined echo of bedsprings and sobs of pleasure.

His world had not ended with a bang, but with a whisper of skin and a swallowed lie. It had ended hours ago, while he sat in his favorite chair, listening. The headache behind his eyes was no longer a dull throb, but a sharp, clean pain, a blade of perfect, crystalline understanding.He was a cuckold. The word, crude and ancient, bored into his skull. And his sweet, shy Krissy, his devoted wife, had a hunger in her that he had never sparked, a filthy, glorious hunger that a stranger had unlocked in a single afternoon.The knowledge didn’t bring anger first.It brought a profound, hollow cold. Then, seeping up from the depths where the cold met the remains of his pride, came something else.A dark, unwelcome, and shamefully specific curiosity. What exactly had she sounded like when she came for him? What did her face look like when it was twisted by a pleasure he couldn’t give her?

He sat in the gathering dark, the scent of Krissy’s pot roast filling the house, and he let the images play.Each one was a cut. Each one, perversely, a thrill. The war had begun, and the first, quietest battle had already been lost inside his own head.

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