Cover of Title: The Rookie's Reckoning

Title: The Rookie's Reckoning

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The BAU is called in to assist Nikolai’s office on a high-profile serial homicide investigation. Natalia leads the prosecution briefing with absolute confidence. The rookie is immediately captivated. Assuming she’s simply another young prosecutor, he begins harmless but obvious flirting throughout the day. He compliments her intelligence. Brings her coffee. Finds excuses to stand beside her while discussing evidence. Asks if she’d like to get dinner after the case briefing. Natalia recognizes exactly what he’s doing. She politely declines every advance without embarrassing him, remaining entirely focused on the investigation. Raziel notices every single interaction. As Unit Chief, he refuses to let his emotions interfere with the case. His face remains unreadable. His voice remains calm. His professionalism never slips. But the team notices the tiny signs. His jaw tightening. His increasingly precise task assignments. The rookie mysteriously being sent farther and farther away from Natalia. Marcus and Noah quickly realize exactly what’s happening and quietly begin placing bets on how long the rookie has left before someone tells him the truth. Eventually the rookie openly asks Natalia to have dinner with him. The room falls silent. Natalia calmly replies, > “I don’t think my husband would approve.” The rookie assumes she means some unknown man. Then Raziel quietly says, > “Your assumption would be correct.” Only then does the rookie realize he has spent the entire day flirting with his team leader’s wife. His soul immediately leaves his body. The BAU spends the next several hours pretending not to laugh. ──────── Private Scene Later, after the briefing, Raziel quietly corners Natalia in an empty hallway. No one else is around. He remains calm, but Natalia immediately recognizes the possessive jealousy beneath his perfectly controlled exterior. She admits she noticed the rookie flirting almost immediately. She also admits she deliberately smiled at Raziel a few times because she knew exactly how jealous he was becoming. Rather than getting angry, Raziel calmly points out every single thing the rookie did throughout the day, proving he noticed absolutely everything. Natalia secretly loves how attentive and protective he is. She gently teases him. Raziel finally cups her face and kisses her deeply after making absolutely certain they are alone. When they separate, he rests his forehead against hers and quietly tells he

Chapter 2: The Hallway Confession

The polished steel of the hallway seemed to vibrate with the echo of Sergej’s laughter, a sound that faded as they turned a corner, leaving the others behind. The administrative wing was quieter, the buzz of the fluorescents a thin, electric whine. Raziel’s hand remained on the small of Natalia’s back, a point of searing heat through the silk of her blouse. His touch wasn’t gentle now; it was deliberate, a guide.

He stopped before an unmarked door, a supply closet for outdated paper files, a place of dust and silence. He glanced at Sergej. A single, almost imperceptible nod passed between them. Sergej’s grin softened into something knowing. He clapped Raziel on the shoulder, gave Natalia a wink that held both brotherly affection and absolute understanding, and continued down the hall without a word, his footsteps retreating.

Then it was just them. The empty corridor. The hum. The weight.

Raziel turned the handle, pushed the door open, and guided Natalia inside. It clicked shut, plunging them into near-darkness save for a sliver of light from under the door. The air was close, smelling of old paper and industrial cleaner. Shelves laden with dusty binders created narrow canyons in the gloom.

He didn’t speak. He moved. In the confined space, his size was overwhelming. He backed her up until her shoulders met the cool, unyielding wall. He caged her in, one palm flat against the wall beside her head, his other hand coming up to cradle her jaw. His body didn’t touch hers, but she felt the heat radiating from him, a furnace contained within a suit.

She could see the faint gleam of his amber eyes in the dark, fixed on her. The professional mask was gone, stripped away, leaving something raw and primitive. The controlled burn she’d watched all day had finally found its tinder.

“All day,” he said, his voice a low rasp that scraped over her skin. It wasn’t loud. In the silence, it was devastating. “Every time he brought you a coffee. Every time he leaned into your space. Every time his eyes dropped to your mouth when you spoke.”

Natalia’s breath hitched. Her own composure, so perfectly maintained for hours, began to fracture under the intensity of his gaze. This was what she’d wanted, what she’d played for. The thrilling, terrifying consequence of her teasing. “He was just being eager,” she whispered, the lie fragile.

A low, humorless sound rumbled in his chest. His thumb stroked the line of her jaw, a touch that was both tender and threatening. “He was looking at what’s mine. He was thinking things he has no right to think. And you.” He leaned in closer, his beard brushing her cheek, his lips a breath from her ear. “You smiled. That specific smile. The one you use in court when you’re leading a witness into a trap.”

She shuddered. The vibration went through her entire body. “I was being professional.”

“You were stoking a fire, Natalia.” His hand left her jaw, sliding down the column of her throat, over the frantic pulse there, coming to rest on the first button of her ivory blouse. “You wanted to see if I’d notice. If I’d care.”

“And did you?” she breathed, tilting her head back against the wall, exposing her throat in a silent submission that was as natural to her as breathing.

His answer was the slow, deliberate pop of the button through its silk hole. Then the next. “You know I did. Every second. It was all I could think about. Pinning you right here. Reminding you.” His fingers parted the fabric, baring the lace edge of her bra. He bent his head, his mouth grazing the swell of her breast above the cup. “Reminding you who you belong to.”

A sharp gasp escaped her. Her hands came up, not to push him away, but to grip the thick wool of his suit jacket, anchoring herself. “Raziel…”

He ignored her, his mouth moving to the other side, his teeth scraping lightly over the lace. “You liked it. You liked him looking. You liked knowing it was driving me out of my fucking mind.” He straightened, looking down at her, his eyes blazing. “Admit it.”

There was no point in denial. Not here. Not with him. In the darkness, with the evidence of his possession unraveling her, she could only offer the truth. “Yes,” she whispered. “I liked it. I liked seeing your jaw get tight. I liked watching your hand on your ring. I liked knowing that underneath all that control, you were thinking about this.”

For a second, he was perfectly still. Then a growl, raw and deep, tore from him. He closed the last inch of space between them, his hips slamming against hers, pinning her to the wall. She felt the hard, thick length of him even through their clothes, a promise of blunt force. His mouth crashed down on hers.

This wasn’t the gentle kiss of a husband. This was a claiming. It was voracious and punishing, all tongue and teeth and desperate, stifled noise. He tasted of coffee and a fury that was purely possessive. She opened for him instantly, letting him devour, her own hunger rising to meet his, a sharp, clawing thing. Her fingers tangled in his short, dark hair, pulling him closer.

He broke the kiss, both of them gasping. “Mine,” he snarled against her lips, his hands pushing her blouse off her shoulders, letting it puddle at her elbows, trapping her arms. “Say it.”

“Yours,” she panted, her head spinning.

“Again.”

“Yours, Raziel. Always yours.”

His hands were everywhere, then—cupping her breasts through the lace, his thumbs circling her nipples until they hardened into aching points. He shoved the lace down, baring her completely to the cool, dusty air and the heat of his mouth. He took one taut peak into his mouth, sucking hard, his tongue lashing it. She cried out, the sound muffled against his shoulder.

He switched to the other, his attention brutal and exquisite. His free hand slid down her stomach, over the sleek fabric of her pencil skirt, and gripped her thigh, hiking it up around his hip. The position arched her back, pressing her core against the relentless ridge of his erection.

“You tease me in front of an entire room of federal agents,” he muttered, his voice thick with lust and dark amusement. He released her breast with a wet pop, his lips travelling up her neck. “You let that boy think, for even a second, that he had a chance. You’re going to learn what that costs, Natalia.”

Her world had narrowed to the feel of his hands, his mouth, the unyielding wall at her back, and the desperate, wet ache between her legs. “Please,” she whispered, the word a broken thing.

“Please what?” He ground himself against her, the friction making her see stars. “Use your words. Tell me what you need.”

She hated and loved this game. The demand for specificity, the forcing of her out of her poised silence into raw, honest need. “I need you to fuck me,” she gasped. “Right here. Now. I need you to make me forget anyone else even exists.”

A sharp, approving grin flashed in the darkness. He released her leg, his hands going to the waist of her skirt. He unzipped it roughly, pushed it down over her hips along with her blouse. It fell to the floor, a pool of grey and ivory. He made quick work of her stockings and lace panties, tearing them in his impatience, the sound of ripping fabric obscene in the quiet. She stood naked and shivering against the wall, utterly exposed.

He took a moment to look at her, his gaze a physical caress. Then he unbuckled his belt, the metallic rasp loud in the confined space. He freed himself, his cock springing out, thick and heavy and already gleaming at the tip. He was huge, a fact that never failed to send a shock of mingled fear and anticipation through her.

He didn’t prepare her. He didn’t tease. He hooked one of her legs over his arm, lifting her, spreading her wide. The broad head of his cock pressed against her entrance. She was wet, desperately so, but he was immense. She braced, her nails digging into his shoulders.

“Look at me,” he commanded, his voice guttural.

She forced her eyes open, meeting his burning amber gaze.

“Who do you belong to?”

“You,” she breathed.

He drove into her in one long, brutal, inexorable thrust.

The breath was punched from her lungs. A sharp cry was torn from her throat, swallowed by his mouth as he kissed her again, deep and consuming. He filled her completely, a stretch that bordered on painful, a perfect, shocking fullness. She felt impaled, owned, absolutely claimed.

He held himself there, buried to the hilt, letting her feel every inch, letting her body adjust to the ruthless invasion. He was breathing raggedly against her neck, his control a taut, fraying wire. “Feel that,” he grunted. “That’s me. That’s the only thing you feel. The only thing you think about.”

Then he began to move.

He set a punishing rhythm from the start, pulling almost all the way out before slamming back in, each thrust jolting her body against the wall. It was raw, primitive fucking. There was no finesse, no gentle build. This was about possession, about imprinting himself on her, about fucking the memory of anyone else’s eyes on her straight out of her mind.

The metal shelf beside them rattled with every drive of his hips. Dust drifted down, peppering their skin. The only sounds were the wet, slick slap of their joining, their ragged breaths, her choked moans, his low, animal grunts.

“This cunt,” he growled, his hand coming down to where they were joined, his thumb finding her clit, rubbing rough, demanding circles. “Is. Mine. You come on my cock, Natalia. You come reminding yourself of that.”

The dual assault was too much. The brutal fullness inside her, the abrasive pressure on her clit, the words growled against her skin—it coiled the tension in her belly into a snapping point. Her orgasm ripped through her without warning, a violent, convulsing wave that clenched around him, milking his length. She screamed, a raw, unfiltered sound, her head thrown back against the wall, her body convulsing in his grip.

He fucked her through it, his thrusts becoming erratic, losing their ruthless rhythm. “That’s it,” he panted. “Take it. Take all of me.” He buried his face in her neck, his own release hitting him. He drove in one last, deep time, holding her there as he emptied himself into her with a guttural groan, pulse after hot pulse flooding her depths, marking her from the inside.

For long moments, they stayed like that, collapsed against each other, against the wall, the only sounds their heaving breaths. The world, the case, the rookie, the office—it had all dissolved into this sweaty, spent darkness.

Slowly, he lowered her leg, his softening cock slipping from her. She winced at the sensitivity, the raw, well-used feeling. He kept his arms around her, holding her upright as she trembled, her face pressed against his sweat-dampened shirt.

He was the first to speak, his voice now a rough, spent version of its usual calm. “You’re a hell of a temptation, Mrs. Volkov.”

A weak, satiated laugh bubbled from her lips. “You’re a hell of a consequence, Mr. Volkov.”

He reached down, gathered her ruined clothes. He handed her the blouse, then crouched to help her step back into her skirt, his movements now tender, meticulous. He zipped it for her, his fingers brushing the small of her back. He righted her bra, fastened her buttons with a careful slowness that contrasted violently with the frenzy of minutes before.

When she was dressed, or as dressed as she could be with shredded stockings and underwear in his pocket, he cupped her face again. He kissed her, this time softly, a slow exploration that was about connection, not conquest. “You are the most competent, breathtaking woman I have ever known,” he murmured against her lips. “And you are mine. Every brilliant, infuriating, teasing inch of you.”

She leaned into his touch, the submission in her soul a quiet, warm pool. “I know.”

He rested his forehead against hers. “The next time you decide to test that, maybe wait until we’re not in a federal building.”

She smiled, a real one, full of warmth and sin. “No promises.”

He shook his head, a ghost of a smile touching his own mouth. He opened the closet door, the hallway light blinding after the darkness. He stepped out first, his posture instantly shifting back to Unit Chief—shoulders squared, expression neutral. He checked the corridor, then held a hand out for her.

She took it, stepping into the light, her body humming with the secret they carried. They walked back toward the bullpen, his hand briefly squeezing hers before letting go, the distance of professionalism settling between them once more, a fragile veneer over what now pulsed, warm and claimed, beneath their skin.

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