Cover of Venus's Victory

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What if the 1988 TV movie Goddess of Love starring Vanna White ended differently where Ted chose Venus over His fiancé in the end

Chapter 3: The Golden Apple Dream

The sterile glow of the desk lamp carved Ted’s bedroom into planes of light and pockets of profound shadow. Kathy slept beside him, her breathing a soft, steady rhythm in the dark. The clock read 2:17 AM. The staticky hum of the old TV in the corner, left on for noise, painted the ceiling with a shifting blue pallor. He stared at the framed photo on his nightstand, the one from Big Sur. Kathy’s smile was now just a smear of color in the gloom.

Sleep, when it finally came, was not an escape. It was a summons.

He stood in a vast, open-air hall of white marble, floating on a sea of clouds tinted apricot and rose by a dawn that never quite arrived. The air was perfumed with ozone and myrrh. Pillars, taller than sequoias, held up a dome of liquid gold. And on a dais, a throne of intertwined, living vines budded with flowers that bloomed and withered in continuous silent explosions.

She reclined there, a robe of sheer silver gauze draped over one hip. Her golden hair was loose, a river of molten metal cascading over the arm of the throne. She watched him approach, her eyes holding the light of that eternal sunrise.

“You came,” Venus said. Her voice was the wind through the pillars.

“I’m dreaming,” he said, his own voice sounding thin and mortal.

“Aren’t all the best things?” She smiled, and a shiver of pure want, untempered by guilt or reason, went through him. With a lazy gesture, she let the silver gauze slip from her shoulders. It pooled at her waist, revealing her full, heavy breasts. Her nipples were tight, dark rose peaks against skin so luminous it hurt to look at. “This can be your future. For an eternity of nights.”

She rose, the gauze falling completely away. She was carved from desire itself. Every curve was a promise, every hollow an invitation. She descended the dais steps, her bare feet silent on the warm marble. Rose petals began to fall from the cloud-strewn ceiling, a soft, fragrant rain.

She stopped before him, so close the heat radiating from her skin seared through his t-shirt. Her hand came up, cool fingers tracing the line of his jaw, his throat, down his chest. He was frozen, captive.

“Let me show you what forever feels like,” she whispered.

Her hand slid down his stomach, over the fabric of his boxers. She palmed his cock through the cotton, and it hardened instantly, achingly, under her touch. A low groan escaped him. Her fingers hooked into the waistband and pulled, pushing the fabric down just enough to free him. Her touch was electrifying. She wrapped her fingers around his shaft, her grip firm and knowing, and gave a slow, devastating stroke.

“Fuck,” he breathed, his head falling back.

“Yes,” she murmured, guiding him backward. The marble floor was gone, replaced by a deep, yielding bed of crimson petals. They cushioned his fall, their scent enveloping him. She climbed over him, a goddess astride a mortal, her thighs framing his hips. Her cunt was slick, glistening in the golden light. She held the head of his cock at her entrance, notching him there, letting him feel the incredible, pooling heat.

“Look at me,” she commanded.

He forced his eyes open. Her expression was no longer playful. It was fierce, possessive, hungry.

She sank down onto him in one slow, inexorable motion.

“Oh, god,” he choked out. She was so tight, so impossibly hot and wet. She swallowed him whole, taking every inch until his hips were pressed flush against her. The sensation was blinding, a white-hot fusion of pleasure and pain, of being utterly filled and completely devoured. She began to move, rocking her hips, setting a rhythm that was ancient and primal. Her inner muscles clenched around him in rippling waves, milking him deep inside her.

“This is you,” she moaned, her head tilting back, the column of her throat exposed. “This is you belonging to me.” She rode him harder, her breasts swaying, her breaths coming in sharp, sweet gasps. The sound of their joining was obscenely wet, a filthy, rhythmic slap of skin on skin that echoed off the marble pillars. He grabbed her hips, his fingers digging into the soft flesh, helping to drive her down onto him with each thrust.

“You feel that, Ted? That’s where you live now. Deep inside me.”

Her words, crude and divine, shattered the last of his pretense. He bucked up into her, meeting her stroke for stroke. The world narrowed to the slap of their bodies, her choked cries, the crushing tightness of her. He was losing himself, his mind unraveling into pure sensation. Her pace became frantic, desperate. She fucked him like she was trying to claim his soul through his cock, and he let her. He wanted her to.

Her moans climbed to a sharp, keening pitch. She clenched around him like a vise, her body shuddering. The convulsions triggered his own release. It tore through him with violent force, a tidal wave of pleasure that had no end. He came into her with a raw, broken shout, pumping his essence deep into her divine heat until he was spent, hollow, shaking.

She collapsed forward onto his chest, her sweat-slick skin sticking to his. The rose petals were crushed beneath them, their perfume now mixed with the salty, musky scent of sex.

“Forever,” she breathed into his ear.

Ted woke with a jolt, a gasp strangled in his throat. The bedroom was dark, the blue TV light still washing over the ceiling. Kathy mumbled in her sleep beside him and turned over.

His heart hammered against his ribs. The dream was visceral, throbbing in his nerve endings. His cock was painfully hard, tenting the sheets, aching with the ghost of her climax. The smell of roses seemed to linger for a moment before being overpowered by the stale smell of the apartment—old coffee from the cup on his desk, dust, synthetic carpet.

He lay there, paralyzed. The digital clock ticked to 3:04.

Then he felt it. A presence. A shift in the air pressure.

He turned his head slowly toward the bedroom doorway.

She stood there, silhouetted by the faint light from the living room. Not a dream. Real. Wearing what looked like one of his own white t-shirts, which hung to her mid-thigh. Her legs were bare. Her hair was a wild tangle.

“You called,” Venus said, her voice a sleepy murmur.

“I didn’t,” he whispered, terrified Kathy would wake.

“You did.” She padded silently into the room. The floorboards didn’t creak. She seemed to absorb the light, becoming the only solid thing in the dim room. She stopped beside his side of the bed. “With every pounding heartbeat since you left that restaurant. It’s a deafening sound.”

She reached out and pulled the sheet back from his body. Her eyes fell on his erection. A slow, satisfied smile touched her lips. “See?”

“You have to go,” he pleaded, his voice barely audible.

“Do I?” She crawled onto the bed. The mattress didn’t dip. She moved over him like smoke, settling her weight on his hips, straddling him exactly as she had in the dream. The thin cotton of his t-shirt she wore was all that separated her heat from his. He could feel her dampness through it. Kathy sighed in her sleep, mere inches away.

Ted was rigid with terror and want. This was madness. This was a line, once crossed, that had no eraser.

Venus leaned down, her lips brushing his ear. “She can’t hear us,” she breathed. “She’s dreaming of floral arrangements and mortgage rates. A safe, little dream.” She ground herself against him, a slow, circular motion that made his eyes roll back. “You’re dreaming of me. Let’s make it real.”

Her hand slid between them. She shoved his boxers down, freeing his aching cock. She positioned him, then lifted her hips to pull the t-shirt up and to the side. In the faint blue light, he saw the thatch of golden curls, the glistening folds. She didn’t guide him. She simply sank down.

The reality was a thousand times more intense than the dream. Hot, silken flesh sheathed him, impossibly tight, unbearably wet. He bit his own lip to keep from crying out. She took him to the hilt in one smooth, silent drop, her body accepting all of him. She went still, full of him, letting him feel every flutter and pulse of her inner walls.

Kathy stirred. “Ted?” she mumbled, voice thick with sleep.

Venus went motionless, a statue astride him, but her pussy clenched rhythmically around his cock, a secret, vicious massage. Ted held his breath.

“You okay?” Kathy whispered.

“Yeah,” he managed to grate out. “Bad dream. Go back to sleep.”

A moment of silence. Then Kathy’s breathing evened out again.

Venus’s eyes gleamed with wicked triumph. She began to move. Slow, shallow lifts of her hips, each one dragging his sensitive flesh against her in a way that threatened to undo him instantly. She bent forward, bracing her hands on the pillow on either side of his head, her hair a curtain that enclosed them in a world of her scent and sound. Her breaths were hot against his lips.

“Fuck your fiancée,” she whispered, her voice a thread of sound. “Go on. Do it. Fuck her while she sleeps next to you.”

Her words were a poison and an aphrodisiac. He was trapped. He was complicit. His hands came up and gripped her hips, his fingers pressing into the soft give of her flesh. He helped her, matching her slow, shallow rhythm. The bed remained eerily silent, not a creak. It was a silent, obscene pantomime of sex, performed in the dark beside his sleeping future wife.

Venus increased the pace, a slight, urgent pumping of her hips. Her slickness soaked him, the wet, hot sounds muffled by their bodies and the sheets. Her mouth found his, and she kissed him with a starving, devouring passion, swallowing his moans. He was hurtling toward the edge, his orgasm coiling at the base of his spine, a reckless, guilty explosion waiting to happen.

She broke the kiss, her forehead resting against his. “Come inside me,” she panted, her rhythm becoming frantic. “Fill me up. Mark me as yours. Do it.”

It was the final command. His control shattered. His hips jerked up off the mattress, driving into her deep, once, twice. A silent, seizing groan wracked his body as he came, pumping jets of his release into her welcoming heat. The pleasure was annihilating, a crash of black waves that drowned out every thought, every vow, every shred of who he thought he was.

She rode him through it, her own body clenching and pulsing in a long, shuddering climax that made her shake violently above him. She collapsed onto his chest, her heart hammering against his.

For a long minute, there was only the sound of their ragged breathing, slowly synchronizing. The mundane hum of the TV. Kathy’s sleep-steady breath.

Venus lifted her head. In the gloom, her expression was unreadable. She slid off him, and he felt the sudden, shocking emptiness, the chill of the air on his wet skin. She stood, adjusted the t-shirt, and looked down at him. Then her gaze shifted to the sleeping form of Kathy. Something flickered in her eyes—not pity, but a kind of ancient, weary recognition.

“The safe harbor or the storm, Ted,” she whispered. “You’re in the storm now. You don’t get to dock until it’s done with you.”

She turned and walked out of the bedroom. He heard no footfall, no door open or close.

He lay there, staring at the ceiling, his wife-to-be asleep beside him, another woman’s scent on his skin, her sex cooling on his thighs. The clock ticked to 3:21. The photo on the nightstand was now completely swallowed by shadow. He knew, with a cold, clear certainty that settled in his gut like a stone, that nothing in his life would ever be beige again.

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