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A sequel to the story called Kreacher Comforts by CJHowitzer. Cooped up in 12 Grimmauld Place with only the miserable house-elf Kreacher for company, Hermione finds herself subject to unexpected temptations. This takes place November of 1997 with three notable changes to the series cannon: 1) all characters are a year older (Hermione is 19 at the time, Ron and Harry are both 18). 2) the trio's shelter at 12 Grimmauld Place was never compromised and 3) Kreacher was never redeemed and remains a bitter, nasty elf.

Chapter 6: Kreacher Comforts Part 6

The oppressive velvet gloom of the master bedroom swallowed sound, making every gasp and rustle echo with startling intimacy. Hermione’s fingers dug into the dusty velvet counterpane, knuckles white. Kreacher’s massive, veiny length stretched her impossibly, a burning fullness that surged with each shallow thrust of his bony hips. His hot, ragged breath hissed against the nape of her neck, smelling of stale tea and something uniquely, musky old.

“More,” she gasped, the word torn from her throat, barely audible over the frantic pounding of her own heart. The guilt was a shadow lurking at the edges of her consciousness, momentarily eclipsed by a raw, primal need that shocked her. It wasn't love, not affection, but a desperate clawing at sensation, at feeling anything besides the suffocating dread of the war and the gnawing guilt of inaction. Being filled so completely, stretched so utterly, was a brutal escape. “Harder, Kreacher.”

The house-elf grunted, a low, guttural sound. His movements gained a desperate, jerky urgency. His spindly arms, surprisingly strong, tightened around her waist, pulling her back against his thin, wiry frame. The sheer, impossible scale of him moving inside her was overwhelming, a constant, stretching pressure punctuated by sharp, deep jolts that stole her breath. A choked moan escaped her lips, muffled by the bedding.

“Filthy Mudblood,” Kreacher rasped against her skin, the words dripping with his ingrained venom, yet his hips snapped forward with undeniable force, driving another gasp from her. “Defiling the noble house… defiling Kreacher… Mistress would curse you… curse Kreacher…” His voice was a broken wheeze, caught between ancient hatred and a bewildering, undeniable compulsion.

Hermione squeezed her eyes shut. The insult, so familiar, so vile, shouldn’t have sent a fresh jolt of heat through her core. Yet it did. It tangled with the deep ache spreading from her center, the slick sounds of their coupling, the smell of dust and old magic and him. She arched her back, pressing herself harder against him, chasing the friction, the obliteration. “Shut up,” she panted, not meaning it. “Just… just…”

A floorboard groaned thunderously in the corridor outside.

Both froze. Hermione’s breath hitched mid-moan, replaced by icy terror flooding her veins. Kreacher went utterly still inside her, a rigid presence that suddenly felt grotesque, monstrous. His ragged breathing stopped.

Silence. Thick, heavy, pregnant with disaster.

Then, muffled, uncertain: “Hermione?” Ron’s voice, laced with sleep and confusion, sounded far too close. “You alright? Heard… something.”

Hermione’s mind blanked. Panic, cold and sharp, sliced through the lingering haze of arousal. She was pinned beneath Kreacher, exposed, compromised beyond comprehension. The dusty air felt like razor blades in her lungs. Kreacher remained frozen, his body a tense, trembling cage around hers. She could feel the frantic thud of his heart against her back, a frantic bird trapped in a bony cage.

“Hermione?” Ron called again, closer now. His footsteps shuffled hesitantly on the landing just beyond the heavy oak door. The knob rattled faintly. “Door’s stuck. You in there?”

Stuck? Kreacher’s magic? Or just the house’s ancient warpage? It bought seconds. Precious, terrifying seconds. Hermione’s mind raced, scrabbling for a lie, any lie. Sweat beaded on her forehead, mingling with the dampness at her temples. Kreacher’s massive cock twitched involuntarily within her, a horrifying reminder of their position. She clenched involuntarily, a spasm of fear, and felt him shudder against her.

“Y-yes!” she managed, her voice strangled, pitched too high. She cleared her throat, forcing a semblance of calm. “Ron! I’m… I’m fine! Just… dropped a heavy book. The Arithmancy text. Spooked me.” The lie tasted like ash. She prayed he hadn't heard the moans, the gasps, Kreacher’s muttering.

A beat of silence stretched. She could almost picture Ron’s frown, the way his brow would knit together. “Sounded like… pain or something. You sure?”

“Positive!” Hermione chirped, the false brightness grating even to her own ears. She willed Kreacher to move, to disappear, but he remained a petrified weight against her. His thin fingers, still gripping her waist, felt like claws. “Just clumsy. Sorry I woke you. Go back to sleep!”

Another pause. The silence screamed. Hermione held her breath, every muscle locked rigid. Kreacher seemed to shrink into himself, his breath resuming in shallow, silent pants hot against her neck. The sheer, obscene intimacy of their position – her sprawled, him embedded deep, both utterly trapped – was a nightmare.

Finally, reluctantly, Ron’s voice came again. “Alright… if you’re sure. Night, then.” His footsteps retreated slowly, each creak of the ancient floorboards echoing like a death knell in Hermione’s ears.

The heavy tread of Ron’s footsteps faded into the oppressive silence of the house. Hermione remained utterly motionless, pinned beneath Kreacher’s rigid frame. His enormous cock, still buried deep within her, felt like a lead weight, a grotesque anchor to the shame flooding her veins. The scent of sex and dust and Kreacher’s stale musk was suddenly suffocating.

The scent of sex and dust and Kreacher’s stale musk was suddenly suffocating. Hermione squeezed her eyes shut, the velvet rough against her cheek, every nerve screaming awareness of the impossible intrusion, the lingering echo of Ron’s voice a cold splash on skin still fever-hot. Kreacher remained rigid, a statue of wiry muscle and bone fused against her back, his monumental weight buried deep, pulsing faintly with a life of its own that felt both alien and terrifyingly intimate.

Silence pressed down, thick and heavy as the velvet curtains. Only the frantic hammering of her own heart filled her ears, a counterpoint to Kreacher’s shallow, almost soundless breaths puffing against her nape. The terror of discovery curdled the heat inside her, twisting it into nausea, yet the raw, stretched fullness anchoring her to the dusty bed held a perverse, undeniable gravity.

Then, imperceptibly at first, the pressure within her shifted. Not a withdrawal, but a minute, involuntary clench deep in Kreacher’s narrow frame, telegraphing through the rigid connection. His thin fingers, still dug into the flesh of her hips like talons, spasmed. A low, guttural vibration started in his chest, more tremor than sound, reverberating through her own body.

He moved. Just a fraction, a shallow grind forward that forced a choked gasp from Hermione’s throat, instantly muffled by the bedding. It wasn’t the demanding thrust from before, but a hesitant, almost exploratory slide, thick and slow, dragging against over-sensitized nerves. The sheer, obscene scale of him seemed even more pronounced in this trembling stillness.

Hermione tensed, bracing for pain, for disgust to finally overwhelm her. Instead, a treacherous wave of sensation radiated outwards, a deep, aching throb that momentarily short-circuited her panic. Her nails scraped helplessly against the counterpane. A traitorous arch pressed her back harder against his concave chest, seeking… something. Oblivion? Punishment? She didn’t know anymore.

Kreacher responded with another grinding push, deeper this time. His bony knees dug into the backs of her thighs. There was no tenderness, only a feral, wordless urgency resurfacing, tempered now by a shared, paralyzing fear of the house’s listening silence. His ragged breaths grew slightly louder, harsher, whistling faintly through his crooked nose. The ancient bed frame let out a soft, protesting groan against the flagstone floor.

He found a rhythm, slow and deep, each measured stroke an exercise in agonizing friction and silent endurance. Hermione buried her face deeper into the musty velvet, biting her lip until she tasted copper, trying to stifle the low whimpers rising in her throat. Every slide inward felt like being split anew, a brutal fullness that bordered on violation, yet each withdrawal left a shocking, aching emptiness she instinctively fought against by clenching down.

Kreacher’s rhythm faltered, hitched. A guttural sound, like rocks grinding together, escaped him. His grip on her hips became bruising, fingers digging in with desperate strength as he pressed his face into the sweaty mess of her hair. His thrusts lost their measured pace, becoming frantic, shallow bucks, driven by a base instinct that overrode caution, his thin body shuddering violently against hers.

A raw, silent scream locked in Hermione’s chest as the impossible pressure inside her surged, a molten wave cresting. Her vision whited out at the edges, consumed by a terrifying, overwhelming sensation that was less pleasure and more an eruption of pure, primal release, tearing through her like lightning. Her body arched violently, rigid, every muscle seizing as the wave crashed over her, dragging her under.

Kreacher froze again, utterly rigid, pressed impossibly deep. His entire frame vibrated with a silent convulsion, a strangled rattle catching in his throat. The thick heat flooding her core was a shocking, visceral confirmation, a final anchor to the grotesque reality. They remained locked together, trembling, suspended in the aftermath, the silence now ringing with the sheer magnitude of their transgression and the distant, accusing tick of the grandfather clock downstairs.

Distant, muffled coughing echoed from the direction of Ron’s room.

The muffled cough from Ron’s room hung in the air like a guillotine blade poised to drop. Hermione’s breath solidified in her lungs, her body rigid against Kreacher’s equally frozen form. Every nerve screamed with the echo of Ron’s proximity, the phantom sound of his footsteps still vibrating in the floorboards beneath the thin rug. Kreacher’s monstrous length remained buried deep within her, a grotesque anchor to the moment, pulsing faintly with its own obscene life, a brutal counterpoint to the suffocating silence. Dust motes danced in the meager light filtering through a gap in the heavy velvet curtains, silent witnesses to their transgression.

"KREACHER, AGAIN," HERMIONE WHISPERED.

The ragged plea, barely audible, scraped against the silence. It wasn't desire speaking, not purely. It was defiance, a desperate, clawing need to reclaim the obliterating sensation before the crushing weight of shame and consequence crashed down. Fear sharpened the edge of her need, making it jagged, urgent.

Kreacher flinched as if stung. His bulbous eyes, wide with a terror that mirrored her own, darted towards the door. His thin lips peeled back from yellowed teeth in a grimace that was part revulsion, part bewildered compulsion. "Filth..." he rasped, the word a broken hiss, devoid of its usual venom, replaced by a raw, panicked confusion. "Mudblood filth... defiling... Kreacher must..." His bony fingers, still clamped bruisingly tight on her hips, trembled violently.

He didn’t move away. Instead, his wiry frame tensed. A low, guttural groan vibrated deep in his chest, a sound of pure, agonized conflict. Then, with a sudden, almost convulsive jerk, he pushed forward again, sliding impossibly deeper. It wasn’t a thrust born of passion, but of something feral and trapped, a piston driven by ancient magic and raw, undeniable biology reacting to her demand, her proximity, the shared terror freezing them both. The hot, thick slide was a brutal violation that simultaneously flooded her senses, short-circuiting thought.

Hermione arched, a strangled gasp catching in her throat. The sheer, overwhelming fullness was a physical shockwave, obliterating the fear for a fractured second. Her nails tore at the counterpane, seeking purchase in a world spinning out of control. Another cough, louder this time, unmistakably Ron clearing his throat, echoed down the corridor. They froze mid-movement, locked together like grotesque statuary. Kreacher’s ragged breath puffed hot and sour against her damp skin. Time stretched, thin and brittle. Each tick of the grandfather clock downstairs hammered against her skull. Is he getting up? Is he coming back?

Kreacher remained buried deep, trembling. His massive cock twitched violently within her confines, a traitorous pulse of life completely beyond his control. Hermione clenched involuntarily around him, a reflex of pure terror that ripped a choked whimper from Kreacher’s throat. His eyes screwed shut, his face a mask of ancient lines etched with bewildered agony. "Stop... Mudblood... stop..." he wheezed, yet his hips gave another shallow, involuntary grind, pressing that impossible thickness against her deepest, most sensitive core.

The conflicting sensations were maddening – the icy terror of discovery warring with the molten friction building low in her belly, fanned by the sheer, terrifying scale of his invasion and his choked protests. She felt split in two. Rational thought screamed danger, stop, hide. Primal instinct, honed by weeks of isolation, war-stress, and this shocking, taboo connection, screamed more, deeper, forget. "Please..." she breathed, the word dissolving into another gasp as Kreacher, driven by her plea or his own frantic biology, gave another desperate, grinding thrust. The ancient bed frame groaned its protest against the flagstones, a sound that seemed deafening in the listening silence. Footsteps. Hesitant. Paused outside the door. A soft thump – Ron leaning against it?

The soft thump against the thick oak door vibrated through the floorboards beneath Hermione’s bare knees. Kreacher froze, buried deep, his wiry frame rigid as old iron. His breath hitched, a wet, ragged sound in Hermione’s ear, sour with panic. Dust motes hung suspended in the thin shaft of grey light, like frozen stars in the gloom.

"Kreacher," Hermione hissed, her voice a thread of pure terror. The word was swallowed instantly by the crushing silence.

Ron’s voice, muffled but far too close, cut through the heavy air. "Hermione? You sure you’re alright? Heard… somethin’ else. Like… wood straining?" The doorknob rattled again, harder this time. "Blimey, this latch is stuck solid. Feels like it’s welded shut. Kreacher messing with the locks again?"

The house-elf flinched violently against her back at the sound of his name. His claw-like fingers dug deeper into the flesh of her hips, sharp enough to draw a stifled gasp. His enormous cock, impossibly heavy and thick inside her, gave a thick, urgent throb. His skin felt feverish, slick with sudden sweat against hers. The scent of stale tea, ancient dust, and their frantic coupling thickened, cloying.

"Must not… Mistress’s room… filthy Mudblood…" Kreacher wheezed, the words barely audible broken syllables against her neck. His voice trembled. It wasn’t just hatred now. It was raw, gibbering fear. Of Ron? Of discovery? Of the profoundly shattered taboo they were enacting? Hermione didn’t know. Couldn’t think. The pressure, the heat, the sheer presence of him filling her, combined with the icy terror of Ron’s proximity, locked her muscles rigid.

"Open up, Hermione!" Ron called, louder now, frustration edging his voice. He banged his fist against the wood. Thump. Thump. "Seriously! What’s going on in there? That wasn’t just a book!"

The sharp impacts against the door acted like a trigger. Kreacher’s breath exploded out in a strangled snarl. His body coiled, every ancient muscle pulling taut against Hermione’s back. The paralyzing fear ignited into something feral, desperate. Survival instinct, warped by centuries of servitude and a magic that bound him to this house, to this moment, to the terrified witch pinned beneath him.

He didn’t withdraw. He drove forward. Hard.

It wasn't the frantic grinding of panic, nor the hesitant exploration from moments before. It was a brutal, piston-like slam of his narrow hips, forcing his impossible girth deeper into her yielding heat with shocking force. A silent scream ripped through Hermione, her mouth wide in a soundless gasp, her spine arching violently. The sudden, tearing stretch bordered on agony, obliterating thought. Dust cascaded from the headboard.

"Kreacher!" she choked out, the name a mangled plea lost in the frantic slap of flesh and the creak of protesting bedsprings. Her fingers scrabbled uselessly at the dusty velvet, seeking escape, finding only the crushing pressure of his relentless thrusts.

The elf ignored her. His bulbous eyes were wide, unseeing, fixed on the shuddering door as if Voldemort himself stood beyond it. Every panicked bang from Ron outside was met with another jarring, inward slam from Kreacher. Thump. Jab. Thump. Ram. His movements were jerky, animalistic, fueled purely by terror and the overwhelming biological imperative to claim, to silence, to dominate the source of his peril. His thin chest heaved, rasping like bellows. "Quiet… Mudblood… be quiet… or he hears…" he gasped between thrusts, his voice a guttural rasp, the insults now hollow, stripped of conviction by primal fear.

Hermione’s world narrowed to the brutal rhythm. The deep, burning ache. The terrifying vulnerability of Ron just feet away. The obscene reality of Kreacher’s monstrous anatomy pistoning inside her, driven by panic. Each inward stroke forced a ragged gasp from her lips, each retreat a dizzying hollow. Her body, betraying her terror, began to clench and spasm around the invasive thickness, a traitorous wave of sensation building low in her belly, sharp and shameful. She bit down on the velvet, tasting mildew and the copper tang of blood. No. Not this. Not now.

Ron hammered on the door again. "HERMIONE! ANSWER ME!" The wood groaned. "I swear, if that git Kreacher’s hexing you—"

The hammering vibrated through the heavy oak, jolting Hermione’s teeth. Kreacher’s frantic, ragged thrusts ceased instantly, leaving her gasping, impaled on that impossible thickness, every nerve screaming exposure. His wiry body locked rigid against her back, a cage of terrified bone and muscle, his sour breath puffing hot and fast against her sweat-damp hair.

"Kreacher’s in here with you, isn’t he?" Ron’s voice, sharp with suspicion and anger, wasn't a question. It was an accusation hurled against the groaning wood. "What’s he done? Open this bloody door, Hermione! NOW!"

Hermione choked, her throat raw. The crushing pressure within her, Kreacher’s sheer, petrified stillness, Ron’s proximity – it fused into paralyzing terror. She tasted blood where she’d bitten her lip. Truth. The instruction screamed in her fragmented thoughts. Answer truthfully. She couldn't lie. Not again. Not effectively.

"Y-yes," the word scraped out, thin and cracked. She forced breath into her lungs. "He's… here." Kreacher flinched violently at the admission, a strangled whimper escaping his thin lips. His enormous cock twitched inside her, a horrifying pulse of life.

Silence from the corridor. Heavy. Disbelieving. Then the doorknob rattled violently, Ron throwing his weight against it. "Why? What’s he doing in there? Hermione, talk to me!" His voice cracked with confusion and rising fury. "Is he hurting you? Did he trap you?"

The truth. Brutal, unavoidable. Panic clawed its way up her throat. She couldn't confess this. Not like this. But she couldn't lie. "He’s… touching me," she breathed, the words thick with shame, muffled by the dusty velvet her face was pressed against. It was true. Devastatingly, grotesquely true. Kreacher’s thin fingers still dug into her hips like claws. His monumental presence filled her utterly. Touching? It was an obscene understatement.

Another shocked silence. Longer this time. Hermione felt Kreacher tremble, a fine, constant vibration thrumming through his frame into hers. His breath hitched wetly. "Touching?" Ron’s voice was dangerously low, stripped of its usual bluster, laced with ice. "Kreacher’s touching you? Where?"

The question hung, barbed and brutal. Hermione squeezed her eyes shut, tears pricking hotly. "Everywhere," she whispered, the confession ripped from her, raw and terrifyingly honest in its terrible ambiguity. It encompassed the clawed hands on her skin, the horrific intrusion, the shared, guilty heat. Kreacher made a choked, gurgling sound, part terror, part something else entirely unnameable.

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