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Scorched Vows

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A fanfic rewrite of the Chinese bl drama revenged love with extra hot and steamy scenes.

Chapter 1: The Penthouse Confrontation

The city was a sprawl of electric light forty stories below, a silent, glittering testament to everything he’d conquered. Ling Chen stared at it, a crystal tumbler of whisky dangling from his fingers. The silence in the penthouse was absolute, a vacuum sealed by double-paned glass. It was a silence he usually craved. Tonight, it felt like a verdict.

The soft chime of the private elevator was a gunshot in the quiet.

He didn’t turn. He listened. The hesitant footsteps on marble, the faint, quickening breath. The scent of rain and cheap laundry detergent cut through the room’s careful aroma of sandalwood and jasmine.

“You left this.”

Su Yan’s voice was quieter than he remembered from the noise of the bar, from the heat of the taxi. Ling Chen finally turned.

He stood there, just inside the vast living room, looking more out of place than a stray dog in a museum. His jeans were faded, his simple t-shirt too thin for the building’s aggressive climate control. In his hand was a single silver cufflink, winking in the ambient city glow.

Ling Chen set his glass down on the steel ledge of the window. The click was precise. “The doiler called up. Said you were insistent.”

“It looked expensive,” Su Yan said, not moving from his spot. He was holding himself very still, like prey sensing a predator in the long grass.

“It is.” Ling Chen walked toward him, not hurrying. His own footsteps were silent on the rug. He watched Su Yan’s amber eyes track him, wide and alert. “Most people would have just kept it. Or left it at the desk. You came all the way up.”

“I’m not most people.”

A faint, genuine smile touched Ling Chen’s mouth. “No. You’re not. The man last night… he would have kept it. He was all bold hands and confident smiles.” He stopped a foot away, close enough to see the faint flush on Su Yan’s throat, to catch the warmer, cleaner scent of his skin beneath the detergent. “You look like a rabbit who’s seen a hawk.”

Su Yan’s chin lifted a fraction. “I’m not a rabbit.”

“Prove it.”

He saw the decision flash in those warm eyes—fight or flight. For a second, he thought flight would win. Su Yan’s fingers tightened around the cufflink. Then, deliberately, he held it out.

Ling Chen took it. His fingers brushed Su Yan’s palm. The contact was electric, a jolt that went straight to his gut. Last night had been a blur of dark corners and urgent friction, a means to burn off the corrosive anger left by his former partner’s betrayal. This was different. This was clear. And sharp.

He didn’t let go of Su Yan’s hand. He used the grip to pull him forward, not toward the bedroom, but toward the window wall. Su Yan stumbled, a small gasp escaping him as his free hand came up, bracing against Ling Chen’s chest.

“What are you doing?”

“Showing you the view.” Ling Chen’s voice was a low murmur as he backed Su Yan up until his shoulders met the cool, unyielding glass. The entire city was at his back, a dizzying drop into nothing. “You left before dawn. You didn’t see it.”

Su Yan was pressed between the hard plane of the window and the harder line of Ling Chen’s body. He was breathing fast now, his chest rising and falling against Ling Chen’s. Fear. Arousal. A potent cocktail. Ling Chen could smell it on him.

“I need to go,” Su Yan whispered, but he wasn’t pushing away. His fingers had curled into the fine wool of Ling Chen’s suit jacket.

“You think you can just walk out after last night?” Ling Chen breathed the words against the shell of his ear, feeling the fine tremble that raced through Su Yan’s frame. “You think it’s that simple?” He shifted his hips, grinding his growing erection against Su Yan’s thigh. “Your body remembers. It knows what it started.”

“That was a mistake,” Su Yan said, but the protest was weak, throaty.

“The only mistake was you leaving.” Ling Chen released his wrist and brought his hand up, cupping Su Yan’s jaw, forcing his head to turn and look at the sprawling lights. “Look at it. All of that. I took it. I own chunks of it. And right now, I want to own the feeling of you coming apart against this glass.”

He didn’t wait for permission. His other hand slid down from Su Yan’s jaw, over the frantic pulse in his throat, down the front of that thin t-shirt. He palmed him through his jeans, a rough, claiming squeeze that made Su Yan cry out and arch off the window.

“Fuck… Ling Chen…”

“Finally,” Ling Chen growled, nuzzling into his neck, biting down on the tendon. “Say my name again.”

He unfastened Su Yan’s jeans with quick, practiced tugs, the button flying, the zipper a harsh rasp in the quiet. He shoved his hand inside, past the waistband of plain cotton briefs, and wrapped his fingers around Su Yan’s cock. It was hot and already hard, velvety skin over iron. Su Yan jerked, a full-body spasm, his head thumping back against the glass with a dull tok.

“Shit, oh shit…” Su Yan babbled, his hands flying to grip Ling Chen’s forearm, not to pull him away, but to anchor himself.

Ling Chen worked him with ruthless, knowing strokes, his own breath coming hot and fast against Su Yan’s neck. “This is what you came back for. Don’t lie. You stood in the lobby with my cufflink in your sweaty little hand and you thought about this. About my hands on you. My cock in you.”

He twisted his wrist on the upstroke, a cruel, delicious friction that made Su Yan sob. Pre-come slicked his fingers, making the slide filthy and perfect. He could feel Su Yan’s muscles locking, teetering on the edge already. So responsive. So desperate for it.

“Not yet,” Ling Chen commanded, squeezing the base hard, staving off the climax. Su Yan whimpered, tears of frustration beading in the corners of his eyes. “Not until I say.”

He withdrew his hand, ignoring Su Yan’s broken noise of protest. He unbuckled his own belt, the leather sliding free with a hiss. He undid his trousers, freeing his own aching length. He was thicker, heavier, the head already slick and dark.

He spat into his palm, a crude, deliberate act, and smoothed it over himself. Then he hooked his hands under Su Yan’s thighs, lifting him with a grunt of effort. Su Yan yelped, his legs instinctively wrapping around Ling Chen’s hips, his arms circling his neck for balance. He was suspended, pinned between the man and the abyss.

“Look at me,” Ling Chen demanded, and Su Yan did, his eyes wild, his lips parted. “You take all of it.”

He pushed inside.

It was a brutal, unforgiving invasion. Su Yan was tight, breathlessly so, and he cried out, a sharp, pained sound that melted into a groan as Ling Chen seated himself fully, sheathed to the hilt in that incredible, clenching heat.

For a moment, neither moved. Ling Chen trembled with the effort of control, savouring the feel of Su Yan stretched around him, gasping for air against his shoulder. The neon city lights painted shifting colors across Su Yan’s stunned, pleasure-wrecked face.

Then Ling Chen began to move.

He fucked him against the window with a relentless, driving rhythm. Each thrust slammed Su Yan’s body into the glass, a steady, shocking percussion. There was no tenderness, only claiming. Only possession. The pleasure was a white-hot wire, pulling tighter and tighter in Ling Chen’s gut.

“You feel that?” he grunted, his voice rough. “That’s mine. That tight, hot hole is mine to use. You come when I fucking tell you to.”

Su Yan could only nod, his words stolen, his face buried in Ling Chen’s neck. His own cock was trapped between their stomachs, leaking and neglected, rubbing against the exquisite weave of Ling Chen’s suit with every jarring impact.

Ling Chen could feel the orgasm coiling, a tsunami building in the base of his spine. He shifted his angle, driving up, and Su Yan screamed, his back bowing. “Now,” Ling Chen snarled. “Come for me right fucking now.”

It was as if he’d flipped a switch. Su Yan shattered, his climax tearing through him with violent shudders, his channel clamping down on Ling Chen’s cock in rhythmic, milking pulses. The raw, helpless pleasure on his face was the most beautiful thing Ling Chen had ever seen. It undid him.

With three more savage thrusts, Ling Chen followed him over, his own release roaring up his spine and erupting deep inside Su Yan’s body. He held him there, impaled, as he pumped his seed into him, each pulse wracking through them both.

The silence returned, broken only by their ragged, syncopated breaths. Ling Chen slowly let Su Yan’s legs down, easing him until his feet, shaky and unstable, found the floor. Su Yan winced as Ling Chen pulled out, a soft, wet sound followed by a slow, hot trickle down his thigh.

They stood there,foreheads pressed together, clinging to each other as the world slid back into focus. The city glittered, indifferent. The cool glass seeped through Su Yan’s shirt.

Ling Chen expected him to flee again. To shove him away, grab his ruined clothes, and run for the elevator.

Instead, Su Yan’s hands, which had been clenched on his shoulders, slowly relaxed. His breath hitched, and to Ling Chen’s utter shock, a single, hot tear tracked through the sweat on Su Yan’s cheek, dropping onto the collar of his own ruined, expensive shirt.

It wasn’t the tears of a man who’d been used. It was the quiet, bewildered devastation of a man who’d been seen, completely and terribly, and who had seen something in return.

Ling Chen’s certainty, his ruthless control, fissured. Just a hairline crack. He’d wanted to own a moment, to dominate a memory. He hadn’t planned on this… this devastating, quiet aftermath that felt more intimate than the sex.

He caught Su Yan’s chin again, gentler this time, wiping the tear away with his thumb. Su Yan didn’t flinch. He just looked at him, raw and open.

The phone on the steel ledge began to vibrate, lighting up with the name of a board member. The real world, with its betrayals and its cold calculations, was demanding his return.

Ling Chen didn’t move. He kept his eyes on Su Yan, on the wreckage he’d made and the unexpected vulnerability staring back at him. The game had just changed, and for the first time in years, he wasn’t the one who’d written the rules.

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