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Scorched Vows

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A fanfic rewrite of the Chinese bl drama revenged love with extra hot and steamy scenes.

Chapter 2: The Aftermath

The phone buzzed against the steel, a persistent, angry insect. The name glowed—a reminder of contracts and knives in the dark. Ling Chen watched that single tear track its path until it disappeared into the collar of his shirt, a stain more profound than sweat or sex.

He reached past Su Yan’s head and silenced the phone with a vicious tap. The screen went dark.

The silence that followed was different. It breathed.

Su Yan shivered, the aftershocks of his climax merging with the chill from the glass at his back. Ling Chen could see the reality crashing back into his eyes, the dawning horror at where he was, what they’d just done, what was slowly leaking down his inner thigh.

Without a word, Ling Chen took his hand. His grip wasn’t demanding this time. It was simply there. An anchor.

Su Yan let himself be led, his steps unsteady on the smooth marble, around the vast living space and down a short, shadowed corridor. Ling Chen pushed open a door, and light, soft and automated, bloomed in the bathroom.

It was a study in contrasts, like its owner. Black marble veined with gold covered every surface, cold and unyielding. The fixtures were brushed gold, warm against the stone. A rain showerhead, wide as a dinner plate, was set into the ceiling above a glass enclosure. The air still carried a faint, expensive scent of jasmine from Ling Chen’s morning routine, now underpinned by the salt-and-sex smell they brought in with them.

Ling Chen guided him inside the glass cube and turned the water on. It came instantly, a pounding, hot cascade that filled the enclosure with billowing steam. Su Yan flinched as the first drops hit his skin, then sagged as the heat penetrated his trembling muscles.

“Your clothes are ruined,” Ling Chen said, his voice almost lost in the roar of the water. He didn’t wait. He pushed the soaked, clinging t-shirt up Su Yan’s torso. Su Yan raised his arms, a pliant, wordless surrender, letting the fabric be pulled over his head and discarded in a wet heap on the floor. His jeans and briefs followed, peeled from his legs where they clung like a second skin.

Ling Chen shed his own clothes with efficient, practiced motions. The soaked suit was a loss. He didn’t care.

Naked under the deluge, they were stripped of more than fabric. The city’s distant glitter was gone, the boardroom power plays obscured by steam. Here, there was only heat, water, and skin. Su Yan’s slender body was flushed pink, his hair plastered dark to his forehead. He kept his eyes down, watching the water swirl at their feet, carrying away the physical evidence of what had happened by the window.

Ling Chen reached for a bottle, squeezing liquid soap into his palm. The scent of sandalwood and cedar bloomed, masculine and clean. He started with Su Yan’s shoulders, working the lather over his skin with a firm, methodical pressure. His hands moved down the delicate lines of his spine, over the faint bruises beginning to bloom on his hips from the grip against the glass.

He turned Su Yan to face him. The younger man finally looked up, water cascading over his lips, his eyelashes beaded. Ling Chen soaped his chest, his stomach, the motion clinical yet intensely intimate. He washed away the city, the bar, the memory of the one-night stand. He was rewriting the script.

His hand slid lower, through the dark, neat trail of hair. He took Su Yan’s soft, spent cock in his soaped hand, washing him there with a thoroughness that made Su Yan’s breath catch. He cupped his balls, lifted them, cleaned the salt from the crease of his thigh.

Then his fingers trailed further back, through the cleft of his ass. Su Yan tensed, a sharp intake of breath. Ling Chen’s touch was insistent, probing. He pushed a soap-slick finger inside, just to the first knuckle, feeling the clenching heat, feeling the faint, slick remains of his own come mixing with the soap and water.

“You’re still open,” Ling Chen murmured, the sound a rumble in the steam-filled space. “Still stretched from my cock.”

Su Yan’s cheeks flushed a deeper red. He braced his hands against the cold black marble wall, his head hanging.

Ling Chen rinsed him, his hands gentler now, pouring clean water over his skin. He turned him again, pressing his chest to the wall. The marble was a shocking cold against Su Yan’s front, a counterpoint to the scalding water on his back and Ling Chen’s big, hard body aligning behind him.

Ling Chen’s erection, hard and heavy again, nestled against the cleft of Su Yan’s ass. He rocked his hips slowly, not entering, just grinding against him, letting him feel the insistent pressure.

“You came back,” Ling Chen said, his mouth against Su Yan’s wet shoulder. “That makes you mine.”

“I brought your cufflink,” Su Yan whispered, the protest weak, automatic.

“You brought yourself.” Ling Chen spat into his own hand, a crude gesture in the pristine enclosure. He slicked himself, then positioned the broad head at Su Yan’s entrance. He didn’t shove. He pushed, a relentless, slow invasion that made Su Yan cry out and press his forehead to the marble.

It was a tighter fit this time, more conscious. Su Yan was tense, every muscle clenched. Ling Chen held his hips, stilling him. “Breathe,” he commanded, his voice low. “And relax. Take it. You can take all of me.”

He continued his slow, devastating push, millimeter by millimeter, until he was fully sheathed. He stayed there, buried in that incredible heat, feeling Su Yan’s body quiver around him, adapt to him. The water beat down on them, a liquid veil.

Then he began to move.

This wasn’t the frantic, punishing pace of the window. This was deep, measured, each thrust a full, withdrawing slide followed by a slow, complete re-entry. It was possessive. It was claiming in a way that felt more permanent than violence.

“This,” Ling Chen grunted, his rhythm unbreaking, “is what forever feels like.” He drove in, hard on the last word. “You think you can walk away from this? You think any other man will ever make you feel like this? Like you’re completely fucking full?”

Su Yan couldn’t answer. Whimpers were punched out of him with every deep stroke. His cock, trapped between his belly and the cold marble, began to harden again, a slippery friction against the stone. His hands scrambled for purchase on the smooth wall.

Ling Chen leaned over him, covering him completely, his chest to Su Yan’s back, his mouth at his ear. His thrusts gained a subtle, grinding intensity, angling to brush that perfect, devastating spot inside with every penetration.

“I’m gonna keep you,” Ling Chen hissed, the words filthy and tender all at once. “Gonna keep you right here. You’ll wake up with my dick in you. You’ll fall asleep with my taste in your mouth. I own this sweet, tight hole. I own these fucking tears.” He licked one from Su Yan’s cheek. “Mine.”

Su Yan was unravelling again, his body seizing, his internal muscles fluttering wildly around Ling Chen’s invading length. “Please… I can’t…”

“You can. You will.” Ling Chen’s control was a thin, fraying wire. The feeling of Su Yan coming apart around him, so vulnerable and pliant under his hands, was shredding his defenses. He fucked into him with sharper, harder strokes, the water sluicing between their connected bodies. “Come. Now. Let me feel it.”

With a shattered cry that was mostly Ling Chen’s name, Su Yan obeyed. His orgasm wasn’t violent this time; it was a deep, pulsing surrender, a flooding warmth that seemed to weaken his very bones. His body clamped down, a silken, rhythmic vise.

The sensation tore Ling Chen’s last thread of restraint. With a raw, guttural sound that held no cunning, no calculation, he buried himself to the root and came, his release hot and endless, pumping into Su Yan’s convulsing body, claiming him from the inside all over again.

He collapsed over him, his weight pinning Su Yan to the wall, both of them heaving for air under the relentless water. The steam was thick, a private cocoon.

Slowly, the world returned. The water began to cool. Ling Chen softened inside him, slipping out with a soft, wet sound. He turned off the spray.

The sudden silence was loud. Dripping water. Their ragged breaths.

Ling Chen reached for a towel, a vast, black rectangle of Egyptian cotton. He wrapped Su Yan in it, rubbing his arms, his back, with a brisk, oddly careful tenderness. He toweled his own hair, his movements slower, his eyes never leaving Su Yan’s exhausted, vacant face.

He led him, silent and compliant, into the massive bedroom. The bed was a minimalist platform, sheets the colour of charcoal. Ling Chen pushed him down onto it. Su Yan sat, the towel around his shoulders, watching as Ling Chen pulled open a drawer and took out a pair of soft, grey sweatpants and a simple black t-shirt.

“Put these on,” Ling Chen said, his voice hoarse.

Su Yan dressed mechanically. The clothes were infinitely too large, the fabric smelling subtly of Ling Chen’s detergent. He swam in them.

Ling Chen pulled on a pair of similar pants, leaving his chest bare. He sat on the edge of the bed, not touching Su Yan, just looking at him in the dim light from the en-suite.

The cufflink. The return. The tears. The way he’d taken every brutal, possessive thing given to him and met it with a trembling, open acceptance.

This wasn’t a transaction. This wasn’t dominance for the sake of power. This was something else, something that made the carefully constructed fortress of Ling Chen’s heart feel perilously thin.

“Stay,” Ling Chen said. The word wasn’t a command. It was a question, stripped bare.

Su Yan looked at him, his amber eyes clear now, exhausted, and fathomless. He didn’t nod. He didn’t speak. He simply shifted on the bed, pulling back the heavy duvet, and slid underneath. He turned on his side, facing away, curling into the immense space as if trying to make himself small.

Ling Chen watched the line of his body under the covers for a long moment. Then he turned off the light, plunging the room into a darkness softened only by the faint, peach-coloured glow of the city bleeding around the edges of the blinds.

He got into the bed. He didn’t reach for Su Yan. He lay on his back, staring at the hidden ceiling, listening to the other man’s breathing slowly even out into sleep.

The untouched phone, now in the other room, contained a dozen missed calls and the seeds of a hundred retaliations. His former lover’s betrayal was a cold, hard stone in his gut. But here, in the dark, with the warmth of a stolen, shattered boy radiating across the sheets toward him, that stone was the only thing that felt familiar.

Everything else was terrifyingly, dangerously new.

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