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The Gift of Submission

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A gorgeous and obedient submissive thrives when she is made useful in whatever way her master sees fit. She finds a dominant who promises to take care of her if she followed his rules, and she slots into the role like a puzzle piece. Her dominant was degrading and rough with her during sex but he was otherwise sweet and attentive to her, always calling her his perfect girl. He trusts her with his home - their home now, and she cares for him like a wife would. He shows her how to please him and in turn he shows her pleasure like she’s never experienced. She becomes inseparable from him, having developed real feelings for him.

Chapter 6: Shattered Trust

The torn silk whispered against her skin, a cool shock in the warm, enclosed dark of the car. Alistair’s mouth was relentless on hers, his hand a vise on her thigh. The city outside was a blur of sodium gold and shadow, the engine’s purr a constant, vibrating note beneath them.

He broke the kiss, his breath hot and ragged against her lips. “On your knees. Turn around.”

His voice was guttural, stripped of all its earlier calculated polish. She moved without thought, the command wired directly into her spine. The space was tight, lavish but confining. She clambered awkwardly over the center console, the soft leather of the back seat cool under her knees. The dress, ripped down the front, hung loose, exposing her chest to the chill of the air conditioning.

“All the way,” he growled, his hands guiding her hips, turning her until she faced the tinted window, the ghostly reflection of her own wide eyes looking back. He was a dark shape behind her, his movements sharp with intent.

She heard the sleek sound of his zipper, the rustle of fine wool. Then his hands were on her hips again, yanking her backwards, pulling her until she was perched over him. He guided himself, the blunt, insistent head of his cock pressing against her. She was already slick, the ache from the restaurant, from his possession in front of Julian, pooling into a hot, liquid readiness.

With a single, forceful pull, he brought her down onto him, sheathing himself inside her in one deep, claiming stroke.

A sharp gasp was torn from her lungs. He filled her utterly, a stretch that bordered on painful, a delicious, devastating fullness. Her head fell back against the solid wall of his shoulder, her body arching instinctively.

“That’s it,” he muttered into her ear, one arm locking around her waist, holding her firmly against him. His other hand slid around her hip, his fingers finding her clit with unerring accuracy. “You were so fucking perfect for me. So still. So quiet. Letting him look his fill and knowing you were mine.”

He began to move her, his strong arms setting a ruthless rhythm, lifting her almost off his lap and then dragging her back down, taking his cock deep. The angle was different, intense, each descent hitting a spot that made her vision blur. His fingers worked her clit in tight, circling patterns, the dual sensations coiling a wire of pleasure so tight in her gut she thought it might snap.

Her hands, seeking anchor, flew up of their own accord. One tangled in the dark hair at the nape of his neck, the other gripping his shoulder, her fingers digging into the fabric of his suit. She was pinned between his body and his will, a doll being used for his release, for his reaffirmation.

“Look at you,” he breathed, his voice a harsh rasp against her ear. “My good girl. My perfect, filthy girl. Dripping wet for me in the back of a car. Letting me use this sweet cunt after you showed him what he can’t have.”

The crudeness of his words, the degrading praise, lit a fire under her skin. Every “good girl” was a brand. Every “filthy” a sacrament. She was stretched open, impaled on him, his public trophy reduced to a private, sweating, moaning vessel. The car swayed with Martin’s turns, adding a disorienting, illicit thrill. They could be seen, in some abstract way, a silhouette against a window, but they were untouchable, sealed in their mobile, leather-lined cell.

His thrusts became more urgent, less controlled. He fucked up into her, his hips pistoning, driving her body up and down his length. The wet, rhythmic slap of skin on skin joined the hum of the tires. His breath sawed in her ear, his fingers on her clit turning relentless, demanding.

“Come on,” he gritted out. “Come on my cock. Show me. Show me who you belong to.”

The coil snapped. Pleasure detonated through her, a white-hot wave that started where he filled her and radiated outward, seizing her muscles, clenching around him, stealing the air from her lungs. A raw, broken sound was torn from her throat, and as the world fractured into sensation, his name was the only solid thing left.

“Ali!”

The cry was muffled against his shoulder, a desperate, surrendering gasp. He groaned, a deep, satisfied sound, and his own rhythm shattered. His hold on her tightened impossibly as he drove up one last, final time, holding her down as he pulsed inside her, his release hot and claiming.

For a long moment, there was only the sound of their ragged breathing and the steady purr of the engine. The city continued its indifferent flow outside the glass. He was still inside her, his arm slackening but not letting go, his forehead damp against her temple. His fingers, gentle now, stroked through the damp hair at her brow.

“Mine,” he whispered, the word no longer a command, but a quiet, satisfied truth.

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