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The Submission of Midori

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Midori is a 30 year old, Japanese MMA instructor, with black eyes, long black hair, a toned lithe body, and wide hips. She is beautiful with soft features and a pointed chin Her student Ian is 31, tall, thickly muscled and scarred. With dark blue eyes and blonde hair. His cock is ten inches long and six inches in girth. He’s ruggedly handsome Midori knows Ian is attracted to her, she is attracted to him too. She hasn’t acted on it out of professional pride and fighters integrity. Ian knows she’s into CNC, strugglefucking, and impact play. He’s come into the gym while only she’s there and locked the door. Tonight she’s going to get what she secretly craves, all holes.

Chapter 1: The Locked Door and the Point of No Return

The overhead lights had been switched to the dim, nighttime crimson that made the mats look stained. Midori’s sneakers squeaked once, a sharp sound in the vast quiet, as she finished her cooldown laps. The scent of old sweat and disinfectant was a familiar blanket. It was just her and the heavy bags now, the echoes of the evening’s class finally dissipated.

It was just her and the heavy bags now, the echoes of the evening’s class finally dissipated. She leaned against the cool metal of the weight rack, closing her eyes, letting the quiet hum of the refrigeration unit in the corner wash over her. This was her sanctuary. This was where she was in control.

The click of the main door’s deadbolt was louder than any punch she’d thrown all night.

Her eyes snapped open. Ian stood with his back to the door, his broad frame blocking the exit. The crimson light carved deep shadows into the planes of his chest, made the old, silvery scars on his shoulders and ribs look like cracks in stone.

He didn’t move. Just watched her. His dark blue eyes were like chips of ice in the gloom.

“Class is over, Ian.” Her voice was steady, a teacher’s voice. But her heart was a trapped bird against her ribs.

“I know.” His voice was low, gravelly. “We’re not here for class.”

He pushed off the door and took one step forward. Then another. His movement was that same controlled stalk he used in the cage. Predatory. Intentional. The air seemed to thicken, to pull tight between them.

Midori straightened up, every muscle coiled. “What are you doing?”

“Giving you what you want.” Another step. He was close enough now that she could see the pulse in his neck. “What you think about when you’re supposed to be correcting my form. When you’re watching me spar. I see it, Midori. That little flash. The hunger.”

Her breath caught. Denial was a reflex. “You’re out of line. Leave now or I’ll—”

“You’ll what?” He was in her space now, the heat of his body a tangible force. The scent of him—clean sweat and something darker, purely male—wrapped around her. “Use that jiu-jitsu on me? Go ahead.”

Her hand shot out, a precise strike aimed at his throat. He caught her wrist an inch from its target, his scarred fingers closing like a vice. The strength in his grip was absolute, terrifying, and a bolt of pure, undiluted lust shot straight to her core. She gasped.

“There it is,” he murmured, pulling her hand down, twisting her arm gently but firmly behind her back. He spun her, pulling her tight against his chest. His other arm banded across her collarbones, holding her in place. Her back was to his front, every hard line of him imprinted on her. She could feel the thick ridge of his erection against the swell of her ass.

“Stop,” she breathed, but it was weak. A token. A required part of the script.

“No.” The word was a rumble against her ear. His mouth was right there. His breath was hot. “You don’t get to be the sensei right now. You don’t get to be in charge. Tonight, you’re just a woman with a filthy secret. And I’m going to fuck it right out of you.”

He released her arm only to snake his hand around her front, delving beneath the waistband of her training shorts. His rough, calloused fingers found her through the fabric of her underwear. She was soaking wet.

“Jesus,” he groaned, his voice thick with victory. “Drenched. You’ve been thinking about this all night, haven’t you? Since I walked in. Since I took my shirt off.” He rubbed the heel of his hand hard against her clit, and her knees buckled. A ragged whimper tore from her throat.

He held her up easily, his arm like steel. “You like that? You like being held down? Being taken?”

She couldn’t speak. She nodded, a frantic jerk of her head.

She nodded, a frantic jerk of her head.

The acknowledgement, the surrender, hung in the air for one blazing second. Then every instinct she’d spent a lifetime—a career—cultivating roared back to the surface. This was wrong. This was insane. He was her student. She was the authority. The power dynamic wasn’t a game here, it was her living reality, and she was letting him shatter it.

“No,” she snarled, the word guttural and real.

She STRUGGLES AGAINST HIM.

It wasn’t a performative wiggle. It was a explosion of trained violence. She dropped her weight, breaking his stance, and drove her elbow back into his ribs. He grunted, his grip loosening for a split second. It was enough. She spun out of his hold, putting distance between them, her breath sawing in her lungs. The flush on her skin wasn’t just arousal now; it was anger, sharp and bright.

“You don’t get to just decide that,” she spat, circling him, her body low and ready. “You think you know what I want? You think a wet pussy is a fucking contract?”

He smiled, a slow, dangerous curl of his lips. He didn’t look offended. He looked thrilled. He mirrored her stance. “I know it’s a ‘yes’. I know you’re fighting right now because part of you is fucking terrified of how much you want it. Of how good it’ll feel to stop pretending.”

“Fuck you.”

“That’s the idea.”

He lunged. It was a telegraphed move, a testing shot. She deflected it, but he was using his full reach, his full weight. He wasn’t holding back. He grabbed for her again, this time catching a handful of her tank top. The fabric stretched, then tore at the collar with a sick, satisfying rip. The sound seemed to ignite something in both of them.

She drove a front kick into his thigh, solid, meant to dead-leg him. He absorbed it with a shudder but didn’t go down, using her planted leg to yank her off balance. She fell hard on her back on the mat, the air rushing from her lungs. He was on her instantly, his knees pinning her shoulders, his weight immense and crushing.

“Get off!” she shouted, bucking wildly, her hips twisting. Her hands batted at his face, her nails scratching a red line down his cheek. He caught both her wrists in one of his huge hands and slammed them down above her head, against the mat. The impact vibrated up her arms.

“There she is,” he breathed, his face inches from hers. A bead of blood welled on his cheek. “That’s the fight. God, you’re perfect.”

With his free hand, he ripped the remains of her tank top open, then tore the cup of her sports bra aside, exposing her breast. The night air was cool on her flushed skin. He looked down, his eyes dark with pure, unadulterated hunger. He didn’t fondle her. He didn’t kiss her. He lowered his head and took her nipple into his mouth, sucking hard, his teeth grazing the peak.

A shockwave of sensation—sharp, almost painful, overwhelmingly electric—shot through her. A broken cry escaped her, part protest, part surrender. Her struggles lost their disciplined ferocity, becoming the frantic thrashing of a trapped animal. The friction of her shorts against her clit with every writhing movement was torture. Blissful torture.

He released her nipple with a pop, his mouth moving to her other breast, his tongue lascivious and rough. His hand left her wrists, trusting his weight to keep them pinned, and shoved down her shorts and underwear in one brutal, efficient move. The cool mat touched her bare ass.

She was completely exposed. Helpless. The reality of it smashed into her like a truck. She went limp for a second, dazed. He released her breast, sitting back on his haunches, still pinning her with his weight. He looked down at her naked form, his gaze traveling from her wrecked top to the thatch of dark hair between her legs, glistening unmistakably in the crimson light.

“Look at you,” he said, his voice thick. “Just look. So fucking beautiful. And so fucking ready for me.”

He unbuttoned his own shorts, freeing his cock. It was thick, veined, and already dripping. He wasn’t gentle. He didn’t tease. He used his hand to guide himself, not to her entrance, but higher, rubbing the swollen head through her wetness, smearing it over her clit. The pressure, the blunt, urgent promise of it, made her sob.

“Please,” she heard herself whimper. She didn’t know what she was asking for.

“Please what?” he demanded, not stopping the agonizing, glorious friction. “Use your words.”

She shook her head, squeezing her eyes shut. She wouldn’t.

He stopped.

The loss was a physical pain. Her eyes flew open. He was poised above her, his expression carved from granite. “Say it.”

The words were torn from a place deeper than pride, deeper than shame. “Please. Fuck me.”

It was all the permission he needed. He positioned himself, and with one powerful, devastating thrust, he sheathed himself inside her to the hilt.

The sensation was brutal. A stretch so intense it bordered on pain, a fullness that stole her breath. She gasped, her body arching off the mat. He didn’t let her adjust. He drew back and slammed home again. And again.

This wasn’t lovemaking. It was a claiming. A conquest. The slap of his skin against hers, the guttural sounds tearing from his throat, the creak of the mat beneath them—it was a symphony of raw, unfiltered need. Each pounding drive pushed her body upwards, her shoulders scraping against the rough canvas.

“Is this it?” he growled, his pace relentless, piston-like. “Is this the secret, Midori? You want to be used? You want to be fucked like this? Like you’re nothing?”

She couldn’t answer. Pleasure, coiling and white-hot, was building deep in her core, fed by the very violation of it. Her heels scrambled for purchase on the mat, trying to meet his thrusts, her body betraying her completely. Her moans were continuous now, punctuated only by choked cries when he angled himself and hit a spot that made her see stars.

He leaned down, his mouth at her ear. “Come for me,” he commanded, his breath scalding. “Come on my cock while I take what I want. Do it.”

The command, the sheer dominance in his tone, was the final key. Her climax detonated without warning, a seizing, violent eruption that locked every muscle in her body. A raw, screaming wail tore from her throat as she convulsed around him, the waves of sensation brutal and endless.

Feeling her clench around him, he let out a roar. His rhythm shattered into frantic, jackhammering thrusts. With a final, deep grind, he buried himself inside her, and she felt the hot, pulsing release of his orgasm filling her. He collapsed on top of her, his full weight driving her into the mat, both of them slick with sweat, gasping for air in the haunted crimson silence of the gym.

He was still inside her. The aftermath was a deafening roar. Her heart hammered against his. The smell of sex and salt and torn fabric was overwhelming. She stared up at the dark ceiling, at the faint red lights, her mind utterly, terrifyingly blank.

He shifted, his softening cock slipping out of her. A trickle of wetness, theirs mixed, trailed down her thigh. He didn’t soften. Midori notices his lack of refractory period.

Ian rolls her on to her stomach and presses against her asshole with his long thick cock

Midori’s awareness was a slow, syrupy drip back into her body. The shock of her own climax still vibrated in her nerves, a fading tremor. The weight of him was gone, but the heat remained, a brand. Then she felt it—the hard, insistent pressure against the heart of her ass, blunt and demanding.

Already? The thought was hazy, detached. Her body felt used, thoroughly fucked, and yet a fresh, shameful pulse of heat answered that pressure. Her asshole clenched instinctively, a tight, forbidden flutter.

“Ian…” His name was a slur, a protest with no force.

“Shut up.” His voice was ragged but firm. One of his big hands pushed between her shoulder blades, planting her face against the mat. The worn canvas smelled of salt and years. His other hand gripped the swell of her hip, his fingers digging in hard enough to bruise. “This isn’t finished.”

He was slick with her wetness, with his own spend, using it to glide the broad head of his cock through the crease of her ass. He pressed, not entering, just asserting the threat, circling that tight, resistant pucker. Every pass sent jolts of something terrifying and electric through her spent body.

“You don’t… we don’t have…” She tried to push up, but his hand on her back was an immovable anchor.

“We have what I say we have.” He spat, a crude, wet sound, into his own palm. She heard it, and a moment later felt the cool, rough slide of his spit-slicked fingers against her. Not inside. Just smearing, preparing, a grotesque parody of care. It was obscene. It was undeniable.

He positioned himself, the crown notched against her. “This is what you want,” he growled, more statement than question. “To be completely taken. Every part of you. No more sensei. No more secrets. Just this.”

He pushed.

It was a searing, impossible stretch. A white-hot lance of no that tore a ragged scream from her throat. Her body fought him violently, muscles locking in primal rejection. She scrabbled at the mat, her blunt nails finding no purchase.

“Relax,” he commanded, his voice strained with his own effort. He didn’t stop. He applied relentless, gradual pressure, a conqueror breaching a gate. The pain splintered, sharp and bright, and beneath it, a dark, shocking fullness bloomed. He leaned over her, his chest damp against her back, his mouth at her ear.

“That’s it. Take it. Just fucking take it.”

With a final, brutal surge, he buried himself to the root. The feeling of being utterly, impossibly filled stole the air from her lungs. She shook beneath him, a trapped, speared thing. The pain didn’t vanish; it transmuted, melting into a deep, congested ache that spread through her pelvis, heavy and corrupt.

He began to move. Slow, at first, shallow pulls that made her whimper with each fractional withdrawal. The drag was exquisite agony. Then he found a rhythm, deep, grinding pistons of his hips that forced choked sounds from her with every drive.

“Fuck,” he breathed, the word full of awe and base hunger. “So goddamn tight. A perfect, filthy little fist.”

His words degraded her, carved away the last fragments of her persona. She was just a hole, being used.

The truth of it was a gut-punch, leaving her empty of everything but sensation. His cock was a brutal invasion, stretching her into a shape that felt both wrong and profoundly fitting. The wet, rhythmic slap of his skin against hers was the only sound in the vast, crimson room.

He fucked her ass with a focused, relentless intensity. One hand fisted in her long black hair, keeping her head down, her cheek ground against the mat. The other gripped the bone of her hip, guiding her body back onto him with each thrust. She was a tool for his pleasure, her own reduced to a secondary current of shameful, escalating heat that coiled alongside the ache.

“You take it so well,” he grunted, his rhythm fracturing with his own building climax. “My perfect, broken sensei. Just a set of holes now.”

His words shouldn’t have twisted inside her. They shouldn’t have made her clench around him, a tight, vicious spasm that pulled a ragged moan from his throat. But they did. The degradation was the point. It was the key she’d hidden from herself. Her fingers, previously splayed and powerless, curled into fists.

He drove into her one final time, deep, burying himself to the hilt. His body went rigid above her. A hot, strangled roar was torn from him, and she felt the hot, internal pulse of his release, a filthy, claiming warmth. He collapsed over her, his full weight driving the breath from her lungs, pinning her in the mess they’d made.

They lay there, a tangle of sweaty, exhausted limbs.

he rose, his cock still hard and throbbing in her stretched sore ass. “I’m going to fuck this asshole all night. Till it’s agony, till you can’t walk.” He growled in her ear

The words weren't just a threat. They were a promise, etched into the air between them with the heat of his breath. Her body seized around him, a tight, involuntary clench of protest and terrifying acceptance. He groaned, deep and satisfied, at the reaction.

He didn’t pull out. He began to move again, a slow, sadistic roll of his hips that kept him buried to the hilt inside that impossibly tight, scorching channel. The initial searing pain had deadened into a thick, full ache, a presence so profound it seemed to push at the edges of her sanity. Every micro-movement reverberated through her.

"So good," he muttered, more to himself than to her. His hands, rough and possessive, slid from her hips to grip the spare flesh of her waist. "So fucking perfect and ruined."

He picked up the pace. It wasn't the frantic pounding from before. This was deliberate, measured, a relentless torture designed to stretch time itself. Each withdrawal was a slow, devastating drag. Each thrust was a deep, claiming reunion. The wet, filthy sound of it filled the silent gym. Her own ragged breathing was a counterpoint.

She lost track of how long it went on. Her world narrowed to the rhythm of his body using hers, the feel of the coarse mat against her cheek, the metallic scent of blood—his, from her nails? Hers, from somewhere?—mingling with sweat and sex. Her mind floated, detached. She was an object. A vessel. The thought should have horrified her. A distant part of her was horrified. But a larger, darker part was mesmerized by the simplicity of it.

He changed angles suddenly, hiking her hips higher. The new position sent a bolt of shocking, unwanted sensation straight to her core, a spark that caught on tinder she thought was long ash.

A broken sound, half-sob, half-moan, leaked from her lips.

He heard it. He fucking heard it.

"Is that it?" he rasped, his voice shredded. He pistoned into her, aiming for that spot with brutal precision now. "You gonna come again? From this? You sick, perfect bitch."

She shook her head, a useless denial made into a lie by the way her body was clenching, betraying her, building a wave of pleasure from the bedrock of violation. It was wrong. It was the most wrong thing she had ever felt. It was also inevitable.

Her second orgasm wasn't a scream. It was a silent, seismic shatter. Her body locked, every muscle corded tight, her back arching as a white-hot wire of pleasure-electrocution burned through the ache. It was pain and bliss fused, inseparable. She froze, suspended, as the waves tore through her.

He cursed, a low, reverent stream of filth, and followed her over. His release was a deep, pulsing flood, hotly intimate in its violation. He stayed there, lodged inside her, his weight a crushing comfort as they both spasmed into stillness.

Silence. Heavy, breathing, wet silence.

He was the first to move. He was still hard. He never softens unless he wants too. He keeps fucking her ass. He will cum inside it over and keep fucking it then cum again, and keep fucking it, over and over all through the night.

Time lost its shape. It was measured only in the relentless, grinding rhythm of his hips, the increasing soreness that bloomed into a low roar of pain, and the sporadic, hot flood of his release inside her. Each time he came, he’d pause for only a handful of breaths, his cock still semi-hard, still buried in her ravaged ass. He’d murmur something—"Fuck," or "Unbelievable," or just her name like a curse—then the slow, torturous fucking would begin again.

The crimson glow from the lights seemed to pulse in time with the throbbing in her body. Her cheek was raw from the mat. Her tears had dried into itchy tracks. She floated in a haze of overstimulation, where pain and pleasure had long since dissolved into a single, overwhelming state of being used.

Her mind short-circuited. Thoughts were fragments.

The front desk. The phone. It could ring.

My water bottle. By the bag stand. So thirsty.

His scar. The one below his ribs. Knife?

I should be cold.

But she wasn’t cold. She was covered in a slick sheen of their sweat, his and hers mingled. The air he stirred with his movements was the only breeze in the stagnant room.

He shifted again. He’d pulled out momentarily, leaving her feeling gaping and empty, achingly sore. She heard the rustle of his shorts, the tear of a foil packet. Condom. A dim, distant flicker of practicality in the madness. He rolled it on, the sound obscenely loud. Then he was back, his hands粗暴 prying her thighs further apart. He wasn’t going back to her ass. He nudged against her swollen, sensitive pussy from behind.

“This one’s for you,” he grunted, and pushed in.

It was a different fullness. Slick, easier, but her nerves were so frayed, so hypersensitive, that the sensation was almost unbearable.

he pulls out snd removes the condom. Actually, I think I’ll breed you.

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