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The Submission of Midori

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Midori is a 30 year old, Japanese MMA instructor, with black eyes, long black hair, a toned lithe body, and wide hips. She is beautiful with soft features and a pointed chin Her student Ian is 31, tall, thickly muscled and scarred. With dark blue eyes and blonde hair. His cock is ten inches long and six inches in girth. He’s ruggedly handsome Midori knows Ian is attracted to her, she is attracted to him too. She hasn’t acted on it out of professional pride and fighters integrity. Ian knows she’s into CNC, strugglefucking, and impact play. He’s come into the gym while only she’s there and locked the door. Tonight she’s going to get what she secretly craves, all holes.

Chapter 3: The water turns pink around their feet as blood and sweat rinse away, Ian's thick fingers spreading Midori's ass cheeks while his cockhead teases her ruined back entrance - 'You're not done until I say you're done, sensei'

He didn’t carry her so much as haul her, his arm a tight band around her waist as her feet slid across the polished floor. The shower room air was a cold slap after the gym’s heat, the fluorescents buzzing like angry insects. He propped her against the damp tiles, her back sticking to the cold surface, and twisted the knob. Water erupted, scalding and immediate, a hissing curtain that turned the world into a steam-filled prison.

It sluiced the dried blood from his lip, the sweat from his chest, the mixed spend from her thighs in pinkish rivulets that swirled at their feet. “Look at you,” he said, his voice raw in the echo chamber of the room. He traced a bruise blooming on her hip, then squeezed. “Marks everywhere.”

Her eyes were half-closed, her body listing. He steadied her with a hand between her breasts, his thumb rubbing a rough circle over her nipple until it peaked under his touch. His other hand slid down her belly, through the wet thatch of hair, finding her swollen clit. She flinched, a full-body jerk. “Sore,” she whispered.

“I know,” he muttered, not stopping. He pushed two fingers into her cunt, a slow, probing invasion that made her gasp. “Still loose. Still full of me.” He worked his fingers in and out, the water making the glide obscenely loud. “Gonna get you clean just to fuck another load into you.”

He turned her, her palms slapping against the tile, and pressed her chest flat. The water beat against her neck and back. He nudged her legs apart with his knee, his cock, thick and re-hardened, jabbing against the back of her thigh. He guided himself not to her pussy, but lower, to the furl of her ass, still puffy and stretched. “This hole’s mine, too,” he grunted, and pushed in.

The burn was immediate, a white-hot brand in the steaming heat. She cried out, the sound swallowed by the shower’s roar. He sank in to the hilt with a brutal, single thrust, his balls slapping against her. He fucked her ass with short, punishing strokes, his grip on her hips iron-tight. “Take it,” he growled, his breath hot in her ear. “You’re just a set of used holes now.” He came quickly, a sharp, guttural shout, his seed flooding her colon as the scalding water cascaded over them both.

He slid out of her, and she felt the immediate, empty ache of his absence, a hollow channel now leaking his cum into the shower’s stream. He turned her gently again, the fight utterly drained from her limbs, and pulled her back against his chest under the punishing water. For a long minute, there was only the sound of the spray and their ragged, synchronizing breath.

His hands, softer now, smoothed over her stomach, her bruised hips, as if mapping the territory he’d conquered. He buried his face in the wet rope of her hair, his voice a low vibration against her skull. “You’re mine,” he stated, the words not a question but a fact carved into the night’s violence.

Her own voice, when it came, was a scraped whisper, but it held a final, unshakable truth. “Yes.” She turned in his arms, water stinging her eyes, and looked up at his battered, rugged face. “And you’re mine, too.”

The words hung between them, heavier than the steam rising from the scalding water. Ian’s eyes, dark blue and fractured, searched hers for a long, breathless moment. Then he crushed his mouth to hers in a kiss so deep it tasted of blood, chlorine, and something irreversibly shared.

His tongue pushed past her lips, claiming not just her mouth but the very air from her lungs. "How long," he breathed against her, the words ragged, "have we fucking wanted each other?" He pulled back slightly, his forehead resting against hers, water streaming over their faces. "To finally be strong enough to be this... broken together."

His hand slid down her back, gripping her ass, pulling her against the rigid length of him. She felt his cock, already hard again, pressing insistently into her belly. "I wanted you from that first fucking clinic," he growled, his voice low and raw. "When you threw me and I saw that fire in your eyes."

Her hands came up to his chest, feeling the scars under her fingertips, the rapid beat of his heart. "I wanted to ruin you," she admitted, her voice a husk. "To make you beg for the pain I needed to give." He laughed, a short, harsh sound lost in the shower’s roar. "Then ruin me again," he said, and hoisted her up, her legs wrapping around his waist.

He guided himself to her sore, wet entrance, not waiting, not asking. He pushed in, a thick, burning stretch that made her cry out into his mouth. "Fuck," he grunted, burying himself to the hilt, water sluicing between their joined bodies. He began to move, a slow, deliberate rhythm that was less about taking and more about occupying, claiming, and finally, belonging.

He began to move, a slow, deliberate rhythm that was less about taking and more about occupying, claiming, and finally, belonging. The scalding water poured over them, sealing their skin together as his hips drove a deep, perfect cadence that made her nails bite into the scar tissue on his shoulders. She was in awe of his strength; he’d fucked her all night, wrecked her across the gym mats, and he still lifted and held her easily against the slick tile, pinning her full weight as if she were nothing.

“Jesus, Midori,” Ian groaned into the crook of her neck, his voice shattered with pleasure. “You feel fucking incredible.” His pace increased, each thrust a deliberate, full-length slide that stretched her thoroughly used cunt. “How are you still this tight? After all that, after everything I put in you…” He trailed off, a guttural sound escaping him as her internal muscles fluttered around his invading length.

He adjusted his grip, one broad hand splayed across her lower back toanchor her, the other fisting in her soaked hair to tilt her head back. “Tell me you feel it,” he demanded, his breath harsh against her ear. “Tell me you feel how deep I am in this perfect cunt.” She could only gasp, a broken sound lost in the steam, as he pistoned into her with renewed intensity, the wet slap of their union echoing off the tiles. “I’m never gonna get enough,” he vowed, the words raw and true, his cock swelling even thicker inside her as his rhythm began to fracture. “This pussy’s mine to fill forever.”

His thrusts became slower, deeper, a purposeful claiming that made her breath catch. He held her there, impaled, his face a mask of raw need in the steam. “Do you feel this?” he rasped, his voice cracking. “How fucking right we are?”

She felt the full, brutal length of him buried inside her, a possession that had rewritten her bones. The waiting, the silent hunger in every clinch during training, the violent release on the mats—it all crystallized into this searing, perfect fit. “Yes,” she gasped, the word a confession torn from her core. “It’s all I ever felt.”

A shudder ran through him, and his rhythm broke into something desperate and final. Her own climax tore through her, a silent, seizing wave that milked his cock. “I love you,” he choked out, the words fierce and damning, lost in the roar of the water.

“I love you,” she sobbed into his shoulder at the same instant, the admission raw and real. His release flooded her, a hot, pulsing answer to the words, as they shook together under the scalding stream.

His release flooded her, a hot, pulsing answer to the words, as they shook together under the scalding stream. He kept her pinned there, his softening cock still nestled inside her, as the water began to run cool. His lips moved against her temple, the question coming out rough, almost lost in the spray. "You on anything? Birth control, I mean."

She went very still against him, the meaning settling deep, past the bruises and the spent pleasure. He pulled back to look at her, water dripping from his eyelashes. "I came in your pussy… fuck, ten times? More?" His hand spread over her lower belly, a possessive, warm weight. "I don’t want you to be on anything." His thumb stroked a slow circle on her damp skin. "I want to put a baby in you. I need to."

The world narrowed to that point of contact, his hand on the place he’d spent the night brutally filling. Her mind, fogged with exhaustion and surrender, iced over for a second with pure, clinical fear. Then it burned away, replaced by a darker, deeper craving that echoed his own. The final surrender. The ultimate claim. "No," she whispered, her voice hoarse. "I’m not on anything."

His eyes darkened, a storm of pure, feral triumph. "Good." He kissed her, hard. "That’s so fucking good." He shifted, his cock already stirring again inside her tender flesh, the intention now terrifyingly different. "This next one," he growled against her mouth, "is for making it take."

The water turned icy, but the heat between them was a furnace. His words—for making it take—vibrated in her marrow, a primal decree that bypassed thought. A desperate, clawing need overtook the deep ache in her muscles.

She pushed against his chest, breaking the kiss, her dark eyes locked on his. Her arms, slippery with water, strained as she levered herself higher up his body, her calves tightening around his hips. He understood, his hands moving to grip her ass, fingers digging into the sore flesh, helping her lift.

Her soaked cunt, swollen and tender, hovered over the thick, flushed head of his cock for a trembling second. She paused, breathing ragged, feeling the heat of him against her wet folds. Then, with a guttural sound of pure need, she sank down, taking his massive cock into her sore pussy in one agonizing, perfect slide.

The stretch was a bright, blinding burn that she craved. "Fuck!" he shouted, head bowing, his forehead thudding against the tile beside her. Her own cry was swallowed by the shower's din as she seated herself fully, feeling him impress himself deep into her ravaged core. She gripped his shoulders, her nails finding old scars, and began to move.

"I need it," she gasped, riding him with a frantic, upward grind of her hips. "Need you to—" Her words shattered as he thrust up to meet her, filling the desperate hollow she’d become. "Give it to me," she demanded, her voice breaking, "give me everything." He growled, a raw, wordless sound of possession, and slammed her back against the wall, driving into her with a force that stole the breath from her lungs.

He drove into her with a brutality that felt like absolution, each thrust a deliberate hammering against her cervix. “This one,” he grunted, his voice stripped bare, “this one takes.” The words weren’t a hope but a command issued to her very biology, and she screamed her agreement into the steam, her body clamping down in a vice-like spasm around his invading length. They moved together in a furious, scrambling rhythm, her back scraping the tile, his hips pounding a bruising tattoo against her clit and deep into her womb.

The world dissolved into the slap of wet skin, the guttural sounds torn from their throats, the relentless spray of water that did nothing to cool the furnace he’d stoked inside her. “I can feel it,” she gasped, her mind fragmenting, “I can feel you so deep.” He fucked her with a focused, relentless intensity, his eyes locked on hers, watching her unravel. “You’re gonna drip me for days,” he rasped, “you’re gonna walk out of here bred.”

Her climax built not as a wave but as a detonation, starting in the core he’d spent the night ravaging and exploding outward, shaking her apart. He felt her shatter and roared, driving in one last, searing time, his cock pulsing as he emptied another scalding flood into her welcoming depths. They collapsed against the wall, held upright only by his grip and the water’s force, shuddering through the shared, violent release.

The water ran cold, a shocking finality that jerked them back into their separate skins. He peeled her off the tile, her limbs heavy as old rope, and shut off the faucet with a loud crank. Dripping and shivering in the sudden quiet, he grabbed two clean towels from a shelf, the mundane action surreal after the night’s violence.

He rubbed her down with a rough, thorough tenderness that felt like a different kind of claim. “Look at you,” he murmured, his thumb catching on a fresh bruise on her ribcage. He draped the towel over her shoulders and led her, silent, back into the gloom of the main gym.

The crimson emergency lights had died, leaving only the gray predawn leaking through high windows. Their forgotten clothes lay in dark piles near the mat, which was stained with dark, Rorschach patches of their mess. He guided her down onto the cleanest section, the vinyl cool and sticky against her skin.

He lay beside her, on his side, his head propped on his hand. His eyes traveled over her face in the half-light. “Talk to me,” he said, his voice low. “One real thing before the sun comes up.”

She stared at the ceiling’s steel girders, her body a map of throbbing aches. “I’m scared of what I wanted,” she said, the words thin in the vast space. “I’m scared that I still want it.”

He nodded, as if he’d expected this. He traced the line of her jaw. “The wanting doesn’t stop.” He moved then, rolling over her, his knees pushing her thighs wide. The head of his cock, still wet from the shower, found the tight, protesting pucker of her ass. “This is the only thing that makes the fear quiet.”

He didn’t ask. He pushed, a steady, unforgiving pressure that made her gasp and dig her heels into the mat. Her body resisted, the ring of muscle clenching in sore defiance, before yielding with a sharp, burning tear. “Fuck,” he breathed, sinking an inch into the intense, clutching heat.

IAN FILLS HER ASS

He sank the rest of his thick length into her in one slow, relentless slide, burying himself to the hilt in her tight colon. A ragged moan was punched from her lungs, her fingers scrambling against the vinyl. He held there, impossibly deep, letting her feel the full, splitting stretch. “There,” he grunted, his voice thick with possession. “That’s the only real thing.” He began to move, a slow, brutal rhythm that claimed the last untouched part of the night.

He began to move, a slow, brutal rhythm that claimed the last untouched part of the night. A choked cry escaped her, and she threw her weight sideways, bucking against his pin. “No, stop it, you can’t—not again!” she pleaded, her voice raw with manufactured panic, her hands shoving weakly at his chest.

He caught her wrists, pinning them above her head with one broad hand, his other anchoring her hip. “I fucking can,” he grunted, driving deeper into the clenching, burning heat of her ass. “And I will.” She thrashed, a genuine struggle that tested his grip, her muscles coiling with the same power she’d used to throw him hours before. “Please, Ian, it hurts, don’t!” she sobbed, the words slicing through the gray air.

“You love how much it hurts,” he rasped, picking up the pace, his cock pistoning into her sore channel with ruthless precision. He leaned down, his mouth against her ear. “Beg me harder.” She turned her face away, a tear tracking through the sweat on her temple. “I said stop!” she screamed, her body arching, her heels digging into the small of his back, pushing him deeper, demanding more.

The contradiction was electric. He slammed into her, the force knocking a gasp from her lungs. “Is that how you fucking stop someone?” he demanded, his breath coming in harsh gusts. Her inner muscles clamped around his shaft in a violent, rippling spasm, her first orgasm tearing through her with a silent, shaking intensity. “Harder,” she whispered, the plea a broken confession against his cheek. “God, please, harder.”

He released her wrists, his hand sliding beneath her to grip her throat, not squeezing, just holding, a dominant claim as he fucked her ass with jackhammer thrusts. The slap of his flesh against hers was a rapid, wet percussion in the quiet gym. Each deep, punishing drive crushed her clit against the mat, building a second peak with terrifying speed. She came again, a guttural sob wrenched from her throat, her body convulsing around his invading length as he relentlessly pounded her through the tremors.

His thrusts slowed but deepened, each deliberate push wringing another shudder from her overspent nerves. “Mine,” he growled, the word a raw scrape in the silence, as his own climax built, a tight coil in his balls. He pulled out of her ass with a wet, sucking pop, ignoring her whimper at the sudden emptiness.

Rolling her onto her stomach, he pinned her with a hand between her shoulder blades. “Stay.” He fetched his gym bag, the zipper loud in the hush, and pulled out a small, black leather case. Dawn’s gray light glinted off the sterile steel of a tattoo machine and a tiny bottle of ink.

“What are you doing?” Midori whispered, her voice hoarse with exhaustion and something like fear.

“Making it true.” His voice was calm, methodical, as he assembled the machine with practiced hands. He cleaned a patch of skin high on her left hip, just below the waistline, where the bruise from his grip was darkest. The alcohol wipe was cold, a shocking contrast to her heated flesh.

“Ian, no—” she began, but he cut her off with a look that silenced her protest.

“This is the promise,” he said, his thumb stroking the spot. “From last night. From everything.” He dipped the needle, the buzz filling the space between them. “Don’t move.”

The first bite of the needle was a bright, precise sting that made her gasp. He worked quickly, his focus absolute, the buzzing drone a counterpoint to her ragged breath. He etched a simple, bold line—a kanji character she couldn’t see. “Ownership,” he murmured, answering her unspoken question as he wiped away blood and ink. “My name. On you. Forever.”

The burning pain was a clean, sharp brand over the deep, aching throb of her used body. Each pass of the needle felt like a confirmation, a sealing of the contract they’d signed with sweat and seed and screams. Tears leaked from her eyes, silent, but she didn’t flinch away from the pain he was giving her.

He finished, wiping the site clean again before sealing it with a clear barrier film. The character stood out, black and stark against her skin: 戦 (Ikusa). It meant “war,” “battle,” “fight.” It was the root of her name, Midori, which meant “green,” but also echoed in “senshi” for warrior. He had not marked her with his name, but with her own essence, now claimed by him. It was a permanent record of the night, of the conflict that had forged this brutal peace between them.

“Now,” he said, his voice soft, tracing the fresh ink with a reverence that felt more intimate than any fuck. “No matter where you go, you carry this.” He lay down beside her, pulling her back against his chest, his hand splayed over the marking. “You’re marked. Permanently.”

The fresh tattoo burned, a focused, stinging brand over the deep, systemic ache of her well-used body. He lay behind her, his calloused thumb tracing the edges of the clear barrier film with a possessiveness that made her shiver. The gray dawn light was gaining strength, etching the heavy bags and equipment into grim silhouettes around them.

“It’s not your name,” she finally said, her voice raspy from disuse and screaming.

“No,” Ian murmured, his lips brushing her shoulder. “It’s better. It’s what you are. What I took.” His hand slid from her hip, over the curve of her belly, pressing down gently on the tender flesh. “What I filled.” His cock, semi-hard, nudged against the cleft of her ass, a persistent, returning demand. She winced, every muscle sore, every passage feeling raw and overstretched.

“I can’t,” she whispered, the protest weak, automatic.

“You can,” he replied, simply, and she felt him growing rigid against her. He spit into his palm, the sound crude in the quiet, and slicked himself. He didn’t guide himself to her ass or her cunt. He pressed the broad, wet head against her inner thigh, rutting through the slickness there, smearing pre-cum and spit against her skin. “You’re gonna be sore for a week. You’re gonna feel me every time you move.” He ground against her, a obscene, dominating friction. “Tell me you want it.”

Her body betrayed her, heating anew, a low throb answering his crude pressure. The emptiness inside her, the hollow he’d carved and filled all night, yawned open, aching. “Please,” she breathed, the word barely audible.

“Please what?” he growled, biting her shoulder.

“Fuck me,” she gasped, the dam breaking. “Just fuck me, use me, I don’t care how, I need it, I need you to ruin me all over again.” The words poured out, a desperate, hungry stream. “Please, Ian, more. I need more.”

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