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The Submissive's Burden

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A naruto story but in a modern Setting. Naruto goes to college with his girlfriend Hinata, and her best friends Ino and Sakura also attend the same college. Naruto and Hinata have been together for a long time and are very close, but Naruto used to have a crush on Sakura and Ino. Hinata knows that Ino and Sakura, even though they are her best friends, are jealous that Hinata has Naruto. Hinata is severely overweight, while Naruto is very muscular and attractive. Ino and Sakura are extremely attractive and curvy with large breasts. Hinata secretly makes Naruto lazier and gain weight to become fatter, while Hinata starts getting fit and muscular by taking up bodybuilding. The relationship between Hinata and Naruto quickly changes as the shy Hinata becomes stronger and more dominant, while Naruto becomes increasingly lazy, fatter, and more submissive. Naruto remains completely unaware of Hinata's plan. Sakura and Ino also want Naruto. Every character is over the age of 18.

Chapter 2: Spotting More Than Weights

The campus gym was a cathedral of echoes in the dying light. Dust motes danced in the violent orange beams slicing through the high, grimy windows, illuminating the empty benches and silent racks. The only sound was the rhythmic, labored clank of metal plates—a lonely sound. Naruto breathed out hard, pushing the bar up from his chest, his arms trembling. It felt heavier every week. At the midpoint, they shook, and he stalled.

“You’re gonna crush yourself, dobe.”

The voice, smooth and lilting, came from behind him. He grunted, managing to rack the bar with a final, desperate heave. He sat up, sweat stinging his eyes, and saw Ino leaning against the squat rack. She was a silhouette against the sunset, her long ponytail a fall of gold, the single strand of hair curving along her cheek. She wore tight black leggings and a lavender sports bra that did nothing to contain the generous swell of her breasts. A thin sheen of sweat glistened on her collarbone. She’d been working out.

“I’ve got it,” Naruto said, but his voice lacked its usual conviction.

“Uh-huh.” She pushed off the rack and walked over, her movements fluid and assured. She placed a hand on his bare shoulder. Her skin was warm, her grip firm. “Your form’s all off. Elbows flaring. You’re using your front delts, not your chest. You’ll end up with shitty shoulders and a worse chest.”

She smelled like vanilla and clean sweat. It was a sharp, bright scent, so different from the comforting, food-tinged aroma that always clung to Hinata.

“Here,” Ino said, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial murmur. “Lie back. I’ll spot you properly.”

He obeyed, lying back on the bench. She positioned herself directly over his head, her thighs framing his vision. From this angle, he could see the powerful curve of her quadriceps, the defined cut of her hips above the leggings. Her stomach was flat, with the faint, beautiful shadows of muscle definition.

“Go lighter,” she instructed, her hands hovering near the bar. “It’s not about the weight, it’s about the mind-muscle connection. You’ve lost that.”

The comment stung, mostly because it was true. He slid off the twenty-five-pound plates, leaving only the bar and tens. He lifted it again, and this time her hands were on him. Not just guiding the bar, but on him.

“Keep your back flat,” she said, and one hand slid beneath his shoulder blade, her fingers pressing into the soft tissue. Her other hand rested on his lower rib cage. “Breathe into here. Feel it.”

He tried. He lowered the bar, and her fingers traced the path of his pectoral muscle, a feather-light touch over his sweat-slick skin.

“There. Now squeeze. Imagine you’re crushing something between your pecs.”

He pushed up, and as he did, her thumb brushed deliberately over his nipple. A jolt, electric and guilty, shot straight to his groin. He faltered, racking the bar quickly.

“Sensitive?” she teased, a smirk in her voice. She didn’t move from her position above him. Her crotch was inches from his face. “You’re all tense, Naruto. When’s the last time you had a proper cooldown? A proper… release?”

He sat up abruptly, scrambling off the bench. His face felt hot. “I’m fine. Just a bit rusty.”

“You’re more than rusty,” Ino said, turning to face him fully. Her blue eyes were sharp, assessing. They traveled over his torso, once chiseled, now softened. The definition in his abs was a memory, a vague topography under a layer of new, smooth padding. Her gaze felt like a physical inventory. “Hinata’s cooking is too good, huh? She’s feeding you like a prize pig.”

He laughed, a nervous, deflecting sound. “She just likes to take care of me.”

“I bet she does.” Ino’s smile didn’t reach her eyes. She reached out and pinched the soft flesh at his waist, just above the line of his shorts. She gave it a little shake. “Getting a love handle. Cute.”

He swatted her hand away, but playfully. Or tried to make it playful. The touch lingered, a brand of shame and something else.

“Come on,” she said, nodding toward the locker rooms. “I’ve got something for you. A reward for not killing yourself.”

“Ino, I shouldn’t…”

“It’s just food. Don’t be a baby.”

The men’s locker room was empty, sterile under the hum of fluorescent lights. Ino followed him in without a second thought, her presence making the tiled space feel illicit. She went to her gym bag, which was sitting boldly on a bench, and pulled out a small white box tied with string.

“Saw these at that new artisan place downtown. Knew you’d love them.”

She opened the lid. Inside were six massive chocolate chunk cookies, each studded with glossy chocolate and flecks of sea salt. The smell was instant, overwhelming: brown sugar, butter, deep cocoa. It cut through the antiseptic locker-room air like a sensual promise.

“Holy shit,” Naruto breathed, his stomach growling audibly. He’d been trying to ignore the hollow, post-workout hunger, the one Hinata’s carefully timed dinners usually filled.

“Right?” Ino plucked one from the box. It was thick, bending slightly in her hand. “Open up.”

“I can feed myself,” he said, but he was already leaning in.

“I know you can. But this is more fun.” She brought the cookie to his lips. “Come on. Just a taste.”

He took a bite. It was still slightly warm, the center a gooey, molten paradise. He groaned, closing his eyes. “God, that’s good.”

“Told you.” She took a small bite from the same cookie, her eyes locked on his. “Mmm. So rich. So sweet.” She fed him another bite, her fingers brushing his lower lip. Crumbs fell onto his chest. She didn’t brush them away. Instead, she watched them settle in the light dusting of blonde hair.

He ate the entire cookie from her hand, bite by deliberate bite. The sweetness coated his mouth, a comforting balm. The empty gym, the failing light, Hinata waiting at home—it all receded, replaced by the intense focus of Ino’s blue eyes and the decadent taste on his tongue.

“Another?” she whispered.

He nodded, mute.

She fed him a second cookie. This time, when a smear of chocolate clung to the corner of his mouth, she didn’t use her thumb. She leaned in and licked it off, her tongue a hot, wet stripe on his skin.

The sound he made was a low, helpless rumble. All resistance, what little there was, crumbled.

Ino dropped the box. It hit the tile with a soft thud. She pushed him back against the cold metal lockers. The shock of the cool metal against his sweaty back was a sharp contrast to the heat of her body as she pressed into him. Her mouth found his, and she kissed him deeply, hungrily. He could taste the chocolate and salt on her tongue.

Her hands were everywhere. Pulling at his shorts, squeezing the new softness of his ass, gripping the back of his neck. She broke the kiss, her breath coming fast.

“You have no idea how long I’ve wanted to do this,” she hissed. “Watching her turn you into this soft, lazy thing… it should piss me off. But fuck, Naruto… you’re so… pliable now.”

The words should have hurt. Instead, they ignited something dark and slumbering in his gut. A surrender.

She yanked his shorts and boxers down to his thighs in one rough motion. His cock sprang free, already fully hard, thick and eager. Ino dropped to her knees, her ponytail swinging over her shoulder.

“Look at you,” she murmured, taking him in her hand. She didn’t kiss him, didn’t tease. She opened her mouth and swallowed him whole, taking him deep into her throat in one smooth, practiced motion.

“Fuck! Ino!” he cried out, his head slamming back against the locker with a metallic bang. The sensation was unbearable, too much. Her mouth was hot, wet, and demanding. She used her tongue ruthlessly, swirling it around the head before plunging deep again, her nose buried in the coarse blonde hair at his base. She gagged slightly, a wet, choked sound that vibrated through him, and it only made him harder.

She pulled off with a lewd pop, a string of saliva connecting her lips to his glistening tip. “You like that? You like me sucking your dick while you’re still all sweaty and weak from the gym?” She didn’t wait for an answer. She dove back down, one hand cupping and kneading his balls, the other gripping the soft flesh of his hip, her nails digging in.

He could only brace himself against the lockers, his legs trembling, a torrent of incoherent curses and moans pouring from his lips. The visual was devastating: the beautiful, fit girl on her knees, servicing him in this dirty, empty room, her makeup perfect, her hair flawless, her mouth a messy, obscene instrument. It was degrading. It was the most potent thing he’d ever felt.

“I’m gonna… Ino, I’m close…”

She pulled off again, rising swiftly. She turned around, bent over the bench, and pulled her leggings and thong down just enough to expose herself. The curves of her ass were perfect, round and high.

“Then come on,” she said, looking back over her shoulder, her eyes glazed with lust and a sharp, victorious gleam. “Fuck me. And don’t you dare hold back.”

He stumbled forward, his clothes around his thighs hobbling him. He guided himself into her with a clumsy, desperate thrust. She was tight and soaking wet. She cried out, a sharp, genuine sound that echoed off the tiles.

He fucked her with a frantic, building rhythm, each drive of his hips slapping against the firm flesh of her ass. The bench scraped against the floor with every push. He gripped her hips, his fingers sinking into the soft give of her skin, but beneath it he could feel the solid, unyielding muscle of her physique. She was strong, built, a testament to discipline. And he was here, using her, getting fatter and weaker by the day. The cognitive dissonance made him wild.

“Yeah, that’s it,” Ino panted, pushing back against him. “Use that big, soft body. Fuck me like you mean it. Forget her. Forget Hinata and her fucking casseroles.”

Her name was a splash of cold water, but it was too late. The dam broke. With a ragged, animal groan, he buried himself to the hilt and came, pulsing deep inside her in hot, endless waves. His vision whited out at the edges, his knees buckling. He slumped over her back, his full weight pressing her into the bench, his face buried in her sweaty ponytail.

They stayed like that for a minute, the only sounds their ragged breathing and the distant hum of the lights.

Slowly, she pushed him off. He stumbled back, pulling his shorts up, a profound, sickening shame beginning to seep through the afterglow. Ino straightened her clothes with efficient, calm movements. She picked up the cookie box from the floor, selected one that wasn’t crushed, and took a small, thoughtful bite.

“You’re a mess,” she said, not unkindly. She held the cookie out to him again. “Here. You need your calories back.”

He stared at it, then at her. The cookie, the sex, the feeding—it was all part of the same unsettling transaction. He was too drained, too confused to parse it. His body, craving the sugar, overruled his mind. He took the cookie and ate it mechanically.

“Good boy,” Ino said, wiping her mouth with the back of her hand. She shouldered her gym bag. “Same time Thursday? I’ll bring those brownies from the place on Elm. They’re even better.”

She didn’t wait for an answer. She just walked out, leaving him alone in the fluorescent silence, the taste of chocolate and guilt thick in his mouth. He looked down at his body, at the softness she had so eagerly explored and mocked. He thought of Hinata, probably pulling something rich and hearty from the oven right now, her face lit with loving expectation.

He dressed slowly. The workout was forgotten, abandoned halfway through. All he felt was a deep, weary emptiness, and a craving for whatever Ino would bring him on Thursday.

All he felt was a deep, weary emptiness, and a craving for whatever Ino would bring him on Thursday. The shame faded by the next morning, sponged away by Hinata’s cloud-like pancakes and her warm, unquestioning smile. It became a secret fuel, a dirty thrill that simmered beneath the surface of his placid days. When Thursday came, he found himself in the library, but his notes on macroeconomic theory blurred before his eyes. He was waiting for a different kind of lesson.

Ino slid into the chair beside him, her perfume a sharp citrus wedge in the dusty air. She didn’t speak, just opened her bag and placed a brown paper bundle between them. The smell of deep chocolate and walnuts seeped out. He stared at it, then at her. Her smile was a knife’s edge.

“Elm Street Bakery,” she whispered, her knee pressing against his under the table. “Told you they were better.”

He ate the brownie under her watchful eyes, every rich, fudgy bite a communion. She didn’t touch him, not here. She just watched the cocoa stain his lips, her gaze heavy and possessive. When he finished, she leaned close, her breath tickling his ear. “Sunday. Weight room. I want to see if you’ve improved your squat form.” It wasn’t an invitation. It was a scheduling of his degradation. He just nodded, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand.

The pattern was set. It was easier than fighting it.

A few days later, he found himself in the same library alcove with Sakura. The air was different with her—charged with a brittle, focused energy. She was reorganizing her color-coded flashcards with surgical precision, but her green eyes kept flicking to him, sharp and assessing. She knew. He could feel it. The knowledge hung between them, unspoken but palpable, like the static before a storm.

“You’re distracted,” she stated, tapping her pen against the open textbook. “Your mind’s not here. It’s probably digesting the ton of garbage Ino’s been pumping into you.”

He flinched. “It’s not like that.”

“Isn’t it?” She snapped the textbook shut. The sound was final. “I saw you two. Last Thursday. You had frosting on your chin and this… glazed look in your eyes. Pathetic.”

He had no defense. He looked down at his hands, at the way his once-prominent knuckles were now cushioned by puffy flesh.

Sakura’s expression shifted, the anger melting into something more calculated. She sighed, a long, theatrical sound. “Look, you’re a mess, but you’re still our mess. Hinata’s making you soft, and Ino’s making you stupid. Someone has to maintain the infrastructure.” She rummaged in her bag and pulled out a large Tupperware container. Inside were perfect, fluffy rice balls, each wrapped in crisp seaweed. “Here. Protein and carbs. Brain food. Actually useful.”

They were still warm. He took one, the savory scent of seasoned rice a welcome change from the relentless sweetness. It was delicious, thoughtful. “Thanks, Sakura.”

“Don’t thank me. Just eat.” She watched him consume three in rapid succession. A satisfied gleam entered her eyes. “Your posture is atrocious. All that slouching on the couch is knotting your trapezius muscles. You’re going to get tension headaches.”

Before he could respond, she stood and moved behind his chair. Her hands, strong and knowing from years of anatomy study, came down on his shoulders. They weren’t like Ino’s suggestive, roaming touches. These were clinical, purposeful, and infinitely more intimidating.

“Jesus, you’re like a rock,” she muttered, her thumbs digging into the tight cord of muscle along his neck. It hurt, a bright, clean pain that made him gasp. Then, as she worked, the pain began to dissolve into a liquid relief. She leaned over him, her front pressing against his back, and her breasts, always appealing, felt immense. They were soft, heavy weights against his shoulders, straining against the thin cotton of her V-neck t-shirt. Today they looked extra juicy, like ripe fruit, and the view down her shirt as she worked was a breathtaking valley of creamy, freckled skin.

Her hands slid down, kneading the fading definition of his deltoids, tracing the slope of his softening biceps. “You had such a good physique,” she murmured, her voice low and close to his ear. “It’s a waste. A real fucking waste.” There was no flirtation in her tone, only a stark, resentful hunger. Her hands moved lower, skirting the sides of his chest, her thumbs brushing the outer swell of his pecs where Ino’s fingers had been days before. She was mapping his decline, claiming her own survey of the territory.

He was hardening in his jeans. He tried to shift, to hide it, but the chair creaked betrayingly.

Sakura went very still. Her hands stopped moving. He could feel her breath, warm on the nape of his neck. “Disgusting,” she whispered, but her voice was thick, not with disgust, but with a furious need. “Your body’s falling apart and it still just… reacts. Like a dumb animal.”

One of her hands abandoned his shoulder. It slid down his chest, over the soft plane of his stomach, and palmed the firm bulge in his lap through the denim. He jerked, a bolt of electric shame and arousal shooting through him.

“Shut up,” she hissed, applying pressure. “We’re in a library. Be quiet.”

Her other hand remained clamped on his shoulder, pinning him to the chair. She unbuttoned his jeans with quick, efficient tugs, her medical precision making the act wildly obscene. She didn’t pull them down, just freed him, her cool fingers wrapping around his heated flesh. She began to stroke him, a slow, ruthless rhythm.

“This is all you’re good for now, isn’t it?” she breathed into his ear, her voice a venomous purr. “Eating and getting hard. A simple creature.” She sped up her hand, her grip tight, almost painful. “Ino thinks she’s so clever with her cookies. She’s just spoiling you. I’m the one who understands what you really need.”

He was panting, biting his lip to keep from crying out. His hips bucked helplessly into her fist. The contrast was overwhelming: the sterile academic silence of the library, the smell of old paper, and the secret, brutal tug of her hand on his cock.

“You’re going to come,” she stated, as if diagnosing him. “And you’re going to do it quietly. And then you’re going to finish these rice balls. Every last one.”

The command, the sheer clinical dominance of it, undid him. His orgasm ripped through him, silent and violent, spilling over her determined fingers and onto his own softened abdomen. He shuddered, vision swimming, utterly conquered.

Sakura released him. She wiped her hand clean on a spare library napkin with a look of detached curiosity, as if she’d just completed a minor experiment. She then picked up the Tupperware, selected a rice ball, and held it to his still-partially open mouth.

“Eat,” she said. Her eyes were bright, victorious. “You need to replenish.”

Dazed, spent, he obeyed. The rice tasted like nothing and everything. He chewed mechanically, his body humming with subjugation. She fed him another, then another, until the container was empty. He was so full, so thoroughly used, he could barely think.

She packed her bag, leaving the empty Tupperware in front of him. “Clean yourself up,” she said, her voice normal now, conversational. “We have an exam next week. You’ll need your energy for studying.” She walked away, her hips swaying, the voluminous curves of her big, voluptuous butt a taunting silhouette in the dim library light.

He sat there for a long time, sticky and stunned, the empty container a stark monument to his compliance. The craving shifted, mutated. It wasn't just for sweetness anymore. It was for the sharp, clean pain of her hands, for the humiliating precision of her commands. He zipped his jeans, the fabric damp and uncomfortable. He looked at the textbook, the words meaningless symbols. All he could think about was the next feeding, and whose hands would administer it.

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