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Will She or Won't She?

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Candace is fearful of becoming a spinster, until Will comes back into her life. He becomes the object of her ever-growing affection and obsession.

Chapter 2: The Warning

The scent of burnt coffee and fried onions clung to the air inside The Griddle, thick enough to taste. Candace stared into the oily black surface of her own coffee cup, the spoon clutched in her trembling hand clinking rhythmically, uselessly against the ceramic. The rhythmic noise seemed loud, overly significant in the diner’s quiet hum. Outside the streaked window, Main Street dozed under a late afternoon sun. Inside, the red vinyl booth felt suddenly suffocating.

Marge’s sharp intake of breath cut through Candace’s daze. "Jesus, Candy." Her voice was low, urgent, cutting under the faint warble of Elvis from the jukebox. Marge leaned across the Formica, her shrewd eyes narrowed. Her finger, tipped with chipped red polish, hovered near the collar of Candace’s high-necked blouse – the one she’d deliberately chosen to cover the marks. "What the hell happened to your neck?"

Candace flinched, her hand flying up instinctively, fingers brushing the tender skin just below her jawline. She remembered the scrape of stubble, the sharp nip of teeth. "It’s nothing," she murmured, the lie tasting like ash. "Caught it on… on a shelf at work." The memory of being pinned against those shelves, the wood digging into her spine, flooded back with nauseating clarity. The phantom sensation of Will buried deep inside her, the overwhelming fullness, the brutal, claiming thrusts.

Marge snorted, a harsh, disbelieving sound. She sat back, wiping her hands on her apron, her expression grim. "Shelf, my ass. That’s a bruise shaped like teeth, honey. And don’t think I didn’t see you jump like a scalded cat when the bell jingled ten minutes ago." She lowered her voice further, leaning in conspiratorially. "He’s back, isn’t he? Will Carver. Whole town’s buzzing about his truck being back at his momma’s place."

Candace’s knuckles whitened around the spoon. Her pulse hammered against the bruise. She didn’t answer, couldn’t. The shame of her own desperation – kneeling, swallowing, the obscene wet sounds in the library quiet – warred with a terrifying, electric thrum of anticipation low in her belly.

"Playing with fire, Candy," Marge hissed, her gaze unwavering. "That boy… that man… he left scorched earth behind him last time, and he damn sure ain't changed. Got that look about him. Like a lit fuse." She shook her head, worry etching deep lines around her eyes. "You’re too soft for his kind of rough."

The bell above the door jingled again, a cheerful sound that felt like a blade slicing through the tense air. Candace didn’t need to look. She felt it – the shift in the atmosphere, the sudden hush that fell over the few other patrons, the subtle rearrangement of energy in the room. The scent of coffee and grease was momentarily overpowered by leather and distant roads, the same scent that had filled the library. Her breath hitched, trapped in her throat.

Marge’s eyes flicked past Candace, then snapped back, wide with warning. "Oh, sugar," she breathed, her voice thick with dread. "You’re in deep."

Will stood just inside the door, silhouetted against the afternoon light. He scanned the diner, his gaze passing over the tired salesman at the counter, the elderly couple sharing a milkshake, before landing squarely, inevitably, on Candace. His green-gold eyes held hers, intense, unreadable. Not a flicker of surprise. Just… possession. A hunter sighting familiar prey. He didn’t smile.

"And it’s gonna burn you alive," Marge finished, the words barely a whisper, heavy with certainty.

Will started towards their booth. The worn linoleum seemed to vibrate with his measured, predatory stride. Every step echoed the rhythm of his thrusts inside her. Candace gripped the edge of the sticky table, her heart pounding against her ribs like a trapped bird. She couldn’t look away. The memory of his taste flooded her mouth, metallic and salty, making her swallow convulsively.

He stopped beside their booth, ignoring Marge completely. His presence was a physical weight, pressing the air from Candace’s lungs. He smelled of sun-warmed leather, engine oil, and something darker, primal. "Candy," he said, his voice a low rumble that vibrated in her bones. That nickname, delivered in that rough tone, felt like a brand.

Marge cleared her throat, a pointed, protective sound. "Will Carver. Long time."

He spared her a glance, brief and dismissive. "Marge." His focus snapped back to Candace. "Need to talk. Private." It wasn't a request.

Candace felt Marge’s foot nudge hers urgently under the table. A silent plea: Don’t go. Don’t do it. But the command in Will’s voice, the sheer magnetic pull of him, was overwhelming. It pulled at the raw, exposed nerve his earlier actions had created. He had seen her desperate core and hadn’t run. He’d used it, stoked it. And the terrifying, shameful truth was, she wanted him to do it again.

She found herself nodding, a jerky, involuntary movement. "Okay," she whispered, her voice thin.

"Bathroom," Will stated, already turning. "Now."

He didn’t wait for an answer, striding towards the narrow hallway marked ‘Restrooms’ at the back of the diner. Candace pushed herself up from the booth, her legs unsteady. She avoided Marge’s horrified gaze, the older woman’s whispered "Candy, no," fading behind her as she followed him.

The hallway was dimly lit, smelling faintly of disinfectant and stale urine. Will was already pushing open the door to the single unisex bathroom. He stepped inside, holding it open for her. His expression was granite, giving nothing away. Candace hesitated for only a heartbeat on the threshold, the memory of Marge’s warning flashing like a neon sign in her mind. Burn you alive. Then she stepped past him into the small, tiled room.

He slammed the flimsy lock shut behind them. The sound was startlingly loud in the confined space. Before she could turn, he had her. His hands grabbed her hips, spinning her roughly to face the chipped porcelain sink. Her chest hit the cold edge, knocking the breath from her lungs. His body pressed hard against her back, trapping her, the rough denim of his jeans scraping the backs of her bare thighs beneath her skirt. His heat, his scent, his overwhelming presence engulfed her.

"Look at you," he growled, his mouth against her ear, his breath hot and sending shivers down her spine. One hand slid up her side, rough fingers finding the top button of her prim blouse. He popped it open with a sharp tug. Then the next. And the next. The fabric gaped open. His hand pushed inside, shoving aside her bra cup, his calloused palm finding her breast, squeezing hard. "Still wearing your fuckin' library clothes. Still lookin' like the good girl." He pinched her nipple, sharp and cruel. Candace gasped, arching back against him, a mixture of pain and sharp, unwanted arousal jolting through her.

His other hand shoved her skirt up, bunching it around her waist. Fingers hooked into the waistband of her panties, tearing them down her thighs. The cool air on her exposed skin was a shock. She felt utterly vulnerable, exposed to the grimy mirror above the sink, to him. His hand slid between her legs. She was wet. Instantly. Shamefully. His low chuckle vibrated against her back. "Always ready for it, aren't you? My desperate little librarian whore."

He spat the words, a harsh counterpoint to the intimate invasion of his fingers roughly parting her folds. One thick finger plunged into her without preamble, deep and stretching. She cried out, her hands bracing against the cold sink. He pumped it once, twice, callouses scraping sensitive flesh, then added a second finger. She was slick, her body betraying her mind, clenching around the intrusion. "Fuck, you’re drenched," he muttered, his voice thick with dark satisfaction. "Just from walkin' back here? From me just lookin' at you?" He curled his fingers, pressing hard against a spot inside that made stars burst behind her eyelids. She whimpered, pushing back against his hand, seeking more friction, more of that punishing pressure.

He withdrew his fingers with a slick sound, leaving her clenching empty air. She heard the rasp of his zipper. Then the thick, heavy weight of his cock pressed against her bare ass, already hard, already demanding. He rubbed the broad, slick head through her wetness, coating himself, the friction maddening. He gripped her hip bruisingly tight with one hand. The other hand tangled in her hair, fisting it near the scalp, yanking her head back sharply. Pain lanced through her neck, forcing her to look up at their reflection in the dirty mirror.

His eyes, hard and predatory, locked onto hers in the glass. His face was set, jaw clenched. She saw herself – blouse torn open, breasts exposed and flushed, skirt hiked, face pale, eyes wide with fear and a terrifying, undeniable hunger. The sight was obscene.Degrading. Electrifying.

"No fairy tales," he snarled, his voice raw against her ear, echoing the library. "Just this. You takin' what you begged for."

He positioned himself. The blunt, insistent pressure at her entrance was immense. He didn’t ease in. He slammed forward, burying himself to the hilt in one brutal, tearing thrust.

Candace screamed, the sound strangled, muffled by the small space. The stretch was agonizing, breathtaking. He filled her completely, stretching her walls to their limit, grinding his pelvis hard against her ass. He held himself deep for a second, a low groan escaping him, his fingers tightening painfully in her hair. "Fuck… like warm velvet wrapped around a goddamn crowbar…"

Then he pulled back almost entirely, dragging his thick length against her sensitized flesh, and hammered back in. Harder. Deeper. Setting a relentless, punishing rhythm. Short, savage strokes that drove her repeatedly into the hard edge of the sink, rattling the pipes beneath. Each thrust forced choked gasps from her throat. The sounds were primal, animalistic – the wet slap of flesh, his harsh grunts, her own ragged cries, the creak of ancient plumbing.

His grip on her hair kept her head wrenched back, forcing her to watch their reflection. Watch his powerful body piston into hers. Watch the jolt through her frame with every brutal plunge. Watch the flush spread across her chest, the helpless clench of her fingers on the sink, the tears of overwhelm and pain and intense, shameful pleasure welling in her eyes. "Look," he commanded, his voice guttural. "Look at yourself takin' my cock like you were born for it. Like a bitch in heat."

His words were filthy, degrading. They should have revolted her. Instead, they ignited a dark fire. She was taking it. She was pinned, used, and her body was clenching around him, milking him, demanding more. The sheer, brutal carnality of it, the complete loss of control, was horrifying and intoxicating. She pushed back against him, meeting his thrusts, grinding her clit against the hard ridge of his pubic bone, seeking that sharp edge of sensation.

"Yeah," he hissed, feeling her movement. "Fuckin' take it. Work that tight little cunt." He shifted his angle slightly, driving upwards. The head of his cock slammed against her deepest spot. Candace shrieked, a sound ripped from her core, her vision blurring. Pleasure, sharp as broken glass, lanced through her, obliterating thought. She came hard, her inner muscles clamping down in violent spasms around his invading cock, her body convulsing against the sink.

He roared, the sound raw and triumphant. Her climax triggered his own. His thrusts became erratic, desperate. He buried himself impossibly deep, grinding, grinding, as his cock pulsed violently inside her, jet after hot jet flooding her core. His grip on her hair was crushing, his other hand splayed possessively over her belly as if pinning his seed inside her. He shuddered against her back, his hot breath panting against her neck, his entire weight pressing her into the sink.

They stayed locked together for long moments, the only sounds their harsh, ragged breathing and the faint drip of a leaky faucet. The air was thick with the smell of sex and sweat and cheap cleaner. Slowly, the tension bled from his body. He pulled out with a soft, wet sound. Warmth immediately began to trickle down her inner thighs. He released her hair, letting her head drop forward, her forehead resting on the cool porcelain of the sink. The reflection was blurred now – a wrecked woman, blouse gaping, hair wild, tears streaking her cheeks.

He tucked himself away, zipped up, his movements brisk, practical. He didn’t look at her. He splashed water on his face from the tap, the sound loud in the sudden quiet. Then he turned, his expression unreadable, already detached.

"Clean yourself up," he said, his voice flat, devoid of the rough heat from moments before. He unlocked the door. "You're a mess."

He pulled the door open and was gone, leaving her trembling against the sink, the chill of the porcelain seeping into her skin, the taste of her own terror and ecstasy metallic on her tongue. The echo of the slamming door merged with the distant jukebox music and Marge’s unspoken warning, now a roaring certainty in her hollowed-out chest: Burn you alive. The fire had been lit. And she was already half-consumed.

The warm trickle down her thigh was a stark contrast to the cold porcelain against her forehead. Her reflection in the smudged mirror was a stranger’s—a woman with smudged mascara, swollen lips, and a blouse hanging open like a shed skin. The physical throb between her legs echoed the deeper, more unsettling ache in her chest. She was a used thing, already cooling in the dismal diner bathroom light. And yet, a slow, stubborn heat began to coil again in her belly at the memory of his possession.

She heard the distant jingle of the diner’s front door. He was leaving. Her head snapped up. With clumsy, shaking hands, she fumbled her blouse closed, the buttons feeling alien under her trembling fingers. She righted her skirt, the fabric stained and damp. Her torn panties were a discarded heap on the tile floor; she left them there, a crumpled testament. A frantic swipe of paper towels under the lukewarm tap did little to clean her. It just smeared the evidence.

Pushing the door open, the diner’s main room felt impossibly bright and loud. Marge was staring, her face etched with a mixture of pity and anger. The old couple was gone. The salesman watched over his coffee cup, his eyes knowing. Candace kept her gaze fixed on the floor, on the scuffed linoleum path to the exit. Her legs felt watery, unstable. Each step was a small rebellion against the voice screaming inside her to go home, to hide.

“Candy,” Marge’s voice cut across the room, sharp with concern.

Candace didn’t stop. She pushed through the door, the afternoon sunlight assaulting her senses. His truck, a battered blue Ford, was just pulling away from the curb, its diesel engine rattling. It turned left, away from the town square, towards the old county road. The dust from its tires hung in the air. She stood on the sidewalk, the smell of grease from the diner’s vent clinging to her clothes, layered now with the scent of him and sex. Her body was a map of his violence—the ache, the wetness, the throbbing bruises.

Her sensible brown sedan was parked two spaces down. The keys felt heavy in her hand. The rational part of her, the librarian who alphabetized the world, shouted that this was madness. That Marge was right. That she should get in her car, drive home, draw a hot bath, and scrub the memory from her skin. She watched the taillights of his truck grow smaller, red eyes winking in the distance.

SHE FOLLOWS HIM.

The engine of her sedan coughed to life. She pulled a U-turn, her tires squealing slightly on the hot asphalt. She kept a distance, two curves back on the winding road that led out of Willow Creek and into the scrub-pine and red clay countryside. Her hands were slick on the wheel. She didn’t think, didn’t plan. Her body was operating on a primal directive, separate from her whirling mind. She followed the cloud of dust.

He turned onto a long, unpaved driveway she knew led to the old Carver place, a slumped farmhouse at the end of a forgotten lane. She stopped her car on the main road, hidden by a thicket of pine. She killed the engine. The silence was immense, broken only by the ticking of her cooling engine and the distant cry of a hawk. She watched his truck disappear into the trees. He never signaled. He never looked back. He operated with the certainty of a man who expected no one to follow.

Minutes ticked by. Sweat beaded on her upper lip. What was she doing here? What did she possibly think would happen? He’d made his use of her clear, twice now. Yet, the compulsion to see where he went, to be near the epicenter of the chaos he carried, was a magnetic pull she could not resist. She got out of the car. The late afternoon heat wrapped around her, thick and Southern. She started walking up the driveway, her flats kicking up little puffs of red dust.

The farmhouse appeared at the end of the lane, bleached gray by sun and neglect. The porch sagged. One shutter hung by a single hinge. His truck was parked beside a rusted tractor, its door hanging open as if he’d just strode inside. She approached slowly, the dry grass whispering against her calves. The place felt abandoned, silent but for the buzz of flies near an old rain barrel.

She stepped onto the creaking porch boards. The screen door was torn. Through it, she could see into a dim, sparse front room. A single lamp was on. He was there, his back to her, pulling a clean t-shirt over his head. The muscles in his shoulders and back rippled, the skin tan and marked with old scars she hadn’t seen before. He moved with an economy that was both graceful and brutal. He didn’t turn. “Took you long enough,” he said, his voice carrying through the screen. He’d known. Of course he’d known.

Candace froze, one foot still on the porch step. Caught. Exposed. Her heart hammered against her ribs. He turned then, walking towards the door, his bare feet silent on the worn floorboards. He pushed the screen door open, its spring groaning. He looked her up and down, his gaze impersonal, assessing. “You look like shit,” he stated. The vulgarity was casual, devoid of the heat from the diner. It was just a fact.

“I…” she began, but no words came. What was there to say? I had to see. I couldn’t stay away. He snorted, a short, derisive sound. He reached out, not to touch her face, but to hook a finger in the open collar of her blouse. He tugged, not hard, but with a possessiveness that made her breath catch. “This is a mess.” He pulled her inside, the door slapping shut behind them.

The front room was bare: a worn couch, a cheap table, a single lamp casting a weak yellow pool of light. It smelled of dust, old wood, and him—that same leather and man scent, now mixed with the faint, acrid smell of his sweat from their earlier coupling. He didn’t lead her to a bedroom. He walked her towards the couch, his hand still hooked in her collar. When they reached it, he turned her to face him.

“You followed me,” he said, his voice low. It wasn’t a question.

She nodded, mute.

“Why?”

She found her voice, a thin thread of sound. “I don’t know.”

He stared at her, his eyes searching her face as if looking for a lie. He seemed to find only the bewildered, desperate truth. A muscle twitched in his jaw. “You don’t know,” he repeated, flatly. Then his other hand came up, his thumb brushing roughly over her bruised neck. A spark, hot and immediate, shot through her at the contact. Her nipples tightened painfully against the lace of her bra. He saw it, his eyes dropping to her chest. “Your body knows,” he murmured, a dark note creeping back into his tone.

His thumb traced the line of her collarbone, then moved down, over the fabric of her blouse, to circle a nipple. He watched her face as he did it. She gasped, her eyes fluttering shut for a second. “It knows it belongs to me now,” he continued, his voice dropping to a gravelly whisper. “Doesn’t it, Candy? This tight little cunt.” His hand left her breast, sliding down her stomach, pushing between her legs, palming her through her skirt. She was still damp from him, the fabric cool against the heat he found there. She jerked against his hand, a helpless thrust of her hips. “See?” he said, a cruel satisfaction in his eyes.

He unfastened her skirt this time, letting it fall to the floor. He pushed her back until her knees hit the edge of the couch, and she sank down onto the scratchy fabric. He stood over her, unbuckling his belt, the leather rasping loud in the quiet room. His cock sprang free, already thick and half-hard, just from touching her, from talking to her. The sight of it, the memory of its violent fullness inside her, made her mouth go dry.

“Open your mouth,” he commanded.

She did, without hesitation, tilting her head back. He stepped forward, his hands tangling in her hair again, fisting the auburn curls. He guided himself to her lips, the broad head nudging against them. He smelled of musk and salt. “Suck,” he said, the word a blunt demand.

Her tongue darted out, tentatively tasting the pre-come beading at his tip. The saltiness, the essence of him, sent a violent shudder through her. She opened wider, taking him in. He pushed forward, not gently, filling her mouth, his grip on her hair tightening, controlling the pace. “That’s it,” he grunted, watching himself disappear between her lips. “Use that sweet librarian mouth. Get it wet.”

She worked her tongue along his length, her jaw already aching. She hollowed her cheeks, sucking as he pushed deeper, until he hit the back of her throat. She gagged, tears springing to her eyes. He pulled back slightly, letting her breathe, his hand loosening its punishing grip to stroke her hair almost tenderly for a second. Then he thrust back in, deeper this time, setting a rhythmic, demanding pace. Saliva dripped from her chin. Her world narrowed to the stretch of her lips, the taste of him, the sound of his harsh breathing above her, the creak of the floorboards under his feet.

He used her mouth with a focused intensity, his hips pumping, his fingers twisted in her hair. “Fuck, yes,” he groaned, his voice strained. “Take it all. Gonna come down your throat.” His thrusts grew faster, more erratic. She relaxed her throat, surrendering to the intrusion, her own hands gripping his denim-clad thighs for balance. The vulgarity, the utter degradation of the act, should have shamed her. Instead, a perverse pride bloomed in her chest. She was doing this. She was taking him, all of him.

With a final, deep thrust, he held himself there, his body tensing. A hot, bitter pulse flooded the back of her throat. She swallowed convulsively, taking every drop as he groaned out his release above her. He held her there for a long moment before slowly pulling out, slick and spent. He looked down at her, her lips glistening, her eyes watery. He brushed a thumb over her wet chin. “Good,” he said, simply.

Then he knelt before her on the dusty floor. He pushed her legs apart, his hands rough on her inner thighs. He didn’t kiss her. He lowered his head between her legs, his stubble scratching her sensitive skin. His tongue, broad and flat, licked a long, slow stripe through her wetness. She cried out, her head falling back against the couch. He licked her again, his mouth devouring her with the same single-minded intensity he’d just shown. His tongue circled her clit, then thrust inside her, fucking her with it, mimicking the earlier act. It was obscene, relentless.

“You taste like me,” he muttered against her, his breath hot. “You taste like my come.” The words were filthy, a claiming. He sucked her clit into his mouth, applying a sharp, rhythmic pressure. His fingers joined his tongue, two pushing inside her, curling. The dual sensation, the rough scrape of his beard, the sheer animal hunger of his actions, dismantled her completely. Her climax ripped through her without warning, a raw, screaming thing that arched her back off the couch, her hands clawing at his shoulders. He rode it out with her, his mouth working her until she shuddered and went limp, oversensitive and trembling.

He rose, pulling her up with him. He turned her around, bending her over the arm of the couch. Her cheek pressed against the rough fabric. He spat into his hand, slicking himself. He was hard again already. He positioned himself and entered her in one smooth, deep stroke. She was loose, wet, open from his mouth and her climax, and he filled her completely, a different kind of possession. He fucked her with a slow, grinding depth, his hands gripping her hips, pulling her back onto him with each thrust. This wasn’t the frantic violence of the diner. This was something else—deliberate, thorough, claiming not just her body but her will.

“Mine,” he breathed against the back of her neck, each slow, deep plunge punctuating the word. “This cunt is mine now. You understand? You follow me, you come to me, this is what you get.” She could only nod, wordless, consumed by the rhythm, by the fullness, by the terrifying rightness of it. He was marking her, inside and out. Her fingers clutched the couch cushion. The dusty, sun-faded room swam in her vision. This was it. This was the fire. And she was throwing herself into the heart of the blaze.

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