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Dark Romance

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A auburn curly haired blue eyed freckled faced woman lives in the middle of suburbs. She is a stay at home mom and married to her tech giant husband for the last 10 years. To her neighbors she is know for home cooked pastries and genuinely sweet demeanor. She is president of the HOA in her neighborhood and she even volunteers at the library from time to time. However this is who she is on the outside. The carefully crafted person she shows to everyone but on the inside she is a very different person. In the darkest of nights or shady corners of her life does the real her live. She a killer and her favorite prey is unsuspecting woman hating men, pick me woman or anyone who deems themselves better because of others supposed weakness. When she we young she was often picked on by bullies and adults who just like that so it’s no wonder she turned out an infamous serial killer who has yet to be caught in over 12 years. When a new family moves in next door the woman immediately notices. The wife is everything she hates and her favorite kind of prey. The wife abuses everyone even her seemly sweet and shy husband. Normally the woman wouldn’t go for a kill so close to home but after hearing her neighbor beat the ever living shit of her husband for the 3rd time that week something breaks in her. The next night the woman sneaks in to the house planning to kill the wife only find the sweet husband standing over the wife jacking off with a knife in his hand. They make eye contact the vanity mirror in the bedroom and something like recognition passes between them. Now the woman is caught between multiple choices: leave and pretend she saw nothing, kill them both, or something she would never thought possible. Partner up with her neighbors husband

Characters

  • Hugh Merrick — Marnie's husband, a successful tech giant whose work-focused life keeps him blissfully ignorant of his wife's double life. He serves as the anchor to Marnie's suburban cover.
  • Joaquin Ibarra — The new neighbor, initially appearing as the downtrodden, shy victim of his wife's abuse. He is a man of hidden extremes who recognizes a kindred spirit in Marnie.
  • Marnie Boyd — A suburban HOA president and mother who masks her life as a serial killer behind a facade of baking and community service. She targets those who thrive on cruelty, acting as a secret executioner for her neighborhood.
  • Vera Marsh — The new neighbor whose overt cruelty and domineering nature make her the target of Marnie's lethal attention. She prides herself on her social status and dominance over her household.
  • The Old Man — A homeless man sleeping under the pines, chosen as prey by Marnie and Joaquin. He is a weathered, tired man with a history of hard living.
  • Patel — Hugh's chief financial officer, who pushed for the merger and briefed Hugh on valuation models. He is cautious and defers to Hugh's authority.
  • Hugh's assistant — A young, plain woman in a repeated cardigan who sits outside Hugh's corner office, manages his calls, and reports his movements to Vera. She appears to have been told not to discuss where Hugh went.
  • Carol Hendricks — A neighbor from three houses down who asks Marnie about Hugh's company buying Marsh Analytics.
  • Mrs. Delgado — A neighbor from four houses down with a rose garden who called the police after hearing screaming from Joaquin's house.
  • Alice — A brisk woman who handled Marnie's father's estate and advised her on the divorce filing.
  • Barnes — A tired man who smelled of stale coffee and handled Joaquin's divorce filing.

Chapter 22: The Breaking Point

Hugh pulled out of Vera and collapsed onto the planks beside her, chest heaving. Vera lay on her back, legs splayed, her cunt slick and gaping. Neither of them moved.

Marnie looked down at them with her hands folded. "Not done."

Hugh blinked up at her. "What?"

"Get up," Joaquin said. "You heard her. Keep going."

Vera laughed, a wet, broken sound. "You're insane. Both of you. We just—"

"You just came maybe twice," Marnie said. "That's nothing. That's a warm-up. Hugh, roll over. Put it back in her."

Hugh shook his head. "I can't. I can't, Marnie. Please."

"Then I'll make you."

Joaquin stepped forward and grabbed Hugh by the hair, dragging him upright. Hugh yelped. Joaquin shoved him onto Vera, whose legs he forced apart with his boot.

"Fuck her," Joaquin said. "Until she can't walk. Until you can't walk. Don't stop."

Hugh, trembling, pushed himself inside Vera again. She whimpered. He pumped weakly, his hips jerking with each stroke. Vera stared at the ceiling, her eyes dead.

For an hour they went at it. Hugh's rhythm broke and recovered and broke again. Vera's moans turned to grunts turned to silence. They switched positions, then switched back. At some point Hugh's mouth went slack and drool ran down his chin onto Vera's shoulder. Vera's legs shook so badly they looked like they might snap.

Then Hugh's body went limp on top of her, and Vera's eyes rolled back, and both of them lay still.

Joaquin waited a beat. Then he picked up the bucket of water from the corner and splashed it over them.

They jolted awake, gasping. Hugh coughed and rolled off, sputtering. Vera's head snapped up, her grey eyes wild.

"Get up," Joaquin said. "You're not done."

"You two call us pathetic," Marnie said, circling them. "You probably came a total of four times combined. Combined. That's a sad little number."

Hugh stared at the floor. Vera's lip curled, but she couldn't find the words.

Marnie crouched in front of Vera. "What's wrong, Vera? My husband not satisfying you enough?"

"I'll kill you," Vera whispered. "When I get loose, I'll—"

"Don't worry," Marnie said, standing. "We'll take care of you both."

Before either of them could respond, Marnie and Joaquin were on them.

Marnie's hand closed around Hugh's cock before he could flinch. He gasped, his hips bucking. Joaquin knelt between Vera's legs and drove two fingers into her in one wet thrust. Vera grunted, her body arching against the ropes still coiled around her wrists.

"Oh fuck," Hugh moaned, his head falling back. "Oh fuck, Marnie. You're gonna make me cum."

Marnie didn't answer. She stroked him with a bored look on her face, her grip dry and cruel, her thumb grinding over the head until he whimpered. She worked him fast, her wrist snapping in short, brutal strokes.

Beside them, Joaquin curled his fingers inside Vera and pressed his thumb against her clit. She sobbed, trying to close her thighs, but he wedged his knee between them and kept going.

"Please," she gasped. "Please, no more, I'm too—"

Joaquin crooked his fingers and she came, a long, shuddering orgasm that soaked his hand. He didn't stop. He kept fingering her through the aftershocks until she was crying.

Hugh came with a strangled noise, semen spattering across his own stomach. Marnie kept stroking. He bucked and tried to pull away, but she followed his hips and worked him past the point of pain.

"Again," she said.

"I can't," he begged. "I can't, it's too much."

She doubled her pace, and he came again, a thin, desperate wetness that left him gasping.

They went at them for another hour. Marnie never stopped stroking. Joaquin never pulled his fingers out. Every time Vera tried to close her legs he forced them apart and found her clit and worked her until she came, again and again until her whole body shook with convulsions and the tears poured down her face.

By the third time Hugh came, his lap was a pool of drool and semen. His cock was red and angry, swollen and raw. Vera wasn't doing any better. She'd come so many times she'd lost count, her thighs slick with it, her sobs turning to whimpers.

"Joaquin," she choked out. "Please stop. You can fuck me if you want. Just please stop rubbing my clit."

Joaquin looked at her with something like disgust. "You think I'd stick my dick in you? I'd rather fuck the bloody dirt beneath you. At least I'd feel something then."

Vera's face crumpled.

Hugh turned to Marnie, his eyes red, his voice a wrecked whisper. "Marnie. Please. You'd let me fuck you, right? I'm your husband. As my last dying wish?"

Marnie smiled down at him, still stroking his raw, aching cock. "Sorry, Hugh. My pussy is filled with a real man's cum." She leaned in close, her breath hot on his ear. "You're more than welcome to clean it up. That's the only way I'm stopping stroking your little dick."

Hugh stared at her. Then, slowly, his gaze dropped to the mess between Marnie's legs, still wet from Joaquin's come earlier.

He licked his lips.

Marnie and Joaquin looked at each other, something electric passing between them. Joaquin's eyes dropped to Hugh, who was still licking his lips like a dog waiting for scraps.

"He looks hungry, baby girl," Joaquin said. "Feed your husband."

"Are you telling me or asking me?" Marnie said.

"I was asking. But I could make that an order if you'd like."

"Later." Marnie tilted her chin toward Vera. "Turn her head this way. I want her to watch her lover eat her husband's cum out of my pussy."

Joaquin grabbed Vera by the jaw and twisted her head toward Marnie. His fingers dug into her cheeks, and the hunger in his eyes was plain. Vera's eyes went wide, and she tried to thrash, but Joaquin held her fast, his other hand wrapped around her throat.

Marnie released her grip on Hugh's cock. He sagged, his shoulders dropping, his breath coming in ragged relief. She didn't say anything. She just hooked her thumbs into her pants and shoved them down her thighs, letting them fall to her ankles. She stepped out of them and stood bare in front of him, her cunt slick and smeared with Joaquin's dried come. Crusts of it lined her inner thighs.

"Go on," she said. "Eat it. If you make me cum, I might let you live."

Hugh stared at her. His tongue darted out, and he leaned forward. The first taste hit him like a slap. Bitter, salty, rank with Joaquin's spent seed. He tried to pull back, gagging.

"Nope." Marnie grabbed a fistful of his hair and shoved his face into her. "Don't back out now. Clean me up, Hugh. Like your life depends on it."

Hugh's eyes watered. He opened his mouth and dragged his tongue through her folds, collecting the mess Joaquin had left. His own come was in there too, from the bottle against her neck that morning, but all he could taste was Joaquin. Thick and sour and foreign.

"Vera tried to turn her head. Joaquin pinned it in place. "Let me go," Vera gasped. "I don't want to watch that!"

"Oh no?" Joaquin said. "How about you join in then?"

Before Vera could answer, Joaquin scooped her up. She was light, her body raw from the hours of abuse, and he carried her two steps and dropped her straight down onto Hugh's aching cock. The head pressed against her asshole, dry and tight, and then he shoved. Vera screamed. Hugh screamed too, the pain ripping through his raw cock as it forced itself into her virgin ass.

"Ride him," Joaquin said. "Make your lover feel better. Or would you rather me play with your ruined cunt again?"

Vera sobbed and began to move, slow and jerky. Tears fell from her chin and landed on Hugh's chest. Hugh grabbed her hips, fingers digging into her skin, and pushed up to meet her. His cock burned with every thrust of her ass around him.

"Oh, come on," Marnie said, still standing over them, her hands on her hips. "You two are going to have to do better than that. Would you rather I work your cock again, Hugh?"

"No, no, please, I'll do it." Hugh's hips snapped faster. Vera cried out, her nails raking his chest. She shoved down harder, her asshole stretching around him, taking all of him, and Hugh's breath came in short animal grunts.

Marnie watched from above, silent. She wasn't going to cum. She knew that. But watching Hugh grovel, watching Vera break, it did something to her chest. It filled her with a cold, humming calm.

Joaquin watched from the table, his cock straining against his pants, straining to the point of pain. He leaned back on his palms and let the show wash over him.

Twenty minutes passed. Vera's legs started to shake again. Hugh's hips met hers with a rhythm that was almost practiced now.

"Oh look," Joaquin said. "I think they're about to cum again."

"At least someone is," Marnie said.

"Don't worry, baby girl. I'll make it up to you." Joaquin stood and walked around behind Vera. He leaned down and gripped her hair, tilting her face up. "Vera. Look at me while you ride him. I want to see your face when he empties his load in your ass."

"Yes, and Hugh," Marnie said, stepping closer. "You keep your eyes on me. Don't you dare look away."

Hugh looked up at her. Her cunt was above him, still wet with Joaquin's come, and he was the filth beneath it. The thought broke something inside him, and his hips bucked harder.

Vera's mouth fell open. Her body convulsed around him, her ass clenching so tight Hugh thought he'd be split in two.

Hugh's eyes stayed on Marnie. His cock pulsed inside Vera's ass, and he came with a strangled wail, his hips jerking as he spilled deep into her guts.

Marnie reached behind her back. Joaquin reached down to his ankle. As Hugh's come spurted inside Vera, as her eyes rolled back in a long, shuddering orgasm, they both moved at once.

The blades came out in the same second the pleasure crested. Marnie's needle, Joaquin's hunting knife. Two arcs of silver in the dim shack light.

The two blades moved in perfect, silent synchrony. Marnie drove her needle into the side of Vera's throat just below the jaw, feeling the tiny point punch through skin and muscle and into the soft meat beneath. Joaquin's hunting knife bit into Hugh's neck in the same heartbeat, a wide, wet gash that opened like a second mouth.

Vera's scream died in her throat. It became a gurgle, a wet, choking sound that sprayed scarlet across the plank floor. Her grey eyes went wide, then wider, and her hands flew to the wound, fingers slipping in her own blood. Hugh's cry vanished too. His mouth stayed open around Marnie's cunt, his tongue still visible, and then the blood came in a thick, hot flood down his chin, down his chest.

The afterglow never came. The pleasure crested and then the blood crested with it, a red fountain that drenched them both. Vera's body jerked once, twice, her hips still grinding against Hugh's dead cock out of pure nerve reflex. Then her spine bowed, her head lolled back, and she toppled sideways off him, landing in the spreading pool with a wet slap.

Hugh's weight sagged. His hands, still gripping Marnie's thighs, went slack and slid down her legs, leaving red smears in their wake. His eyes stayed open, fixed on her naked cunt as if even in death he was still waiting for permission. Then he pitched forward and fell face-first into the blood.

Marnie didn't move. She stood with her legs spread, the needle still in her hand, blood dripping from her fingertips. Warm spray coated her stomach, her thighs, the undersides of her breasts. It was in her auburn curls. She could taste it on her lips.

Joaquin stood parallel to her, the hunting knife dripping red. Blood soaked his shirt. Hugh's blood, hot and arterial, had painted his face in long streaks like war paint. He was breathing hard. His chest rose and fell.

For a long moment neither of them moved.

The shack was silent except for the wet rhythm of blood dripping onto wood. The smell was copper and salt and something deeply, gut-level wrong. Marnie lowered her needle hand. Joaquin lowered the knife.

Her eyes found his across the bodies. Both of them stood there, covered in red, breath coming in sharp, jagged heaves. She saw the same thing in his face that she felt in her own chest. A bright, rolling hunger that had gotten bigger, not smaller. She didn't know it could do that.

"That was…" Marnie started, and her voice came out hoarse, barely more than a whisper.

"Fantastic," Joaquin finished.

She looked down at the bodies. Vera lay twisted, her throat a ruined mess, her eyes still wide and glassy. Hugh was crumpled at her feet, a dark halo spreading from his neck. The blood pooled and crept toward their shoes.

"Look at him," Marnie said. "He died with his face full of someone else's come."

Joaquin laughed. A low, rolling sound that turned wet in his throat. "He died begging for mercy and never got it."

Marnie stepped over Hugh's body. Her bare foot landed in the edge of the blood, and she didn't flinch. She walked to Joaquin and stopped an inch from him. His chest was slick with red, and his eyes were burning.

"We did it," she said.

"We did it," he echoed. "Together. Both of them. At the same time."

Never in her life had she had that. Twelve years of alone, of quiet work, of killing in the dark with no one to see her. And now. Now there was a man standing across a body, covered in the same blood, breathing the same air, and the hunger in his eyes was the exact shape of the hunger in her chest.

Marnie reached up and wiped a streak of red off Joaquin's cheek with her thumb. She put the thumb in her mouth and sucked it clean.

"I could do that again," she said.

"So could I."

They stood there in the silence, blood soaking into the floorboards, the bodies cooling at their feet. Neither of them looked away.

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