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The Hypnotist's Revenge

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A young man, in his 20’s, accidentally insults a hypnotist at the bar unintentionally. Vivienne, although seeming to have a wonderful personality, can be spiteful and vindictive if crossed and decides to punish Richard. She toys with him, making him do embarrassing and humiliating stuff. But when he finally has enough and tries to confront her physically, she decides that he’s really going to regret it. She gives him a hypnotic trigger that anyone can say. When he hears this trigger, he believes he is turning into a big breasted, air headed nympho bimbo slut. No physical changes happen. She tells him that once the trigger is spoken, it will be active for 4 hours before he returns to normal, or if someone says it a 2nd time within the 4 hour span. But each time it is said, the bimbo personality gets a little stronger, and little more bold. Vivienne instructs Richard that he will still be able to talk, protest, yell, scream, but as much as he tries to fight it, he won’t be able to resist. She encourages him to do that though as she enjoys seeing and hearing the struggle and knowing he can’t do anything about it. This will be a long, slow, drawn out process but Vivienne will help give some extra nudges with use of her hypnosis. As the bimbo side gets stronger, she starts buying clothes and makeup and such. Eventually she impacts Richard’s daily life with small subtle things at first. But eventually it’ll grow to more permanent impacts on his life such as him talking a little more like her even though it’s him, some mannerisms subtly trying to change. But eventually it will lead to more permanent impacts. Every step of the way he will try and fight and argue and protest out loud, but ultimately he will not be able to resist. All roads lead to him eventually becoming a blonde, big breasted, bimbo nympho slut.

Chapter 10: The Gala Unveiling

The Grand Imperial Hotel rose from the city's glittering heart like a monument to excess, its marble facade glowing amber in the evening light. Limousines lined the circular drive, disgorging their precious cargo of silk and diamonds, of old money and newer vices. The air carried the promise of champagne and secrets, of deals struck in shadowed corners, of transgressions wrapped in velvet.

Rebecca watched it all from the back seat of Vivienne's black town car, her reflection a stranger in the tinted glass. The four days since the dungeon had passed in a blur of training and pleasure, of learning the precise angle to tilt her head when she swallowed, of mastering the art of keeping her mouth wet and ready. Her body hummed with a constant, low-grade arousal, the egg still nestled deep inside her, its remote in Vivienne's clutch.

"You're nervous," Vivienne observed from beside her, not a question.

Rebecca turned to look at her. Vivienne was resplendent in a floor-length gown of emerald silk, her raven hair swept up in an elaborate arrangement that exposed the elegant column of her neck. She looked like a queen preparing to survey her kingdom.

"A little," Rebecca admitted. Her voice was different now, softer, with a breathy quality that she'd learned to cultivate. "I want to make you proud."

"You will." Vivienne's hand found hers, cool and reassuring. "Remember what I taught you. You're a work of art. Beautiful, vacant, and utterly devoted to pleasure. You have nothing to fear because you have nothing to think. That's what makes you perfect."

The car pulled to a stop, and the door opened. A gloved hand appeared, offering assistance. Vivienne stepped out first, drawing the eyes of everyone nearby like moths to a flame. Then Rebecca followed.

She wore black. A gown that clung to every curve Vivienne had given her, plunging low enough to reveal the inner curves of her breasts, splitting high enough to show a flash of thigh with every step. Her blonde hair fell in loose waves past her shoulders, her makeup painted with precision—red lips, dark lashes, a hint of shimmer on her cheekbones.

In her ears, the tiny earpiece buzzed once. Vivienne's voice, transmitted directly.

"Smile, darling. Let them see the emptiness behind your eyes."

Rebecca smiled.

The ballroom was a cathedral of opulence. Crystal chandeliers hung like frozen waterfalls, their light refracting into a thousand dancing rainbows. The orchestra played something low and seductive, strings and brass weaving together in a melody that seemed to throb in time with Rebecca's pulse. The champagne fountain burbled in the center of the room, golden liquid cascading down a tower of crystal glasses.

And everywhere, everywhere, there were people.

Hundreds of them, dressed in their finery, their eyes glittering with avarice and desire. They parted as Vivienne walked, a whisper rippling through the crowd like wind through wheat.

"Vivienne LeStrange."

"Is that her? The hypnotist?"

"Who's the blonde with her? God, look at the tits on that—"

Vivienne glided through the crowd, one hand resting lightly on the small of Rebecca's back. She stopped to exchange pleasantries, to kiss cheeks, to murmur greetings in French and Italian and Russian. To each introduction, Rebecca was presented with a gesture of elegant finality.

"This is Rebecca," Vivienne would say. "My latest work of art."

And Rebecca would smile, and tilt her head, and let her eyes go slightly unfocused. She had learned that look in the dungeon, practiced it before the mirror until it was perfect—the expression of a woman who had no thoughts, no will, no desires of her own. An empty vessel, waiting to be filled.

"It's a pleasure to meet you," she would say, her voice a warm purr.

The responses varied. Some men looked at her with naked hunger, their eyes tracing the curve of her waist, the swell of her cleavage. Some women looked at her with envy, their lips tightening as they measured themselves against her impossible perfection. A few, an older gentleman with silver hair and a knowing smile, looked at her with a glint of recognition that made her cunt clench with anticipation.

But it was Vivienne who drove the narrative. Vivienne who drew the eye and redirected it, who spun stories and planted seeds. By the time they reached the far end of the ballroom, where a group of men stood in a semicircle of power and influence, Rebecca had been thoroughly presented, thoroughly admired, thoroughly catalogued.

"Gentlemen," Vivienne said, her voice carrying a note of ownership. "I believe you've heard of my work."

The men turned, and Rebecca felt their collective gaze land on her like a physical weight. There were seven of them, ranging from a young man with slicked-back hair and hungry eyes to a silver-haired patriarch with weathered hands and an expensive watch. They were all dressed impeccably, all reeking of money and power.

"Vivienne." The patriarch stepped forward, taking her hand and kissing it. "I've been looking forward to this evening for weeks. Your reputation precedes you."

"Comte de Laurent." Vivienne's smile was warm, but her eyes were cool. "How kind of you to remember. And this—" she drew Rebecca forward, "—is Rebecca. My masterpiece."

The Comte's eyes traveled over Rebecca with the unhurried assessment of a man accustomed to owning beauty. "Magnificent," he murmured. "Truly magnificent. Have you had her fully trained?"

"Fully is a strong word," Vivienne said. "But she's learned the basics. She has four days of instruction and an excellent teacher." Her hand traced down Rebecca's spine, lingering at the small of her back. "She knows how to please."

The other men had stepped closer, their circle tightening around the two women. Rebecca felt their eyes on her, felt their collective hunger like the humidity in the air.

"Perhaps we could see a demonstration?" the young man with slicked-back hair suggested. "We're all very curious about your methods, Madame LeStrange."

Vivienne's smile widened. She stepped aside, and Rebecca felt the absence of her touch like a physical loss.

"Of course," Vivienne said. "That's why I brought her."

She reached up and unclipped something from Rebecca's ear—the earpiece, the direct line to her voice. Then she leaned in, her lips brushing Rebecca's ear, her breath warm.

"Bimbo," she whispered.

Rebecca's mind went white.

The word was a key, a trigger, a command that bypassed conscious thought and plumbed the deepest basement of her newly constructed identity. It dissolved years of personality into a fog of pure bliss, a blank slate upon which only one thing could be written: need.

She blinked, her limbs slack, a loony grin spreading across her face. The tension drained from her body, replaced by a liquid, pliant sensation that made her want to crawl, to kneel, to serve.

"Hello," she said, her voice dreamy and vacant. "I'm Rebecca."

The men exchanged glances. The Comte smiled with predatory approval.

"Delightful," he said. "What does she like to do?"

"She likes to please," Vivienne said, circling Rebecca like a predator around prey. "Don't you, darling?"

"Yes," Rebecca breathed. "I like to please."

"Show them," Vivienne said. "Show them how well you've learned."

Rebecca sank to her knees on the polished marble floor. The position felt natural, a homecoming. She looked up at the ring of men, her eyes wide and trusting.

"Please," she said, and the word was not a request. "Please use me."

The young man with slicked-back hair moved first. He unzipped his trousers with practiced ease, revealing a cock that was already half-hard. He stepped closer, offering it to her.

"You like this?" he asked.

Rebecca's mouth watered. "Yes. I love cock. I was made for it."

She opened her mouth and he fed himself into her, his hands tangling in her hair. He was not gentle, thrusting deep into her warm throat. Rebecca moaned, the guttural sound vibrating around him, and her eyes fluttered shut in contentment.

"I want to feel her," the Comte said, and the other men stepped back to give him room. His hands found Rebecca's gown, gathering the fabric in his fists.

She felt the cool air on her thighs, the material of her dress pushed up around her waist. Then the Comte's fingers were on her, slick and searching, finding the wet heat between her legs.

"You feel that?" he asked, pressing a finger inside her. "How soaked she is? She's a born cocksleeve."

"You have no idea," Vivienne murmured. She had stepped back, watching the scene like a director admiring her creation.

The young man in front of Rebecca fucked her face, his thrusts becoming erratic. Rebecca kept her throat relaxed, taking him deep, her tongue swirling around the head of his cock. Her hips began to grind back against the Comte's hand, her breath coming in greedy little gasps.

"She's hungry," another man observed. "Look at her push back. She wants more."

"Give her more," the Comte said. He withdrew his hand, and Rebecca whimpered at the absence. "You there, the one in the blue suit. Come and fill her cunt."

The blue-suited man stepped forward, and Rebecca felt his hands on her hips. His cock was thick and long, stretching her as he lowered her onto him. She moaned, the sound vibrating around the cock in her mouth, and the young man gasped above her.

"That's it," the blue-suited man grunted, beginning to move. "That's it, you fucking whore."

Rebecca was a sandwich of pleasure, caught between two cocks. She was being used, nothing more than a collection of holes to satisfy their hunger. And she loved it.

"More," she gasped when the young man pulled out to catch his breath. "Please, I need more. I need to be filled."

"We have mouths here," Vivienne said, her voice a cool, purring directive. "We have cocks and cunts to warm. No hole should be empty tonight."

The young man sheathed himself in front of her again, and Rebecca swallowed him with a moan. The Comte stepped closer, his hand finding her clit as the blue-suited man fucked her from behind. Her world narrowed to sensation.

The orchestra played, the crowd murmured, and Rebecca was surrounded by the living heat of men. The taste of them in her mouth. The stretch of them in her cunt. The knowledge that she was being watched, even as she was being used.

Her orgasm built like a hurricane, fed by every thrust, every grunt, every slap of skin. She tried to hold back. She wanted to please them. She wanted to be good.

"Let go," Vivienne said, reading her mind with terrifying accuracy. "Let them feel you come."

And Rebecca obeyed.

She screamed, a muffled, gurgling sound because the young man was still jammed deep in her throat. Her body convulsed, her cunt clenching around the blue-suited man's cock, her hips grinding against the Comte's fingers. The orgasm ripped through her, leaving her trembling and drenched.

The blue-suited man pulled out and came across her ass, hot and thick. The young man followed moments later, his release flooding Rebecca's mouth. She swallowed mechanically, the taste of him warm and familiar, and looked up with wide, innocent eyes.

"Thank you," she said, her voice a little hoarse. "Can I have more?"

The men burst into appreciative laughter at her eagerness. The Comte pulled his hand away, raising it to his mouth and deliberately licking her juices from his fingers.

"She's a wonder," he said. "A genuine treasure. How did you find her?"

"Let's just say she underestimated me," Vivienne said, stepping forward. "I encourage all of you to do the same."

She extended her hand to Rebecca, who took it and rose. The gown was ruined, stained with sweat and come, but Rebecca didn't care. She didn't care about anything except the praise in Vivienne's eyes and the promise of more.

"Come, darling," Vivienne said. "There are more guests to meet."

Rebecca followed, floating on a cloud of bliss and aftershave. The men they left behind were talking, laughing, comparing notes. She heard the words "remarkable" and "next time" and "how much" as she drifted away.

She was a work of art. She was a living toy. She was everything she had ever needed to be.

And somewhere, buried beneath layers of pleasure and submission, a tiny voice screamed in protest—a voice that remembered a life of sarcasm and sharp edges, of pride and independence. A voice that was quickly being drowned by the sound of her name, whispered with hunger and desire.

That voice, Rebecca Calloway, sometimes known as Richard, was starting to go quiet. And Rebecca didn't miss it at all.

The marble floor was cold against Rebecca's bare knees as she knelt in the alcove, the distant murmur of the gala a soothing hum in her ears. Her dress was a wreck—ruined silk bunched around her waist, the bodice stained with sweat and the evidence of male desire. She didn't care. She could have stayed in that position for hours, waiting for the next command, the next cock, the next wave of pleasure.

Vivienne returned after a few minutes, her emerald gown pristine, a fresh glass of champagne in her hand. She looked down at Rebecca with an expression of fond ownership, like a collector admiring a prized possession.

"You've made quite an impression," Vivienne said. "The Comte has already asked if he can have you for the weekend."

Rebecca's cunt throbbed with a fresh pulse of heat. "Yes, Mistress. Whatever you want."

"I know it's what I want." Vivienne crouched, her eyes level with Rebecca's. "But this is about what you want, too. What does Rebecca want?"

The question was a test, a trap, a gift. Rebecca's mind swirled, searching for the answer that would please. "I want to serve. I want to be used. I want to be your perfect little bimbo slut."

"Good girl." Vivienne stroked her cheek. "And what about the part of you that was Richard? What does he want?"

The name was a jolt, a crack in the haze. Rebecca's brow furrowed, a flicker of something old and sharp passing through her eyes. For a moment, the fog thinned, and she saw herself from the outside.

She was on her knees, her body wrong, her mind wrong, her entire existence a grotesque parody of the man she'd been.

"I don't—" she started, her voice wavering. "I don't want to be him. He's gone. He's dead."

"Is he?" Vivienne's voice was soft, almost gentle. "Because I can still feel him in there, Rebecca. I can still hear him screaming."

The words hit like a physical blow. Rebecca's hands flew to her temples, her fingers clawing at her hair. The bimbo fog was thinning further, replaced by a rising tide of panic. She could hear him, too—a distant, frantic voice buried beneath layers of pleasure and obedience.

"Stop it," she gasped. "Please, stop it. I don't want—I can't—"

"You can't what?" Vivienne pressed. "You can't think? You can't remember what it felt like to be him? You can't find the words to tell me no, Richard?"

Rebecca's mind was a warzone. The blaring alarm of her old consciousness, the warm surrender of her new one. She felt her fingers tighten in her hair, her body trembling with the effort of resisting the compulsion to obey.

"Fuck you," she snarled, the words ripping from her throat with a voice that was almost, almost his. "Fuck you, you evil bitch."

Vivienne's smile widened, delighted and dangerous. "There he is. There's the man who insulted me on that stage. The one who thought his wit would protect him."

She leaned in, her lips brushing Rebecca's ear. "I've missed him. He was so much fun to break."

Rebecca's hands came up to push her away, but her arms were too heavy. Her body didn't move. Her hands dropped to her sides, her head bowed, and the fight drained out of her like water from a cracked vessel.

"Richard," Vivienne said, her voice cool and persuasive. "Can you hear me?"

"Yes," the word was a whisper, barely audible.

"Good. I want you to listen carefully. I want you to understand what's happening to you. Every time I say your old name, you're going to feel a little more of him slip away. Every time I remind you of what you used to be, the bimbo is going to grow stronger. And do you know why?"

"Why?"

"Because you chose this. When you opened your mouth on that stage, you chose this. When you called me a fraud, you chose this. Every sarcastic comment, every dismissive glance, every moment of your pathetic arrogance led you here, on your knees, begging for cock."

Rebecca's body was shaking, her breath coming in ragged gasps. She could feel the bimbo personality pressing against the walls of her mind, eager and hungry, waiting for the word.

"Say 'bimbo' and give in," the voice was a whisper in her mind, seductive and warm. "Say 'bimbo' and let it all go. Let me take over. Let me be you."

"No," she moaned. "No, please, I don't want to—"

"Bimbo," Vivienne said.

The word hit like a grenade. Rebecca's mind detonated, the bimbo personality flooding every corner of her consciousness. She gasped, her eyes snapping open, her body arching with a pleasure that was almost orgasmic.

The fog returned, warmer this time. The panic faded, the struggle, the clarity, the terrible awareness of what she was becoming. All of it dissolved into a giddy, blissful haze of need.

"Hello," she said, her voice dreamy and vacant. "I'm Rebecca."

Vivienne watched the transformation with cold satisfaction. "And what is Rebecca?"

"I'm a bimbo." She licked her red, plump lips. "I'm a stupid, air-headed little fuckdoll. I'm made to be used, filled, and emptied. I'm nothing but a cunt and a mouth and a pair of tits for men to play with."

"Good girl." Vivienne stood, holding out her hand. "Come. I have one more exhibit to show them."

The gala was still in full swing when they re-entered the main ballroom. The orchestra had shifted to something faster, the tempo pulsing in the air. The guests had grown bolder, drinks flowing, hands straying where they shouldn't. The party was transforming from a social event into something darker.

Vivienne led her through the crowd, and Rebecca floated behind her like a dream. She smiled at everyone she passed, her eyes glazed, her hips swaying with an unconscious invitation. One of the men she'd serviced earlier—the blue-suited one—caught her eye and winked.

"Did you miss me?" she asked, her voice carrying across the crowd.

"Always, darling." He raised his glass. "Any chance of a repeat performance?"

"Ask Mistress."

Vivienne patted his cheek like a favorite pet. "Patience. I have plans for her that don't involve you tonight."

They continued their circuit of the room. Rebecca was introduced to a senator, a film producer, a tech billionaire, all of them predictable in their hunger. She was exhibited like a prize mare, her body displayed from every angle, her lips parted in a permanent invitation.

And then they reached the far end of the ballroom, where a heavy velvet curtain concealed a doorway. The Comte was waiting there, his silver hair gleaming in the low light.

"It's ready," he said, his eyes doing a slow, hungry inventory of Rebecca's body. "I've had it prepared as requested."

"Excellent." Vivienne turned to Rebecca, her hands cupping her face. "This is the final piece of your training, darling. Are you ready?"

"Yes, Mistress." Rebecca's cunt flooded at the prospect. "I'm ready."

"This is where you'll learn to serve more than one master. This is where you'll learn what it truly means to be a shared toy." She leaned in, her breath warm. "You'll be passed around like a party favor, used by any man who wants you, until you're nothing more than a trembling, dripping puddle of a woman."

Rebecca's legs were weak, her thighs slick with need. "Please. Please, Mistress."

"Please what?"

"Please let them use me. Please let me serve them."

Vivienne smiled, slow and predatory. "I'm going to remember this moment. The exact expression on your face when you begged for your own undoing."

She pulled open the curtain, revealing a room beyond—a dark, velvet-lined space filled with leather furniture and glinting metal. The men were already inside, seven of them, their cocks already out, their eyes bright with anticipation.

"Gentlemen," Vivienne announced, giving Rebecca a light push forward. "Your plaything has arrived."

Rebecca stumbled into the room on heels, a gasp escaping her lips. The door clicked shut behind her, and she heard the lock turn. Vivienne's voice was muffled through the velvet.

"Have fun, darling. I'll be back in an hour."

Seven men. Seven cocks. One bimbo slut.

Rebecca grinned.

"Who's first?" she asked, already sinking to her knees.

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