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The Hypnotist's Revenge

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A young man, in his 20’s, accidentally insults a hypnotist at the bar unintentionally. Vivienne, although seeming to have a wonderful personality, can be spiteful and vindictive if crossed and decides to punish Richard. She toys with him, making him do embarrassing and humiliating stuff. But when he finally has enough and tries to confront her physically, she decides that he’s really going to regret it. She gives him a hypnotic trigger that anyone can say. When he hears this trigger, he believes he is turning into a big breasted, air headed nympho bimbo slut. No physical changes happen. She tells him that once the trigger is spoken, it will be active for 4 hours before he returns to normal, or if someone says it a 2nd time within the 4 hour span. But each time it is said, the bimbo personality gets a little stronger, and little more bold. Vivienne instructs Richard that he will still be able to talk, protest, yell, scream, but as much as he tries to fight it, he won’t be able to resist. She encourages him to do that though as she enjoys seeing and hearing the struggle and knowing he can’t do anything about it. This will be a long, slow, drawn out process but Vivienne will help give some extra nudges with use of her hypnosis. As the bimbo side gets stronger, she starts buying clothes and makeup and such. Eventually she impacts Richard’s daily life with small subtle things at first. But eventually it’ll grow to more permanent impacts on his life such as him talking a little more like her even though it’s him, some mannerisms subtly trying to change. But eventually it will lead to more permanent impacts. Every step of the way he will try and fight and argue and protest out loud, but ultimately he will not be able to resist. All roads lead to him eventually becoming a blonde, big breasted, bimbo nympho slut.

Chapter 11: The Orgy's Finale

The velvet room had become a swamp of spent desire. The air hung thick and wet with the scent of sex—the acrid tang of sweat, the musk of multiple men's cum, the cloying perfume that had long since been overwhelmed by something far more primal. The leather chaise beneath Rebecca was slick, her own fluids mixed with the semen that had been deposited on her skin, in her hair, across her ruined dress. She lay there, trembling and drifting, her body a map of fingerprints and bite marks, her cunt still fluttering with the aftershocks of her latest orgasm.

Her eyes were half-lidded, her lips swollen and parted. She had lost count of how many times she had come, how many cocks had filled her mouth, her cunt, her ass. There was a moment—early on, perhaps the third or fourth man—when the bimbo fog had thinned just enough for that buried voice to surface. "Richard" had screamed, a distant, horrified shriek of recognition at what his body was being reduced to. But the pleasure had been too overwhelming, the training too deep. The scream had been swallowed by a moan, and Richard had receded once more into the warm, mindless embrace of Rebecca.

The men were buttoning their trousers, zipping their flies, exchanging satisfied glances. They were laughing, talking about her like she was a wonderful meal they'd just consumed. The young man with slicked-back hair—finally sated, his cock soft and glistening—patted her head as he passed.

"Get her cleaned up," he said to no one in particular. "She's got another round in her, I'm sure."

Rebecca made a soft, contented sound, her tongue darting out to lick her lips. She could still taste him, the last man, the one who had finished in her mouth while his fingers had worked her clit until she'd screamed around him.

The door to the velvet room opened, and Vivienne stepped in. She surveyed the scene with cool amusement, a fresh glass of champagne in her hand, her emerald gown immaculate. She took in Rebecca's wrecked state, the puddle of fluids on the chaise, the satisfied expressions of the men.

"Has she behaved?" Vivienne asked.

The Comte stepped forward, pulling his trousers up with the deliberate calm of a man who had just finished a particularly fine meal. "Impeccably," he said. "A natural. Possibly the best I've had this decade."

He approached Vivienne, his silver hair gleaming in the dim light. His eyes were still hungry, still calculating. "I have a proposition, Madame LeStrange."

Vivienne raised an eyebrow. "I'm listening."

"This one." The Comte gestured at Rebecca, who was beginning to stir, her glassy eyes searching the room. "I want her for the weekend. My private estate on the Riviera. I have guests arriving Friday evening, and I believe she would be the perfect centerpiece."

Vivienne's smile was slow, considering. She took a sip of her champagne, her eyes studying the Comte with a connoisseur's eye. "She's your type, then?"

"She's everyone's type," the Comte said. "That's the point. I intend to share her liberally. My guests, my staff, myself. I have a particular scene in mind that I believe she will accommodate beautifully."

"And what would I get in return?"

The Comte named a figure. It was obscene enough that even the spent men in the room paused to glance at him. Vivienne didn't blink.

"Plus the satisfaction of knowing she's being well used," the Comte added. "I have a reputation for thoroughness, as I'm sure you know."

Vivienne considered for a moment, then set down her champagne glass. She stepped forward, into the Comte's space, her hand coming up to rest on his chest. For a moment, they stood like dancers, their eyes locked.

"Done," she said, and leaned in to kiss him on the mouth.

It was not a romantic kiss. It was a seal of ownership, a transaction made flesh. Vivienne's lips lingered just long enough to make it clear she was in charge, then she pulled back, her smile sharp.

"She's yours until Monday morning. I expect her back in working condition—a little used, maybe, but functional." She glanced at Rebecca. "Don't break her completely. She has potential."

The Comte's hand found Rebecca's wrist, pulling her upright. Rebecca swayed, her body still loose, her response automatic. She looked up at her new owner with a trusting smile.

"Hello," she said.

"You're coming with me," the Comte said. "You're going to make me very happy all weekend."

A dark, satisfied wave of feeling washed through the bimbo fog—pleasure, excitement, a giddy anticipation that lit up her neurons. She was being handed over. She was property, a plaything, a toy to be passed from mistress to master. There was no wrong in it. There was only need, and the promise of being filled.

"Yes, Master," she breathed. "I'm yours."

He was gentle with her, which somehow made it worse. He pulled her through the ballroom with a hand at the small of her back, a steadying touch that kept her from stumbling. The party was winding down, the guests thinning, but there were still eyes on them as they passed. Rebecca was a spectacle, her ruined dress clinging to her curves, her body bearing the visible marks of the evening's activities. She heard whispers as they walked—speculation about who she was, who had been with her, what she was going to be subjected to next.

She didn't care. The whispers were weather, and she was too warm, too contented, to register the cold.

The Comte's limousine was parked in a private section of the driveway, away from the other cars. It was a long, black monster of a machine, with tinted windows and a uniformed driver who opened the door without looking at them. The interior was spacious, upholstered in cream leather, with a bar in one corner and a plush carpet that felt like clouds under Rebecca's bare feet.

She'd lost her shoes somewhere in the velvet room.

The Comte closed the door, and the driver pulled away. The partition slid up, leaving them alone in the soft, insulated silence of the cabin. The city lights bled past the windows in streaks of gold and red.

Rebecca settled into the seat, her body humming. Her cunt was sore but aching, hungry despite everything. The egg was still inside her, a constant, subtle pressure that throbbed with every heartbeat. The remote was in Vivienne's clutch, presumably, but the Comte had his own means of control.

He sat across from her, watching her with those predator's eyes. He was old enough to be her grandfather, but there was nothing weak about him. He was fit and lean, wiry, the kind of body that had been maintained through discipline and privilege. His hands rested on his knees, and his gaze was a slow, methodical inventory.

"You are a beautiful creature," he said. "I've seen many women transformed by hypnosis. But you—you are something special."

"Thank you, Master," Rebecca said, the words automatic.

"Come here."

She rose, swaying on her feet, and walked to him. He guided her down into his lap, her knees spreading to straddle him. His hands found her waist, warm through the thin, ruined fabric of her gown.

"Do you know what I'm going to do with you tonight?" he asked.

"No, Master," she said, her eyes wide. "Tell me."

"I'm going to take you home. I'm going to bathe you, personally. Then I'm going to lay you out on my bed and fuck you until you can't remember your own name." His hands slid up her thighs, beneath her dress, finding the slick heat between her legs. She was already soaked, her pussy swollen and ready.

"Then I'm going to put you to work. I have guests arriving Friday. You'll serve as their entertainment. You'll be passed around the table like a bottle of wine, used and enjoyed. You'll take everything they give you, and you'll thank them for it."

Rebecca's breath quickened, her hips grinding against his hand. "Yes, Master. Please."

"Please what?"

"Please use me."

He slid a finger inside her, and she gasped, her back arching. She was so sensitive, so raw that even a single digit sent sparks of pleasure through her system. He added another, stretching her, and she moaned, her hands gripping his shoulders for support.

"That's it," he murmured. "You like having your cunt filled, don't you?"

"Yes, Master. God, yes."

"Then perhaps you'd like more."

He withdrew his hand, bringing it to his mouth, and sucked her juices from his fingers with deliberate slowness. His eyes never left hers. "Tell me what you want. I want to hear you say it."

"Your cock," she begged. "I want your cock inside me. Please, Master. I need to be filled."

He chuckled, low and pleased. "I had planned to wait until we were home. But you're too tempting."

He reached down, unzipping his trousers with the same unhurried confidence. His cock was thick and long, already hard, glistening at the head. Rebecca's mouth watered at the sight. He gripped the base and guided her hip with his other hand.

"Take me inside you," he said. "Prove how good you are."

Rebecca positioned herself, her hand wrapping around his shaft, slick with own wetness. She lowered herself slowly, inch by inch, feeling herself stretch around his girth. Her head fell back as he filled her completely, his cock a solid, satisfying presence deep inside her cunt.

"Oh, fuck," she breathed. "Oh, fuck yes."

"Ride me," the Comte commanded. "Show me what else you learned."

She began to move, her hips finding a rhythm, her body remembering the training. She rose and fell with a liquid grace that was entirely Rebecca, her new body perfectly suited to this act. He leaned back, watching her ride him, his hands resting loosely on her thighs.

"You are exquisite," he said. "A perfect little toy."

"Thank you, Master," she gasped, the words punctuated by every downward thrust.

Her orgasm came quickly, the buildup faster than she expected. The pleasure had been so deep, so constant, that even a few minutes of stimulation was enough to send her over. She cried out as she came, her inner walls convulsing around him, her entire body shaking.

He didn't stop. He gripped her hips and began to thrust up into her, setting a punishing pace. She was overwhelmed, overstimulated, but the bimbo heart of her loved it. She loved the roughness, the lack of mercy, the way he was taking his pleasure from her without a thought for her own.

"That's it," he grunted. "Good girl. Take it."

She felt him swell inside her, felt the hot rush as he came, flooding her abused cunt with his seed. She stayed on top of him, her body trembling, his cock softening slowly within her. She felt empty and full at once, satisfied and aching for more.

The limousine hummed beneath them.

The Comte finally pulled out, his release spilling from her, dripping down her thighs. He handed her a linen napkin from the bar, impersonal. She cleaned herself as he rearranged his trousers, his composure restored.

"You'll do," he said, and there was a finality to the words that felt like ownership. "Now sit back and enjoy the ride. The night is only beginning."

Rebecca curled into the corner of the seat, her body still buzzing. The city lights continued to stream past the darkened windows. Somewhere, in the deepest recesses of her mind, a vague sense of wrongness flickered, a memory of newspapers read in the morning and opinions expressed with sharp tongue. But it was a distant thing, barely real.

She was going to the Riviera. She was a work of art, a living toy, a bimbo slut. And she was exactly where she needed to be.

She smiled into the darkness and waited to be used again.

She smiled into the darkness and waited to be used again.

The Comte did not speak for the remainder of the drive. He sat in the opposite corner of the limousine, his fingers steepled beneath his chin, his eyes tracing the city lights that bled past the tinted glass. His silence was not cold—it was the patience of a man who knew exactly what he was bringing home.

Rebecca watched him from beneath her lashes, her body still humming. The mess between her thighs had cooled, but the aftershocks of her orgasm lingered in flutter-pulses deep inside her. She wanted him again. She wanted anyone. The bimbo fog was still thick, making her thoughts slow and syrupy. She could feel herself drifting, and she let herself go, content to be a passenger in her own skin.

The limousine turned off the main road and descended into a gated underground garage. The driver stopped the car, and the Comte opened the door himself, stepping out without waiting for the chauffeur. He extended a hand to Rebecca, and she took it, her bare feet landing on stone that was still warm from the day's heat.

The private elevator took them up—slow, mirrored walls reflecting Rebecca back at herself. She caught her own image: her blonde hair tangled and wild, her ruined dress hiked up around her hips, her body a collection of red marks and gleaming skin. She looked like something half-dead, or half-resurrected. The Comte looked at her reflection too, and the corner of his mouth curled.

"You're still dripping," he observed.

Rebecca looked down. His cum was indeed still sliding down her inner thigh, a slow, thick line. "Yes, Master," she said, her voice soft. "I'm sorry."

"Don't apologize." The elevator doors opened into a penthouse that smelled like cedar and cold air, sprawling and glass-walled. The city glittered below them like a bed of coals. "That's what you're for."

He led her through the penthouse, past a living room with furniture that belonged in a museum, past a kitchen that gleamed like a surgeon's instrument tray. The bedroom was at the end of a long corridor, a vast chamber dominated by a massive bed with black silk sheets. Candles flickered on the dresser, filling the air with the scent of sandalwood and something darker, muskier.

"Strip."

Rebecca's hands went to the ruined gown, but the Comte stopped her. He stepped behind her, his fingers finding the zipper, pulling it down with slow deliberation. The dress fell from her body in a whisper of silk, pooling at her feet. She stood naked, shivering despite the warmth, her breasts heavy and full, her nipples hard.

"Do you know why I wanted you?" he asked, circling her like a cat. "I've seen many dolls. Made many of them myself. But you—you have a particular quality. A spark that hasn't quite been extinguished, no matter how deep Vivienne's work goes."

Rebecca blinked. "I don't—I don't understand."

"You will." His hand came up to cup her breast, thumb brushing across the nipple. She gasped. "I'm not like other men, Rebecca. I don't want a woman who's simply gone. I want a woman who knows what she's losing, even as she's losing it. The struggle is part of the pleasure."

He pinched her nipple, hard, and she cried out, her hips jerking forward. "You felt that, didn't you? A flicker of something old. A twinge of resistance." His hand slid down her stomach, through the neat triangle of hair at her mound, now wet again with fresh arousal. "I want to bring that out. I want to hear you fight it, even as your cunt begs for more."

Rebecca shook her head, her body betraying her. A voice—that buried voice—stirred. She felt a wave of confusion, a cold splash of awareness. She didn't want to fight. She wanted to be a good girl. But the Comte was looking at her like he was peeling back layers, like he could see through the bimbo haze to the panicked man beneath.

"Please," she whispered, the word automatic. "Please use me. I don't want to fight. I just want to please."

"That's what they all say." He turned and walked to the bed, sitting on the edge. He patted his lap. "Come here. Let's see if you really mean it."

She went to him on hands and knees, crawling across the plush carpet. The position was instinctive now, trained into her bones. She positioned herself over his lap, and the Comte's hands came to rest on her back, his fingers tracing her spine.

"Such a good creature," he murmured. "Such a perfect vessel. But I know the secret that no one else in that room knew." He leaned in, his breath warm against her ear. "You were Richard, weren't you? Not very long ago."

Rebecca's breath hitched. The words hit like a physical blow, breaking through the fog with icy clarity. She tried to shake her head, but his hand was in her hair, holding her still.

"No, Master," she said, her voice a whimper. "I'm Rebecca. I'm a bimbo. I'm your toy."

"You were Richard," he repeated, his voice impossibly gentle. "You had a name that wasn't given to you. You had a life that wasn't borrowed. And you lost it all because you couldn't keep your mouth shut for five goddamn minutes."

The tears came unbidden, hot and shameful. She hated those tears. Hated the weakness that made her cry. But she couldn't stop them, couldn't stop the aching swell of recognition that flooded her chest.

"I'm not—" she started.

"You are," the Comte said. "And that's what excites me most. Not the doll Vivienne created, but the man who's still trapped inside her, screaming to get out."

He lay down, pulling her onto the bed with him. He positioned her on her back, spreading her legs. His cock was already hard, jutting up between them, thick and intimidating.

"Look at me," he commanded. "I want to see your eyes when I fuck you. I want to watch Richard's face as his body betrays him."

Rebecca's mind was a warzone. She wanted to close her eyes, let the fog take her. But the Comte's gaze held her, dark and unyielding. He positioned himself at her entrance, the head of his cock pressing against her slick folds. Her cunt ached with need, clenching around emptiness.

"Tell me you want it," he said. "Tell me you want this cock inside you."

"I want it," she breathed, the words forced out by training and desire. "Please, Master. I need it. Fill me."

He thrust into her, deep and hard. The shock of penetration made her arch off the bed, a cry tearing from her throat. His cock was thicker than she remembered, stretching her in ways that bordered on pain, but the pain was liquid fire that bled into her veins, that made her thighs clench and her toes curl.

"That's it," he growled. "That's what I wanted to see. That face. That war between defiance and surrender."

He fucked her with methodical precision, each stroke hitting a spot deep inside her that made her mind go white. She tried to hold on to the anger, the shame, the desperate need to fight. But his cock kept stealing the thoughts, replaced them with pure, simple need.

"Richard," he said, the name a mockery. "Is this what you wanted? When you stood on that stage and mouthed off to Vivienne, is this the future you saw for yourself?"

"No," she sobbed, but her hips were lifting to meet his thrusts. "Please, no."

"Please no, or please more?"

"More," she begged. "Please more. Don't stop. Please, I need it."

His hand found her clit, circling with unerring precision. She was close, so close, her body trembling on the edge of release. He growled, his thrusts becoming faster, more erratic. "Come," he commanded. "Come on my cock, you pathetic thing."

The orgasm ripped through her, so violent that her vision went white. She screamed, a broken, animal sound that was neither Rebecca nor Richard. Her body convulsed, her cunt clenching around him, her hips bucking with uncontrollable spasms.

He came a moment later, a grunt escaping his lips as he flooded her with another thick rush of semen. She felt it fill her, hot and satisfying, and a sense of sick, wrong relief washed over her. He pulled out and collapsed beside her, his chest glistening with sweat.

For a long, aching moment, the silence was complete.

The Comte finally stirred, his hand coming up to tilt her chin toward him. His eyes were still hungry, still calculating. "You have a rich weekend ahead of you, Richard," he said. "I'm going to enjoy every minute of it."

The name echoed in her mind, a cold stone dropped into still water. She felt the man beneath the bimbo stir, feel a surge of protest, of fury, of desperate denial. But the fury was faint, like a radio station losing frequency, overwhelmed by the hot static of pleasure that still hummed through her body.

"Get some sleep," the Comte said, turning away from her. "You'll need your strength. Tomorrow, I'll introduce you to a few of my friends."

Rebecca lay in the darkness, the silk sheets clinging to her skin. She wanted to sleep. She wanted to drift into that warm, mindless haze. But the name kept echoing, a persistent buzz in her skull. Richard. Richard. Richard.

She closed her eyes and tried to forget.

The dream was disjointed, fractured fragments of a life she no longer had. An office with harsh fluorescent lights, a computer screen showing a half-finished design, the taste of bad coffee and the sting of a sharp tongue biting into a conversation. A woman with black hair and cold emerald eyes, laughing at a joke she made at someone's expense. The sound of a crowd, the flash of stage lights, the weight of a microphone in her hand.

Then the dream shifted. She was on her knees, her mouth full, her eyes watering. The world was a blur of cocks and hands and voices, all of them praising her, using her, reducing her. She felt her mind dissolving, the edges of those memories burning away like paper in a fire.

She woke with a gasp, her heart racing. The penthouse was silent, the candles extinguished, a pale dawn light filtering through the massive windows. The Comte was gone from the bed, but his presence lingered in the sheets, the scent of his cologne, the bitter tang of sex that coated her skin.

A tray sat on the dresser, laden with fresh fruit, pastries, and a glass of water. A note was tucked beneath the edge of a silver platter.

"Bloody Mary in the fridge. The car picks us up at ten. Eat something. You'll need the strength. —C."

Rebecca stared at the note, her fingers tracing the elegant script. The letters blurred, and she blinked, trying to focus. She could feel the bimbo fog trying to rise, trying to swallow her thoughts back into that warm syrup. But something was resisting, something small and stubborn that refused to go quietly.

She touched her throat, feeling the raw ache from the first man's cock. She looked down at her body, at the marks and bruises that now colored her skin. She'd been used — thoroughly, completely, with a mastery that left nothing to the imagination.

And she'd loved it.

The thought was a knife wound. She'd loved it. Not just the physical pleasure, but the surrender, the annihilation of self. She'd begged for it, cried out for it, wept when it was taken away. Even now, lying in the wreckage of her own body, her cunt ached with hunger.

"They made me this," she whispered to the empty room. "They made me this."

But a darker whisper followed, one she couldn't quite silence: But you let them.

The mansion on the Riviera was more fortress than home. A sprawling estate of sun-baked stone and glass, perched on a cliff overlooking a sea that glittered like a knife blade. Palm trees lined the driveway, their fronds rattling in the hot, salt-scented wind. The Comte's car swept up the gravel path, and Rebecca pressed her face to the window, watching the mansion grow larger with every turn.

She was dressed in a white sundress, thin and barely decent, her new owner's taste evident in its revealing cut. Everything about her presentation was deliberate: the dress too short, the neckline too low, her bare ass barely covered. She was a display piece, meant to be seen.

"You'll meet the others at lunch," the Comte said, breaking the silence. "There are five of them staying this weekend. Three are like me, old friends with old tastes. The other two are younger, but they've learned well."

Rebecca nodded, her heart hammering in her chest. She wanted to ask who they were, what they'd expect, how she was supposed to behave. But the bimbo fog was thick, suppressing any thoughts that might complicate things. Only the faintest echo of Richard's voice remained, and even that seemed to be fading.

"I want you to make a good impression," the Comte continued. "I've described you to them already. They have high expectations."

"I'll make you proud, Master," she said, the words automatic.

The car stopped. The Comte stepped out, and Rebecca followed, her bare feet sinking into the white gravel. The sun was hot on her skin, the air thick with the scent of flowers and the sea.

A servant took her arm, a quiet, severe woman in black, and led her into the house. Rebecca followed, her eyes drinking in the marble floors, the vaulted ceilings, the art that hung on every wall. Everything was beautiful and cold, a museum of wealth and control.

The woman led her to a guest room and gestured to a wardrobe that stood open. Inside, dresses hung in a rainbow of colors, each one more revealing than the last. Shoe racks lined the bottom, filled with heels in every height and style.

"Dress for lunch," the woman said, her voice flat. "The master expects his guests to present themselves well."

Rebecca went to the wardrobe, her hands trembling. She chose a dress of deep red silk, cut to show her breasts and midriff. It was thin, almost transparent, a gossamer layer requiring nothing underneath. She slipped it on, the silk whispering against her skin.

The woman gave an approving nod. "The dining terrace is through the garden. Wait there until the master arrives."

She left, the door clicking shut behind her. Rebecca stood alone in the room, the silence pressing in. She glanced at the window, at the sun-drenched grounds, at the glint of the sea on the horizon.

For a moment, it was just her. Rebecca. The bimbo. The toy.

But somewhere deep inside, Richard's voice stirred, faint and desperate.

"Run," it whispered. "Please, run."

Rebecca shook her head, the motion automatic. She couldn't run. There was nowhere to go. She had no shoes, no money, no will. She was a creature of training, a vessel of pleasure. She did what she was told.

She stepped through the garden, the sunlight warm on her skin. The dining terrace was a long table set under a canopy of vines. Five men were already there, seated in wicker chairs, sweating glasses of gin and tonic in their hands. They turned as she approached, their eyes sliding over her like oil.

This was her purpose. Her only purpose.

As she walked toward the table, her mind was temporarily clear, and the realization struck her that she was truly lost. She wondered if Richard had died that night on the stage, or if he was still in there somewhere, drowning in the pleasure that now defined her. She suspected the latter was more terrible.

The eldest of the men rose, extending a hand. His smile was polished, white like a predator's.

"You must be the famous Rebecca," he said. "The Comte told us all about you."

Rebecca smiled, her heart thundering. "I hope I live up to the hype," she said, forcing the words through her red lips.

He cupped her breast through the flimsy silk, squeezing with possessive familiarity. She gasped, her body reacting before her mind could. He saw it, and his smile widened with knowing.

"Oh, you will," he said. "I'm sure you will."

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