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The Hypnotist's Revenge

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A young man, in his 20’s, accidentally insults a hypnotist at the bar unintentionally. Vivienne, although seeming to have a wonderful personality, can be spiteful and vindictive if crossed and decides to punish Richard. She toys with him, making him do embarrassing and humiliating stuff. But when he finally has enough and tries to confront her physically, she decides that he’s really going to regret it. She gives him a hypnotic trigger that anyone can say. When he hears this trigger, he believes he is turning into a big breasted, air headed nympho bimbo slut. No physical changes happen. She tells him that once the trigger is spoken, it will be active for 4 hours before he returns to normal, or if someone says it a 2nd time within the 4 hour span. But each time it is said, the bimbo personality gets a little stronger, and little more bold. Vivienne instructs Richard that he will still be able to talk, protest, yell, scream, but as much as he tries to fight it, he won’t be able to resist. She encourages him to do that though as she enjoys seeing and hearing the struggle and knowing he can’t do anything about it. This will be a long, slow, drawn out process but Vivienne will help give some extra nudges with use of her hypnosis. As the bimbo side gets stronger, she starts buying clothes and makeup and such. Eventually she impacts Richard’s daily life with small subtle things at first. But eventually it’ll grow to more permanent impacts on his life such as him talking a little more like her even though it’s him, some mannerisms subtly trying to change. But eventually it will lead to more permanent impacts. Every step of the way he will try and fight and argue and protest out loud, but ultimately he will not be able to resist. All roads lead to him eventually becoming a blonde, big breasted, bimbo nympho slut.

Chapter 13: The Comte's Morning Ritual

The morning light arrived like an accusation, slicing through the heavy velvet curtains in blades of gold. Rebecca stirred beneath the mountain of silk sheets, her body registering the previous night's abuse in a symphony of aches. Her thighs were raw, her jaw sore at the hinge, her cunt swollen and tender. There was a dull, persistent throb between her legs that felt less like pain and more like hunger, a gnawing emptiness that demanded to be filled.

She blinked against the brightness, her mind sluggish, coated in a fog that felt almost comfortable now. The room swam into focus—ivory lace canopy above her, gold-threaded pillows crushed beneath her cheek, the distant sound of waves crashing against the cliffs below the villa. She was alone.

The thought should have brought relief. Instead, Rebecca felt a pang of something like abandonment. She shifted on the mattress, and the ache between her legs sharpened, reminding her of what she'd had, what she'd lost when the men had finished with her.

Her hand drifted down her body—over the silk of her flat stomach, through the thatch of blonde hair, to the wet heat waiting between her thighs. Her fingers found her clit with practiced ease, and she moaned, a soft, needy sound that echoed in the empty room.

But before she could build any momentum, the door swung open.

The Comte stood in the doorway, dressed in a robe of deep burgundy silk, his silver hair immaculate despite the early hour. He watched her with a knowing smile, his eyes tracking her hand's position between her legs.

"Naughty girl," he said, his voice carrying a note of amusement. "You were told to wake up ready to serve, not to pleasure yourself."

Rebecca's hand snapped away as if burned. "I'm sorry, Master. I couldn't help it—the need, it's so strong—"

"Of course it is." He crossed the room in a few fluid strides, sitting on the edge of the bed. His hand found her chin, tilting her face up to meet his gaze. "That need is the foundation of everything you're becoming. You must learn to channel it, to surrender it to my control."

"Yes, Master." The words came automatically, dropping from her lips like coins into a slot.

He released her chin and rose, walking to a small table near the window where a silver tray sat laden with pastries and a steaming pot of coffee. He poured himself a cup, deliberately slow, savoring the aroma before taking a sip.

"Today," he said, his back to her, "you will learn discipline. The pleasure you crave is a reward, not a right. You will earn it through service."

Rebecca pushed herself up on her elbows, her body protesting the movement. "What do you want me to do?"

"First, you will kneel." He gestured to a spot on the floor near the foot of the bed. "And you will present yourself."

She slid off the bed, her bare feet meeting the cool marble. The movement sent a fresh pulse of ache through her cunt, and she bit her lip to suppress a whimper. She knelt where he'd indicated, spreading her knees wide and lowering her chest to the floor, her ass raised in offering. The position was familiar now—drilled into her by Vivienne's conditioning, by the Comte's training, by the men who had used her body with such casual contempt.

"Excellent," the Comte murmured, setting down his coffee. "You learn quickly."

He circled her, his footsteps slow and deliberate on the marble. His hand trailed across her ass, fingers tracing the curve, dipping between her thighs to feel her wetness.

"Already soaked," he observed. "Your body knows what it needs, even before your mind catches up. That's the sign of proper conditioning."

He withdrew his hand, and Rebecca felt the loss immediately, a desperate whine escaping her throat.

"Please, Master," she begged. "Please, I need—"

"You need what?" he asked, his voice soft and dangerous.

"I need your cock," she whimpered. "I need to taste it, to feel it inside me, to be filled—"

"Not yet." He walked to the armchair near the window and sat, spreading his legs. The burgundy robe fell open, revealing his cock, already half-hard against his thigh. "First, you'll crawl to me. On your hands and knees. And you'll beg for permission."

Rebecca crawled, her body moving with a fluidity that still surprised her, her hips swaying with each movement. The marble was cold against her palms and knees, but the sight of his cock growing harder with each inch of her approach was a balm against any discomfort.

She reached his chair and knelt before him, her face inches from his erection. The scent of him—musk and expensive soap and something primal—made her mouth water.

"Permission to worship you, Master," she breathed. "Please let me take you in my mouth."

The Comte reached down, threading his fingers through her hair, gripping the blonde strands at the roots. "You'll take me," he said, his voice low and rough. "But you'll do it slow. You'll savor every inch, every pulse, every drop. If you rush, I'll stop. And you'll be left frustrated, aching, empty."

"Yes, Master," she whispered, her tongue darting out to wet her lips.

He guided her closer, and she opened her mouth, taking just the head of his cock between her lips. The taste of him flooded her senses—salty, masculine, intoxicating. She swirled her tongue around the sensitive crown, drawing a low groan from the Comte's chest.

"Good girl," he murmured. "Keep going. Slow."

She descended further, taking him inch by inch, savoring the stretch of her jaw, the weight of him on her tongue. She breathed through her nose, focusing on the sensation, on the way his fingers tightened in her hair as she took him deeper. When her nose brushed his pelvis, she paused, holding him fully in her throat, swallowing around him.

"Fuck," the Comte breathed, his composure cracking for just a moment. "That's it. That's a good fucking cocksucker."

Rebecca glowed under the praise, a warmth spreading through her chest that had nothing to do with the cock in her throat. She began to move, slow and deliberate, pulling back until just the head remained, then sinking down again. Her hands rested on his thighs, fingers digging into the silk of his robe, grounding herself in the rhythm.

"Look at me," he commanded.

She raised her eyes to his, meeting his gaze as she continued to work his cock with her mouth. The intimacy of it, the submission, sent a thrill through her. She was his—completely, utterly his.

"That's right," he said, his voice dropping to a rough murmur. "You're nothing but a set of holes for my pleasure. But you're my perfect little set of holes, aren't you?"

She moaned in agreement, the vibration making him shudder. He tightened his grip on her hair, and she felt his hips begin to move, a counterpoint to her rhythm. He was taking control now, fucking her face in a slow, measured pace.

"Swallow," he commanded. "Take every drop like the desperate little whore you are."

She focused on the task, her throat relaxing around him, her tongue working his shaft as he thrust deeper. When he came, she was ready, swallowing eagerly as the hot flood filled her mouth. She kept her lips sealed around him until he withdrew, and then she showed him her empty mouth—a final act of devotion.

"Perfect," he said, stroking her cheek. "Now, on the bed. On your back. I want to see that hungry cunt."

She climbed onto the bed, positioning herself as he'd instructed, her legs spread, her arms above her head, gripping the headboard. She watched him rise from the chair, his cock still slick with her saliva and his release, already beginning to harden again.

"This is the lesson," he said, settling between her thighs. "Your body is a vessel for my pleasure. But your pleasure is a gift I grant you." He pressed the head of his cock against her entrance, not pushing in, just letting her feel him. "You will beg for it. And I will decide whether you deserve it."

"Please, Master," she begged, her hips tilting, trying to draw him in. "Please, I need it. I need to feel you inside me."

"You'll need it more than this," he said, pulling back, denying her. "Show me how much you want it. Touch yourself."

Rebecca's hand flew to her clit, her fingers working in desperate circles. She was so close already, the weeks of conditioning leaving her perpetually on the edge of orgasm.

"Please," she sobbed, "please, Master, I'm begging you—"

He thrust into her, a single, brutal stroke that buried him to the hilt. Rebecca screamed, the orgasm slamming into her without warning, her cunt clenching around his cock as she came in wave after wave of white-hot pleasure.

"Look at you," he said, his voice dripping with contempt, but his hips never stopping their rhythm. "Coming apart like a proper little whore. You didn't even need my permission, did you?"

"S-sorry, Master," she gasped. "I couldn't help it—"

"That's the point." He grabbed her hips, pulling her down against him as he drove deeper. "You'll learn to beg for it properly. You'll learn to ask my permission before you come. And if you fail, you'll be punished."

The threat sent a shiver through her, equal parts fear and desire. She wanted his punishment, wanted to be made to beg harder, to surrender even more of herself to his will.

"I'll learn," she promised. "I'll be good."

He grunted, his rhythm quickening. "I'll teach you."

He fucked her with punishing intensity, his hands gripping her hips hard enough to bruise. She was lost in the sensation, her mind a blur of pleasure and submission. When he came, he pulled out, stroking himself to completion and painting her stomach with hot, sticky ropes of release.

"That," he said, breathing hard, "is what you're for. Not your own pleasure. Mine."

Rebecca lay there, trembling, her body covered in a thin sheen of sweat and his release. The word "perfect" echoed in her mind, the highest praise he could give.

"Clean yourself up," he said, his voice returning to its casual, commanding tone. "Then come to the terrace. We have guests arriving for the afternoon."

She rose on unsteady legs, staggering into the bathroom he indicated. The cold marble floor shocked her system, and she took a moment to lean against the counter, staring at her reflection in the mirror.

Blonde hair mussed, blue eyes glassy, lips swollen. A thin trail of his cum drying on her stomach. She touched her face, tracing the delicate curve of her jaw, the high arch of her cheekbones. She'd been pretty as Richard—sharp-featured, androgynous in a boyish way. But now she was beautiful in a way that felt almost criminal, designed for maximum want, maximum fuckability.

The voice in her head was quiet today. She strained to hear it, this phantom self that had once insisted on being called Richard. But the thoughts scattered like smoke in wind, refusing to coalesce.

She shook her head, turning on the shower. Hot water sluiced over her body, washing away the evidence of his use. She soaped herself methodically, pausing only when her fingers brushed her still-sensitive cunt, a fresh pulse of need flaring at the touch.

She had to be good. She had to earn his approval, his praise, his cock. The thought was comforting, settling her mind into a quiet, focused calm.

She dressed in a simple sundress, pale yellow, that tied at the shoulders and fluttered in the ocean breeze. Sandals, a touch of perfume. She made her way to the terrace, where the Comte sat with a new set of guests—a man and a woman, both elegantly dressed, both watching her approach with predatory interest.

"Ah, there she is," the Comte said, rising. "Gentlemen, this is Rebecca. My newest project. Rebecca, this is Mr. and Mrs. Ashford. They're old friends of mine."

The man, Mr. Ashford, was silver-haired with sharp, intelligent eyes. His wife was younger, mid-thirties, with auburn hair and a bored expression. She looked at Rebecca with something like recognition.

"So this is the one," Mrs. Ashford said, her voice languid. "I heard you were quite a handful. A man, wasn't it? Before?"

"That's right," Rebecca said, the words automatic. "But not anymore."

"No," Mrs. Ashford agreed, a slow smile spreading across her lips. "No, I don't think you are."

The afternoon blurred into a haze of conversation and champagne, of the Ashfords' probing questions and the Comte's approving glances. Rebecca found herself serving, refilling glasses, kneeling when told, responding to the Comte's cues with almost supernatural precision.

She was becoming what he wanted. And the thought made her glow with pride.

That evening, as the sun dipped below the horizon and the sky turned to fire, the Comte dismissed the Ashfords with promises of future visits. He led Rebecca back to his bedroom and knelt her at the foot of the bed.

"You did well today," he said, stroking her hair. "But this is only the beginning."

"Thank you, Master," she whispered, a single tear rolling down her cheek.

It wasn't a tear of sorrow. It was a tear of relief. Of acceptance. Of a final, quiet surrender.

In the depths of her mind, Richard stopped screaming.

The silence was louder than any sound he'd ever made. He was still there, somewhere, watching through Rebecca's blue eyes as she pressed a kiss to the Comte's hand. But his protests had faded to a whisper, his anger to a numb acceptance.

He was no longer fighting.

He was just a ghost, haunting the body he'd once occupied.

And Rebecca—bright, empty, perfect Rebecca—was in control.

The Ashfords returned three days later, as promised. This time they came with two additional men in tow—silver-haired, sharp-jawed, exuding the same casual authority that clung to the Comte like expensive cologne. Rebecca knelt in the foyer as they arrived, her head bowed, her hands resting on her thighs. She wore a white silk chemise that left nothing to the imagination, and she could feel their gazes sliding over her like oil on water.

"Rebecca," the Comte said, his hand coming to rest on her head in a gesture that felt almost paternal. "These gentlemen traveled a long way to see you. Make them feel welcome."

She rose, moving toward the first man with a practiced sway, her hips rolling in a rhythm that had been drilled into her through hours of repetition. She pressed a kiss to his cheek, then the next, then the third, her lips barely brushing their skin. Mrs. Ashford watched from the doorway, her expression a mask of amusement.

"The transformation is remarkable," Mrs. Ashford said, her voice carrying that same languid drawl as before. "I remember when she was a he. Mouthy little thing, wasn't she? Couldn't stop running his tongue."

"That's all been corrected," the Comte said, guiding them toward the salon. "She speaks now only when spoken to. And even then, her vocabulary is limited to yes, Master, and please."

The men laughed, a low chorus of approval. Rebecca felt a flush of pride at the praise, her smile brightening as she followed them into the salon. She poured drinks, served canapés, knelt at the Comte's feet when he gestured. The hours blurred together, conversation washing over her like waves, her mind settling into that comfortable fog that had become her default state.

It wasn't until Mrs. Ashford approached her directly that the haze began to thin.

"You," Mrs. Ashford said, crooking a finger. "Come here."

Rebecca rose, crossing the room to stand before the older woman. Mrs. Ashford studied her with those sharp, intelligent eyes, her gaze traveling from Rebecca's face to her chest to her hips and back again.

"Kneel," she commanded.

Rebecca knelt immediately, her knees hitting the carpet with a soft thud. Mrs. Ashford circled her, her heels clicking on the hardwood floor.

"You know what I find fascinating about you?" she mused, her voice pitched low so only Rebecca could hear. "You had a mind. A real one. You had opinions and desires and a sense of self. And now look at you—one word from me and you're on your knees, spreading your legs like a common whore."

Rebecca's cheeks flushed, but not with shame. The words were a balm, a confirmation of her new purpose. "Yes, ma'am. I'm a whore. A common one. That's all I'm good for."

"Show me," Mrs. Ashford said, her voice dropping to a whisper. "Show me how good you are."

Rebecca's hands went to the hem of her chemise, lifting it over her head in one fluid motion. She sat back on her heels, naked, her breasts bobbing with the movement, her thighs already slick with need. The room had gone quiet, the men's conversation stuttering to a halt as they watched.

"Beautiful," Mrs. Ashford murmured. "The Comte does such good work."

She circled behind Rebecca, her fingers trailing across her shoulders, down her spine. When she reached the small of Rebecca's back, she pressed, forcing her to bow forward, her chest and cheek pressing into the carpet, her ass raised in offering.

"Stay," Mrs. Ashford said. "And don't move until I tell you."

Rebecca held the position, her arms spread wide, her body trembling with the effort of staying still. She heard the other woman walk away, heard the murmurs of approval from the men. Minutes passed, or perhaps hours—time had become slippery lately—and still she held, her muscles aching, her cunt soaking the carpet beneath her.

"Please," she finally whispered. "Please, ma'am, may I—"

"Did I give you permission to speak?" Mrs. Ashford's voice was sharp, cutting through the room.

"No, ma'am. I'm sorry, ma'am."

"Then shut your fucking mouth."

Rebecca clamped her lips together, her jaw aching with the effort. The position was agony now, her thighs screaming, her back protesting. But the ache between her legs was worse—a deep, hollow need that pulsed with every breath.

The Comte rose from his chair, approaching her. He crouched beside her, his hand stroking her hair.

"You're doing so well," he murmured. "This is what obedience looks like. This is what it means to truly surrender."

"Thank you, Master," she whispered, the words escaping before she could stop them.

He chuckled, his thumb tracing her lower lip. "The hunger is eating you alive, isn't it? You can feel it in your cunt, that desperate ache. You'd do anything to be filled right now."

"Yes, Master. Anything. Please."

"Please what?"

"Please fuck me." The words were a sob, wrenched from somewhere deep in her chest. "Please use me. Please let me come. I'll do anything."

The room erupted in laughter, a chorus of mocking delight. Rebecca felt her cheeks burn, but she didn't care. The humiliation was delicious, a salt-sweet flavor that made her brain go quiet and her body sing.

Mrs. Ashford crouched in front of her, taking her chin in a firm grip. "You know what I think? I think you're not ready yet. I think you need to suffer a little more."

She rose, gesturing to the men. "Come. Let's see if we can make her beg properly."

The men approached, their hands pulling at her, positioning her. Someone grabbed her hips, hoisting her up so she was kneeling, her back arched, her face lifted to the ceiling. A cock pressed against her lips, and she opened eagerly, taking it into her mouth.

Another cock pressed against her entrance from behind, and she moaned around the shaft in her mouth as it pushed inside her, thick and demanding. The sensation was overwhelming—being filled from both ends, her body stretched and used, her mind blanking to static.

"Fuck yes," the man behind her grunted. "Such a tight little hole. Like she was made for this."

"She was," the Comte said, his voice carrying from somewhere in the room. "I made her for this."

The rhythm built, a syncopation of thrusts from front and back. Rebecca was lost in it, her body no longer her own, just a vessel for their pleasure. She gagged around the cock in her throat, but the man held her in place, forcing her to take him deeper.

"That's it," he grunted. "Swallow. Take it all."

She focused on her throat, relaxing the muscles, taking him to the root. Her eyes watered, but she didn't pull away. She wanted this, needed this—to be used so thoroughly that nothing remained but the sensation of being filled.

The man behind her came first, flooding her insides with heat. But he didn't pull out, keeping himself buried as he softened, stretching her wide. The man in her mouth followed seconds later, his release splashing against the back of her throat before she swallowed it down greedily.

They pulled away, leaving her dripping and trembling. But the need was still there, burning through her, undiminished by the orgasms she hadn't been allowed to have.

"Please," she begged, her voice hoarse. "Please, I need—"

"You need to learn patience," the Comte said, stepping into her line of sight. He was still dressed, still composed, a stark contrast to her ruined state. "We're not done with you yet. But you'll have to earn the next part."

She was led from the salon, her body bare and glistening, down a flight of stairs to a room she hadn't seen before. It was dim, lit only by candles, with a large brass bed at its center. A tray of implements was laid out nearby—ropes, clamps, a flogger with soft leather tails.

"Interesting," Mrs. Ashford said, entering behind her. "The Comte's playroom. He must really like you."

The men filed in, a hungry audience. Rebecca was pushed onto the bed, her wrists bound to the headboard with soft rope. Her ankles were spread wide, tied to the bedposts. She was exposed, vulnerable, utterly at their mercy.

"Let's try something new," the Comte said, picking up the flogger. He ran the leather tails across her stomach, her thighs, her breasts. "This is a lesson in trust. You'll tell me when it's too much, and I'll stop. But you'll find that you can take far more than you think."

The flogger came down on her thighs, a sharp sting that made her gasp. But the pain bloomed into warmth, spreading through her flesh in a way that was almost—pleasant?

"Good," the Comte said. "Again."

The flogger rose and fell, painting her skin with heat. Rebecca's gasps turned to moans, her body arching into the blows instead of away. The sting and the pleasure blurred together, becoming one sensation that sent her spiraling toward a peak she couldn't quite reach.

"I want to come," she sobbed. "Please, Master, I want to come so badly—"

"Begging is becoming," Mrs. Ashford said, circling the bed. "But you're not asking properly. Tell us what you are. Tell us what you're for."

"I'm a whore," Rebecca cried, the words torn from her. "I'm a useless little cock-hungry slut. I exist to be used. I'm nothing but a set of holes, a fleshlight with a pulse. Please—please let me come—"

"Not yet," the Comte said, his voice calm. "Not until you truly mean it. Not until you've given everything."

The hour that followed was a blur of sensation and begging. The flogger, the clamps on her nipples, fingers teasing her cunt but never granting release. She was pushed to the brink and pulled back, over and over, until her mind was a shattered mirror of what it had been.

And then, finally, the Comte climbed onto the bed, positioning himself between her spread legs. He entered her in a single, smooth stroke, and Rebecca screamed as the orgasm slammed into her, violent and white-hot. She came and came, her body convulsing, her cunt milking his cock in desperate waves.

"There she is," the Comte murmured. "There's my perfect little whore."

He fucked her through the aftershocks, his rhythm relentless. Mrs. Ashford had shed her dress, climbing onto the bed to straddle Rebecca's face, pressing her slick cunt against Rebecca's mouth.

"Eat me," she commanded. "Make me come, and I'll let you come again."

Rebecca dove in, her tongue working desperately at Mrs. Ashford's clit. The taste was sharp, musky, intoxicating. She licked and sucked and lapped, her own pleasure cresting as she worked the other woman toward release.

When Mrs. Ashford came, grinding against Rebecca's face with a guttural moan, the Comte reached his peak as well. He buried himself deep, flooding her cunt with heat, and Rebecca came for the third time, her body convulsing from the dual sensations.

They collapsed in a heap, sweat-slick and trembling. Rebecca's mind was a blank slate, wiped clean by the pleasure and pain and submission. The ropes were untied, and she curled onto her side, her body aching but somehow peaceful.

"That was beautiful," Mrs. Ashford said, her voice softer now. "You were magnificent."

Rebecca managed a small smile. "Thank you, ma'am."

The Comte lay beside her, stroking her hair. "You've done well today. Surpassed my expectations."

"Will you keep me?" Rebecca asked, her voice small and vulnerable.

"Forever," he promised, pressing a kiss to her forehead. "You're the best masterpiece I've ever made."

In the depths of her mind, a distant echo stirred—a voice that sounded like Richard, crying out in despair. But the sound was faint, growing fainter, swallowed by the comfortable silence of her new existence.

She closed her eyes, and the world blinked out.

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