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The Second Coming of Broken Saints

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An alternate universe where several of my favorite characters undergo serious angst for the men they love, and the love they feel hits them so much that it has them screaming and wailing and crying and begging for salvation to a god that won’t spare them. They also have to undergo a trial, a hardship, that leaves them emotionally destroyed but doesn’t stop them from pushing through and getting the happy ending they deserve with the men they love. This is a story that includes Father Jud Duplenticy from the movie Knives Out: Wake Up Dead Man. This is also a story about Father Paul Hill from Midnight Mass. Two priests who are given a second chance, undergo adversity with themselves and a world that wants them destroyed, and grapple with their sexuality as they fall in love with men who change their worldview on things so dramatically that it breaks them in half before they repair themselves anew. Jud falls madly in love with detective Benoit Blanc, and Paul finds that he’s in love with Riley Flynn so much that he almost burns for him. All characters in this story are in the same universe, and vampires and magic exists.

Chapter 6: The Moon's Cruel Gaze

The moon was a cancer. It hung low over Crockett Island, a bloated, pulsing abscess in the sky that painted the world in septic silver. It did not illuminate; it revealed. Every bloodstain on the cobblestones of Main Street gleamed black. Every shattered window gaped like a wound. And in the center of it all, Jud Duplenticy was dying by inches.

He swung the heavy silver crucifix in a wide, desperate arc. It connected with a vampire’s temple with a wet crack. The creature reeled back, hissing, but two more skittered forward on spidery limbs, their eyes reflecting that hideous lunar gaze. He wielded the beaded rosary in his other hand like a flail, the wooden beads snapping against jaws, tearing at grey skin. He was a lanky, ragged knight in a torn cassock, silver and faith his only armor against a tide of ink-sharp shadows.

But the moon was against him. He could feel it. Its light wasn’t just light; it was a weight, a pressure that seeped into his bones and sought the strange, hidden contours of his body with surgical indifference. It felt like an exsanguination of the spirit. Each swing of the cross grew heavier. Each gasp tore at a lung that refused to fill. The whispers of the fledglings became a choir in his mind, dissecting him, focusing on the secret, shameful difference beneath his clothes—the softness, the potential for life that marked him as an aberration in his own church. They weren't just hungry for blood. They were hungry for the sacrilege of him.

A claw raked across his back. The fabric split and hot pain flared, but it was a shallow cut. A feint. He spun, raising the cross, but his vision swam. The world tilted. Hopelessness. The word was a cold stone in his gut, heavier than any vampire. Paul was elsewhere. Riley and the others were barricaded. He was truly, utterly alone. And he was failing.

He stumbled, his heel catching on a crack in the cobblestone. He went down hard on one knee, the impact jolting up his spine. The silver cross skittered from his numb fingers, just out of reach. A figure detached from the shambling circle. It was faster, more intent than the others. Its milky eyes were fixed not on his throat, but lower, on his belly. It understood. It craved the violation, the devouring of the very thing that made him wrong.

It descended upon him, a blur of stench and hunger, claws aiming to unmake him from the inside out. Jud could only scream, a raw sound that was equal parts prayer and curse, bracing for the tear.

The gunshot was a singular, definitive punctuation to the night's chaos.

The vampire’s head snapped back. A neat, black hole appeared just above its brow. It froze, a puppet with its strings cut, then crumpled like rotten cloth at Jud’s knees.

Jud heaved, trembling violently, his eyes wide. He looked past the falling corpse.

Benoit Blanc stood in the splintered doorway of the boarded-up hardware store, a wisp of smoke curling from the barrel of his revolver. He wasn’t in a suit. He wore dark, practical clothes, but even now, there was a terrifying grace to him. His expression was not gentle. It was savage, focused, a storm of relief and deadly intent. An avenging angel in a worn pea coat. He saw Jud, saw the wound, the terror, the moon-blasted despair, and his jaw tightened.

“Benoit,” Jud whimpered, the name a broken thing.

Blanc moved. He holstered the gun, crossed the ten yards of blood-slicked street in three long strides, and didn’t stop. He bent, one arm hooking under Jud’s knees, the other around his back, and lifted him from the ground as if he weighed nothing. Jud instinctively curled into the solid warmth of him, burying his face against Benoit’s neck, inhaling the scents of gunpowder, salt air, and plain, human sweat.

“I’ve got you,” Benoit murmured, his voice a low, steady rumble against Jud’s ear. He turned, Jud cradled against his chest, and began moving back toward the relative safety of the shop.

Shrieks of rage followed them. Shadows lunged.

Benoit didn’t break stride. His right hand, supporting Jud’s legs, pulled the revolver again. He fired twice over his shoulder without looking, the reports deafening in the enclosed space of the street. There were wet thuds and screeches cut short. He kicked the shop door shut behind them, shoved a heavy, pre-positioned barrel of nails against it, and only then did his posture soften a fraction.

He carried Jud through the dark, dusty store, past silhouettes of dead tools, to a small back room. He lowered Jud onto a cleared sofa, a cloud of dust motes dancing in a sliver of that terrible moonlight. Then he sank to his knees on the floorboards before him.

Jud was shaking apart. Sobs wracked him, hiccupping and painful. “I’m sorry, I’m so sorry you’re here,” he choked out, his hands fluttering uselessly. “I can’t… I can’t save you. I can’t save anyone. You always have to save me. Every time.”

Benoit reached up and cupped Jud’s face, his thumbs brushing away the tears and grime. His touch was impossibly gentle. “Hush now, darlin’. Look at me.” He waited until Jud’s shattered blue eyes met his. “This? This is nothing. A Tuesday. You hear me? I would tear down heaven and hell with my fingernails for you. This is just housekeeping.”

He leaned forward and kissed him.

It was not a kiss of passion, but of reclamation. Soft, reverent, a benediction and an anchor. Benoit’s lips were chapped, firm, and they spoke of a truth more solid than any scripture Jud had ever preached.

And something broke open inside Jud. Not a wound—a seal.

A sob, deeper than the others, erupted from his chest, carrying with it a year of lonely terror, of whispered self-loathing, of loving a man he believed he was forbidden to even touch. As he cried, a warmth bloomed where Benoit’s hands held him. It poured into his veins, a soft, silver radiance that felt like forgiveness, like absolution, like love made tangible. The searing pain across his back knit together with an itch that was almost sweet. But more profound was the mending happening deeper, in the shattered chambers of his heart. It was a physical sensation, a lance of pure, radiant relief straight through his sternum. It was a boon. A blessing from a source he couldn't name and found, in that moment, he didn't care to.

Benoit felt the change, saw the tension flow out of Jud’s body, saw the eerie, peaceful light that seemed to glow just behind his eyes. He didn’t question it. He simply gathered Jud closer, pulling him off the sofa and into his lap on the dusty floor, holding him, rocking him gently, murmuring into his hair. “I’ve loved you for so long, you impossible man. Since you made me coffee that was too weak and argued about Thomas Aquinas with a straight face. This. This is the easiest thing I’ve ever had to do.”

Jud clung to him, fists tight in Benoit’s coat. The weeping subsided into hiccups, then into a breathless, wonder-filled silence. He pulled back just enough to see Benoit’s face, to trace the lines of worry and care there. “They’ll come for you,” Jud whispered. “The cult. Because of me. They target what I love.”

A faint, dangerous smile touched Benoit’s lips. “Let them try. I’m not a priest, Jud. I’m a detective with a license to carry and a violently low tolerance for bullshit. And I am yours.”

This time, Jud initiated the kiss. It was desperate, grateful, alive. They kissed there on the floor, surrounded by dust and darkness, while the moon, thwarted, glared through the tiny window. A covenant was sealed in salt tears and shared breath.

When they finally parted, breathing ragged, foreheads pressed together, the world outside had not changed. The shrieks still echoed. But the universe had shifted on its axis.

Benoit brushed a final thumb across Jud’s cheekbone. “Now. Where’s Paul? Where are the others?” His voice was all business now, but his arm stayed firmly around Jud’s waist.

“Basement of the church. Riley’s with them.” Jud took a deep, steadying breath. The silver warmth still hummed beneath his skin. He flexed his hand, feeling strength return, a conviction that burned cleaner than fear. He looked at Benoit, his partner, his love, his impossible salvation. “Paul went to draw them off. To the cliffs.”

Benoit nodded, his mind already clicking through the tactical realities. He helped Jud to his feet, retaining his hand. “Alright then, Father. Let’s go get your wayward vampire, break the siege, and save the town.” He pressed a quick, hard kiss to Jud’s knuckles. “And then you’re buying me a drink that doesn’t taste like dishwater.”

For the first time all night, Jud felt a real smile touch his lips. It felt like a revelation. “Deal.”

He reached for his fallen cross, its silver gleaming once more with a light that felt like their own.

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