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Unlocking My Roommate's Girl

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A male geeky college aged engineering student grows jealous that one of his roommates has an attractive goth girlfriend. After he discovers that she listens to hypnosis tapes to help her sleep, he modifies them to get her to respond to certain trigger phrases.

Chapter 11: The Shower Revelation

The key turned in the lock after midnight. Josh shouldered the door open, his backpack heavy with textbooks and the faint, sterile smell of the engineering lab clinging to his clothes. “Raven?” he called into the darkened living room, dropping his bag with a thud.“Baby?You still up?”

No answer. The only light came from under the bathroom door, a warm yellow slit in the dark hallway. The sound of the shower running, a steady hiss against tile, answered him.Josh frowned, peeling off his jacket. He’d texted her he was on his way. She usually waited up, curled on the couch with a book, ready to dissect her shitty day at the record shop. He padded down the hall, the floorboards cool under his socks.He raised his knuckles to the painted wood.

Inside, the world was steam and sound. Water slammed against Raven’s back, plastering her violet-streaked hair to her scalp. She was bent forward, hands splayed against the slick white tiles, her ass high in the air. Derek stood behind her, his wiry frame taut, his glasses fogged and abandoned on the closed toilet lid. His cock was buried to the hilt in her ass, a slow, relentless rhythm that made her gasp with each inward stroke.

“Raven?” Josh’s knock was firm, just above the door handle. “You okay in there?You’ve been in forever.”

Everything stopped.Derek froze, his hips locked against her. His hand, slick with water and soap, clamped over Raven’s mouth, stifling the moan that had been building there.His other hand gripped her hip, fingers digging into the pale flesh. He held his breath.The shower rained down, a frantic cover.

Raven’s eyes, which had been glazed and distant, flickered with a sudden, jarring awareness. She felt the stretch, the burn, the solid presence lodged deep in her rectum. Confusion swam up through the cottony haze in her mind.

“Fine, babe!” she called out, her voice cracking slightly, then smoothing into a convincing, sleepy strain.“Just… washing my hair. Really getting in there.Long day.”

A pause.Josh’s shadow shifted under the door. “Okay.You want me to order some noodles for when you’re out?”

“Yeah. Yeah, that sounds great.” Her voice was steadier now, the automatic response pulling her further back toward something like clarity.“Cool. Don’t use all the hot water.” His footsteps receded down the hall.Derek waited.He counted to ten in the thunderous spray. Then his hand slid from her mouth, down over her throat, coming to rest between her collarbones, feeling the frantic rabbit-thump of her pulse. He leaned forward, his lips against her ear, his voice a venomous whisper the speaker could never replicate.“You almost got caught,” he breathed. “You almost let him hear you being my little anal slut.”

The words, paired with the subtle vocal cue buried in the audio track, slammed the door on her returning awareness.Her eyes lost focus again. The confusion melted into a warm, accepting blankness.She pushed back against him, a wanton grind. “Please,” she murmured, no longer knowing who she was talking to. “It feels so empty now.”

Derek grinned, a sharp expression lost in the steam. He pulled his cock almost all the way out, watching her asshole clench tight around nothing, a pink, desperate rosebud. Then he slammed back in, harder now, fueled by the adrenaline of near-discovery and the absolute power of the moment.

“You like that, don’t you?” he grunted, his thrusts becoming punishing, mechanical. “You like me fucking this tight ass while your boyfriend’s in the next room. You’re nothing but a hole.”

“Yes,” Raven hissed, her forehead pressing against the tile.“Yes, fuck my ass. Fuck it, please.”

He pounded into her, the slap of wet skin lost in the shower’s roar. The speaker’s whispers entwined with the water, reinforcing, directing. Her body responded against its will, a traitorous heat coiling low in her belly. It wasn’t pleasure, not as she would recognize it; it was a programmed circuit completing itself, a brutal, full-body compliance.

Derek felt his own climax building, a cold triumph rather than passion. He shoved her shoulders down lower, changing the angle, going deeper.“Take it,” he snarled. “Take every fucking drop.”

He came with a sharp, silent shudder, his body rigid as he emptied himself into the clenching heat of her rectum. He stayed there for a long moment, buried, before pulling out. Raven whimpered at the sudden, aching emptiness.The track on the speaker had shifted to a softer, instructional tone. Derek turned off the shower.The silence was abrupt, ringing. He stepped out, grabbed a towel, and began to dry himself with brisk, efficient motions. “Rinse off,” he told her, his voice now flat, devoid of the earlier malice.

She obeyed, moving under the now-cool water like an automaton, washing herself between her legs, the evidence of him and the others from the previous night swirling down the drain in a milky blur.

He wrapped a towel around his waist, picked up his glasses, and wiped them clear.He watched her step out, her skin goose-bumped, her movements slow. He took her face in his hands.Her green eyes were wide, pupils dilated.

“Listen,” he said, his tone hypnotic in its calm.“You had a long, hot shower. You washed your hair.You felt relaxed and clean.You’re sleepy. Everything else was just a dream.A very satisfying, but very hazy dream.Do you understand?”

She blinked slowly. “A dream,” she echoed, her voice soft.

“Good.” He kissed her forehead, a chaste, brotherly gesture.“Now go see Josh. He ordered noodles.”

He gathered his clothes and the speaker, slipping out of the bathroom and across the hall to his room without a sound.Raven stood there, dripping, for another minute. Then she toweled off, the coarse fabric feeling real and sharp against her skin. She wrapped herself in a clean, dry towel and opened the bathroom door, trailing steam into the hallway.

Josh was on the couch, scrolling through his phone, a menu from the Vietnamese place open beside him.He looked up and smiled.“There you are. You look flushed.Too hot?”

She walked over, a faint, sleepy smile touching her lips. She bent and kissed him, a soft, familiar press of lips. He tasted like toothpaste and the faint metallic hint of the lab.“Just really relaxing,” she murmured against his mouth. “What kind did you get me?”

“Vegetarian spring rolls and the tofu pho,” he said, pulling her down beside him.He nuzzled her damp hair. “You smell good.”

She curled into him, a deep, tangible warmth spreading through her that had nothing to do with the shower. A sense of profound, unconscious satisfaction settled in her bones. The other feelings—the stretch, the violation, the whispers—retreated into the foggy periphery of memory, explained away by the mundane reality of hot water and tired muscles.A dream.Just a very good dream.


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