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Unlocking My Roommate's Girl

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A male geeky college aged engineering student grows jealous that one of his roommates has an attractive goth girlfriend. After he discovers that she listens to hypnosis tapes to help her sleep, he modifies them to get her to respond to certain trigger phrases.

Chapter 14: Glittering Neon Reward

The smell of pizza and adolescent male sweat hung thick in the air, cut through by the sharp, plastic scent of new dice. Days had passed, a strange, placid interlude where the strange night felt like a shared, half-remembered dream no one discussed.

Now, Derek’s weekly Dungeons & Dragons group crammed into the living room. Four of them, hunched over character sheets scribbled on graph paper, their voices a low cacophony of rules-lawyering and improbable plans. Josh was among them, rolling a twenty-sided die with a practiced flick of his wrist, his face alight with competitive glee. He was in his element.

Raven was not.

She sat curled in the corner of the frayed couch, a paperback novel open but unread on her knees. Her eyes, lined with smudged kohl, kept drifting from the pages to the scene at the table. She watched the skinny one with braces—Ethan—argue passionately about spell components. She watched the overweight guy, Mark, noisily suck soda from a two-liter bottle. She watched Derek, the Dungeon Master, presiding over it all from the head of the table behind a cardboard screen, his glasses reflecting the lamplight, his expression one of serene control. A familiar, dull ache of boredom throbbed behind her eyes.

“You can’t just persuade the dragon,” Josh laughed, clapping Ethan on the shoulder. “It’s a chaotic evil ancient red! It’s gonna eat your fancy-talking bard for an appetizer.”

“I have a plus nine in Persuasion!” Ethan whined.

“Roll for digestion,” Mark snorted, and the group erupted into guffaws.

Raven sighed, her gaze falling to her book again. The words blurred. The noises—the clatter of dice, the crinkle of chip bags, the nerdy debate—felt increasingly abrasive. She felt separate, adrift. A useless ornament in a room full of focused, childish energy. She shifted, and a strange, hollow tingling began in her jaw, an echo of that odd restlessness she’d felt all week. She ignored it, attributing it to annoyance.

For over an hour, the battle raged in the imagined caverns. Derek narrated with calm precision, his voice a low drone weaving through the chaos. Raven’s boredom deepened into a stupor. She watched Derek’s mouth as he described the dragon’s fiery breath, the movement of his lips…

The hollow feeling in her jaw intensified, becoming a palpable emptiness. A need. She shifted again, crossing and uncrossing her legs. The coarse fabric of her jeans rubbed against her clit, sending a small, unwelcome spark through her. She bit her lip.

Finally, with a dramatic flourish, Derek leaned back. “And with that final critical hit from Josh’s paladin… the beast lets out a earth-shaking roar and crashes to the cavern floor, dead. Treasure and experience points for everyone.”

A cheer went up around the table. High-fives were exchanged. Josh beamed, triumphant.

Derek smiled, a slow, deliberate expression. He let them celebrate for a moment before raising a hand for silence. “And for such a epic victory,” he announced, his eyes scanning the room before landing, briefly, on Raven’s languid form on the couch. “A special, in-game reward.” He paused, letting the anticipation build. The players leaned in. Raven watched, her boredom momentarily pierced by curiosity.

Derek’s voice dropped, taking on a peculiar, resonant cadence. “A vision of mesmerizing beauty appears before you, heroes… a glimpse of Glittering Neon….”

The phrase hit Raven like a synaptic bomb.

Her book slid from her fingers, thumping softly to the floor. The bored, sardonic light in her green eyes extinguished, replaced by a flat, glossy sheen. The hollow ache in her jaw exploded into a desperate, screaming need. She stood up, movements fluid and unnervingly silent.

“Whoa, Raven?” Josh said, his celebratory smile fading into confusion.

She didn’t look at him. Her gaze was fixed on the space above the game table, her pupils wide. She brought her hands to the hem of her tight black tank top and pulled it up and over her head in one smooth motion, letting it fall. Her full breasts, restrained in a simple black bra, rose and fell with a suddenly quickened breath. Her fingers went to the button of her jeans.

“Raven, what the hell?” Josh half-rose from his chair.

The other players were frozen, a tableau of shock and burgeoning, disbelieving arousal. Ethan’s mouth hung open. Mark’s soda bottle tilted, forgotten.

Raven pushed her jeans and panties down her hips, stepping out of them. She stood naked except for her bra, her pale skin stark in the lamplight, the violet streaks in her hair seeming to glow. The emptiness in her mouth was a physical agony now, a vacuum desperate to be filled. She walked, with hypnotic grace, to the head of the table where Derek sat.

“First reward,” she murmured, her voice throaty and unlike her own, “goes to the dungeon master.”

She climbed onto his lap, straddling him, her bare, wet pussy grinding against the rough fabric of his jeans. She could smell him, a mix of clean sweat and something muskier, and it made the hunger coil tighter in her gut. Derek grinned, his hands settling on her hips. He looked past her, at Josh, whose face was a storm of confusion and dawning anger.

“Derek, man, stop this—” Josh began, pushing his chair back.

“Beta Gamma,” Derek said softly, his eyes locking onto Josh’s.

Josh’s protest died instantly. The anger melted from his features, smoothed away by an invisible hand. He sank back into his seat, a placid, distant smile touching his lips. His eyes grew heavy-lidded. “She’s so beautiful,” he breathed, almost to himself. His hand drifted to his own lap, pressing down.

His hand drifted to his own lap, pressing down. The dull pressure felt good, necessary, a counterweight to the dizzying spectacle before him. Raven’s hips rolled in a slow, insistent circle against Derek, a obscene mimicry of the dance she’d done for him days before in this same room.

Derek’s fingers, cool and precise, found the clasp of her bra between her shoulder blades. He unfastened it with a practiced flick. The black straps slid down her arms as she leaned forward, letting the garment fall away entirely. Her full, pale breasts swung free, pierced nipples hardened into tight peaks.

A choked, collective sound came from the other players—a mix of shock, awe, and raw hunger. It wasn’t a cheer, but a guttural acknowledgment. Ethan’s braces gleamed in the light as his mouth remained agape. Mark’s face had gone a deep, flushed red.

“Look at that,” Josh sighed from his chair, his voice full of warm, drunken pride. His fingers worked at his own zipper. “She’s amazing. Go on, Raven. Take it out for him. Show them.”

Raven’s glazed eyes found Derek’s zipper. The metallic buzz of it was the loudest sound in the room. Her need was a frantic animal scratching behind her teeth. She yanked his jeans open, her movements urgent, clumsy. She shoved his boxers down, freeing his cock, which sprang up thick and already weeping against his stomach.

She didn’t hesitate. She lifted herself on her knees, positioned the slick, flushed head at her dripping entrance, and sank down onto him in one deep, devastating plunge. A sharp, gasping moan was torn from her as he filled her, stretching her, the shocking fullness a temporary relief to the wider, screaming emptiness in her skull.

“Fuck yes,” Derek grunted, his head falling back against the chair. His hands clamped on her ass, fingers digging into the soft flesh, helping her find a rhythm. She rode him with a frantic, piston-like desperation, her tits bouncing with each hard impact of their bodies. The table shook.

The table shook. The clatter of polyhedral dice was a weak percussion under the wet, rhythmic slapping of skin. Raven’s moans were short, punched-out gasps. Her world had narrowed to the brutal stretch of Derek’s cock splitting her open and the maddening itch in her slack jaw.

“She’s… god, look at her take it,” Josh slurred from his chair. His hand was moving openly in his unzipped pants now, his eyes glazed with euphoric reverence. He looked past the obscene junction of their bodies to Raven’s face, her lips parted and slick with saliva. The programming and his own usurped pride merged into a single directive. “Her mouth looks so empty, though. Someone should… fuck, someone fill her mouth.”

His glassy eyes scanned the paralyzed players. They landed on Ethan, the skinny one, who was gripping the table edge, his knuckles white. “Ethan. Don’t just sit there. Get over here. Give her something to suck on.”

Ethan jolted as if prodded with a cattle brand. He looked from Josh’s placid, encouraging smile to the feverish scene before him. A strangled sound escaped his throat. He fumbled with his own jeans, his hands trembling so badly he could barely manage the button.

“Go on,” Josh coaxed, his voice a drugged murmur. “She wants it. Look at her.”

Raven’s head lolled toward the new movement, her green eyes dead pools of need. A thick string of droop escaped her lips as she continued to piston herself up and down on Derek’s shaft. The sight of Ethan’s timid, half-hard cock appearing from his fly made the vacuum behind her teeth shriek.

Derek, whose own climax was coiling tight in his balls, grunted his approval. He locked his arms around Raven’s waist, holding her still, impaled deeply on him. “Open up, cunt,” he commanded, his breath hot on her neck.

Ethan shuffled forward, his pants around his thighs. He was hesitant, overwhelmed. Raven solved his indecision. She lunged her upper body forward, away from Derek’s chest, her mouth gaping wide. A low, hungry whine vibrated in her throat.

“Oh, shit,” Ethan whimpered. He guided himself the last few inches, the head of his cock bumping against her teeth before she took him, swallowing him down with a desperate, gagging suction.

The sensation was electric and revolting. Her mouth was hot, wet, and desperately active. Her tongue lashed at his underside as her throat convulsed around his tip. Ethan cried out, a boyish sound of shock, his hips stuttering forward instinctively.

Now Raven was stretched at both ends, a live wire of humiliated need. Derek’s thick cock was buried to the root in her dripping cunt, and Ethan’s smaller, nervous one was fucking in and out of her sucking mouth. Guttural, choked sounds echoed in the room each time Ethan slid deep, his balls slapping against her chin.

Josh watched, mesmerized, his hand a frantic blur in his lap. “Yeah,” he panted. “Just like that. Take it, Raven. Suck his dick. Be a good slut for them.”

Derek began to move again, dragging her body up and then slamming her back down onto him, his thrusts jarring her whole frame. The motion forced Ethan’s cock deeper into her throat with each descent. She gagged, tears springing to her eyes, but the reflex only made her clench tighter around Derek, the friction so intense it sparked white behind her eyelids. The programmed connection fired—each throatful, each brutal rub against her gag reflex, translated into a direct, searing rub on her swollen clit.

She was hurtling toward a cliff edge she couldn’t see. Her body was a instrument of frantic, conflicting sensations: the deep, splitting fullness below, the choking, textured invasion above. Saliva and pre-cum dripped down her chin onto her heaving breasts. The men surrounding her were just shapes, sources of the filling she craved. Their grunts and the director’s chair squeaking under Derek’s efforts.

Ethan’s breathing hitched, turned ragged. “I’m gonna— I can’t—”

“Do it,” Josh urged, his voice thick. “Fill her up. Give it to her.”

With a sharp cry, Ethan shoved himself as deep as he could go.

His hips jerked forward in a staccato rhythm. Warm, salty fluid spurted onto the back of her tongue, flooding her throat. Raven swallowed convulsively, greedily, the muscles of her neck working as she drained him. The sensation of cum coating her esophagus sent a violent, almost painful spasm through her cunt, which clenched like a wet fist around Derek’s embedded shaft.

“Fuck,” Derek groaned, feeling her inner walls clutch him. “That’s it, you depraved bitch. You love that taste, don’t you?”

Ethan slid from her mouth with a wet pop, staggering back, his pants still around his ankles. He looked dazed, horrified, intensely aroused. Raven gasped for air, strands of spit and semen connecting her lips to his softening cock. Her eyes, still glazed, now held a new, frantic edge. The programming was unsatisfied. The burning in her pussy was intensifying, a live wire connected directly to the empty, used-up feeling in her mouth. She needed more. It hadn’t been enough.

Josh watched Ethan stumble back, a faint, approving nod from his throne on the sidelines. “Good job, man.” His own hand never stopped moving. “See? She needed that.”

The other players were now statues of pent-up hunger, the last veneer of shock burned away by the graphic reality before them. Mark, the heavyset one, was visibly straining against his jeans. The fourth, a quiet guy named Leo, just stared, pale and rigid.

Derek’s breathing was ragged. He was close, but a colder part of his mind was observing, calibrating. The experiment was in a new phase. He wanted to test the structure, to see how many commands the framework could hold. He locked his hands under Raven’s ass and stood up, her legs wrapping around his waist, his cock still buried to the hilt inside her. She whimpered, a high, needy sound, as he carried her the two steps to the game table.

He bent forward, laying her on her back atop the scattered maps and character sheets. Paper crinkled and tore under her weight. Dice skittered to the floor. He pulled out of her with a slick, obscene sound, leaving her exposed and gaping, her lower lips swollen and glistening.

“Table’s all yours, boys,” Derek panted, stepping back and adjusting his glasses. His own arousal was a demanding throb, but his curiosity was stronger. He looked at Mark. “You’ve been real patient. Why don’t you show her what you’ve got?”

Mark needed no further invitation. He was out of his chair in an instant, his bulk knocking it over behind him. He didn’t bother with finesse. He shoved Raven’s thighs apart, his hands rough on her pale skin, and lined up his thick, ruddy cock. He was bigger than Derek, thicker. He pushed into her with a single, grunting thrust, burying himself in her well-used, slippery channel.

Raven’s back arched off the table, a silent scream on her face. The stretch was immense, a burning, fulfilling pressure that finally, finally, began to soothe the inferno in her cunt. “Yes,” she slurred, her head thrashing side to side. “More. Stuff me. Please.”

“Damn, you’re a tight little hole,” Mark grunted, already pounding into her with the frantic, graceless rhythm of a man who’d been waiting too long. The table legs screeched against the floor with each drive. Her tits shook with the impact. He leaned over her, his sweaty stomach pressing against her mound, and grabbed a handful of her violet-streaked hair. “You like being our party favor, you dirty slut?”

“I’m your slut,” Raven moaned, the words a programmed reflex, but her body’s response was ferociously genuine. Her hips rose to meet his, taking every inch. “Your fuck-toy. Use me.”

From the couch, Josh let out a shaky breath. “Look at her take it,” he murmured, his eyes glassy. He’d come in his pants already, a damp spot darkening the denim, but his hand still rubbed over the wet fabric, soothing the oversensitive flesh beneath. “She can handle anything. She’s incredible.”

Leo, the quiet one, finally moved. He approached the table, not looking at Raven’s face, but staring fixedly at her ass as Mark hammered into her from the front. His fingers, trembling, traced the crease of her buttocks. She was so wet, her fluids dripping down to coat her backdoor. He spat into his hand, a crude attempt at lubrication, and pressed a single finger against her tight, crinkled opening.

Raven gasped. The dual invasion, the shocking fullness, sent a jolt through her system that blurred her vision. The programming intertwined with raw, overwhelmed nerve endings. “There too,” she begged, her voice cracking. “Fill that too. Need to be full.”


Mark’s grunting rhythm faltered as he heard her choked plea. “Fucking insatiable,” he panted.

He pulled out, a slick trail of his precum already leaking onto the crumpled character sheet beneath her. Raven whined at the sudden emptiness, her body straining upward, seeking renewed pressure.

Before the cold air could even register on her wet skin, Mark’s meaty hands were on her again. He hauled her off the table by her hips, her legs giving way. He staggered back two steps and fell heavily into a worn armchair, dragging her down onto his lap.

She landed straddling him, her tits pressed to his chest, his still-hard cock sliding effortlessly back into her slick, used channel. She gasped, her head lolling against his shoulder. “That’s it, take it back, you greedy bitch,” Mark mumbled into her hair, his hands groping her breasts roughly.

Leo moved in front of them, his cock jutting out, slick with her fluids and his own spit. His face was a mask of focused, trembling anticipation. He placed a shaking hand on her hips, pushing her legs wider. He guided himself, the swollen head of his dick pressing against the tight, clenching ring of her anus.

“Oh, fuck, look at that,” Josh breathed from his chair, his voice hoarse with awe. His own hand was a frantic, rhythmic blur in his open jeans. “Right there, Leo. She wants it. Put it in her ass.”

Raven’s eyes were wide, unseeing, her mouth a wet, open ‘O’ of need. The pressure at her rear was immense, a blunt, impossible demand. Leo pushed, his hips trembling with the effort.

She was too tight, too dry. He spat again, the saliva dripping onto the place where Mark’s cock disappeared into her from beneath. He rubbed the head of his dick against her, smearing the wetness. “C’mon,” he whimpered, more to himself than her.

Derek moved then. He stepped in front of the chair, his own erection renewed, jutting toward Raven’s face. He grabbed a fistful of her black and violet hair, yanking her head forward. “Open,” he commanded, his voice cold and clear.

Her jaw went slack, obedient. Derek fed his cock into her waiting mouth, pushing past her lips until the head nudged the back of her throat. She gagged instinctively, her body jerking, which only forced her down harder onto Mark’s shaft and pressed her back tighter against Leo’s persistent tip.

“Now, Leo,” Josh urged, his voice strangled. “Fuck her tight little ass. Stuff her full.”

With a desperate groan, Leo leaned his weight forward. The tip of his cock breached her, a burning, tearing intrusion that made Raven scream around the fullness in her mouth. The sound was muffled, vibrating around Derek’s flesh. Her eyes rolled back, tears leaking from the corners.

Leo pushed deeper, a slow, brutal invasion. Her body resisted, then gave way, swallowing him inch by inch into a searing, unforgiving heat. He buried himself to the hilt with a choked cry, his balls pressed against her damp skin.

For a moment, no one moved. Raven was impaled on three fronts, a living conduit stretched to its limit. Her cunt was stuffed with Mark’s girth. Her ass was split open by Leo’s frantic length. Her throat was packed with Derek, making her breathe in sharp, whistling bursts through her nose. Her whole world was a symphony of invasive, stretching fullness.

Josh watched, mesmerized, his breath catching. The sight of his girlfriend, his Raven, speared on three different cocks, her body used as a communal fleshlight, was the most profoundly erotic thing he had ever witnessed. “Yes,” he hissed, his own strokes becoming punishing. “That’s it. You’re perfect. You’re so fucking perfect like this. Airtight.”

The word seemed to trigger them all.

Mark began to buck upward into her from below, his fat cock pistoning inside her well-fucked pussy. Leo drew back and slammed forward into the clutching vise of her ass, setting a sharp, ragged rhythm. Derek fucked her mouth in time, his hips pumping, the head of his cock hitting the back of her throat with each thrust.

Raven’s body became a nexus of overwhelming sensation. Every nerve was lit, screaming. The programmed connection fused with raw, brutal reality—the scraping of Leo’s cock in her ass felt like a direct, electric wire to her clit. The pounding in her cunt from below was a deep, throbbing anchor. The choking fullness in her mouth, the taste of pre-cum and salt, was the final key.

Her orgasm didn’t build. It detonated.

It ripped through her with a violence that locked her muscles. A silent, breathless scream seized her. Her cunt clamped down on Mark in a series of vicious, milking spasms. Her rectal muscles convulsed around Leo, pulling a shocked yelp from him. Her throat constricted rhythmically around Derek’s shaft.

“She’s coming!” Josh shouted, his own release triggered by the sight. He came in thick, hot pulses into his own hand, his body shuddering as he watched her being fucked through her climax.

Mark roared, his own second orgasm torn from him by her violent contractions. He ground up into her, flooding her a second time as she milked him dry.

Leo’s control shattered. He pounded into her clenching ass twice more before slamming home, his body bowing as he ejaculated deep inside her with a guttural cry.

Derek felt the vibrations of her climax around his cock, the frantic sucking of her mouth as her body desperately sought the final trigger. He held her head in place, fucking her face with short, deep jabs. “Swallow it, you fucking whore,” he grunted, and then he came, jets of salty release shooting down her constricted throat.

She gagged, swallowing convulsively, her body still twitching with the aftershocks of the brutal, all-encompassing orgasm. The room was filled with the sound of heavy, ragged breathing and the thick, coppery smell of sex.

Slowly, carefully, they disentangled themselves from her. Derek slipped from her mouth with a wet pop. Leo pulled from her ass with a soft, slick sound. Mark lifted her off his softening cock, a mess of fluids leaking from her.

Raven slid bonelessly from the chair onto the floor, a heap of trembling, used flesh. She lay on her side on the grimy carpet, curled slightly, her eyes closed. Cum leaked from her ass and her well-used pussy, forming a small, dark stain on the fabric beneath her.

No one spoke. The only sounds were the hum of the lamp and their slowing breaths.

Josh zipped his jeans, a look of serene, post-coital calm on his face. He stood, walked over, and looked down at her. “She must be exhausted,” he said, his voice gentle, almost affectionate.

Derek pulled up his pants, his movements precise. He knelt beside Raven’s head. Her eyes were open now, staring blankly at the ceiling, tears cutting tracks through the smudged makeup on her temples. He leaned close, his lips almost touching her ear.

“You just had a pleasant dream,” he whispered, the command clear and final.

A long shiver went through her. Her eyelids fluttered. She blinked, confusion clouding the dead blankness. She slowly pushed herself up on one elbow, wincing slightly. She looked around the room, at the scattered game pieces, at the four young men avoiding her gaze as they hastily adjusted their clothing.

“God,” she muttered, her voice raspy and raw. She rubbed her temples. “Did I… drift off again? My head is pounding.”

Josh crouched down, wrapping a protective arm around her bare shoulders. He helped her stand, her legs wobbling. “You must be tired, babe,” he said softly, leading her toward the hallway. “Let’s get you to bed.”

She leaned into him, her body feeling strangely heavy and satisfied, yet hollow. “Weird dream,” she mumbled, her words slurring with exhaustion. “Dragons or… something.”

Derek watched them go, then turned to survey the wreckage of his living room. Ethan and Leo were already gathering their things, not meeting his eyes, their faces flushed with shame and residual thrill. Mark just sat in the armchair, staring at the damp spot on the carpet.

Derek picked up his Dungeon Master’s screen, straightening the bent corner. A small, satisfied smile touched his lips. "Same time next week?" He cheerfully called

The real game was just beginning.

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