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Unlocking My Roommate's Girl

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A male geeky college aged engineering student grows jealous that one of his roommates has an attractive goth girlfriend. After he discovers that she listens to hypnosis tapes to help her sleep, he modifies them to get her to respond to certain trigger phrases.

Chapter 16: The Landlord's Bargain

The phantom taste of salt and the deep, muscular ache lingered for days. Raven found herself staring into space during lectures, her fingers unconsciously tracing the soreness along her jawline. Josh joked that she was finally catching up on years of missed sleep, that the deep circles under her eyes were fading. She’d force a smile, pushing the blurry, heated fragments away. They felt like clips from a porn film she’d half-watched, not memories of her own body.

Meanwhile, a not-quite-debt-collection notice from the property management company arrived in the mailbox. Derek stared at the pale pink slip, the numbers for their overdue rent screaming up at him. His part-time campus IT job barely covered his textbooks. Josh, flush with his monthly allowance from home, had forgotten to submit his share. Again.

Derek didn’t remind him. An idea, cold and perfectly formed, had crystallized the moment he saw the landlord, Mr. Henderson, leering at Raven as she collected a package in the lobby last week. The man’s gaze had lingered on the sway of her hips in those tight yoga pants with a hunger that was almost pathetic.

The landlord lived in a grimy apartment above the detached garage, a space that smelled of stale tobacco, fried food, and damp concrete. Derek climbed the narrow, uncarpeted stairs, the sound of a daytime game show blaring through the door.

Mr. Henderson answered, dressed in a stained white undershirt and sweatpants that strained over a prodigious belly. A can of cheap beer sat sweating on a nearby table littered with racing forms. His small, piggish eyes narrowed behind thick glasses.

“Vance. Rent’s late.”

“I know,” Derek said, his voice calm. He didn’t step inside. The atmosphere was oppressive. “I have a proposal. A way to clear it.”

“You ain’t got the money, you got no proposal,” Henderson grunted, starting to close the door.

“It involves Raven. Josh’s girlfriend. The goth girl.”

The door stopped. Henderson’s breathing hitched, a faint wheeze. He looked past Derek, as if she might be standing on the stairs. “What about her?”

Derek kept his expression neutral, clinical. “She has… certain needs. Sleep issues. She’s on medication that makes her… suggestible. Sometimes she sleepwalks. Does things she doesn’t remember.” He let the lie hang, tailored to the man’s crude understanding. “She might come by tonight. If she does, she’ll be very compliant. Do anything you ask. Consider it a favor, in exchange for this month’s rent being wiped clean.”

Henderson’s tongue darted out, wetting his lips. His sausage-like fingers twitched at his side. Greed and lechery warred in his face. “You’re full of shit.”

“Am I? You’ve seen her. You’ve looked. Imagine that mouth on you. No complaints. No memories. Just a one-time transaction.” Derek adjusted his glasses. “Your apartment, your rules. A private show. Rent cleared.”

The landlord stared at him, the game show audience laughing mockingly in the background. The wheeze in his breath deepened. He saw no guile in Derek’s geeky, impassive face, only a desperate tenant offering a bizarre, too-good-to-be-true deal. His kind of deal.

“Anything?” Henderson rasped.

“Anything.”

A slow, greasy smile spread across the man’s face, revealing yellowed teeth. “Clear the whole month? For both units?”

Derek nodded. “For both units.”

Henderson extended a meaty, damp hand. “You got a deal, kid.”

That night, the air in the main house was thick with the scent of Josh’s microwave popcorn. He was engrossed in a first-person shooter, the staccato bursts of gunfire echoing from the living room. Raven padded into the kitchen for a glass of water, her bare feet silent on the linoleum. She wore a thin, faded black tank top and loose cotton pajama shorts, her hair piled in a messy bun. The ache between her legs was a dull, ambient throb today, a constant reminder of dreams she couldn’t grasp.

Derek was at the table, sketching circuit diagrams in a notebook. He looked up as she filled her glass at the sink.

“Can’t sleep again?” he asked, his voice friendly, innocuous.

“Mind won’t shut off,” she murmured, leaning against the counter, taking a sip. The water was tepid.

“Maybe you need a stronger suggestion,” Derek said, his tone conversational. He set his pencil down and stood, walking over to the fridge as if to get a drink. As he passed behind her, he stopped. His lips were close to her ear, his voice a whisper so low it was almost inaudible beneath the video game carnage from the other room.

“Violet Dawn.”

The glass slipped from Raven’s hand. It hit the linoleum with a dull thud, rolling away unbroken, spilling its contents across the floor. She didn’t notice.

The warmth hit her like a convection oven blast, centered immediately in her belly and flooding outward. Her nipples puckered into hard, aching points against the soft cotton of her tank. Her mouth went dry, then flooded with saliva. The emptiness was a physical cavity in her skull, a yawning, hungry hole behind her teeth that demanded to be filled. It was worse than before. It was a screaming need.

She turned. Her green eyes were already glazing over, pupils wide and dark. She looked at Derek, but she didn’t see him. She saw a solution.

“You need to go to Mr. Henderson’s apartment,” Derek instructed softly, methodically. “The one above the garage. You’ll do whatever he asks of you. You won’t question it. You’ll enjoy it. It’s what you need.”

A thin strand of drool escaped the corner of her slack mouth. She nodded, a sharp, jerky motion. “Need… need to…”

“Go now.”

She moved past him, a sleepwalker, out the kitchen door and into the cool night air. She didn’t put on shoes. The concrete of the driveway was rough and cold under her soles.

Derek watched her go, then bent to pick up the water glass. He refilled it at the sink, took a sip, and returned to his notebook.

Raven knocked on the landlord’s door. Three firm, emotionless raps.

The game show volume dipped. Heavy footsteps approached. The door swung inward, and Mr. Henderson stood there, his bulk filling the frame. He’d changed into a marginally cleaner shirt, but the smell of him—old sweat, fried onions, and anticipation—rolled over her. His eyes, magnified by his glasses, devoured her. The thin tank top, the hint of her curves under the pajama shorts.

“Well, hello there,” he breathed, his voice thick.

Raven didn’t speak. Her gaze locked onto the prominent bulge already tenting his gray sweatpants. The emptiness in her mouth screamed. She pushed past him into the apartment, her movements direct, devoid of seduction. It was a transaction. A feeding.

The door clicked shut behind her.

“Derek said you’d be… eager,” Henderson chuckled, a nervous, greedy sound. He followed her into the cluttered living room, lit by the flickering blue light of the silent television.

Raven turned to face him. Her hands went to the drawstring of his sweatpants. She tugged. The knot gave way. The pants, along with a pair of striped boxers, slumped down his thick, hairy thighs. His cock sprang free. It was thick, uncut, and already fully erect, the head a dark, flushed purple emerging from its hood. A bead of clear pre-cum glistened at the slit.

The sight made a desperate, animal noise vibrate in Raven’s throat. She dropped to her knees on the scratchy, synthetic carpet. The position felt ordained, natural. Her own need was a fire in her veins.

“Fuck yes,” Henderson groaned, his hands going to her bun, fumbling to pull the hair tie loose. Her violet-streaked black hair tumbled around her shoulders.

She didn’t tease. She lunged forward, opening her mouth wide, and took him in. Not just the head—she engulfed him to the root in one smooth, deep-throating swallow, her nose mashing into the coarse, sweaty thicket of his pubic hair.

Henderson shouted, a sharp, shocked sound. “Christ Almighty!” His hands fisted in her hair, holding her there, impaled. Her throat convulsed wildly around him, the desperate, fluttering muscles triggering a pleasure so intense his knees buckled. She began to move, establishing a ruthless, steady rhythm. Up, dragging her lips along his veiny shaft, then down, burying him deep again. Each time he nudged the back of her throat, a corresponding, electric rub sparked across her own swollen clit, so vivid she gasped around his girth, the vibration milking another groan from him.

“That’s it, you hungry slut,” he panted, his belly quivering. “Suck that dick. God, your mouth is a fucking miracle.” He started to fuck her face in earnest, pulling her head forward to meet his shallow, jerking thrusts. Spit and pre-cum coated her chin, dripped onto her tank top. She gagged, tears streaming from the corners of her eyes, but the gagging only made her throat clutch him tighter, and the sensation that shot to her clit was so sharp it bordered on pain. She moaned, the sound choked and desperate, and sucked harder.

After a few minutes of this, his breath coming in ragged wheezes, he pulled her head back by her hair. His cock popped from her lips with an obscene, wet sound. “Not like this,” he grunted. “Want that cunt. Up. On the table.”

He dragged her to her feet and shoved her towards the small, Formica kitchen table, greasy with the residue of a hundred meals. He yanked her pajama shorts and panties down to her ankles in one rough motion. She didn’t help or hinder. She bent over, placing her palms flat on the sticky surface, her ass presented to him, her glistening, aching pussy exposed and empty.

“Look at that,” he muttered, running a thick finger through her soaked folds. She whimpered, pushing back against his hand. The emptiness inside her was a howling void.

He positioned himself, the broad, wet head of his cock nudging at her entrance. He didn’t gentle himself. He slammed into her with one powerful, grunting thrust, burying himself to the hilt.

Raven cried out, a raw, shattered sound. The stretch was immense, burning, perfect. He filled the desperate hollow in her core. He began to fuck her in a steady, pounding rhythm, his substantial gut slapping against her ass with wet, heavy smacks. The table legs screeched against the linoleum floor with each drive.

“Yeah, you tight little whore,” he snarled, his fingers digging into the soft flesh of her hips. “Taking a real man’s cock. Better than that pretty-boy roommate, ain’t it? Tell me it’s better.”

“It’s… it’s better,” Raven gasped, the words torn from her, not out of obedience but out of a primal, carnal truth. In this moment, this crude, brutal filling was all that existed. It was everything she needed. “Fuck me. Use my pussy. Please.”

Her plea drove him into a frenzy. His thrusts became shorter, harder, deeper. The coil in her own belly tightened with each brutal impact. The promised orgasm was a cliff edge she was being hammered towards. She was so close, teetering on the brink, the rough friction of his pubic bone against her ass combining with the internal pounding to push her to the very limit.

“Gonna fill you up, you dirty bitch,” he groaned, his rhythm becoming erratic, chaotic. “Gonna pump you full…”

His voice choked off as his climax ripped through him. A hot, guttural roar erupted from his chest. He shoved himself as deep as he could and held, his thick cock pulsing violently inside her, jet after jet of thick cum flooding her channel.

The internal heat triggered a seismic response in Raven’s own body. The coiled tension in her gut snapped. A screaming, blinding orgasm tore through her, wracking her with convulsions that clenched rhythmically around his still-spurting shaft. Her knees gave out. Only his grip on her hips and the edge of the table kept her upright as she shook, a continuous, wordless cry torn from her throat.

It faded. The pulses inside her slowed, then stopped. He remained lodged within her for a long moment, panting, his sweat dripping onto her back. Then he pulled out with a soft, wet sound.

Raven slumped forward, her cheek pressed against the cool, greasy laminate. Her mind was a blank static. The desperate, scratching need was gone, replaced by a liquid, boneless satisfaction. She was full. She was empty. It was perfect.

She felt his hand, rough and calloused, tap her ass.

“Cleanup,” he grunted, his voice raspy with spent effort.

She pushed herself upright, her movements sluggish. She turned. He stood there, his sweatpants still around his thighs, his cock glistening with a mix of their fluids. It was softening, smeared with white. The sight didn’t repulse her. It called to the now-dormant programming, a final subroutine.

She dropped back to her knees on the dirty floor. Her green eyes, still glazed, fixed on the messy head of his cock.

“Please,” she whispered, her voice hoarse and raw from gagging. “Let me taste it. I need to taste what you put inside me.”

The plea, so specific and depraved, made Henderson’s eyes bulge. A final, aftershock twitch ran through his softening length. “You really are a fucking dream,” he breathed.

He shuffled closer. Raven leaned in, her tongue extending. She didn’t use her hands. She licked him clean with slow, worshipful strokes, her tongue lapping up the bitter, salty tang of his release mixed with her own arousal. She swallowed diligently, her eyes closed in concentration, until his skin was clean. She took the softened flesh into her mouth for a moment, a gentle, sucking kiss, then released it.

Henderson zipped himself up with a satisfied sigh. He lumbered to a cluttered counter, opened a rusted cookie tin, and pulled out a wrinkled wad of cash. He peeled off several twenties.

“Here.” He shoved the money into her still-damp hand. “For your trouble. Tell Derek the rent’s taken care of.”

Raven stared at the bills. They meant nothing. A prop. She stood, pulled her shorts up over her sticky thighs, and turned toward the door without another word.

The night air was a shock against her feverish skin. She walked back across the driveway, the gravel biting her bare feet, the cash crumpled in her fist. Each step felt heavier. By the time she reached the back door, the specific details were already melting, draining away like water.

In the kitchen, Derek was still at the table. He looked up as she entered. Her hair was a wild tangle, her tank top askew, her mouth slightly swollen. She met his gaze for a blank second, then looked down at the money in her hand.

“He said it’s taken care of,” she mumbled, her voice distant. She placed the damp bills on the table beside his notebook.

“Good,” Derek said softly. “You should sleep now, Raven. You must be exhausted.”

She nodded, a slow, heavy motion. The last of the programming delivered its final command: to forget. The sensations—the greasy table, the taste, the crushing weight of him—softened, blurred at the edges, packed in cotton wool and labeled dream.

She padded down the hall to the bedroom she shared with Josh. He was asleep, snoring lightly, the glow of his paused game still lighting the room. Raven peeled off her soiled clothes, let them fall to the floor, and slid into bed naked. The soreness between her legs was profound, a deep, throbbing echo.

She closed her eyes. As sleep pulled her under, the only clear thought was a hazy, placid wonder at the vivid, utterly filthy dream she’d just had.

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