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Unlocking My Roommate's Girl

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A male geeky college aged engineering student grows jealous that one of his roommates has an attractive goth girlfriend. After he discovers that she listens to hypnosis tapes to help her sleep, he modifies them to get her to respond to certain trigger phrases.

Chapter 17: The VIP Listening Session

The record store smelled of dust, old paper, and the faint sweet rot of vinyl sleeves that had been handled by too many hands over too many decades. Derek stood in the back aisle, pretending to flip through a bin of seventies prog rock while he watched the counter. Phil, Raven's manager, was a wiry man in his fifties with a gray ponytail and a face like crumpled newspaper. He was arguing on the phone about a shipment of reissues, his voice a nasal whine that carried through the empty store.

Derek had been here three times in the last week. Each visit, he'd lingered near the listening booths, noting the worn keypad lock on the back room door, the way Phil would disappear back there for hours with his flask and his mystery novels. The store was dying. Anyone could see it. The foot traffic was a trickle, the inventory a monument to a lost era. Phil was desperate.

That desperation was a tool.

When Phil finally hung up, Derek approached the counter with his usual sheepish demeanor, adjusting his glasses as if embarrassed to speak. "Hey, Mr. Callahan. I had an idea I wanted to run by you."

Phil squinted, recognizing him as Raven's roommate. "Vance. You gonna buy something or just keep fondling my stock?"

"Actually, I've been thinking about marketing. You know, loyalty programs. VIP experiences." Derek's voice was earnest, almost shy. "I've been telling my friends about this place. They're into, uh, niche audio. Vintage recordings. I thought maybe I could host a listening session here. Something exclusive. Invite a few serious collectors. Let them hear some of your rare pressings."

Phil's eyes narrowed with suspicion. "I don't do handouts."

"No, no, I'd pay for the privilege. And I could bring refreshments." Derek paused. "I was thinking maybe Raven could help with the hospitality side of things. She's very friendly. Customer-facing."

The shift in Phil's expression was subtle but unmistakable. His gaze flickered toward the back room, then back to Derek. There was something knowing in his eyes now, something sharp. "Raven, huh? She's a good employee. Reliable. Though she's been a bit spaced lately. Walked into a shelf yesterday, staring off like she was in a trance."

Derek smiled. "She's had a lot on her mind. But I'm sure she'd be enthusiastic about a special evening."

Phil leaned on the counter, fingers drumming against the chipped wood. The silence stretched long and uncomfortable. "What kind of personal service we talking about, Vance?"

The question was blunt, a challenge. Derek didn't blink.

"The kind that makes customers feel very satisfied. Very loyal. The kind where they'll leave glowing reviews and bring their friends."

Phil's tongue ran across his lower lip. He glanced toward the front window, confirming the street was empty. Then he nodded, slow and deliberate. "Three of them. I know some guys. Old money, new contacts. They like exclusive things. They pay well."

"They'll pay you?"

"They'll pay the store. Generously. Four figures each for a 'private archival listening session.'" Phil's eyes glinted. "And Raven'll be the archivist?"

"The archivist," Derek agreed. "She'll be very thorough."

Phil extended his hand. Derek shook it.

The lingerie came from a boutique in a part of town Derek had never visited, a place with black lace in the window and high prices on the tags. He purchased it with cash from his engineering savings, choosing a short skirt that would ride up when she sat, a top that barely contained her chest, and a black lace G-string that was more an architectural suggestion than a garment. He wrapped it in tissue paper, slid it into a nondescript bag, and brought it home.

Raven was on the couch when he returned, curled into Josh's side, half-watching some sci-fi show. Her eyes were still carrying that hollowed-out quality from the landlord's apartment, but she smiled when Derek walked in. A dream she couldn't quite remember. A satisfied, sleepy warmth.

"Hey, Derek," she said. "You're out late."

"Picked up something for you." He set the bag on the coffee table. "For a work event Phil's organizing. He asked if you'd help with a VIP session."

Josh nudged her. "Look at that, you're getting promoted."

Raven frowned, reaching for the bag. She pulled out the tissue, uncovered the lingerie, and held up the scraps of black lace with an expression of amused confusion. "This is... strategic."

"Phil wants to really impress these guys. They're big spenders. Audio snobs." Derek shrugged, keeping his voice light. "He asked if you could wear it. You know, as a vibe."

Raven laughed, and the sound was almost normal. "A vibe. My manager wants me to dress like a hooker for a 'vibe.'" She ran her thumb over the lace hem. "This is so fucking weird."

"You don't have to. I told him you'd probably say yes, though. They're offering a big bonus. Could help with your half of the rent."

The mention of money made her expression soften. She'd been short after the last month's chaos. Josh had covered her, but there was unspoken tension there. "How big?"

"Five hundred, maybe."

Raven's eyebrows lifted. She looked at the lingerie again, a wry smile curling her painted lips. "Fine. But you tell Phil I'm not dancing or anything. I'm just gonna look hot and play records."

"Exactly," Derek said. "That's exactly what you'll do."

The store closed at nine. The three men arrived at nine thirty in a black sedan with tinted windows, emerging into the parking lot under the flickering halogen lights like predators summoned by blood in the water.

They were older, mid-forties to late fifties. Expensive blazers. Signet rings. The first was portly with a silver beard and a gold watch that cost more than Derek's car. The second was lean and bald, his face all sharp angles and cold gray eyes. The third had a shock of white hair and an easy smile that didn't reach his pupils.

Phil greeted them at the door, shaking hands, sliding into a politeness Derek had never seen. "Gentlemen, so glad you could make it. Tonight's special. I've got something really special lined up."

The back room was a soundproofed booth walled with gray acoustic foam. A single leather couch sat against one wall, worn and sagging in the middle. A control desk held a vintage reel-to-reel tape player, its reels slowly turning, and a pair of massive studio monitors flanked a dusty turntable. On it, a cracked vinyl record spun endlessly, its needle tracing the same hypnotic grooves, emitting only silence.

The whiskey was already set up on a side table. Glasses, ice, a bottle of Macallan that likely cost more than the entire inventory of the store.

Derek slipped in behind the men, quiet as a shadow. He set down a duffel bag, unzipped it, and placed three small record sleeves on the table. "Tonight's selections," he said. "Rare pressings. Private recordings. One of a kind."

The portly man squinted at the sleeves. "'Midnight Sessions.' Never heard of it."

"Exactly. It's an exclusive." Derek's smile was thin. "Raven will walk you through them."

The door opened. Raven stepped in.

She'd done her hair in loose waves, the violet streaks catching the dim light. Her makeup was heavier than usual—smoky eyes, dark lips—and the lingerie Derek had chosen accentuated every curve of her generous chest. The short skirt hugged her hips, the top barely containing her breasts. She moved with nervous confidence, a performer stepping onto an unexpected stage.

"Hi," she said, her voice sweet. "I'm Raven."

The bald man's gray eyes roamed her body with clinical appraisal. The portly one smiled, exposing a gold incisor. The white-haired man simply raised his glass. "Well, hello, Raven."

Phil gestured toward the couch. "Why don't you sit with them? Keep them company while I get the first track ready."

Raven's smile flickered, just for a moment. Something in her chest tightened. But she padded over, sinking down onto the couch between the portly man and the bald one. The leather creaked beneath her weight.

"So," she said lightly. "You guys are into vinyl?"

The white-haired man leaned forward, his gaze dropping to the exposed curve of her cleavage. "Intensely."

Derek moved behind her, ostensibly adjusting the record player. He placed a hand on her shoulder, fingers brushing her neck with feather-light contact. He leaned down, his lips so close to her ear that his breath warmed the shell of it.

"Glittering Neon."

The phrase hit her like a physical blow. Her spine stiffened, her eyes locking onto something distant and unseen. A shiver ran through her. Then, slowly, the tension bled out of her shoulders.

When she turned back to the men, her smile had changed. It was softer now, more open. Hungry.

"Tell me what you like," she said. "I want to know everything."

The portly man shifted, his hand landing on her bare thigh. "I like a woman with confidence."

Raven's fingers curled around his wrist, guiding his hand higher. "I like a man who knows what he wants."

The white-haired man watched, his smile widening.

The white-haired man watched, his smile widening. "I like a woman who's eager to please."

Raven's laugh was low, throaty, a sound that emerged from somewhere beneath her conscious mind. "I'm very eager."

She shifted on the couch, turning her body toward the portly man beside her. Her hand slid up his thigh, feeling the expensive fabric of his tailored trousers, the heat of his flesh beneath. He inhaled sharply, his gold incisor flashing in the dim light.

"That's it," he breathed. "Touch me."

The bald man leaned forward, his cold gray eyes fixed on the exposed curve of her chest. "Show us what that mouth can do."

Raven didn't hesitate. She slid off the couch, sinking to her knees on the scuffed linoleum floor. The movement was fluid, practiced, choreographed by programming she couldn't consciously recall. Her fingers found the portly man's belt buckle, working it open with nimble precision. The leather hissed through the loops as she pulled it free.

"Jesus," the portly man muttered, his hands gripping the couch cushions.

She unzipped his trousers, revealing black boxer briefs stretched taut over a substantial bulge. Her mouth watered. The emptiness behind her teeth was a physical ache, a craving that had been engineered into her neural pathways over weeks of subliminal conditioning.

She pulled his cock free. It was thick, uncut, already fully hard. The head was dark and swollen, glistening with a smear of pre-cum. She wrapped her fingers around the shaft, feeling the heat of him, the pulse of blood through the engorged tissue.

"Lick it," the bald man instructed. "From the base to the tip. Make it sloppy."

Raven obeyed. Her tongue extended, flat and wet, dragging along the underside of his shaft. The taste was salt and musk and male, and it triggered something primal in her brain. She moaned, the vibration making the portly man groan. She did it again, slower this time, savoring the texture of his skin against her taste buds.

"Open your mouth," the white-haired man said. "Take him all the way."

She parted her lips, wide and obedient, and descended. His cock pushed past her lips, filling her mouth, pressing against the back of her throat. She swallowed, feeling her throat muscles contract around him, and the sensation sent a jolt directly to her clit. Her thighs pressed together involuntarily, seeking friction.

"That's it," the portly man groaned, his hips twitching. "Suck me like you mean it."

She began to move, establishing a rhythm. Up, down, up, down, her head bobbing with mechanical precision. Her hand gripped the base of his shaft, stroking what her mouth couldn't reach. Spit pooled and dripped down her chin, soaking the delicate lace of her top. She gagged when he hit the back of her throat, but the gagging only made her pussy throb harder.

"Your girl knows what she's doing," the bald man observed to Phil, who had retreated to the corner of the room, his flask clutched in one hand.

Phil nodded, his face pale but his eyes bright with morbid fascination. "She's a natural."

The white-haired man stood, moving behind Raven. His hands found her hips, sliding up her thighs beneath the short skirt. She moaned around the cock in her mouth when his fingers found the damp fabric of her G-string.

"She's soaked," he announced, his voice carrying a note of genuine surprise. "Absolutely dripping."

The portly man grabbed a fistful of her violet-streaked hair, guiding her rhythm. "Let's get her out of these clothes."

The white-haired man tugged at the G-string, pulling it down her thighs. It pooled at her knees. His hands came around to her front, cupping her heavy breasts through the thin fabric of her top. He kneaded them roughly, finding her nipples through the lace, pinching them hard.

Raven cried out around the cock in her mouth, a muffled sound of pleasure and pain. Her hips pushed back against his hands, seeking more.

"Get on the couch," the portly man ordered, pulling his cock from her mouth with a wet pop. "Back against the armrest."

She crawled onto the leather couch, positioning herself as instructed. Her head rested against the armrest, her legs spread wide, her knees hooked over the edge. The G-string was still tangled at one ankle. The top barely covered her chest, her nipples visible through the black lace.

The portly man moved toward her, his cock slick with her saliva. He climbed onto the couch, positioning himself between her legs. He didn't enter her yet. Instead, he dragged the head of his cock through her wet folds, up and down, teasing her entrance.

"Please," Raven whimpered, the word escaping her programmed lips without conscious permission. "Please."

"Please what?"

"Please fuck me."

He slammed into her. The force of it drove her back against the armrest, her head knocking against the leather. She gasped, her back arching, her breasts straining against the fragile lace. His thrusts were brutal, punishing, a piston-like rhythm that left no room for adjustment.

"Fucking tight," he grunted, his silver beard scratching her neck as he leaned forward. "Fucking perfect little cunt."

Her eyes rolled back. The stimulation was overwhelming, her clit rubbing against his pubic bone with every thrust, her breasts bouncing with each impact. The bald man had moved closer, standing beside the couch, his cock already freed from his trousers, his hand moving steadily along the shaft.

"Look at me," he commanded.

Raven's gaze dragged to his face. She obeyed.

"Open your mouth."

She did. He stepped forward, guiding his cock past her lips. The taste was different—saltier, more acrid—but no less satisfying. She sucked greedily, gagging as he hit the back of her throat, her eyes watering.

"That's it," he murmured. "That's a good little slut."

The white-haired man circled around behind her, positioning himself at her other end. His hands gripped her hips, lifting her slightly, tilting her pelvis. He pressed his cock against her ass, slicking himself in her wetness.

She tensed, a flicker of something that might have been resistance. But the programming overrode it.

"Please," she said, the word emerging around the bald man's cock. "Please fuck my ass."

The white-haired man pushed inside her. The stretch was intense, burning, too much and not enough all at once. She cried out, a shattered sob that vibrated around the cock in her mouth. The two men began to move in counterpoint, one thrusting into her cunt while the other claimed her ass.

"That's it," the portly man groaned. "Take us both. Take every fucking inch."

She was being split open, filled beyond capacity, and it was glorious. The orgasm built in her core like a pressure bomb, coiling tighter and tighter with each brutal thrust. The bald man's cock hit the back of her throat, and the sensation sent a lightning bolt of pleasure directly to her clit.

She came hard, her body convulsing, her pussy clenching around the portly man's shaft, her ass tightening around the white-haired man's cock. She screamed, but the sound was swallowed by the cock in her mouth.

"Fuck, she's coming," the portly man shouted. "Keep going, keep going!"

The white-haired man's rhythm became erratic, desperate. He slammed into her ass with frantic, pounding thrusts, his breath coming in harsh gasps. "I'm close—I'm fucking close—"

He pulled out and sprayed his release across her back, hot ropes of cum splashing against her pale skin. The portly man followed moments later, pulling out and jerking himself onto her stomach and chest, painting the lace top with thick white stripes.

The bald man didn't pull out. He grabbed her hair, thrusting deep into her throat, holding her there. Raven gagged, her eyes watering, but she didn't resist. She swallowed as his cock pulsed hot cum directly down her esophagus, the satisfaction of it flooding her brain with dopamine.

When he finally released her, she slumped against the couch, breathless and covered in the evidence of their pleasure. Her mind was static, white noise, the programming already beginning its erasure.

The white-haired man zipped his trousers, pulling a money clip from his pocket. He peeled off several hundred-dollar bills and tossed them onto the control desk. "Tell Phil we'll be back next month."

The three men filed out, not a word of parting. The door clicked shut behind them.

Phil emerged from his corner, his face flushed, his eyes wide. He looked at Raven, still sprawled on the couch, and licked his lips. "Well. That was... something."

Derek stepped forward, his expression placid. He held out a hand to Raven. She took it, letting him pull her to her feet. Her movements were dreamlike, weightless.


Her movements were dreamlike, weightless, as though the air itself had thickened into honey and she were wading through it. Derek guided her toward the small bathroom adjacent to the control booth, his hand steady on her elbow, his touch as clinical as a nurse's.

"Sit," he said, and she sat on the closed toilet lid, staring at the cracked tile between her bare feet. The G-string was still tangled around one ankle. Cum was cooling on her skin, sticky and white, beginning to crust along the lace of her ruined top.

He ran the tap, letting the water warm, then soaked a rough paper towel from the dispenser. He knelt before her. The gesture might have seemed tender if his face weren't so utterly blank, his eyes computing her like a subroutine that had executed cleanly.

He wiped the mess from her stomach first, methodical strokes that scrubbed away the portly man's release. The paper towel came away pink-tinged from where the fabric had chafed her raw. He didn't flinch. He simply folded the towel to a clean side and moved to her chest, lifting each heavy breast to wipe the stripes of cum from her pale skin.

"The white-haired man's load is on your back," he said, his voice flat. "Lean forward."

She obeyed. He worked behind her, dragging the damp paper across her shoulder blades, down her spine, catching the rivulets that had run toward her waistband. The water was beginning to cool. Goosebumps rose along her arms.

"Stand."

She stood. He pulled the ruined top over her head, the fabric catching on her breasts, and dropped it into the small trash bin. The G-string followed with a single tug. She stood naked in the fluorescent light, her skin blotchy from exertion, her thighs slick with mixed fluids that the paper towel couldn't reach.

"Use the shower," he said. "There's soap by the drain. Clean yourself properly."

The shower was a rusted metal stall in the corner, its curtain a translucent plastic that had yellowed with age. She stepped inside, turned the knob, and gasped when the cold water hit her skin before slowly warming. The spray beat against her shoulders, washing away the evidence in thin rivulets that swirled toward the drain.

She used the soap—cheap, harsh, smelling of industrial lemon—and scrubbed until her skin was pink. The water ran clear. Her body was clean. The memories were already dissolving.

When she stepped out, Derek had left a folded towel and a plastic bag on the sink. "Your regular clothes are in the bag. Phil said you can change in here."

She dried herself mechanically, the towel rough against her tender skin. The ache between her legs was a deep, hollow throb, the kind that settled into bone and reminded her of every violation for days. She dressed slowly, shimmying into her jeans, pulling her worn band t-shirt over her head. The fabric was soft and familiar against her abused nipples.

She caught a glimpse of herself in the mirror. Her makeup was smeared, her eyes hollow, her hair a wild tangle around her face. She looked like she'd been through something. But she didn't remember what.

She finger-combed her hair, wincing at a snarl. She wiped the mascara streaks from her cheeks with another paper towel. She looked passable now. Normal enough.

Derek was waiting by the counter when she emerged, talking in low tones with Phil. They both fell silent as she approached. Phil's face was a mottled red, his hands trembling slightly as he palmed a thick envelope.

"Raven," Phil said, his voice too bright. "Great work tonight. Really went above and beyond."

She blinked at him, a vague smile tugging at her lips. "Did I? I feel like I barely remember the shift."

"Everyone's a blur," Phil said quickly. "Busy night. You earned a bonus." He pressed two hundred dollars into her hand. "Take tomorrow off. Paid."

She stared at the bills. They felt foreign in her palm, like stage money. "Thanks, Phil."

The bell above the door jingled. Josh stepped in, his blond hair damp from the evening rain, a crooked grin spreading across his face when he spotted her. "There's my girl. Ready to blow this popsicle stand?"

The sight of him sent a strange pang through her chest—something between relief and unease. He looked so normal, so brightly uncomplicated, standing there in his worn leather jacket with his easy smile. She crossed the store and let him fold her into his arms, breathing in the familiar scent of his cologne and the faint metal tang of the city.

"Shift okay?" he asked, pressing a kiss to the top of her head.

"Yeah," she said, and the word came out steadier than she felt. "Kind of flew by, honestly. Time did that weird thing again where it just... vanished."

He pulled back, studying her face. "You look tired."

"I'm fine. Just ready to be home."

He slung an arm around her shoulder, guiding her toward the door. "I ordered pizza. The greasy kind you like. We can watch that terrible werewolf movie you've been wanting to see."

"Sounds perfect."

They stepped out into the night. The rain had stopped, leaving the pavement slick and gleaming under the streetlights. Josh's car was idling at the curb, its windshield dotted with droplets. He opened the passenger door for her, a gesture so unselfconsciously sweet it made her chest ache.

She climbed in, the worn seat familiar beneath her thighs. The heat was already blasting, a welcome relief from the chill. Josh slid into the driver's side, starting the engine with a throaty rumble.

"You know," she said, staring out the window at the darkened storefronts, "I had the weirdest daydream today. Like, the whole shift felt like it was happening to someone else."

"Yeah?" Josh pulled away from the curb, glancing at her with soft concern. "What about?"

She frowned, searching for the thread of it. But the images were already blurring, sliding away like water through her fingers. "I don't remember. Just... weird. Like I watched a movie but I was in it, and now I can't recall the plot."

Josh reached over, squeezing her thigh. "Maybe you're just tired. You've been running on fumes for weeks."

"Maybe," she agreed.

The lie tasted like copper on her tongue. She didn't know why it felt like a lie. She only knew that something was wrong, something was missing, and the shape of the absence was too large to hold in her hands.

They drove in comfortable silence, the city sliding past the windows in smears of neon and shadow. The pizza would be waiting. The movie would play. Josh would fall asleep halfway through, and she'd be alone with her thoughts, chasing a memory that refused to surface.

In the back of her mind, a voice she didn't recognize whispered words she couldn't understand.

And behind them, in the dark of the record store, Derek watched the taillights of Josh's car disappear around the corner. He counted the money in the envelope Phil had given him, thumbed the stack of bills, and smiled a thin, private smile.

The rent was covered. The experiments were progressing. And Raven would be back tomorrow night, ready for her next session.

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