Romance across 78,000 words. Shares are the usual proportions for this structure, rounded to the nearest hundred words.
Establish both leads apart: what each wants and what each is missing. Aim for about 6,300 words.
Nell opens the Saltmarket alone at seven and logs 9.4 degrees. Two hundred miles inland, Ovide takes a six-week coastal survey because it is the one contract that will not follow him home.
First contact, with friction. The reader should want them in a room together. Aim for about 4,600 words.
He is already in the water when she comes to open up, swimming the lengths he used to swim, with the survey folder left on the steps.
The reason this cannot work, stated by circumstance or by them. Aim for about 4,600 words.
His brief is to price the demolition of the sea wall. Anything he writes that keeps the lido open is a lie, and every councilor in the room knows he used to work here.
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Trap them in the same space, job, house or problem. This is the engine. Aim for about 12,500 words.
The survey needs a full tidal cycle every day for a month. That means her gate, her crank, her log book and her, at four in the morning, for thirty days.
Small acts of attention. Let each one see the other doing something private. Aim for about 11,000 words.
She catches him rehanging the changing-room door at midnight. He catches her teaching a terrified sixty-year-old to put her face in the water.
They commit — a kiss, a confession, a decision — and the stakes invert. Aim for about 4,600 words.
They swim the winter mile together, and on the walk back she tells him about the 2019 letter. He says he can work with that, and files the first half of the survey without mentioning it.
The secret surfaces, the outside world pushes back, the cost becomes real. Aim for about 12,500 words.
Councilor Speight pulls the 2019 file and reads it into the record. The insurers withdraw, Sam resigns rather than be questioned, and the license hearing is brought forward three weeks.
They separate, each believing they are doing the right thing. Aim for about 6,300 words.
Ovide files the honest second half, which condemns the wall and closes the lido with it. Nell finds out from the notice taped to her own gate.
Somebody gives up the thing they protected in beat one. Aim for about 9,400 words.
She stands up at the hearing and reads her aunt's refusal letter aloud, with her own name on the envelope, before anyone else can use it against him.
Show the new normal, and prove the change with one small ordinary scene. Aim for about 6,200 words.
The wall is rebuilt to his design over two winters. The sixtieth season opens late, in June, with Nell teaching the Tuesday beginners and the log kept in two hands.