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• The Assize of Windows — licenses every reading and holds the register
• Coldarch Row — eleven houses, all reglazed inside one month
• The kiln yards — Orhalla's salt edge, three furnaces, open to the flat

The salt flat lies west and uphill, so the kiln yards get the whole afternoon and Coldarch Row gets none of it after two o'clock. That is why the Row's panes hold so little, and why nobody noticed the swap.

• Kiln yards — hot salt, scorched hair, the ring of a cooling frame
• Coldarch Row — cold stone and no smell at all, which is itself the clue
• The Assize — wax, ledger dust, and a room kept deliberately dim

Orhalla is a half-moon against the flat. Everything the Assize governs sits inside the old wall; everything that fires glass sits outside it.

• A fired pane holds the light that passed through it for about eleven years
• Reading a pane needs full sun and a licensed reader
• Weight, note and temper are set at firing and cannot be altered afterward

• A read pane is spent — the light does not come back
• A reading is only evidence if three licensed readers say it aloud together
• Reglazing destroys everything the old pane held

• A pane never holds sound, only light
• Nobody can fire a pane showing something that did not happen
• The register never records who ordered a reglazing, only who carried it out

Every citizen knows windows hold light. Almost nobody knows the register omits who ordered a reglazing, because almost nobody has ever asked to see one.

• Eleven years ago — the Sequestered House is sealed; Pell, an apprentice, fires its panes
• Eleven years ago — Toma Sarn dies and Yeva crates his window instead of selling the glass
• Nine years ago — Izera takes her license at a public assay

• Ch 1 — the Assize posts the reglazing notice; the bid is nine days out
• Ch 9 — Izera matches the apprentice mark to the register
• Ch 24 — the public reading on Coldarch Row

Nine days to the bid, and one more before the house's panes pass eleven years and go dark.

High summer. Orhalla counts its year from the first firing after the salt harvest.

• The Assize of Windows — wants readings kept rare — short of anyone who can fire at scale
• The kiln yards — want the reading license opened — short of standing and of salt credit
• The salt bond — wants its debts paid — short of any authority inside the wall

The Assize licenses readers; the yards own the furnaces. Neither side can produce evidence without the other, and both pretend the arrangement is ancient rather than sixty years old.

• The Assize was founded by three kiln families and has admitted none since
• The salt bond was the Assize's creditor for a decade and has never been repaid in full

• Izera — the yards, loudly — actually loyal to being believed
• Yeva — both, for nineteen years — has to choose in book one
• Pell — the Assize — loyal to the version of it that made him

• pane — any fired glass holding light, not only a window
• reading — the licensed act of calling what a pane holds
• the dark — what a pane becomes at eleven years

• Recorder — the Assize's senior officer; addressed as Recorder, never by name at work
• Mother of the Kiln — head of a firing yard; a courtesy title with no legal force

• Coldarch Row (capitalized)
• the Sequestered House (capitalized)
• salt flat (two words, lower case)

• "weighing it" — guessing
• "gone dark" — past eleven years, or past caring
• "a clean frame" — a lie nobody can check

• Who ordered the Sequestered House sealed? — raised ch 1
• Why does Salter Coom sell under the bond price? — raised ch 5

• Izera's shop notes of every weight, eleven years of them — ch 3
• Toma Sarn's crated window under the third bench — ch 7

Ch 4 says the Row was reglazed once; ch 18 says twice. Twice is the point — fix ch 4.

• Book two: the Row's other ten houses
• Book three: the reading of Toma's window, and who Yeva nominates

• The Saltmarket Lido — sea-fed, cut into rock, open since 1966
• The sea wall — 1954 concrete, surveyed in February, failing
• The Drift — the cafe over the changing rooms, open when Aleyna feels like it

The lido sits below the wall on the north side of the bay, so it fills and drains through the same hand-cranked gate. The council offices are eleven minutes uphill, which is the whole plot.

• The lido — cold stone, salt instead of chlorine, the crank's iron squeal
• The Drift — wet towels and toast
• The wall — wind, and a hollow note underfoot on the seaward path

Cullen Bay is a crescent open to the north. Everything old is on the sea side of the road; everything funded is on the other.

• The tide gate is cranked by hand, forty-one turns, twice a day
• The license is seasonal and signed by one committee that sits four times a year
• The temperature log is a condition of the insurance, not a hobby

• Every spring tide costs a day of takings and a morning of clearing
• A refused grant stays on file for ten years and can be read into any hearing
• One resignation is enough for the insurers to withdraw

• The lido never opens without a qualified lifeguard on the side
• Nobody swims alone in opening hours — Del's rule, still on the board
• The council never funds a repair it was previously refused for

Everyone in town knows the wall is failing. Four people know the 2019 grant was refused, and one of them knows who posted the letter.

• 2019 — the council repair grant is offered and refused; Nell posts the letter
• Ten years ago — Ovide leaves for a contract inland and writes a letter he never sends
• Two years ago — Del dies; the lido passes to Nell in a will of four lines

• Ch 1 — February's survey lands and Ovide arrives
• Ch 12 — the winter mile, and Nell tells him about 2019
• Ch 20 — Speight reads the 2019 file into the record

Eleven weeks to the May tides, cut to eight when the hearing is brought forward.

Late winter into June. The season is eleven weeks long and everything in town is priced against it.

• The lido's members — want a sixtieth season — short of anybody willing to chair anything
• The council — wants the wall liability off its books — short of money
• Speight's redevelopment group — wants the seafront site — short of a reason the town would accept

The council signs the license, the insurers decide whether it is worth anything, and the members decide whether the town minds. Nobody has ever had to use all three at once.

The 2019 refusal is the only time the town told the council no, and the council has not forgotten it

• Sam — the lido, until he is asked under oath
• Aleyna — Nell, unconditionally, which is its own kind of pressure
• Ovide — the survey, which is exactly why Nell can trust him

• the crank — the hand gear that opens the tide gate
• the winter mile — the members' New Year swim, sixty-four lengths
• the log — the twice-daily temperature and headcount book

Councilor — used in full at a hearing, never in the cafe

• Saltmarket Lido (capitalized, no apostrophe)
• the Drift (lower-case the)
• Cullen Bay (two words)

• "nine point four" — cold, but fine
• "a gate morning" — a spring tide; nobody swims
• "on the record" — Speight is in the room

• Who else has seen the 2019 file? — raised ch 3
• What was in the letter Ovide never sent? — raised ch 6

• The letter folded into Del's ledger at 2019 — ch 6
• Sam's college application, which needs a reference from Nell — ch 4

Ch 2 gives the lido's opening year as 1964; the plaque in ch 15 says 1966. 1966 is right.

• The rebuild takes two winters; the last chapter is the June after
• Sam's reference, written after the hearing, is the final entry in the log

• Ninth Harbor — six berths, one crewed, the rest automated
• The gantry — Poll's ground, and nobody else carries a tool roll down it
• Hesper Rise — the settlement: 340 people and one school

Hesper is tide-locked, so the Harbor sits on the terminator and moves its awnings twice a standard year. Everything that can be cold is built out; everything that must be warm is dug in.

• The gantry — cold metal, static, the ring of a valve wheel
• The office — recycled air and printed paper the company stopped supplying in book two
• Hesper Rise — 29-hour days, and the school making noise at the wrong time

Six berths in a row, facing out. The office is berth zero, and the family lives behind it.

• The franchise runs 400 days and renews on inspection
• A crewed depot may refuse a berth; an automated one may not
• Fuel sells at the company's posted rate, set off-moon

• A missed renewal reverts the depot to the company permanently
• An adverse finding stands unless the board overturns it inside one renewal
• Refusing a berth costs the Harbor its priority on the next resupply

• The company never inspects twice in one renewal
• A reverted depot is never re-franchised to the same family
• Nobody who signs the book may also schedule the inspection

Everyone on Hesper knows the renewal terms. Almost nobody has read the scheduling clause, which is where the last three renewals were actually decided.

• Renewal one — Nadja Idriss takes the franchise
• Renewal five — Corre leaves at nineteen, on the last crewed run out
• Renewal seven — the Harbor's first missed inspection, ruled weather

• Bk 3 ch 1 — the audit is scheduled into the Harbor's worst week
• Bk 3 ch 9 — Corre finds her own authorization on the scheduling
• Bk 3 ch 24 — the finding is filed against the company

Sixty-one days of the current renewal remain when the auditor lands.

There are none. The Harbor counts renewals, and everybody's age is given in them.

• The Idriss family — wants the franchise — short of capital and of a fourth generation
• The Relay Company — wants the depots automated — short of a lawful reversion
• The Hesper Rise council — wants the school kept open — short of anyone who will stay

The company owns the fuel and the schedule; the family owns the only crew that may refuse a berth. Everything on Hesper is negotiated between those two facts.

The company franchised the depots after losing three automated ones in a decade, and has been trying to undo it ever since

• Tomas — the family, resentfully; he applies to the company in book four
• Poll — the valves, not the people
• Ovel Dray — whoever posts the rate

• renewal — 400 standard days, and the unit everything here is counted in
• reversion — the depot passing to the company on a missed renewal
• crewed — a depot with a person on it who may say no

Harbormaster — the franchise holder; the title on the record, the name everywhere else

• Ninth Harbor (capitalized)
• harbormaster (one word, lower case)
• Hesper Rise (two words)

• "berth zero" — home
• "on the terminator" — neither one thing nor the other
• "NH-2" — Corre's old call sign, and a question nobody asks

• Who scheduled the last three inspections? — raised bk 3 ch 1
• Why has Corre's mother's berth fee never been written off? — raised bk 3 ch 4

• The scheduling clause, quoted in full — bk 1 ch 11
• Poll's countersigned pressure certification — bk 3 ch 6

Book two says six berths and book three says eight. Six is right; book two counted the fuel racks.

• Book six: the year the Harbor runs unlicensed
• Book nine: the last renewal, and who does not apply

• The Farrow Cut — one lock, one keeper's house, sodium lit
• Ravensgate container port — automating in nine weeks
• Flat 4, Dunlow Court — the first place Prue has finished two school years

The Cut runs half a mile from the tidal river to the port basin, with the towpath on the far bank from the lock house — which is why Renner has never once been seen from a window.

• The lock — cold steel, diesel on water, the gate motor's two-tone alarm
• The keeper's house — a kettle, a paraffin heater, and the book
• The towpath — nothing at all, which is the point

River, lock, basin, port. One road in, and it passes the lock house.

• Every vessel through the lock takes a manifest number in the paper book
• The book is the port's legal record until automation replaces it
• Nights are one keeper; the relief covers Tuesdays

• A blank manifest column is a discrepancy the moment anyone looks
• A transfer request expires after ninety days and has to be resubmitted
• A suspended keeper loses the pass, the roster and the reference

• The book never leaves the site
• A keeper never holds port keys off shift
• Nobody logs a vessel they did not lock through themselves

The whole roster knows the book exists. Nobody on it knows that Renner's authorization was never revoked in March.

• March — the port lets Renner go quietly; his keys are never logged as returned
• June — the sixth barge, the envelope, and the deposit on Dunlow Court
• October onward — eleven fourth Tuesdays, every one on Renner's rostered night off

• Ch 1 — the twelfth entry, manifest column blank
• Ch 14 — Kit photographs the towpath at 3:40
• Ch 28 — Ines names the June envelope herself, first

Nine weeks to automation, after which the lock house closes and the paper book is pulped.

October to January. It is dark at both ends of every shift in this book.

• The port — wants automation delivered on time — short of anyone who understands the manual system
• The barge's owners — want the fourth Tuesdays to continue — short of a keeper after automation
• The keepers' roster — wants decent redundancy terms — short of leverage

The port signs the transfers and the redundancies, the roster holds the only knowledge of the manual system, and the barge needs one person who does not look up. Everybody is nine weeks from irrelevance.

The Cut was automated once before, in 1998, and reverted after a flood — which is why the paper book still exists

• Kit — Ines, until the suspension
• Marianne Ubi — the investigation, and her own reference
• Renner — the roster, which is how he justifies every part of it

• the Cut — the Farrow Cut, never "the canal"
• fourth Tuesday — the barge, and never said out loud
• the book — the paper log, and the only evidence in the novel

keeper — the job, and what they call each other on the roster

• Farrow Cut (capitalized)
• lock house (two words)
• Dunlow Court (never abbreviated)

• "level" — fine, safe, nothing happening
• "blank" — the manifest column, and what they all pretend it means
• "days" — the transfer, and the whole book's want

• Who is the barge's factor? — raised ch 1, deliberately never answered
• Where did Renner's March payoff go? — raised ch 19

• The port keys in Renner's fleece pocket — ch 2
• Ines's photocopies of the log, posted to herself — ch 7

Ch 5 says eleven entries and ch 9 says twelve. Twelve is right from ch 1 onward — fix ch 5.

• Marianne Ubi's own redundancy lands the week after the arrest
• Prue's college offer, accepted from a different address