Cover of The Come Up

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This is a story about a metamorphosis from a scrawny, nerdy 18 year old young black man to a confident 30 year old man with an insatiable sexual appetite and a harem of women.

Characters

  • Minnie — Minnie is a stripper at The Pink Valley who Rick mentioned as another woman for Marcus. Jade described her as too wild for the main floor and trying to get out of the place for years.
  • Deidre (Dee) — A voluptuous Cuban woman who runs a cleaning business that serves as a front. She is smart, calculating, and looking to escape a partner who thinks he owns her.
  • Hailey — A pretty Caucasian woman with a very strong build who owns a gym in the industrial district. She is severe, direct, and trained to read danger.

Chapter 11: The Morning After

The first gray light of dawn slipped through the curtains like a thief, painting pale stripes across the tangled bodies on Marcus's king-sized bed. Jade lay draped across his chest, her caramel skin slick with the memory of the night, one leg hooked over his thigh. Sophia had curled into his left side, her blonde hair fanned across his shoulder like spilled honey, while Samantha's sequined dress still clung to her hips at the foot of the bed. Cameron, The Statue, lay on her stomach at the edge, one long arm stretched across Samantha's back, her gray eyes half-open in a dreamy haze.

Marcus let his hand drift through Jade's hair, feeling the slow rhythm of her breathing. His phone buzzed against the nightstand, once, then twice, then a third time in quick succession.

He reached for it without disturbing the sleeping women. Three videos. Demi first: the twins' bathroom, Demi in nothing but her tattoos, shooting him a dark smirk before she bent over the sink and spread herself for the camera. Donna's came next, softer lighting, her bubbly laugh as she fingered herself on the bed, whispering "Good morning, Papi" in a singsong voice. Valerie's was the shortest, just her flexing for the camera, all muscle and intensity, before she mouthed "Yours" and cut the feed.

Marcus smiled, thumbing through each video twice before setting the phone down. Across the room, Pablo stirred on the couch, one arm hanging off the edge, a half-smile still etched on his face from the night's proceedings. The scent of sex and victory hung thick in the air, and for a moment, Marcus just breathed it in.

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Across town, in Jason's cramped one-bedroom apartment, the smell was different. Coffee, stale beer, and Minnie's cheap perfume. She sat cross-legged on his bed, naked except for his t-shirt, watching him fumble with the coffee maker.

"That thing you said last night," she said, her accent curling around the words. "About Marcus building an empire."

Jason turned, mug in hand. "Yeah. What about it?"

Minnie bit her lip. "I know two girls. Deidre. We call her Dee. Cuban, thick in all the right places, runs a little cleaning business that's really just a front. Smart as hell." She ticked off a finger. "And Hailey. White girl, built like a brick shithouse, owns a gym over in the industrial district. Both of them are trying to get out from under someone's thumb."

Jason set the mug down slowly. "And?"

"And I want in." Minnie's eyes were steady. "Not just as some girl you fuck on the side. I want to be a soldier. I bring Dee and Hailey, Marcus gets three women who know the streets, who know business, who know how to keep their mouths shut."

Jason stared at her. The wild stripper from last night had vanished. In her place sat something sharper, more calculating.

"You sure about this?" he asked.

Minnie smiled. "I've been trying to get out of The Pink Valley for years. This is my way out. I just need you to make the introduction."

Jason picked up his phone and dialed Marcus's number. It rang three times before the deep voice answered.

"Jason. It's early."

"I know. I need to bring you a proposal."

Jason held the phone to his ear, watching Minnie's eyes across the room. She hadn't moved, still cross-legged on the bed, but her hands had stilled in her lap. Waiting.

"Proposal," Marcus repeated. The word hung in the air, weighted with curiosity.

"I'm with Minnie right now. She's got an idea I think you'll want to hear. Involves two women she knows. Dee and Hailey. Says they're looking to get out from under someone's thumb and she wants to bring them in."

A pause stretched. Jason could hear movement on the other end, the creak of bedsprings, a muffled feminine voice asking something. Then Marcus's voice returned, lower now. "Bring them where?"

"To you. She wants to be a soldier, Marcus. Not arm candy. Soldiers."

Another pause. Minnie bit her lip. Jason kept his voice steady.

"She wants to meet you. Today. I'm thinking we come to your place, you talk to her, you talk to them. If you like what you hear, you figure out the rest. If not, no harm done."

"How'd you meet her?"

"The Valley. Rick's place. She's been trying to get out for years."

"Mm." A sound that could have been approval or skepticism. "And the two girls?"

"Dee runs a cleaning business that's a front. Hailey owns a gym in the industrial district. Minnie says they're both smart and both tired of taking orders from the wrong people."

The silence stretched long enough that Jason glanced at the phone to make sure the call hadn't dropped. Then Marcus spoke.

"Alright. Bring them to the apartment. Two hours."

Jason let out a breath he hadn't realized he'd been holding. "Confirmed."

"Jason. One thing."

"Yeah?"

"You vouch for her. That means you're responsible for her. If she's playing a game, it's your head that rolls." Marcus didn't raise his voice. He didn't have to.

Jason met Minnie's gaze. She nodded slowly, a single deliberate movement.

"Understood," Jason said.

The line clicked dead.

Jason set the phone down on the counter. Minnie was smiling now, a slow, hungry curve that made her look younger and older at the same time. "Two hours," she said. "I need to make some calls."

She grabbed her phone from the nightstand and started texting, thumbs moving fast. Jason watched her, something settling in his chest. She was sharp. Sharper than he'd expected. The wildness from the night before had been a mask, or a tool, and this was the real Minnie underneath. He thought about what Marcus had said. Responsible. His head. He'd known his brother for a decade. There was no threat in Marcus's voice, just a simple statement of fact. If Minnie crossed him, Jason would pay the price.

"Hey," Minnie said, not looking up from her phone. "Dee's in. Hailey's in. They're meeting us at that diner on 5th in an hour. We'll talk, then we'll go see your brother."

"You sure they're ready for this?"

Minnie finally looked up. Her eyes were dark and unreadable. "They've been ready for years. They just needed a door to open."

Jason picked up his coffee and took a long sip. The apartment smelled like her perfume and the heat of her body. He thought about Marcus's voice on the phone, calm and measured. He'd sounded like a man who already knew how tonight would end. Maybe he did. Maybe that was the point of all this, the maps, the empire, the women. Marcus had been playing chess while everyone else played checkers.

"Alright," Jason said, setting the mug down. "Let's go meet your friends."

Minnie slid off the bed, his t-shirt riding up her thighs as she padded naked to the bathroom to get dressed. She paused at the doorway, glancing over her shoulder. "You did good on that call. Comfortable. That's how you got to talk to Marcus if you want him to take you seriously."

"You've known him one day."

"I've known men like him my whole life." She smiled, then disappeared into the bathroom. Water started running.

Jason pulled his own clothes on, mind already turning ahead to the diner, to Dee and Hailey, to whatever Marcus would make of them. The morning light outside his window was brighter now, washing the city in gold. Somewhere in that city, Marcus was waiting with his women and his maps. In two hours, Jason would bring him three more soldiers.

He didn't know if it was a feast or a trap. But he knew one thing: it was a door, and he was walking through it.

He didn't know if it was a feast or a trap. But he knew one thing: it was a door, and he was walking through it.

The bathroom door opened. Minnie came out dressed in tight black jeans and a cropped leather jacket, her hair pulled back in a slick ponytail. She looked different. Harder. The wildness was still there, but it had been packed away behind a businesslike mask.

She stopped at the foot of the bed, zipping up her boots, then looked at him with an expression he hadn't seen on her yet. Vulnerable.

"Before we go," she said, "there's something you should know."

Jason leaned against the kitchen counter, coffee mug in hand. "I'm listening."

Minnie sat on the edge of the bed, hands clasped between her knees. "I wasn't always a stripper. I came here from Guatemala when I was nineteen. No papers, no family, nothing but a cousin who promised me work at a restaurant. Turned out the restaurant was a front. The work was in the back room, and the pay was whatever the men decided it was."

Jason stayed silent. The coffee had gone lukewarm in his hand.

"I got out after a year. Ran from that place in the middle of the night with nothing but the clothes on my back and a black eye." She touched her cheek, remembering. "Rick found me sleeping in an alley behind The Pink Valley. He offered me a job. Said I could dance, keep my clothes off, and never have to touch another man I didn't choose."

"And you believed him?"

"I didn't have a choice." Her voice was flat. "It was him or the streets. He kept his word. He kept me on a short leash, but he kept his word. I've been there four years now. Learned everything there is to know about that place, about the men who come through it, about the city."

Jason set the mug down slowly. "Why are you telling me this?"

"Because I want you to know what you're vouching for." Minnie met his eyes. "I'm not some wild girl who got lucky enough to meet Marcus. I've been fighting my whole life. I've been patient. I've been waiting for a door that doesn't lead back to that alley."

She stood, crossing to him, close enough that he could smell her perfume again, that cheap musk that had been driving him crazy since last night. "I'm not asking Marcus for a handout. I'm asking for a way in. Dee and Hailey are the same. We've got skills he can use. We've got loyalty he can trust. And we've got nothing to lose."

Jason looked at her for a long moment. The mask was gone. Underneath it was steel.

"You really think you can sell him on this?"

Minnie smiled, a slow curve that didn't reach her eyes. "I've been selling men things they didn't know they wanted for four years. Selling your brother on something he actually needs? That's easy."

She picked up her phone, checking the screen. "Dee's texted. They're at the diner already. We should move."

Jason grabbed his keys from the hook by the door, pocketing them. "One thing before we go."

Minnie paused, hand on the doorknob.

"Why me?" he asked. "You could've approached Marcus directly. You had Rick's number, you had access to the club. Why go through me?"

Minnie turned, her hand still on the knob, her dark eyes fixed on his. "Because you're the one who called. You're the one who showed up. And when I told you I wanted in, you didn't laugh or brush me off. You picked up the phone and made it happen."

She opened the door, stepping into the hallway. "That's the kind of man I want in my corner. Not the one who's already king. The one who's willing to go to war for what he believes in."

Jason followed her out, closing the door behind them. The morning light was bright now, cutting through the grime of the city streets. Somewhere in that light, Dee and Hailey were waiting at a diner, ready to hear a pitch that could change everything.

He didn't know if Minnie's story was true. He didn't know if Dee and Hailey were real or a setup. But he knew she'd looked at him like he mattered. And that was more than he'd felt in a long time.

The diner was a greasy spoon on 5th, the kind of place where the coffee burned your tongue and the vinyl booths had cracks held together by duct tape. Minnie slid into the booth across from two women who looked like they'd been waiting for a long time.

Dee was all curves and sharp angles, honey-brown skin glowing against a red blouse that cost more than the diner's entire menu. Her hair was swept up in a high ponytail, gold hoops catching the fluorescent light. She had the kind of face that could sell ice to an Eskimo, all warmth and charm, but her eyes were flat and calculating.

Hailey was the opposite. Built like a brick shithouse, as Minnie had said, with shoulders that could carry a fridge and arms that looked like they'd been sculpted by years of iron. She was pretty in a severe way, blonde hair cropped short, a small silver ring through her nose. She wore a tank top that showed off the definition in her chest and watched Jason enter with the steady gaze of someone who'd learned to read danger early.

"Jason," Minnie said, sliding over to make room. "This is Dee. This is Hailey."

Dee extended a hand, her grip warm and firm. "Minnie's told us about your brother. Says he's building something real."

"Something real," Jason repeated, sliding into the booth. "That's one way to put it."

Hailey spoke for the first time, her voice low and rough like she'd swallowed gravel. "What's the other way?"

Jason looked at her for a long moment. "The truth. He's building an empire. And he's selective about who he lets in."

The four of them talked for twenty minutes over cooling coffee. Dee talked about her cleaning business, how it serviced half the office buildings downtown, how the workers she employed were mostly undocumented women who needed the cash and knew how to keep their mouths shut. Hailey talked about her gym, the clientele, the way the industrial district operated on favors and fear.

By the time they left the diner, Jason was convinced. They were sharp. They were hungry. They were exactly the kind of women Marcus would want.

Marcus's apartment was quiet when they arrived. The women from last night were gone, the evidence of their presence cleared away except for a faint scent of perfume that lingered in the air. Pablo was there, leaning against the kitchen counter with a coffee mug, his massive frame making the space feel smaller.

Marcus sat on the couch, legs spread, maps folded neatly on the coffee table in front of him. He looked like a man who'd been expecting them.

"Jason." He nodded, then his eyes moved to Minnie, sweeping over her with a clinical assessment. "Minnie. You look different in daylight."

"Daylight does that to a person," she said, settling into an armchair without being asked. Dee and Hailey remained standing, flanking her like bodyguards.

Marcus's eyes moved to them. "And these are your friends?"

"Dee," Minnie said, gesturing. "Runs a cleaning business that's got eyes and ears in half the office buildings downtown. Hailey. Owns a gym in the industrial district. Trains fighters, knows how to spot talent."

Marcus studied them for a long moment. The silence stretched, and Jason felt the weight of it pressing against his chest. This was the moment. The evaluation.

"You've got a cleaning business," Marcus said to Dee. "And you're looking to get out from under someone's thumb."

Dee met his gaze without flinching. "I've got a partner who thinks he owns me. Thinks the business is his because he fronted the startup money five years ago. I've paid him back three times over, but he doesn't see it that way."

"And you own a gym," Marcus said to Hailey. "What's your problem?"

Hailey's jaw tightened. "I've got a landlord who's been jacking up my rent for two years. He knows I can't move, knows I've got equipment that costs a fortune to relocate. He thinks he's got me by the balls."

Marcus nodded slowly, processing. Then he leaned forward, hands clasped between his knees. "So you both want protection. You want someone with power who can solve your problems. What makes you think I'm that someone?"

"You've got a whole stable of women who'd kill for you," Minnie said, cutting in. "I've been in this city for four years. I know the players. I've never heard of you until last week, and now you've got a lawyer, a fighter, a singer, a basketball star, twins, and a stripper from Pink Valley all working for you. That's not luck. That's strategy."

Marcus's lips twitched. "And you want in on that strategy."

"I want to be a part of it." Minnie's voice was steady. "Not arm candy. Not a bed warmer. A soldier."

Marcus sat back, considering. His eyes moved from Minnie to Dee to Hailey, reading them like he read his maps. Jason held his breath.

"What do you bring to the table?" Marcus asked, his voice low and even. "What do you bring that I don't already have?"

“I can show you better than what I can tell you.”Hailey said with a smirk.

“Hmm. Impress me then.” He said.

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