Cover of The Come Up

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This is a story about a metamorphosis from a scrawny, nerdy 18 year old young black man to a confident 30 year old man with an insatiable sexual appetite and a harem of women.

Characters

  • Minnie — Minnie is a stripper at The Pink Valley who Rick mentioned as another woman for Marcus. Jade described her as too wild for the main floor and trying to get out of the place for years.
  • Deidre (Dee) — A voluptuous Cuban woman who runs a cleaning business that serves as a front. She is smart, calculating, and looking to escape a partner who thinks he owns her.
  • Hailey — A pretty Caucasian woman with a very strong build who owns a gym in the industrial district. She is severe, direct, and trained to read danger.

Chapter 4: The Gym Encounter

The gym was a cathedral of strain. The air tasted of rubber, bleach, and collective ambition. Marcus’s hands hovered, a cage of readiness, as the barbell trembled over Sasha’s chest. Her biceps corded, veins mapping her sun-kissed forearms as she pushed through the final rep, her exhale a sharp hiss.

“Good,” he said, taking the weight as she racked it. She sat up, wiping her neck with a towel. Her eyes, however, were fixed past his shoulder. A smirk played on her lips.

“Incoming. Three o’clock.”

He turned. Two women were walking toward them, a mirrored anomaly. Twins. Early twenties. Same height, same athletic leanness, same face—but the presentation was a study in opposites. One had jet-black hair with a sharp silver streak, chopped in a jagged bob. Black mascara smudged around eyes the color of storm clouds. She wore all black compression gear. The other’s hair was honey-blonde, bubbly in a high ponytail. She smiled brightly in pink leggings and a matching cropped top.

“You’re Marcus, aren’t you?” the blonde one said, not a question. Her voice was light, chirping. “We’ve been watching you. You don’t fuck around with your sets.”

“Donna,” the emo one sighed, elbowing her sister. “Very subtle, sis.” Her voice was lower, textured with a deliberate boredom. “I’m Demi. She’s Donna. You lift like you’re trying to kill the bar. It’s…interesting.”

Marcus leaned against the rack, crossing his arms. Sasha stayed on the bench, a queen observing courtiers. “Interesting is a start,” he said.

Donna bounced on the balls of her feet. “We were thinking… you look like you could use a real challenge. Demi here squats two-twenty for reps. Thinks she’s hot shit.”

Demi didn’t deny it. She just watched him, a challenge in her gray eyes.

“You game? Or do you just coach?”

Sasha let out a soft laugh. “Oh, absolutely.”

Marcus held Demi’s gaze. A public display. This was different from Nia’s calculated seduction. This was raw, territorial, juvenile. It was perfect.

“Plates don’t lie. Rack your weight.”

The small corner of the free-weight area became an arena. A few onlookers paused, phones subtly angled. Demi went first. She positioned herself under the bar, her form impeccable—deep, controlled, ass to grass. She pushed through eight reps of two-twenty, her face flushing with effort but her rhythm unwavering. She re-racked it with a definitive clang, shooting him a look of pure defiance.

Marcus nodded, a slight tilt of his head. He didn’t add weight. He matched her. But his tempo was different. Explosive out of the hole, a controlled pause at the top, each descent a deliberate, punishing grind. He did ten. Not just more, but harder. Each rep a statement of endurance over flash. The muscle in his jaw jumped. When he slammed the bar home, the entire rack shuddered.

Donna was practically vibrating.

“Holy shit.”

Demi’s defiance had melted into something hotter, more focused. She was breathing hard, her eyes tracing the lines of his shoulders. The defeat had short-circuited her aloof act.

“Good form,” Marcus said, grabbing his water. “You’ve got good discipline. Most people don’t.”

“What do most people have?” Demi asked, biting her bottom lip.

“Excuses.” He took a long drink. “You two train here late?”

“Usually,” Donna said, leaning in. “Why? You offering a private session?”

Sasha stood, slinging her bag over her shoulder. She came to stand beside Marcus, her presence an immediate, sobering anchor.

“He is. But it’s not the kind you’re thinking of. Not at first, anyways.”

Demi’s eyes flicked between Sasha and Marcus, understanding dawning. This wasn’t about spotting. The energy shifted, grew denser.

“What kind is it then?” Demi asked, her voice dropping.

“The kind where you listen,” Marcus said with a smirk. “Where you follow instructions. Where you get out of your own heads. My place. Ten tonight.” He took a pen from his bag, scrawled an address on Donna’s wrist. His fingers lingered on her skin. She shivered.

Donna looked at the numbers, then up at him, her bubbly mask slipping to reveal a naked, eager hunger.

“What do we wear?”

“Nothing you mind getting ruined,” Sasha said, and turned to leave.

Marcus followed, feeling four eyes burning into his back.

Later that evening…

His lofty apartment was dark, lit only by the city’s ambient glow. Sasha had dimmed the lights. She was wearing a simple silk robe, open, her body beneath a shadowed landscape. She stood by the windows, a glass of water in her hand.

“They’re kinda young,” she said, not turning.

“They’re old enough,” Marcus replied, stripping off his shirt.

“Impulsive. Unpredictable.”

“You were skeptical at one time, too.”

At ten-fifteen, the intercom buzzed. They came up together, a bundle of nervous energy. They’d changed. Demi was in a tight black vinyl skirt and a ripped band t-shirt, fishnets. Donna wore a tiny, flimsy pink sundress. They smelled of cheap body spray and anticipation.

“You’re late,” Marcus said from the couch. He didn’t get up.

“Couldn’t decide on an outfit,” Donna tried to joke, but it fell flat.

“Take your clothes off. Now.” He commanded while still on the couch.

The command, so stark in the quiet room, left no room for debate. They looked at each other. Demi, the challenger, moved first. She peeled off her t-shirt, unsnapped the skirt, stepped out of the fishnets. Donna’s hands trembled as she untied her dress, letting it puddle at her feet. They stood naked, side-by-side. Their bodies were nearly identical—lean, tight stomachs, small perky breasts, the graceful lines of dancers. The only differences were the various tattoos snaking up Demi’s ribcage and the silver piercings of Demi’s nipples and a silver piercing of Donna’s navel.

Sasha walked over, a predator assessing prey. She circled them.

“Twins,” she mused, her finger tracing a line down Demi’s spine. “Same, but different. He’s going to learn every difference between the two of you.”

“On your knees,” Marcus said. “Both of you. Facing each other.”

They knelt. The hardwood was unforgiving. Inches apart, they breathed each other’s air. Donna’s eyes were wide, scared, excited. Demi’s were defiant, but her chest was heaving.

“You challenged me,” Marcus said, standing before them. He unbuttoned his jeans. “Now…you service me. Together. Show me how you work as a team.”

He freed his cock, already thick and heavy. He presented it to the space between their faces. “Donna. Lick it. Demi. Get it wet. Use that mouth.”

Donna darted her tongue out first, a kittenish lick up the shaft. Demi, after a second’s hesitation, opened her lips and took the head inside, swirling her tongue around the crown. They fell into an unspoken, competitive rhythm. Donna lavished the base and his balls with sloppy, enthusiastic attention. Demi focused on the head, sucking with a gritty, artistic focus. Their cheeks brushed. Their breath hitched in sync.

Marcus looked down at the obscene, beautiful sight: the twin faces, one light, one dark, united in worshipping his dick. He grabbed a fistful of each of their hair, not gentle, guiding their pace. “That’s it. No hands. Just your mouths. Take it deeper, Demi. Make it nasty. Show your sister how it’s done.”

Demi took him deeper into her throat, gagging softly. Donna moaned, her own hand drifting between her legs. Sasha’s hand snaked out, smacking it away.

“No. You don’t touch yourself unless he says you can.”

The lesson continued. He pulled them to their feet, turned Demi around, and bent her over the back of the couch. He entered her from behind in one long, brutal stroke. She cried out, a sharp, choked sound.

“Donna. Watch. Learn. Then clean her up.”

He fucked Demi hard, his balls slapping against her clit with every drive. Her vinyl skirt was still around her waist, a pathetic parody of clothing. She came quickly, a sharp, sobbing climax that clenched around him. He pulled out, glistening wet.

“Now, Donna. Your turn. Taste your sister first.”

Shaking, Donna knelt behind her sister and pressed her face into Demi’s soaked, spread folds. She licked messily, drunk on the command and the depravity. Demi shuddered through another smaller peak.

“Good. Good.” Marcus grunted in a low voice. He pulled Donna up, spun her, and laid her on the glass coffee table. It was cold against her back. He drove into her, and she was tighter, hotter, her cries higher-pitched. He fucked her with the same relentless pace, her pink sundress crumpled beneath her. He glanced over at Demi, who was watching, her hand now moving frantically between her own legs with Sasha’s permission.

“Come here,” he ordered Demi. She stumbled over. “Suck my thumb.”

As he pumped into Donna, he shoved his thumb into Demi’s mouth. She sucked it greedily, her eyes locked on where he and her sister were joined.

It was Donna who broke first.

“I’m gonna… I’m gonna come!” she wailed. He pinched her clit hard, and she shattered, her body convulsing on the table. The force of her orgasm tipped him over the edge. He pulled out, jerking his cock, and erupted across their stomachs, rope after rope of his hot seed painting both their taut, trembling abdomens, mingling on their skin.

The room was a swamp of sweat, sex, and spent energy. The twins lay where they were, broken and glistening. Sasha finally approached with a towel. She cleaned Marcus first, then, with a detached efficiency, wiped the twins down.

“Get dressed,” Marcus said, his voice back to its normal register.

They moved slowly, sore, shells of the girls who had entered. As they pulled on their clothes, Donna started to cry, quiet, confused tears. Demi put an arm around her, but her eyes were on Marcus.

“Was that the session?” Demi asked, her voice raspy.

“That was the audition,” Sasha corrected, tying her robe. “You passed.”

“What happens Monday?” Donna sniffled.

“You train,” Marcus said. “You live your lives. And when I call, you come. You don’t ask questions. You don’t tell anyone. You belong to this now. To him.” Sasha’s finality was absolute.

They left, leaning on each other, moving down the hall like survivors of a gentle wreck.

Sasha locked the door behind them. She came back to the couch, now smelling of sex and cleaner.

“They’ll be trouble. Donna has a boyfriend. Demi has a anger problem.”

“You had a skepticism problem,” he said, pulling her onto his lap. “Now you’re my problem solver.”

She settled against him, her head on his shoulder. “We need rules. A system for this. For when there’s more.”

“We have rules. Clarity. Hierarchy. Loyalty.”

“It’s getting complicated, Marcus. Four women. Four schedules, four personalities, four sets of needs and jealousies. Nia’s already texted me three times tonight. She knows something’s up.”

He was silent, staring at the ceiling. The blueprint was expanding faster than he’d sketched it. The trench was filling with soldiers, but a army needed logistics. It needed a general. He looked at Sasha, her profile sharp against the neon light. She was already doing it.

“Then make it simple,” he said. “You’re the system. You manage them. You train them. You prepare them for me.”

She lifted her head, searching his face. The trust was absolute, terrifying. “And what do I get?”

“You get everything,” he said. And he meant it.

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