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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 29: Getting to know you

The hot water sluiced off the last traces of motorway grime and Isabelle’s welcome. Paul stood under the spray longer than necessary, the steam filling Odette’s sleek, tiled bathroom. He scrubbed his face, the unfamiliar taste of two different women still a phantom sensation on his tongue. Downstairs, the low murmur of female voices – Odette’s bright chirp, Isabelle’s deeper timbre, Sandrine’s softer cadence – was a constant hum through the floor. The intimacy of the hallway with Sandrine felt both immediate and strangely distant, another entry logged in Odette’s invisible ledger.

He toweled off, the plush cotton rough against his skin. His own clothes felt like an afterthought, discarded near the laundry basket. A fresh towel hung on the rail. He wrapped it around his waist, the knot secure, and took a breath. The air still held the faint, damp sweetness of jasmine from Sandrine’s shower.

He found them in the living room. The transformation was jarring. Gone was the travel weariness. Isabelle was draped sideways in the deep velvet chaise longue, legs tucked under her, wearing soft grey lounge pants and an oversized jumper, her damp hair spiky. Sandrine sat cross-legged on the thick, patterned rug, nursing a steaming mug, her own dark skin glowing, clad in comfortable leggings and a long-sleeved tee. Odette perched on the arm of the chaise near Isabelle, already dressed in black silk pajama shorts and a matching camisole that showed off her petite frame. The lamps cast a warm, low light, glinting off the frames of artfully arranged photographs and trinkets on the walls. The scent of freshly brewed coffee mingled with the jasmine and something else – a clean, expensive lotion.

Odette’s sharp green eyes snapped to him the moment he appeared in the arched doorway. A slow smile spread across her face, predatory and pleased. "Ah, Paul. Perfect timing. Lose the towel."

The command, delivered in that light, conversational tone, landed with the weight of a gavel. Isabelle’s gaze followed Odette’s, her expression shifting from relaxed to keen interest. Sandrine looked up from her mug, her dark eyes widening slightly, then flicking away, a faint flush rising on her cheeks. The coffee aroma suddenly felt sharp, acidic.

Paul hesitated for only a second. The towel knot felt enormous under his fingers. The cool air of the room hit his thighs as the heavy cotton dropped to the floor. He stood there, naked, exposed under the soft light. The thick rug felt scratchy under his bare feet. He fought the instinct to cover himself, forcing his hands to hang loosely at his sides. His skin prickled everywhere.

"Come here," Odette commanded, patting the space on the rug directly in front of the chaise. "Stand in the light. Let us see Odette's prize."

The possessive phrasing, ‘Odette’s prize’, sent a fresh wave of heat up his neck. He walked forward, the journey across the few feet of rug feeling endless. He stopped where she’d indicated, standing awkwardly, hyper-aware of every inch of his skin. The low table beside Sandrine held her coffee mug, a half-eaten pastry. Mundane objects highlighting the surreality.

"Arms out," Isabelle instructed, her voice low and intrigued. She swung her legs off the chaise, planting her feet on the rug, leaning forward. "Let's have a proper look."

He obeyed, lifting his arms away from his body, palms facing slightly outwards. The position felt absurdly vulnerable, like a specimen on display. Sandrine had shifted, turning fully towards him, her legs still crossed, her mug forgotten on the table. Her gaze was intense, travelling slowly up his legs, lingering for a moment before moving on. Her expression was unreadable – curiosity mixed with something cautious, assessing.

Odette slid off the chaise arm and knelt on his right side. Isabelle mirrored her on his left. Sandrine remained seated, but her focus was absolute. Three pairs of eyes roamed his naked body. Three minds, he knew, processing him in different ways. Odette: possessive appraisal. Isabelle: clinical, experimental interest. Sandrine: navigating entirely new territory.

Odette’s hand was the first to touch. Cool fingertips traced the line of his shoulder, down his bicep. "Good definition," she remarked casually, as if discussing cuts of meat. Her touch moved to his chest, fingers brushing lightly over a nipple. He suppressed a flinch.

Isabelle’s hand landed firmly on his other shoulder, her grip strong. She ran her palm down his arm, her touch more deliberate, exploring the muscle, the texture of his skin. "Solid," she stated. Her other hand reached out and gripped his left bicep, squeezing the muscle. "You work out, Paul?"

"Er, yes. Regularly," he managed, his voice tight. Her touch was impersonal, investigative. She moved her hands to his abdomen, pressing slightly. "Tight." Her fingers skimmed the line of hair leading down from his navel.

Sandrine hadn’t touched him yet. Her eyes, however, were fixed lower, her gaze tracing the contours of his pelvis, the base of his flaccid penis. The flush on her cheeks had deepened. He saw her swallow.

"Turn around," Odette said. He pivoted slowly, the rug fibres catching between his toes. He could feel their eyes on his back, the curve of his spine, his shoulders, his backside. Odette’s fingers traced the hollow above his tailbone. Isabelle’s hand landed on his right buttock, giving it a firm, appraising squeeze.

"Good glutes," Isabelle observed clinically. "Runner?"

"Rowing, mostly," Paul said, staring straight ahead at a framed black-and-white photograph of the Seine he’d seen a hundred times. It offered no escape.

"Turn back," Odette commanded.

He turned to face them again. Sandrine’s gaze was still fixed below his waist. Isabelle’s eyes followed suit, a small, intrigued smile playing on her lips. Odette’s expression was pure feline satisfaction. Paul felt the first, treacherous stirring of blood flow. Humiliation warred with a strange, unwelcome thrill.

"Legs apart," Odette instructed softly.

He widened his stance, the cool air hitting the most intimate parts of him. The vulnerability was complete now. Isabelle leaned in closer, peering. "Fascinating," she murmured, almost to herself. Her hand darted out, not to touch his genitals, but to grip his inner thigh, her fingers surprisingly strong as she pulled his leg wider. "The musculature here is quite different."

Sandrine finally moved. She uncrossed her legs, leaning forward on her knees. Her hand stretched out, tentatively at first, then her fingertips brushed the wiry hair at the base of his penis. He sucked in a breath. Her touch was feather-light, exploratory. Her dark eyes were wide, fascinated. She traced the shape of it, still soft, with the very tip of her index finger. Her touch was utterly different from Camilla’s impatient demand or Isabelle’s pragmatic claiming. This was discovery. Pure, unvarnished curiosity about a foreign landscape.

"Odette told me," Sandrine said, her voice quiet, almost shy, her gaze still fixed on her exploration, "but it's different seeing it." Her finger traced the ridge of the glans, pausing at the furled opening. "The texture…"

Isabelle chuckled, a low rumble. "Go on, Sandy. He doesn't bite. Not with his mouth, anyway." She winked at Odette, who smirked.

Encouraged, or perhaps just driven by her own intense focus, Sandrine’s touch grew firmer. Her thumb and forefinger gently encircled the shaft where it met the glans. She pulled back the loose fold of skin, revealing the smooth, dark pink head beneath. Paul closed his eyes for a second. The sensation was clinical, invasive, yet laced with a profound novelty he’d never experienced. He felt like an exhibit. A fascinating, living exhibit.

"See?" Odette said, her voice close to his ear now. She had moved. Her own hand joined Sandrine’s, her smaller fingers deftly taking over the foreskin, pulling it back further, exposing him completely. "Very neat." Her fingertip grazed the sensitive ridge, sending an involuntary jolt through him. He felt himself twitch, thickening slightly under their combined scrutiny.

"Ah!" Isabelle exclaimed, noticing. "So responsive."

Sandrine withdrew her hand slightly, watching the subtle change with rapt attention. "It changes shape," she breathed, a note of genuine surprise in her voice. "Just from touch?"

"From attention," Odette corrected, her thumb rubbing a slow, deliberate circle. Paul gritted his teeth. The humiliation was scalding. Isabelle’s exploring fingers on his thigh, Odette’s possessive manipulation, Sandrine’s wide-eyed fascination as he hardened under their hands. Yet, intertwined with the shame, was that undeniable, electric current: he was the centre of their attention. They were captivated. By him. It was a warped, dizzying form of worship.

Isabelle’s curiosity wasn’t sated. Her hand left his thigh and moved lower, past Sandrine’s tentative exploration. Her finger, blunt and unhesitating, pressed against his perineum. Paul flinched hard this time. "Steady," Isabelle murmured, her tone still that of an interested scientist. Her finger slid lower, probing, finding the tight furl of his anus. Paul froze, every muscle locking. He heard Sandrine’s soft intake of breath.

Isabelle applied gentle pressure. The intrusion was slight, just the very tip of her finger pressing against the resisting muscle, but it was a violation on a different level. Deeply intimate, utterly unexpected. "Tight here too," she observed clinically. She pressed a fraction more, and he gasped, a sharp sound of shock and unwelcome sensation. Sandrine’s eyes darted up to his face, her expression unreadable. Odette watched, her thumb still tracing idle circles on his now noticeably erect penis, a faint smile of dark amusement on her lips.

Isabelle withdrew her finger. "Interesting tension." She looked up at Paul, her gaze direct. "Ever had anything up there?"

Paul could only nod his head, mute. His face was burning. Sandrine chuckled “Oh Isabelle. You should have been here! We had a Champagne bottle up him.”

He was fully hard now, straining slightly, a traitorous response to the sheer overwhelm of sensation and exposure. Sandrine’s gaze had dropped back down, tracing the length of his erection with a look that was no longer just curiosity, but something deeper, almost… intrigued. Her fingers twitched as if she wanted to touch it again, but she held back.

Odette gave his erection a final, almost dismissive little squeeze before releasing him. She stood up, stretching languidly. "Well," she announced, her voice bright and satisfied, cutting through the charged silence. She surveyed Paul, naked and flushed, held in the gaze of the three clothed women. "I think we know the merchandise quite thoroughly now." Her green eyes swept over his rigid state. "And it seems the merchandise is… fully stocked and ready for display." Her smile widened, sharp and knowing. "Isn't it, Paul?"

Sandrine’s hand, warm and surprisingly steady, drifted lower. Her fingers grazed Paul’s inner thigh before closing gently around his scrotum, cupping the weight of his balls with a tentative curiosity. Her thumb brushed the taut skin. "They feel... heavier than I imagined," she murmured, almost to herself.

Isabelle leaned forward, elbows on her knees, her gaze fixed intently below Paul’s waist. "Odette," she asked, her voice hushed with fascination, "can we see it? The finish? When he comes?" She gestured vaguely towards Paul’s erect cock, bobbing slightly with his pulse.

"Of course you can, darling," Odette replied, waving a dismissive hand as she settled back onto the chaise. She fixed Paul with those piercing green eyes. "Paul, do it. Show them properly. Wank for us."

A fresh wave of scalding embarrassment crashed over Paul. Standing naked, Sandrine’s hand still cradling his balls, Isabelle’s intense stare, Odette’s casual command – the exposure felt absolute. His instinct screamed to cover himself, flee the room. But their focus was magnetic. Their expressions weren’t mocking cruelty, but rapt, almost scientific fascination. Sandrine’s touch was exploratory, Isabelle’s gaze hungry for new data, Odette’s posture radiating possessive pride. This was Odette’s circle. Her absolute trust. And he was the centerpiece. Slowly, tentatively, his own hand moved. His fingers closed around his stiff shaft.

"Maintain eye contact with Isabelle, Paul," Odette instructed, her voice smooth as silk. "Let her see it all."

He lifted his gaze. Isabelle’s dark eyes locked onto his, wide and unblinking. The shame intensified, a physical heat crawling up his neck. He began to move his hand, a slow, tentative stroke. Isabelle watched, utterly absorbed, her lips parted slightly. Sandrine’s fingers still rested gently beneath, a grounding weight. He saw it in Isabelle's eyes: not judgment, but raw, captivated interest. A strange shift occurred within him. His modesty, his dignity – it didn't vanish; it flowed outwards, pouring into Isabelle’s open, accepting gaze. Under their silent, enthralled observation, the humiliation began to twist, transforming. He wasn't just exposed. He was admired. Worshipped in this most vulnerable, intimate act. His strokes grew firmer, more confident. His breath hitched.

He focused entirely on Isabelle’s face, on the complete absorption he saw there. Sandrine’s soft inhalation beside him was audible. The rhythmic sound of his own hand, the slick slide of skin on skin, filled the warm, lamplit room. Tension coiled tighter, a tangible wire pulled taut in his belly, his thighs. Isabelle leaned even closer, utterly mesmerized by the building intensity visible in his flushed skin, the throbbing vein along his shaft, the frantic rhythm of his hand. He felt powerful under that consuming gaze. Essential.

The climax ripped through him with shocking force. A guttural groan tore from his throat as his back arched. His release wasn't a gentle spill but a violent eruption. Semen shot out in thick, pearlescent ropes, arcing high through the air. One pulse, then another, then a third – each jet powerful, travelling an astonishing four, almost five feet across the polished wooden floorboards before landing with wet, distinct splatters near the edge of the rug. The sheer velocity, the distance, the messy reality of it hung in the air for a stunned second.

Sandrine gasped, jerking her hand back involuntarily. Isabelle recoiled slightly, her eyes wide with pure astonishment. "Merde!" she breathed, staring at the glistening streaks on the wood. "Did you see that? The force! Like a bloody geyser!"

Sandrine nodded, utterly transfixed by the evidence on the floor. "Incredible," she whispered, a blend of shock and undeniable awe in her voice. She looked back at Paul, her dark eyes reflecting something new – a profound, slightly dazed respect for the sheer physicality she'd just witnessed. Odette simply smiled, a slow, satisfied curve of her lips, watching the sisters process the raw power of her obedient instrument. Paul stood trembling, catching his breath, the musk of sex thick in his nostrils, the echo of Isabelle’s stunned "Merde!" ringing in his ears.

The silence stretched, thick as the musk hanging in the warm room. Paul’s ragged breaths were the only sound besides the faint, startled echo of Isabelle’s curse still vibrating in the air. He stood utterly exposed, trembling slightly, the fading tremors of his climax warring with the raw burn of humiliation. His gaze remained locked on Isabelle’s astonished face, her dark eyes wide as saucers, still fixed on the impressive, if messy, evidence splattered across Odette’s polished floorboards.

Sandrine slowly lowered her gaze from the glistening streaks back to Paul. Her expression held pure, unadulterated awe. "Mon Dieu," she breathed, the sound barely more than an exhale. Her dark fingers, which had instinctively recoiled during his eruption, drifted back downwards. They brushed the inside of his thigh, tentative at first, then returned to cradle his scrotum, her touch curious, exploratory. She gently rolled his balls in her palm, her brow furrowing slightly. "They feel... the same," she murmured, a note of scientific surprise in her voice. "After all that force. Still heavy. Still warm." She looked up, meeting his eyes, then turned her head towards the Dubois sisters. "I want to feel it," she said, her voice gaining a sudden, quiet strength. "Inside me. That... power. All of it. While it’s happening." Her gaze shifted between Odette and Isabelle. "Could I? Could I have Paul inside me? Just... to feel it?"

The request hung in the air, stark and direct. Paul felt a fresh wave of heat flood his face, his semi-hardness deflating further under the weight of Sandrine’s words and the sisters' considering silence. Isabelle leaned back slightly, her expression shifting from shock to thoughtful appraisal. She looked at Sandrine, her girlfriend, then at Paul’s diminishing erection, then finally at Odette. Odette, perched on the chaise, had been watching the unfolding request with a small, knowing smile. She uncrossed her legs.

"Well," Odette said, her voice smooth, laced with amusement. "He is mine, Sandrine. That cock answers to me." She paused, letting the ownership settle. "But..." She flicked her gaze towards Isabelle, who gave a small, almost imperceptible nod. "You are family now. Isabelle’s love. So…" She waved a dismissive hand, the diamond on her finger catching the lamplight. "Why not? Family shares, non?"

Isabelle nodded definitively. "We are family. It’s settled." She offered Sandrine an encouraging smile. "Go ahead, Sandy. Feel it."

A soft giggle escaped Odette. She covered her mouth, her green eyes sparkling with private amusement. "Oh, this will be interesting," she murmured, more to herself than anyone. "Very interesting." Paul knew that giggle. It was the sound she made when she held knowledge others didn't, the knowledge of his refractory period, the inevitable crash after that explosive peak. Sandrine and Isabelle, unused to male plumbing, were oblivious to the sudden logistical problem standing flaccid between them.

Sandrine beamed, a genuine, eager smile lighting up her face. She shifted forward onto her knees, her hand still gently cupping Paul’s balls. Her thumb rubbed lightly over the loose skin. "Thank you," she breathed, looking at Odette, then Isabelle, her eyes bright. "Okay, Paul," she said, turning her full attention back to him, her voice soft but determined. "How do we...?" She trailed off, her gaze flicking down towards his groin, then back up to his face, a flicker of uncertainty replacing her eagerness. Her confident request seemed to falter slightly in the face of the immediate physical reality. Her fingers tightened reflexively around him, seeking reassurance, confirmation. And she felt it. She felt the slight shift, the subtle but undeniable softening, the retreat. Her brow furrowed again, deeper this time, confusion clouding the excitement in her dark eyes. "It's... changing?" she murmured, her voice laced with bewilderment. She looked up at Paul, then over at the sisters, her expression openly questioning. "He’s going soft?"

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