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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 6: Scent Marked

The silence stretched, thick and heavy as velvet. Odette stood over Paul, the glass of water cool in her hand, her gaze sweeping the length of his naked form curled on her expensive carpet. Moonlight painted silver streaks across his shoulders, the defined muscles of his back tapering down to narrow hips. His stillness was deliberate, an act of defiance masquerading as submission. She saw the tension in the line of his jaw, the faint tremor in the hand tucked beneath his head. He wasn’t asleep. He was waiting. The scent of her own arousal, mingled faintly with his sweat and the lingering tang of carpet fibre, hung in the air between them. Good dog, she’d called him. And here he lay, like one. But dogs didn’t usually refuse to leave. This was something else. Something… interesting.

She took another slow sip, the water doing little to quench the low, curious heat his presence stirred. Her earlier orgasm, wrung from her sweaty, demanding cunt by his devoted tongue, still hummed faintly in her nerves, leaving her body languid but her mind sharp. She let the silence build, watching the subtle rise and fall of his ribs, the way the light caught the curve of his arse. He was hard. Of course he was. The thick root of his cock pressed visibly against his inner thigh, a dark promise beneath the shadows. The sight sent a fresh pulse of heat down her own spine.

Finally, she lowered the glass. The soft clink on the marble side table was startlingly loud. Paul flinched, a minute tightening of his shoulders, but didn’t turn. Odette stepped onto the plush carpet, her bare feet silent. She closed the distance until she stood directly beside his prone form. Slowly, deliberately, she let her gaze travel from the vulnerable nape of his neck, down the groove of his spine, over the taut swell of his buttock, to rest on the thick erection nestled against his leg. He held his breath; she could see the muscles in his back lock.

Then, without a word, she crouched beside him. Her robe fell open slightly, revealing the pale swell of one breast, the shadowed dip of her navel. She reached out, not for his shoulder, not for his arm. Her fingers, cool from the glass, brushed the sensitive skin just behind his balls. He gasped, a sharp intake of air muffled against his arm. She let her fingertips trail lightly upwards, tracing the prominent vein on the underside of his cock, the touch feather-light but utterly deliberate. He shuddered violently, a full-body spasm that rocked him against the carpet. His cock twitched, swelling impossibly harder beneath her touch.

"No," he choked out, the word thick with desperation, fear, and something else – a plea? "Odette…"

She ignored him. Her hand closed, not gently, around the thick base of his erection. Her fingers were cool, her grip firm and unyielding. His cock was hot steel in her palm, pulsing against her skin. He made another strangled sound, half-moan, half-sob. She tightened her grasp slightly, feeling the powerful throb of his blood, the rigid heat. Then, she stood up.

She didn't pull him roughly. It wasn't a yank. It was a command transmitted through her grip. She led him. By his cock. He scrambled, awkward and graceless under the strange leverage, onto his knees and then to his feet, his body following the insistent pressure of her hand. He was taller, broader, yet utterly controlled by her hold on the most sensitive part of him. His face was flushed, eyes wide, pupils dilated black with shock and overwhelming arousal. He looked down at her hand wrapped possessively around his straining shaft, then up at her face, searching for… something. Mercy? Instruction? She offered nothing but cool appraisal.

"Move," she said, her voice low and utterly calm. She gave his cock a small, authoritative tug towards her bedroom door.

He stumbled a step, then another, his legs unsteady. His hands hung uselessly at his sides. Every step sent a jolt through the sensitive flesh gripped in her hand, a reminder of his helplessness, his exposure. The walk across the living room, past the French posters that suddenly seemed voyeuristic, felt endless. The thick carpet gave way to cool wood, then to the softer pile of her bedroom rug. Moonlight streamed through the large window here too, illuminating the vast bed with its crisp white sheets.

She led him directly to the side of the bed. "Get in," she instructed, her hand still firmly wrapped around his cock, guiding him awkwardly as he climbed onto the high mattress. "Lie down. On your side. Facing away from me."

He obeyed, moving clumsily under her guidance, settling onto the cool cotton sheets. He lay on his side, curled slightly, presenting his back to her and the room beyond. His cock, still held firmly in her grasp, jutted outwards. She released him only to climb in behind him, the mattress dipping under her weight. The scent of clean linen and her expensive shower gel enveloped them, momentarily overlaying the muskier scents clinging to their skin.

Paul lay rigid, every muscle tensed. The cool sheets against his front contrasted violently with the heat radiating from his back where Odette now pressed close. He could feel the soft warmth of her body, the outline of her breasts against his shoulder blades, the curve of her hip against his lower back. Her breath feathered against the nape of his neck. The proximity was excruciating. He craved to turn, to crush her against him, to bury his aching cock deep in the wet heat he knew awaited him. He trembled, the need a physical pain in his gut, in his balls, concentrated fiercely in the thick length trapped against his thigh.

Then her hand snaked around his hip. Not tentative, not exploratory. Purposeful. Her fingers found his cock again, still rock-hard, slick with pre-come. They closed around the shaft, just below the swollen head, in the same firm, proprietorial grip she’d used to lead him. She didn't stroke. She didn't move her hand at all. She simply held. Tight. Immobile. Her palm pressed against the underside of his cockhead, her fingers curled around the shaft like a vise.

He groaned, a deep, guttural sound torn from his chest. The grip was exquisite torture. Constricting. Dominating. Holding him at the very peak of arousal without offering release. "Fuck... Odette..." he gasped, his hips twitching involuntarily, trying to push into that stationary hand, seeking friction, release, anything. "Please... need... need to fuck you."

Her lips brushed his ear. Her voice was a low, cool murmur that sent shivers down his spine. "No." The word was absolute. Final. "Not tonight." She shifted slightly, nestling her body more comfortably against his back. He could feel the warmth of her mound pressed lightly against his arse. The promise was unbearable. "Tonight, you sleep," she continued, her breath hot on his neck. "I have plans for when we fuck. Specific plans. You'll wait." Her fingers tightened fractionally around his shaft, emphasizing her control. "Hold him still, Paul. Don't move."

She relaxed against him, her body going soft against his tense form. Her breathing evened out almost immediately, a slow, deep rhythm that spoke of settling into sleep. Her hand, however, remained locked around his cock. An anchor. A cage.

Paul lay frozen. The pressure of her hand was relentless. He could feel every pulse of his own desperate heartbeat thrumming in the trapped flesh. The heat of her palm, the unyielding grip, the maddening proximity of her body – it was a sensory overload designed to torment. Sleep? Impossible. His mind raced, fragmented images flashing: her foot grinding against him in his office, the slick strings in the video, the overpowering salt-musk taste of her on his tongue, the dismissive click of her bedroom door. And now this. This agonizing suspension. Her plans. What fucking plans? The uncertainty gnawed at him, feeding the fire of his arousal.

He tried to regulate his breathing, to match hers, but each inhale felt tight, each exhale a shuddering release. His cock throbbed violently against the prison of her fingers, a desperate, trapped animal. Pre-come seeped steadily, slicking her grip, making the confinement feel even more intimate, more humiliating. He wanted to buck his hips, to grind against her hand, to force some semblance of relief. But her command echoed: Hold him still. Don't move.

Paul fought it. Every nerve screamed. Her grip was a branding iron, searing ownership into his throbbing flesh. Sleep felt like betrayal, surrender to this exquisite torment. Minutes bled into an agonizing hour, his cock a trapped beast against her motionless palm, her breath warm and even on his neck. Exhaustion eventually dragged him down into a shallow, restless sea, dreams fractured by the phantom pressure, the phantom scent of her demanding cunt.

He surfaced abruptly. Disoriented. Confusion fogged his brain, the unfamiliar softness of the bed, the weight beside him. Then the view registered. Blurred at first, swimming into focus inches from his face. Dark, damp curls. The intimate swell of plump outer lips. The deeper pink folds beneath, glistening faintly in the weak dawn light filtering through the blinds. Odette’s vulva hovered directly above him, a dominant, inescapable presence. He gasped, sucking in a startled breath.

Instantly, she dropped. Her whole weight settled onto his face. Soft, warm labia mashed against his mouth and nose, sealing him in. The intimate scent – slept-in musk, salt, the unique tang of her – flooded his senses, thick and cloying. She ground down, her plump flesh smothering him, demanding access. He choked, eyes watering, instinct overriding thought. His tongue shot out, pushing desperately between the slick folds, seeking the familiar heat of her hole.

“Mmmph! Fuck, yes!” Odette groaned above him, her voice thick with sleep and immediate pleasure. Her hips rolled, fucking his face, forcing his tongue deeper into her wet slit. “That’s it, Paul. Good boy.” He licked frantically, lapping at the soft, yielding entrance, tasting the concentrated essence of her night, salty and deep. Her clit bumped against his nose as she shifted. He sucked it hard, swirling his tongue, rewarded by her sharp gasp and the clench of her thighs against his ears. “Merde, you’re eager this morning,” she panted, grinding harder. “Such a hungry little pussy slave. Just what I wanted.” Her fingers tangled roughly in his hair, holding his head captive. “My eager little eater. Right where you belong. Don’t stop. Make me come on your fucking tongue.”

Odette’s weight pinned him completely, her cunt a hot, suffocating seal over his mouth and nose. Her slept-in musk, thick and potent, filled his lungs, a humid, salty-sweet fog that drowned all thought. He licked frantically, desperately, his tongue plunging deep into her slick channel, tasting the concentrated essence of her night – stale arousal mixed with a deeper, primal female tang. Her clit ground against his nose, demanding attention; he sucked it hard, swirling his tongue over the swollen nub, rewarded by her sharp gasp and the tightening vise of her thighs against his temples.

"Fuck! Just like that!" she moaned, her voice thick with sleep and burgeoning pleasure. Her hips rolled in a relentless, grinding rhythm, fucking his face with abandon, forcing his tongue deeper, demanding more. "Lick my filthy cunt, Paul. Clean it out. Get it all." Her fingers twisted painfully in his hair, anchoring his head, ensuring no escape. He obeyed, driven by instinct and the suffocating pressure, his tongue working furiously against her velvety inner walls, lapping at the gathering wetness. The taste was intense, complex – salt, musk, the faint metallic tang of her blood-rich flesh – overwhelming his senses, flooding his mouth, coating his throat.

He felt her inner muscles begin to flutter, a delicate tremor against his probing tongue. Her breathing hitched, becoming ragged gasps. "Yes... oh fuck, yes... right there... don't stop!" Her voice climbed, sharpening. Her grinding became frantic, desperate. Her thighs clamped impossibly tighter, muffling the world to the wet, obscene sounds of her cunt slapping against his face and his desperate slurping. He redoubled his efforts, focusing on her clit, sucking and flicking relentlessly.

Her climax hit like a tremor. A guttural cry tore from her throat, raw and unrestrained. Her whole body arched, pressing her cunt impossibly harder onto his mouth. Hot fluid gushed against his tongue, flooding his mouth with her sharp, tangy release. She shuddered violently, her hips jerking erratically against his face as wave after wave crashed through her. He swallowed convulsively, gulping down her spend, the taste exploding on his palate – intensely salty, musky, uniquely her. He kept licking, gentler now, lapping at her trembling folds as aftershocks rippled through her.

Slowly, her trembling subsided. Her grip on his hair loosened slightly, but she didn’t lift herself off. Instead, she shifted her weight, grinding her soaked, swollen pussy deliberately across his face. She dragged her slick labia over his cheeks, his forehead, his chin, painting him with her wetness. The thick, viscous fluid, warm and sticky, smeared across his skin, mingling with his own sweat and saliva. She rubbed herself against him thoroughly, possessively, ensuring every inch of his face was coated.

"Sale chien," she murmured, her voice husky and satisfied, still breathless. She lifted herself slightly, just enough to look down at his glistening, debauched face. Her green eyes held a predatory gleam. "Look at you. Covered in me." She ran her fingers through the mess on his cheeks, gathering the slick mixture, then deliberately wiped it across his lips. "You wear me well." She finally shifted her weight fully off him, kneeling back on the bed, surveying her handiwork.

Paul gasped for air, his lungs burning, his face dripping, plastered with her thick, musky essence. The scent was overpowering, clinging to his skin, invading his nostrils. He felt branded. Utterly claimed.

"Not a drop washed off," Odette commanded, her tone brooking no argument. She swung her legs off the bed, standing naked and magnificent in the dawn light. She pointed a finger at him, her gaze sharp. "You go to work like that. You smell of me all day. Every fucking meeting, every fucking conference call." A cruel smile touched her lips. "Let them wonder what you’ve been doing. Let them smell pussy on you."

Paul stared at the closed bathroom door, his face still damp, sticky, glistening with Odette’s thick, sour-sweet musk. Her command echoed – Not a drop washed off. The humiliation was a physical weight, pressing down alongside the throb of his untouched cock. He heard the shower start, the hiss of water a cruel counterpoint to the visceral residue coating his skin, his lips. He touched his cheek; the viscous fluid stretched, clinging to his fingers. The scent filled his nostrils: slept-in cunt, salt, dominance. It was branding. He trembled, less from shame now, more from the raw, unspent tension coiling tighter in his gut, his balls heavy and aching.

Odette emerged from the steamy bathroom wrapped in a towel, her dark hair slicked back, skin flushed pink. The clean scent of soap and expensive body wash briefly cut through Paul’s personal musk cloud. She moved efficiently, gathering underwear, selecting a tailored charcoal suit from her wardrobe. Her gaze, sharp and assessing as ever, swept over him. He stood frozen near the bed, naked except for the sheen of her dried arousal on his face. The sight of her, fresh and crisp, intensified his own sense of grimy exposure. And then her eyes dropped. Lower.

There it was. Unmistakable. Defiant. His cock stood rigid, thick and flushed dark, curving slightly upwards against his belly. Precum beaded at the slit, a clear, glistening promise of pressure. It pulsed visibly, almost imperiously, demanding attention. He saw her eyes darken, a flicker of pure, predatory hunger flashing in the green depths. Her lips parted slightly. She took a half-step towards him, the towel gaping slightly at her chest. The air crackled. He could almost taste her sudden, sharp desire – the urge to shove him back onto the bed, to impale herself on that hard length, to ride him until he screamed. His breath hitched, anticipation a live wire.

"Fuck," she breathed, the word low and rough, her gaze locked on his straining erection. "Look at that fucking weapon." Her tongue darted out, wetting her lower lip. She took another step, close enough now for him to feel the warmth radiating from her towel-damp skin. Her hand lifted, fingers twitching, aching to close around that hot shaft. He braced himself, cock jerking in anticipation. "Christ, I want to feel you split me open right now," she murmured, her voice thick. Her fingers finally brushed the swollen head, gathering the slick bead of precum, smearing it down his length with a possessive stroke. He groaned, hips bucking forward instinctively.

Then she stopped. Her hand retreated. She closed her eyes for a second, taking a sharp, deliberate breath. When she opened them, the raw hunger was banked, replaced by a cool, resolute control. "No," she stated, the single word slicing through the tension. "Not yet." A small, knowing smile touched her lips. "My plans. Remember?" She traced a fingertip along his jawline, deliberately collecting a smear of her own dried slick. "But," she added, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial purr, her eyes drifting back down to his cock, "you did swallow my filthy cunt juice last night. And you held still like I told you." Her gaze travelled slowly back up his body, meeting his eyes. "You deserve... a little reward." A thrill shot through him, warring with the sting of denial. Reward? His cock throbbed in agreement.

She dropped the towel. Naked again, magnificent, she moved with fluid grace. Pushing him firmly backwards, she guided him until his legs hit the edge of the bed. "Sit," she commanded. He obeyed, lowering himself, his erection jutting obscenely upwards. Without preamble, she sank to her knees on the plush rug between his spread legs. Her green eyes locked onto his cock, mere inches from her face. The hunger was back, sharp and focused. She inhaled deeply, the scent of his arousal mingling with her own lingering traces on his skin. "Such a pretty cock, Paul," she murmured, her voice husky. "All hard and leaking just for me." She leaned closer, her breath a warm caress on the sensitive head. "Mine."

Then she took him. Not tentatively, not slowly. She opened her mouth wide, leaned forward, and engulfed the entire swollen head in one smooth, wet slide. The heat, the sudden, shocking tightness of her mouth, the slick velvet glide of her tongue swirling over his sensitive ridge – it punched a desperate groan from his chest. "Oh, FUCK, Odette!" Her name was a prayer, a curse. Her eyes flicked up to his, holding his gaze as her lips stretched tight around his girth. She sucked, hard, creating a delicious, pulling vacuum that made his toes curl. Her tongue worked relentlessly underneath, probing his slit, licking the sensitive frenulum, tracing every pulsing vein.

"Yeah, that's it," she mumbled around his cock, the vibrations sending jolts straight to his core. Her hand wrapped around the base, squeezing firmly, matching the rhythm of her sucking mouth. She pulled back slowly, her lips dragging along his shaft, then plunged down again, taking him deeper this time, her throat opening, accepting more. He could feel the head bumping the back of her throat. She didn't gag. She swallowed around him. The rhythmic contraction was incredible, a hot, wet massage. "Suck me," he begged, his voice shredded, hands fisting the duvet. "Oh God, suck me, Odette, please!"

She did. Her head began to bob with increasing speed and purpose, her mouth a hot, wet vice. Slurping sounds filled the room – wet, obscene, undeniable. Her free hand cupped his balls, rolling the tight sac gently, then squeezing, sending sharp bursts of pleasure-pain radiating upwards. Her eyes remained locked on his face, watching every wince, every gasp, every flicker of desperation. "Gonna make you come," she stated, pulling off for a second, a thick string of saliva connecting her lips to his glistening cock. "Gonna swallow every fucking drop, Paul." Her tongue lashed out, long and flat, licking the length of his shaft from base to tip, lapping up the copious precum. "You earned it, fucking my face with your tongue all morning." She took him back in, deep, sucking hard, hollowing her cheeks. Her rhythm became relentless, almost brutal.

The pressure built like a tsunami, unstoppable, concentrated in his balls, his cock, the base of his spine. Her suction was perfect, demanding, her tongue a relentless velvet torment. He felt the familiar, terrifying tightening, the point of no surrender rushing towards him. "Odette... I'm... I'm gonna...!" he choked out, his hips lifting off the bed, driving deeper into her mouth.

She didn't pull away. She sucked harder, her head bobbing furiously, her throat working, swallowing around him. She looked up, her eyes blazing into his, commanding him, willing him to explode. The visual, the sensation – her intense gaze, the obscene wet sounds, the incredible heat and pressure – shattered him.

He came with a ragged shout that tore from his chest. Thick, hot ropes of semen erupted from his cock, directly into the sucking heat of her mouth. Pulse after pulse, a deep, gut-wrenching release that shuddered through his entire frame. "FUCK! YES!" Odette moaned around him, the sound vibrating along his oversensitive shaft. She sucked fiercely, greedily, her throat working, swallowing convulsively. He could feel each gulp, feel his seed disappearing down her throat as she milked him dry. She didn't miss a drop. Her tongue swept and licked, cleaning the sensitive head, ensuring every last spurt was captured.

Finally, when the last tremor subsided and he lay panting, utterly drained, she pulled off slowly. Her lips were slick, swollen. She ran her tongue over them deliberately, collecting a stray, pearly bead. She swallowed. "Mmm," she hummed, a deep, satisfied sound. "Delicious." She pushed herself up from her knees, her movements languid, powerful. She looked down at him, sprawled bonelessly on the edge of the bed, his cock softening, glistening. Her expression was one of pure, feline satisfaction. "Now," she said, her voice crisp, businesslike once more, though a wicked gleam remained in her eyes. "Get dressed. And remember…" She leaned close, her lips brushing his sticky cheek. "You wear my scent all day." She straightened, turning towards her discarded clothes. "I'll see you at chambers. Don't be late."

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