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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 34: Breakfast

The morning sun streamed through the large windows of Camilla’s Cafe, painting stripes of light across the red-and-white checked tablecloths. The air buzzed with the cheerful clatter of cutlery, the hiss of the espresso machine, and the murmur of a dozen breakfast conversations. Scents of strong coffee, buttery croissants, and frying bacon tangled together, a world away from the musk and woodsmoke of Paul’s townhouse the night before.

Odette perched on the edge of her chair, radiating energy despite the late hours. Her dark pixie hair was perfectly tousled, green eyes bright. "Maman will faint," she declared, tapping her phone screen where a picture of an impossibly sleek, minimalist Parisian wedding dress glowed. "Absolutely faint. She thinks I only own suits." She nudged Isabelle, who sat beside her looking remarkably recovered, a soft flush on her cheeks, attacking a pain au chocolat with gusto. Sandrine, opposite her, nursed a large black coffee, her dark eyes observing the room with a slightly weary amusement.

"It is… striking," Isabelle conceded, licking chocolate from her thumb. "Very you, Odette. Hardly a ruffle in sight. Severe." She grinned. "Papa will cry." She flicked a glance towards Paul, who sat next to Odette, meticulously spreading jam on toast. "Are you crying yet, Paul?"

Paul managed a small, tight smile. "Reserving it for the ceremony." His gaze kept flicking to the cafe counter, where Camilla was deftly handling orders. The memory of the previous night – the utter exhaustion, the tangled limbs, the profound, unsettling intimacy – felt like a film reel playing just behind his eyes. Sitting here, surrounded by normalcy and croissants, felt surreal. Vulnerable.

Sandrine leaned back, stretching her long arms. "Speaking of ceremonies," she said, her voice low and rich, a deliberate counterpoint to the cafe's brightness. "The hen party, Odette. Have you given it thought? After…" She paused, swirling her coffee. "After Wednesday… with Clarissa and Nadia…" She arched an eyebrow meaningfully. "I imagine expectations are quite high. Mine certainly are." A slow, knowing smile spread across her face. "Intensity is… guaranteed."

Odette’s eyes sparkled with dark delight. "Oh, Sandy, darling. Intensity is merely the starter. We aim for… obliteration." She traced the rim of her coffee cup with a fingertip. "Astrid’s already planning. You remember Astrid? Tall Dutch? Knows Jamie? She has ideas." The way she said 'ideas' sent a prickle down Paul’s spine, unrelated to the hen party. He remembered Astrid vaguely – imposing, blonde, radiating a calm, terrifying competence.

"Jamie?" Sandrine’s eyebrow climbed higher. "The one with the… collection?"

"The very same." Odette’s smile was feline. "It promises to be… memorable."

The cafe door jingled. Astrid walked in. Tall, effortlessly elegant in a crisp linen shirt and trousers, her blonde hair pulled back in a severe knot, she scanned the room. Her gaze landed on their table, and a small, enigmatic smile touched her lips as she made her way over. Introductions were murmured – Astrid, Isabelle, Sandrine – hands shaken with cool efficiency.

"Odette," Astrid said, her voice low and precise. "A word? About next weekend’s… procurement." Her eyes flickered towards Paul, then away, dismissing him as irrelevant to the conversation.

"Of course." Odette slid out of her seat gracefully. "Back in a flash. Sandy, order me another espresso, s’il te plaît?" She followed Astrid towards a quieter corner near the pastry display, their heads already bent close, speaking in rapid, hushed tones. Astrid gestured subtly with long fingers.

Paul focused on his toast, the strawberry jam suddenly cloying. He could feel Sandrine and Isabelle’s eyes on him, a shared, unspoken understanding passing between the sisters. Isabelle reached across the table, patting his hand. "Breathe, Paul. It’s just breakfast."

Sandrine chuckled softly. "For now."

Camilla approached the table then, balancing a fresh pot of coffee. She was petite, her dark curls escaping a messy bun, her cheeks flushed from the kitchen heat. Her apron was dusted with flour. "Refill?" she offered brightly, her gaze sweeping the table, lingering just a fraction longer on Odette’s empty seat, then moving to Paul. Her dark eyes met his, direct and holding a spark of something that wasn't just professional courtesy.

"Please, Camilla," Sandrine said, pushing her cup forward. "For Odette too, when she returns."

"Of course." Camilla poured smoothly, her movements economical. Her hip brushed gently against Paul’s shoulder as she leaned in to refill Isabelle’s cup. It wasn't accidental. He felt the warmth of her through his shirt, the slight pressure. She smelled like coffee beans and warm sugar.

As she straightened, her hand, holding the coffee pot, rested for a moment on the back of Paul’s chair. She leaned down, ostensibly to adjust a napkin dispander, her lips close to his ear. Her breath was warm, carrying the scent of cinnamon. Her voice, pitched so low only he could hear, was a husky murmur that bypassed his ears and went straight to his spine.

"Later," she breathed. Her words were a soft, urgent demand. "Not now. But soon. Your tongue." A pause, loaded. "My pussy. I need it." She didn't wait for a reaction, didn't look at him. She straightened up, her smile bright and professional again. "Anything else, ladies? More pastries?"

Camilla’s bright smile faltered slightly as Paul’s hand shot out, catching her wrist just above the coffee pot handle. His touch wasn’t rough, but it was firm, arresting her movement. She froze, eyes widening, darting nervously towards Isabelle and Sandrine. Sandrine merely sipped her coffee, watching with detached curiosity. Isabelle paused mid-bite, chocolate smudging her lip.

"You needn't whisper, Camilla," Paul stated, his voice clear, cutting through the cafe chatter. It wasn't loud, but it carried, deliberate. He released her wrist. "They know." He gestured casually towards Isabelle and Sandrine. "They know exactly what I am." He pushed his chair back, the scrape loud on the tiled floor. Standing, he addressed Isabelle directly. "I'll only be a few minutes." His gaze flicked to Sandrine, who gave a barely perceptible nod, her dark eyes unreadable.

Camilla stared, her cheeks flushing crimson. Scandalized heat warred with a thrilling, naughty excitement that widened her eyes. "Paul!" she hissed, glancing frantically around the bustling cafe. "Here? Now?" Her voice trembled, caught between outrage and a giddy disbelief at his sheer audacity. The openness of it, the casual dismissal of secrecy, sent a jolt straight to her core. He simply gestured towards the narrow hallway leading to the tiny staff toilet and storeroom. "After you."

The storeroom was cramped, smelling of coffee grounds and cleaning fluid. Shelves laden with supplies lined the walls. Camilla leaned back against a stack of flour sacks, her breath coming fast. Paul dropped to his knees without preamble, his hands pushing her simple cotton skirt up her thighs. Her knickers were damp, darkening the thin fabric. He hooked his thumbs into the waistband, pulling them down her legs. She stepped out, kicking them aside.

He pressed his face into her immediately, his tongue finding her slick heat with practiced efficiency. Camilla gasped, her head thumping back against the sacks, fingers tangling in his hair. "Oh, god," she breathed, her hips lifting instinctively. The coarse burlap scratched her bare skin. "Paul… fuck… yes." His tongue worked steadily, broad strokes followed by focused flicks. The muffled sounds of the cafe – clinking cups, distant voices – filtered through the thin door, heightening the illicit thrill.

"Have you…" Camilla panted, her voice thick, "…done this… for all of them?" Her fingers tightened in his hair, pulling his face harder against her. "All the women… at the table?" She meant Isabelle, Sandrine, Astrid… Odette.

Paul didn't lift his head. His muffled voice vibrated against her flesh. "Yes." The single word was definitive, matter-of-fact.

Camilla moaned, low and deep. The confirmation was electric. "How many?" Her voice was sharper now, demanding. "How many… have you fucked?" Her hips rolled, grinding against his mouth.

Paul paused, lifting his head just enough to speak clearly, his chin glistening. "Only Odette." A beat. "And Sandrine." He returned to his task, his tongue delving deeper.

Camilla let out a sharp, breathless snigger. The dominance implicit in that knowledge – that every woman at that breakfast table knew his taste, knew his submission, knew his skill, and that only two had taken him fully – was intoxicating. Power surged through her, hot and sweet. "Oh, Paul," she sighed, almost pityingly, yet utterly triumphant. "You belong to all of us now, don't you?" Her thighs clamped around his head, holding him prisoner. "Every single one."

The pressure built swiftly, intensely. His tongue, relentless, knew exactly where to press, how to flick. The image of Isabelle, Sandrine, Odette – all knowing, all possessing this secret power over the handsome, composed barrister – fused with the physical sensation. Camilla’s back arched sharply off the sacks. A choked cry escaped her, stifled by her own hand clapped over her mouth as her body convulsed, pulsing against Paul’s unwavering mouth. Wave after wave crashed over her, leaving her trembling, breathless, utterly spent.

Paul remained still, letting her ride out the aftershocks, his face buried against her. Only when her trembling subsided did he move. Slowly, meticulously, his tongue cleaned her, lapping up every trace of her release, leaving her skin cool and damp. He pulled back, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. Camilla sagged against the sacks, her legs shaky, her skirt still bunched around her waist. She watched him, dazed, a satisfied, slightly dazed smile playing on her lips.

He stood, adjusting his trousers. He handed her the discarded knickers. Wordlessly, she stepped into them, pulling her skirt down. She smoothed her apron, ran a hand through her messy curls. Paul opened the storeroom door a crack, checking the hallway. It was empty. He gestured for her to go first.

They walked back into the cafe proper. The breakfast rush had eased slightly. Odette was back at the table, deep in conversation with Astrid, pointing at something on her phone. Isabelle was finishing her pastry. Sandrine watched their approach, her expression unreadable. Camilla’s cheeks were still flushed, but she held her head high, a new confidence in her stride. She headed straight for the coffee machine, busying herself.

Paul slid back into his seat beside Odette. He picked up his cold toast, took a deliberate bite. Odette glanced at him, then at Camilla behind the counter. A knowing, amused glint sparked in her green eyes. She didn’t ask. She simply reached over, squeezed his thigh briefly, possessively, then turned back to Astrid.

Odette squeezed his thigh, that brief pressure radiating ownership, then refocused on Astrid beside her, their heads close over the phone screen. Sunlight glinted off the blonde Dutchwoman's severe knot. "The venue confirmed the late license," Astrid murmured, her voice precise and low, a counterpoint to the cafe's cheerful clatter. "Jamie’s equipment requires… specific power outlets." Her long finger tapped the screen meaningfully. "We’ll need a site visit."

"Perfect," Odette purred, her green eyes glinting with dark anticipation. "Obliteration requires infrastructure." She glanced up as Camilla approached, delivering Odette’s fresh espresso with a professional smile that didn't quite reach her eyes. Camilla’s gaze flickered to Paul, a subtle flush lingering on her cheeks before she retreated to the counter.

Sandrine stirred her coffee, the spoon clinking softly. "This obliteration," she began, her tone deceptively casual, "it sounds… demanding. On resources." Her dark eyes flicked to Paul, then away. "Especially the human ones." Isabelle snorted softly into her pain au chocolat, kicking Sandrine lightly under the table. A silent understanding passed between the sisters.

Astrid followed Sandrine’s gaze. Her cool, blue eyes rested on Paul with a sudden, appraising intensity. It wasn't lust, not exactly. More like evaluating a tool for a specific task. Odette noticed. A slow, knowing smile spread across her face. She leaned back in her chair, the picture of relaxed control. "Did you want a turn?" Odette asked Astrid, her voice clear, cutting through the breakfast hum. It wasn't really a question.

Astrid’s lips curved into a small, satisfied smile. "Of course I do." She closed her phone decisively and stood, smoothing her crisp linen trousers. "Come, Paul." Her command was calm, absolute. Paul felt the familiar shift in the air, the sudden pressure, the eyes of the entire table – Odette amused, Isabelle curious, Sandrine watchful – on him. He pushed his chair back, the scrape loud in his ears.

Astrid led him not towards the cramped storeroom, but to a quieter corner near the cafe's entrance, partially shielded by a large, leafy potted plant. The scent of damp earth mingled with coffee grounds. She leaned back against the cool tile wall, her height forcing Paul to look up slightly even as he sank to his knees before her. Her expression was impassive, professional.

With efficient movements, she undid the button and zip of her trousers, sliding them and her simple cotton underwear down just enough to expose her. The stark white string of a tampon dangled prominently from her neatly trimmed blonde curls. Paul’s breath hitched. He knew the rules implicitly now. His task wasn't exploration or penetration. It was specific, focused, utilitarian. He pressed his mouth against her, ignoring the intimate evidence of her cycle, bypassing everything to find the small, hard nub beneath its hood with unerring accuracy. His tongue began its work: firm, rhythmic circles, unvarying pressure.

Astrid let out a soft sigh above him, a sound of relief rather than ecstasy. Her hand came down, not to guide him, but to rest possessively on the back of his head, fingers tangling in his hair, holding him in place. Her hips pushed forward minutely, demanding more contact. Paul focused solely on the point of sensation, shutting out the scent of blood mingling with her natural musk, the texture of the cotton string brushing his cheek. He concentrated on the flutter of response beneath his tongue, the slight tightening of her thighs against his ears. It was clinical. Purposeful. He worked her steadily, relentlessly, detaching himself from the act, becoming merely an instrument.

Her breathing deepened, became rhythmic. The hand in his hair tightened, knuckles whitening. A low, controlled hum vibrated in her throat, a sound of concentrated effort rather than abandon. Then, a single, sharp intake of breath. Her body tensed, held rigid for a moment against the tile wall. Her release was silent, intense, a shudder that seemed contained entirely within her core. The pressure against his mouth eased. He kept licking, gentler now, until her grip on his hair loosened.

"Enough," Astrid stated, her voice remarkably steady, only slightly breathless. She pushed his head back gently but firmly. Paul pulled away, wiping his mouth with the back of his hand. Astrid efficiently smoothed her underwear and trousers back into place, the tampon string vanishing from sight. She looked down at him, still kneeling, a faint sheen of sweat on his brow. "Satisfactory," she pronounced, offering no praise, simply an assessment. "Back to the table."

The clatter of the cafe seemed louder as they returned. Odette was showing Sandrine something on her phone. Isabelle was sipping her orange juice. Astrid slid into her seat, collected, composed, as if returning from the restroom. Paul sat down beside Odette, the ghost of Astrid’s taste – copper and salt and musk – faint on his lips. He reached for his cold coffee, needing the bitter distraction.

Astrid picked up her own cup, took a sip. Her gaze swept the table, lingering briefly on Odette, then Paul. "He's very precise," she remarked casually, setting her cup down. "Got the job done efficiently." She paused, then added, her tone conversational, as if discussing the coffee, "I’m on at the moment, I’ve got a tampon in. Next time, though?" She looked directly at Odette. "I'll want his tongue right up inside me."

Odette’s head turned to look at Astrid, her green eyes wide with genuine surprise. Her gaze flicked to Paul, whose stomach instantly clenched into a hard, nauseated knot. He saw the implications instantly: the tampon string, the blood, Astrid’s matter-of-fact request.

Odette’s surprise melted into a spark of possessive challenge. "Next time?" she echoed, her voice dangerously smooth. She leaned forward slightly, her gaze locked on Astrid. "Why wait? If you want it inside, he’ll do it. Right now. He'll lick it all out." Her hand landed possessively on Paul's thigh, fingers digging in. "Every drop. And swallow it. Won't you, Paul?" The challenge wasn't just to Astrid; it was to him. A test. A command wrapped in velvet.

Paul felt the colour drain from his face. His stomach churned violently. The image Astrid conjured – probing deep inside her, gathering the thick, metallic fluid – filled his mouth with phantom sourness. He stared straight ahead, unable to move, unable to speak. The silence stretched. All four women were looking at him: Odette with fierce expectation, Astrid with cool assessment, Isabelle with horrified fascination, Sandrine with an unreadable, watchful intensity. Disgust warred with a strange, twisted admiration for his submission, and a raw, uncomfortable intrigue about the limits of it.

Astrid watched Paul’s pallor, the minute tremor in his hands gripping the coffee cup. A slow, thoughtful smile touched her lips. She picked up her fork, speared a piece of abandoned fruit from Isabelle’s plate. "Tempting," she conceded, her voice calm once more. "Very tempting, Odette. Maybe next time though." She popped the fruit into her mouth, chewed deliberately.

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