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The Taste of Commitment

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Odette, a gamine, coquettish French woman working in London has known Paul has a crush on her for some time. Paul is a handsome and gentlemanly Englisman, but very reserved and unsure of his own appeal. They flirt but Paul is never sure enough to make his move. So Odette decides to give him the opportunity to start a physical relationship by making him her personal pussy licker. Paul is delighted by this and tells Odette that there are no circumstances where he wouldn’t be delighted to eat her out…so Odette decides to test his claim.

Characters

  • Waitress — A young French waitress in her mid-twenties with dark hair in a bun and sharp eyes. She saw a video of Paul and wants him to go down on her.
  • Suzette — Suzette is a blonde haired woman in her late twenties. Her blonde hair is cut into a severe bob. Her whole manner and demeanour is that of a very strict school teacher, unsmiling, professional, she has a job to do and high standards which she expects to be met. Suzette is one of Clarissa’s harem of
  • Tim — Tim is one of Clarissa’s harem of staff. He helps arrange sex parties for Clarissa and helps Suzette deal with the sex slaves, he is quite soft and kind in his manner.
  • Amber — A woman with auburn hair and enormous, perfect breasts, bound and gagged in the room where Paul is placed.
  • Milly — A woman who was subjected to the trestle and ginger at Clarissa's party. She cried in the bathroom afterward but returned. She is married and will return home on Sunday with marks still on her. She has been trained so that she can only cum while being whipped, even though she hates and fears the whi

Chapter 53: Anonymous Pleasures

Sleep came not as a reprieve, but as a silent, forced withdrawal. Unlike the previous night—a sweaty, exhausting marathon with Hayley on this very bed—the darkness was unbroken. Odette’s command, delivered via text before she silenced her phone, was absolute: ‘You will not come. You will not even touch yourself. I want you to wake up aching for me, and know you are still mine to deny.’

He had obeyed.He always obeyed.

Paul woke to a grey London light filtering through the heavy velvet curtains. His consciousness returned not peacefully, but with a violent, throbbing insistence between his legs. He was achingly hard, his cock trapped and straining against the soft cotton of his pyjama bottoms, a dull, urgent pulse radiating from his full balls. He groaned into the pillow, the memory of Odette’s distant voice layering over the physical need. He was hers to deny. The thought tightened the knot in his stomach even as it fed the fire in his groin.

He lay still for a moment, trying to will the erection down. Then he heard it. The low murmur of voices.

Not from the street.From downstairs. In his living room.

A cold, clean shock wiped the last fog of sleep from his mind. He was not alone in his own home. The casual intimacy of the sound was more violating than a shout. It was the sound of people comfortable in his space. Odette had said she’d given keys to his house to some of her friends. He knew she wanted to make him a shared resource for women to use, stripping him of even the sanctuary of his own home was part of that.

He hadn’t imagined she they would arrive at six-thirty on a Thursday morning.

The voices—there were at least two, perhaps three—were punctuated by the familiar clink of a mug from his own kitchen. They were making tea. In his house. His sanctuary was a public waiting room.

He sat up, the thick velvet duvet pooling around his waist. He didn’t know whether to get dressed, to hide, or to walk down and confront them. Before he could decide, the door to his bedroom eased open.

A woman’s head poked around the wood, cheerful and pleasant. She looked about forty-five, slim, with a neat, greying bob of hair that fell just below her ears. She wore a sensible waxed jacket over a cream roll-neck jumper.“Ah! You’re up!” she said, her voice warm and matronly, as if she’d caught him lounging in a hotel they were both sharing. She pushed the door wider and stepped inside, closing it softly behind her. “Hope we didn’t wake you. Kettle’s on downstairs. I’m Eleanor.”

Paul could only stare, his hands gripping the duvet, painfully aware of the tent it formed over his lap. “How… how did you get in?”

Eleanor smiled, a kindly, crinkling-at-the-eyes smile. She looked like a friendly GP or a particularly approachable librarian. “Odette gave me a key, darling. Said you were always available.” Her eyes, a gentle hazel, flicked down to the obvious bulge in the bedding and back up to his face. Her smile didn’t waver. “I see you’re… prepared. That’s good. My daughter Martha’s downstairs. She’s just turned eighteen. It’s a bit of a birthday treat for her, really. My mum speaks so highly of your… abilities.”

The casualness of it was breathtaking. A birthday treat. Like taking her for afternoon tea at the Savoy.

Like taking her for afternoon tea at the Savoy. Paul's jaw tightened, a muscle flickering. He pulled the duvet higher, fabric bunching in his fists.see."

Eleanor nodded as if he'd just confirmed a pleasant time for an appointment. "Splendid." She glanced towards the door. "Martha will bring some tea up in a jiffy. Then I'll give her a bit of a précis."A précis?" The word, so academic and ludicrous here, slipped from him.

"Of you, darling," she clarified brightly, her gaze sweeping over him. "Of how you work. A bit of coaching. Then you can deliver the main event for her. Get her started properly. Don't want it to be a fumble in a car park for her first proper go, do we?"

She spoke with the air of a mother arranging a driving lesson with a trusted instructor. There was no trace of lewdness in her tone, only cheerful practicality. The contrast with the subject matter made Paul's head swim. He remembered her mother, Beatrice, an institution in her own right. The apple hadn't fallen far. He simply nodded again, his throat too dry for words.

Eleanor smiled her thanks and bustled back out, closing the door with a soft click.

Alone, Paul released a shuddering breath. He looked down at his own traitorous body. How was he still hard, given this bizarre humiliation? But the pulse of disobedient blood remained, a thick, heavy presence against the placket of his pyjamas. He was completely exposed, waiting for two strange women to use him in his own bed.

Within minutes, the door opened again.

Martha entered first, carefully balancing a small tray with two mugs of steaming tea. She was pretty in a fresh-faced, girl-next-door way, her brunette hair pulled into a loose ponytail, cheeks faintly pink. She wore jeans and a simple, cosy-looking jumper that did little to hide the soft curves of her youth.

She kept her eyes averted, her focus entirely on not spilling the tea.

Eleanor followed her in, no longer in her coat. "Just pop it on the side, sweetheart," she said, gesturing to Paul's bedside table. "There's a good girl."

Martha did so, the mugs clinking softly on the wood. She stepped back, finally looking at Paul. Her eyes, a wide and curious brown, widened further. They travelled from his face down the length of the duvet and fixed on the prominent tent. A visible swallow moved her throat.

"Sit here with me, Martha," Eleanor said, patting the empty space on the edge of the bed, her tone warm and instructional. "Now, you've met Paul. Handsome chap, isn't he? Tall. Well-built. Odette lends him out. We share him."

Martha perched gingerly on the bed, her hands clasped in her lap. She gave a tiny, nervous nod.

"It's like this," Eleanor continued, matter-of-fact. "Paul is very well-trained. He's a lawyer, you know. A barrister. Are you a KC yet Paul is that something that happens?”

“erm no not yet but, hopefully one day.” Paul finds himself saying.

A smile flickered across his lips. The situation was utterly bizarre, yet the thread of power the women's admiration gave him was genuine, pleasant.

"I think so." she replied, her voice small. Eleanor rewarded her with a gentle pat on the knee.

"Well, as I was explaining, that is entirely secondary. His profession outside this room has no bearing on what happens inside it. Your granny uses his services regularly. Now," she said, her business-like tone snapping back into place. "The practical demonstration."

Without fanfare, Eleanor reached over and took a firm grip of the edge of Paul's duvet.

In one smooth motion, she yanked it down and tossed it to the foot of the bed.

The cool morning air washed over his skin. Paul lay there, utterly naked and fully erect against the stark white sheets. The sight of his nude, athletic form—the defined ridges of his stomach, the powerful line of his thighs, and the imposing, thick column of his erection—stilled the room. Eleanor’s cheerful commentary ceased. Martha’s breath hitched in her throat.They stared.

Paul watched their faces. Eleanor’s polite mask slipped for just a second, revealing a flicker of genuine, appreciative surprise. Martha’s eyes were round, her mouth slightly agape. The sheer visual impact of his body, offered up so casually, rendered them silent. A low, pleasant amusement warmed him. This wasn't the cold degradation of the public pool; this was a quiet, private admiration he was in control of, even if he was the specimen on display.

"My," Eleanor finally breathed, the single word heavy with approval. She recovered her composure swiftly. "Right.Well. That's a very good specimen, Martha. Notice the musculature. That isn't just for show. Strength in the hips and core is important for stamina.Observe."

She leaned closer, and her hand, dry and cool, cupped Paul's balls. He tensed slightly, then forced himself to relax back into the pillows.

"The scrotum tightens when he's aroused, like this," Eleanor narrated clinically, her fingers gently rolling the weight of his sac. "The testicles lift. Notice the size. Good, healthy stock." She then pointed a finger, not touching. "And the penis itself.Fully erect. The glans is engorged, darker in colour. See the small bead of moisture at the tip? That's pre-ejaculate. It lubricates. Perfectly normal."

Martha, mesmerised, nodded slowly. Eleanor then took her daughter's hand.

"Here," she guided. "Don't be shy. Explore the texture."

Martha's fingers, hesitant and soft, brushed against the hot, veined shaft. Paul inhaled sharply through his nose. She traced a line from the base to the tip, her touch feather-light and curious. A soft "wow" escaped her.

"The shaft is firm but has some give," Eleanor continued her lecture. "Like stiff leather. You can feel the veins, see? That's blood flow. And the ridge here, under the head, that's a particularly sensitive area for most men."

Martha's thumb ran over his corona, sending a jolt straight to Paul's spine. He let his head fall back, luxuriating in the sensation of being so intently, so studiously worshipped. Two attractive women, one matronly and instructive, one young and fascinated, were treating his cock like a fascinating artefact. He was the centre of a universe of hushed, clinical reverence, and he loved it.

"Now, the practical application," Eleanor said, her tone shifting from academic to gently encouraging. "He’s primed and ready. Your first lesson, dear, is how to properly take control of a man’s body when it's in this state. Physical steering. It begins with a firm grip."

She demonstrated, wrapping her own hand around Paul's girth. Her hold was confident, business-like."See? You don't crush it, but you don't flutter.Authority. This is your instrument now."

She guided Martha's hand to replace her own. The girl’s grip was tentative at first, then tightened under her mother's tutelage."Good. Now, the rhythm. Watch."

With her hand over Martha's, Eleanor began to pump. It was slow, deliberate, almost instructional. Up, then down, a firm, steady piston motion. The slick sound of skin on skin filled the quiet room. Paul's hips gave a slight, involuntary twitch upwards, meeting the stroke.

"Feel how he responds?" Eleanor murmured to her daughter. "He can't help it. It's automatic. You control the pace. You control when he finishes, or if he finishes at all. That’s your power." She removed her guiding hand, leaving Martha to continue the stroke on her own. The rhythm faltered for a second, then resumed, growing more confident.

The rhythm faltered for a second, then resumed, growing more confident. Martha’s initial nervousness melted into focused absorption. Her fingers learned the shape of him, the corded veins, the slick-smooth dome of his head. Her grip tightened, finding the authority her mother spoke of. Up and down. She watched his face, studying the minute flinches of his eyelids, the way his lips parted on a silent inhale as she thumbed over his dripping slit.

"You like this," she murmured, not quite a question. It was a quiet discovery.

Paul managed a tight nod, his head pressing back into the pillow. A low groan vibrated in his chest, trapped there. The sight of her young, earnest face concentrated on the task of pleasuring him was immensely potent. Her inexperience was a virtue, every reaction from his body a new lesson she catalogued.

"Yeah," he breathed out, the word rough. "Your hand is perfect."

She smiled then, a small, private curve of her lips that reached her eyes. The power his words gave her was tangible; her strokes grew bolder, faster. The sound of her palm sliding over his wet flesh was a damp, rhythmic punctuation in the quiet room. She experimented with pressure, twisting her wrist slightly on the upstroke, mimicking something she’d perhaps half-seen in a film. His hips lifted off the mattress to meet her, a clear, desperate submission to her rhythm.

Eleanor watched from her perch on the bedside chair, a faint, satisfied smile on her face as if observing a student master a complex piece of music. After another minute of Martha’s increasingly assured manipulation, Eleanor stood up, smoothing down her jumper.

"I'll leave you to it now, darling," she said, her voice warm. "You can do whatever you want with him. Explore." She leaned in, her tone dropping to a conspiratorial whisper, though Paul could hear every word. "Just remember what Odette told us. The key rule. He's not to be made to come."

Martha’s hand slowed but didn't stop, her eyes flicking from her mother to Paul’s straining cock. A new understanding dawned in her gaze. This wasn't just about her curiosity; it was about a controlled demonstration of power where his ultimate release was someone else's property. "Right," she said, nodding."Got it."

"Good girl," Eleanor said, straightening. "Once you've had your fill of looking and touching, have him give you your proper birthday present. He's exceptionally talented with his tongue. He'll make you come before you head off to college. A proper send-off." She then turned her cheerful, matronly gaze directly on Paul, who was biting his own lip to stay silent under Martha’s relentless, curious hands. "And Paul, dear," she added, as if reminding him to collect the dry-cleaning, "once my daughter has had her fun, I'll be keen to sample the service myself. I do so appreciate a thorough job."

With that, she gave a little wave and slipped out of the bedroom, closing the door with a soft, definitive click.

The atmosphere shifted instantly, the instructional air replaced by a thick, private tension. They were alone. Martha’s hand continued its work, her gaze now locked on Paul’s face, studying his reactions with newfound intensity.

Martha’s hand continued its work, her gaze now locked on Paul’s face, studying his reactions with newfound intensity. The steady, slick sound of her stroking him was the only noise in the room. She watched the way his abdominal muscles clenched with each pass of her fist, the raw need tightening his features even as he held himself perfectly still for her exploration.

She suddenly stopped, her small hand a tight, warm ring at the base of his shaft.

He almost whimpered at the cessation, the ache in his balls a deep, throbbing pulse.

"You’re beautiful like this," she stated, her voice no longer a shy murmur but clear and appraising. Her thumb brushed over the wet, sensitive head, smearing his pre-cum. "All laid out. I can do whatever I want, can't I?"

Paul nodded, swallowing hard. "Yes."

Her grip tightened fractionally, a silent claim, and she smiled. It wasn't the sweet, nervous smile from before. This was different; it was a knowing, hungry curve of her lips that reached her eyes, crinkling them. The departure of her mother had shed a skin of performance, revealing a girl comfortable with newfound power.

Still holding him firmly, she stretched her other arm towards the bedside table, fingers patting until they found her mobile phone. She never took her eyes off his cock. She tapped the screen, brought up a contact, and put the phone to her ear. Her expression shifted to one of polite, rehearsed charm.

"Odette? Hi, it's Martha."

Paul went very still, listening to the one-sided conversation. The intimacy of the moment fractured, replaced by a sharper, more complex tension.

"Yes, I'm with him now. Mum's just popped out. No, it's... it's brilliant.Really. Thank you so, so much." Her tone was sweetly grateful, effusive even. She nodded as if Odette could see her. "He's absolutely gorgeous. And you're right, he's so...well-behaved."

She paused, listening, her fingers absently tracing a vein along his length. Her gaze grew thoughtful, calculating. "Yeah, he's all hard and ready. Just like you said he would be. But, Odette..."

Another pause. A slight, petulant pout touched her lips, the teenage negotiator emerging. "Look, the thing is... I know what you promised. And I'm sure he's amazing at it. I bet his tongue is magic. But the girls at school, we all take turns. It’s like a thing. So I know I could get that anywhere, really."

Paul listened, mesmerised and appalled by her blunt bargaining. He was a set of features to be compared, a service to be upgraded.

"I just..." Martha continued, her voice dropping to a conspiratorial, whining plea. "I want the proper thing. For my first real time. I want to feel filled. I want a big man-cock inside me. I want to feel it burst and pump. Not just... you know, a tongue.Can I? Please?Just this once? I’ll be ever so good afterwards, I promise."

She fell silent, listening to the response. Her expression shifted through hopefulness, then a flash of irritation, then a triumphant gleam. Her grip on him tightened unconsciously, making him twitch. "Thank you! Oh, you’re the best! I will, I promise. I’ll send you a picture after. Okay.Bye!"

She ended the call and tossed the phone onto the duvet, the device landing with a soft thud. The cheerful mask dissolved completely. She fixed Paul with a purposeful, determined look, all trace of the tentative student gone. Her other hand joined the first, both now wrapped around him, pumping slowly, deliberately, as if testing the weight and heft of the tool she had just secured permission to use.

"You heard her," Martha said, not a question. Her thumbs pressed into his frenulum with a pressure that bordered on painful. "She said yes. So we're going to do it properly."

Paul’s breath hitched. "Martha—"

"Don't talk," she interrupted, her voice low but firm."Just lie there. You’re my birthday present. And I've decided I want to fuck. I want to feel you in me. All of you."

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